POKEMON: SHADOW VEILS

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NotUse

The final title of the book will be called "Pokemon Shadow Veils" and not "Pokemon Judgement" anymore. Thank you for those who read my book, more chapters are coming😉

FUN AND NICE BOOK ABOUT POKEMON!!! WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! THE CHARACTER NAMES IN THE STORY IS WELL MADE AND WELL THOUGHT! CONTINUE THE GOODWORK

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Prometheus2000

This story is just wired first of all Pokemons Use clothes, (at least that's what I understood when he said his dad always bought riolu clothes)then the MC doesn't need to go to the orphanage but he does for some reason (looker told him he could stay home) he also makes annoying friends and if u want riolu to to u don't need a translation device because u can make him talk telepathically with ora Sorry bro, I just got I little trigger because his parents die yet he still acts like a little *****

Cool characters! Still waiting for more chapters and stories. AWSOME AND FUN TO READ!!! THE SETTING IS GREAT AS WELL. ALSO THE PLOT IS GOOD! MAKE MORE!!!

Nice story and nice characters very fun to read for everyone who loves Pokemon! So far it has 10 chapters and im waiting for more chapters to come.

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Manoj_M_B

If you want a dumb, ignorant, annoying, idiot mc trying to become a Pokemon master through sheer luck and the great " plot armor " then this pokemon fanfic is for you..... I'm out i can't bear to watch the training he gives to his pokemon without even learning basics of pokemon.. all the pokemon potential is wasted due to MC's training with determination and some sparkels of luck to even learn a new move . Seriously he gave up training his riolu for 2 years because he was afraid it will leave him,then why did he even dream of becoming a pokemon master ,so to keep them as stuff toys , no pokemon will ever listen to weak and coward trainer...

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Diost42423

Nice story ........................................................................👍👍👍 Want more update .............................👍👍👍

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Akira_

Great story Zed! ^^ so far the story smooth though.I like the characters how they interact to each other how the pokemon and their owner care gor each other tho.Lastly I thought myself that kinda like to draw some of characters tho🤔 hehehehehe

Don't mind me, just getting some EXP. .................................................................................................................

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SolaceHunter

Does the MC stop being an idiot further into the novel? I’m just wondering because if his dream is to be a Pokémon master you think he would have done some research about his Riolu’s move set that he could possibly learn. Sorry. I’m just kinda hitting a wall with how he is acting. I understand he is 10 but his dream is to become a Pokémon master...

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mystery889

I like the way the story is progressing and the story you got going for the parents I hope you keep the chapters coming.

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DumbDolphin

This would be a good fan fic if mc's friend (female) is not so bratty. His male friend is okay, supportive, but the female one acts like a spoiled brat.

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Kasukage

Haven't really read any of it yet. Sounds like a good novel through other reviews as well as the summary and chapter titles, but I am a little irritated due to a similarity to Harry Potter. That similarity is a headmaster with a prophesy. That, however, is the only downside I can tell so far, so good job!

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Koeda_Shiroi

Just started reading the Synopsis and I think the story is Good,I've been a Pokemon Fan since I was a kid❤, really Love the story, Continue the Good Work!!!👌

Chapter 33-Chapter 50 Review So I basically write reviews per gaps in case my opinions change. So Far, the story flow is great. The plot is excellent, and I can also see improvements the further I read this book. There is a great character development between Kalem and Camellia, and I see that probably Glade and Zhery could fall in love too. The chapters are out of this world. Who could have thought to add lion king references? Talking Pokemon? And many much more. That's why I love this book. So far my opinion has not changed. I'll add a new review around chapter 100 or if my opinion changes. Thank you, author, for a captivating book.

.......................................................................................................This book has determined characters..

Kalem's determination deserves five stars! 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

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Daoist_Cloudwalker

honest review from me is that it is well written but I feel that the mc remains dumb in the 1st chp when you start he seemed really small as the novel progression happened our mc get stupider