Reborn As Papa Silva

LV 14

tedmosby2016

This is a good novel, being strangled to death by the narration style. The first person narration is killing it. Its like a good movie being shot through a selfie. with the shaky arm and the annoying face of the person visible, even while recording the beautiful landscape. I do not know why the author chose to use first person narration when 3rd person is exactly what this level of story needs. It is like taking a real bullit and forcing it In a BB gun. Anyway. At this point it doesn't matter how badly or lowly the author thinks of his skills in 3rd person narrative, I would rather read that than watch him ruin such a great story with s hitty, amateur 1st person narration. There is zero immersion in story. It's like watching a person trying to direct and act in a movie at the same time, yelling cut and action in the middle of a scene. Author san, I implore you to shift to 3rd person narration like any self respecting author out there. stop holding your self to the embarrassing standards of webnovel. There is a bigger world outside the bottom of a well. Your novel deserves better, so please stop letting your fear of 3rd person narration ruin a good book. Sincerely, Ted Mosby 2016

LV 4

PalePlanet

Really hope this gets regular updates! I remember reading a fic about someone reincarnated as Nozel a while back and it was amazing. This is similar and the quality is very good so far. Keep up the good work author!👍👍

LV 3

hmak27230

Just like always I'm gonna be bold and go ahead and give this five starts. For those who might ask, don't worry I'm not cancelling A Future Never Meant to Be, I'm just juggling two stories.

LV 1

darkwhite

black clover is one of my all time favorite, but there is lack of fan fics written about it as now every fanfic is about naruto or harry potter, it is quite refreshing to read a black clover fic after so long. i hope u don't drop it too soon and maintain updating frequency plz and good work so far

LV 3

Keyaruga_Tsuki

it's beautiful . Perfect, I have never read Black clover fanfics but this is perfect.Beautiful.My only worry is that you'll stop uploading or like upload every 2 months or something like that...please stay consistent and don't drip the work.

LV 3

Alexxz

Inesperadamente bueno, la verdad no esperaba mucho de este fic, probablemente ojearlo 5 minutos e irme, pero me engancho y leí todos los capítulos de recorrido, espero más actualizaciones

LV 2

k1lausNamikaze

The idea is certainly innovative, especially considering the scarcity of BC fics. Until chapter 5, the execution has been very good, the MC is interesting and his writing is very good, and I have just one suggestion, divide your paragraphs, this makes the reading more fluid. Anyway, the story has been enjoyable, I'll probably do a new review in the future.

LV 3

YESandYES

I like it it's not perfect and that's okay what's important is that it's not trash

LV 4

HeroLStern

Not a bad concept looking forward to the newest chapters. Hope it’s a regular update.

LV 4

Azrialt

I am looking forward for the next chapters

LV 4

Azathoth2

........*A Good read*.....................

LV 4

Honoured_Writer

Story is bad and all but would be better if that fine handsome gentleman by the name of Scoutmaster Ryan is made admin again and everyone kowdowns 1000 times This review will remain up until this happens.

LV 4

lespyguy

This is one of the most beautifully written fanfics i have ever seen. I am looking forward to more chapters.

LV 4

Celestial_Kaiser

4.7 star is what this novel deserves. If author can release a few chapters more, I will give it a 5. I don't know but some guy literally gave this novel a 2 star, yapping something about narration style and all. I might not have read it as I usually check the comments first. I'm glad I did read it, and there is no problem in narration. But I did see the same guy's nonsense comments in various paragraphs XD. Anyways, the novel is good.

LV 14

SnowRose

Personally don’t care for Black Clover, but I love this fic. I wish it had 200+ more chapters so I could keep reading it, but for now I find myself refreshing WebNovel every day just hoping for a new chapter. I can’t wait to read more; biggest thing I’m looking forward to is the interactions between him and his wife!

LV 4

Ur_lovely_pervert

Not Bad at all i really like the concept i hope u'll keep a stable update. am looking forward for more chapters. take 5 stars as an encouragment !!

LV 1

Spawnout

finally writing review This is a good fanfic I have ever seen of black clover. It has its own plot. I have read other black clover fics where the plot remains the same just mc is different. Here we have character development, and a unique way of representation. The best part is that it doesn't have any grammar errors and the story starts ahead of the canon so you can enjoy a new plot. As a whole its a new and unique black clover fanfic. MUST READ Y'ALL WILL BE HOOKED

LV 3

Pierre_

I love it! It's s great! I live it! It's great! I love it! It's great! I love it! It's great!

LV 3

YearlyRain

This novel offers a unique twist in Black Clover, with Sebastian Silva seeking redemption and family connection in a magical world. Do give it a try its great.

Best black clover fan fic I have ever read, It can also be counted in my top 3 fanfics I have read......................................................