Naruto: Reborn as Orochimaru

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Junkdog

A version of this fanfic is already available, but it's only eight chapters long and wasn’t translated very well. I’ve taken the time to properly translate the names and improve any lines that felt off or awkward. Despite my efforts, there might still be some errors, so feel free to point them out, I’m open to corrections. I truly think it's a great story, and I've worked hard to make it as clear and enjoyable as possible for everyone. Thank you!

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Kil0

The main character can only ever be as smart as the author… In this case my friend, I hope you are beautiful

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Teritori

Just Caught up with this, though the MC seemed like a stupid guy in the first 5 chapters, he actually switches up real quick and my dissatisfaction with him went away real quick. TL doing a nice job while there are still some places you can improve in, I guess as you continue doing this you'll fix up naturally. It's a nice story see it through the end

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WuQian

I know this story isn’t exactly groundbreaking, but I really don’t think it deserves all the criticism it’s been getting. I’ve found the dynamic between the main character, Tsunade, and Jiraiya to be really enjoyable their comedic exchanges often had me cracking. The character interactions feel pretty genuine, with most staying true to their original selves. While we haven’t seen many fight scenes yet, I still find the story entertaining.As for the main character being a bit clueless for the first six chapters, I actually think it makes sense. He was a dropout who ended up in prison before being reincarnated, so it’s not surprising that he might have some doubts about science. And lastly the updates have been steady, so why shouldn't I give this a five-star rating? Keep up the great work, and please don’t abandon it midway.

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Aegis787

So far I don't have any issues with it, story progressing nicely, few chapters to make a full review, but hey I'd still give it a 5 Star for the smooth TL

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LorDudu

MC understimate the potential of science too much in the firsts chapters , that make him sound a bit stupid. But except the beginning, the story seem great and the traduction is very good. (review about the 10 first chapter

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ChiseldPotato

Really good (⁠~⁠￣⁠³⁠￣⁠)⁠~ didn't expect this to be as good as it was. Having a fresh take on the overly saturated Naruto-vers. Thanks for translating this...

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Gasuka_Kultivasi

the main character is so stupid i can't stand to read it

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captainfatbelly

the mc is missing his brain too many young master vibes

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fouidea

starts off with a system which usually means the story is going to be forced and a bad read, this mc isn't super dependent on the system and the results are thought through. I'm just happy that the rewards are not gacha tho.

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LegitStupid342

Decent Fan Fic, the beginning is a bit rough, as the MC complains about his system and thinks like an idiot but after 5 or 6 chapters, it gets much better. I can't wait to see the ripple effects this Orochimaru causes. Thanks for the translation.

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Ziad_2348

Always wanted a proper Orochimaru SI. Good that it doesn't have a straight up stereoypical system that would make him godlike in like 30 chapters.

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Keyaruga_Tsuki

Character Design having the lowest rating to me is baffling.Its orochimaru it says it in the title like what??Nothing but ai generated people. ANYWAY, 4.8/5 great story, progress is good everything is good well paced and it's all developing nicely.You would get a 5 star but I'm unsure of you're updating stability

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DaoisttVcYuc

Очень интересная работа, как русскоязычный пользователь могу сказать что сама идея этого фанфика достаточно необычная, редкая и, несомненно, захватывающая. С нетерпением буду ждать продолжения.

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LordRamcel

okay this is a fresh kind of novel not the generic ones with the uchiha shit or senju or uzumaki shit. great read ! stockpile mode for now

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HardenedWood

Great Translation, Pretty good plot, the protagonist was pretty silly at the beginning but get’s far more likeable later on. The science is cool, I wish he did more in the war but that’s about it. If you like Neutral Evil protagonist’s this is a pretty fun read.

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Murod

Good job, continue 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Daoist_Viking

Where can I find this raw?????……………… . . .

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reva20p4

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