Naruto : Shadow King

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Meteormancy

PLEASE! Please change the main character's name while the story has just started. If you look on the Narutopedia Wiki it shows that there are other members of the Nara clan that don't have Shika in their name. Only the main family's leader and heir have Shika in their name. Please change it while the story is still new. Choose something nice and simple like Kyoya, Koji, or Akira or something. Kyoya is a common cool guy name in Japanese culture and many different anime. Koji is the name of the Japanese god of fire, kitchen, and hearth. Akira means wisdom in Japanese. PLEASE! For the love of god choose a better name for the main character!

LV 3

Little_El

Good start, the first 15 chapters are good but you can see that the quality declines slightly as the chapters go on , it's a real struggle to read these interactions with Tenten, these uncomfortable, like those old people from the village who complimented you when I was little , he's an adult in a child's body, he shouldn't have noticed Tenten's beauty like that , see him flirting with her, God, just ewww. I hope the author fixes this , it's really important , the fact that the only description when he notices someone female is that she's pretty is pretty weird , the last chapter is discouraging, the fact that he took a mission without the consent of the Village pourrait consister à une trahison, c'est strict military government, il n'est que de la chair à canon , he is quite idiotic and thoughtless . I'm afraid that this story will end up becoming like the other story with Shikamaru SI, I have not been able to read more than 5 chapters of each other, please author don't spoil this story. If the interactions with Tenten or more precisely the main characters improve, I will return with 5 stars

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DaoistDxMgPm

this book is on its way to become a banger. another kamidemond W

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zeypher

The plot is followed by a over generous dose of stupidity and plot induced idiocy. The chapters feel more like 1/4 a chapter with abyssal word count. The other doesn't seem to have learnt anything from his previous attempts.

LV 4

Rayan_Alzahrani_4430

Amazing story I didn’t know there was a rewrite until recently and I’m glad because i got to read a lot of chapters back to back although i really hope the author would post more pictures in the comments like the main character appearance or some of the shinigami that only showed up in the manga

LV 4

Mister_Robot

The story has too many grammatical errors. Using the 10 Shadows curse technique in Narutoverse is quite interesting. My rating would be higher if there was no unnecessary forced early romance with Tenten and also like any other fanfic transmigrator, he starts advising her and yapping. The same shit can be found in many Harry Potter, Naruto, Black Clover fanfics. Maybe if the author made the story darker than canon, with tension always hanging in the air, this would be one of the best fanfics.

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v00lum

my review for 69(hehehe) chap the only thing i want to say nah i'd win mc gone crazy vs sasuke i like crazy mc when fighting ngl bro was cool indeed

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demigod0414

Slow pace. Nerfed MC. Hiding true technique without reason. Ooh, forcing romance with fmc. Actually how your old stories.

I'm still relatively new to web novel but I'm glad I found this story. It's an entertaining read that I binged in 2 days. I appreciate the author going back to fix grammatical errors as well as putting in the time to reliably update on top of that. Keep up the hard work. I hope to see this story through to the end.

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Daoist7kQuG1

pls use grammarly or chatgpt to fix the grammar its annoying it isn't unreadable but the little mistakes just add up

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FadeKnight

An interesting take on an si. The crossover element adds a little spice to the story. Overall a pretty good story. Here is five stars to keep you going.

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RroY

The dialogues are cringe. The author lacks info amd creativity. The only thing keeping up the hyoe of the fic is the og Jjk and Naruto fans wanting to read more in hopes of betterment.

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Senior_Black

correct your spelling of sorcerer in summary

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Guaca

Bro please tell me in the chunin exam he is going to use his ten shadows I mean come on during the whole waves mission he had to come up with ways to use the ten shadows teq discretely and hide them from the team I don’t know about you but if that keeps happening it will get exhausting to read anyway love the story so far keep up the good work. I wonder could he learn black flash with his chakra and like use his genjutsu to make a pseudo domain expansion.

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Extra_char

i enjoyed reading it very balnced story you wont lose any brain cells if u read it try it if you want but what im going to say right now is very important