Mha: Sand Sand Fruit

I think you have a good idea and the story progression is good but you might want to work on your power scaling and fleshing out of relationships The MC has a good amount of powers to learn and draw inspiration from with the sand fruit but you are limiting him quite frequently and it becomes frustrating watching the MC limit himself to one ability against weak antagonists. Additionally though his current weakness does make sense as he hasn't trained for very long, he still should be far more effective and creative with his powers taking down fodder ,like the gravity villain, nearly immediately. MHA can be irritating to power scale as most strong villains don't appear till later in the story but if the MC is in a fight with an original villain try give more credible reasons as to why he would struggle like he does instead of having the MC take frustratingly long to stop one group of cannon fodder. Making the MC too strong can be a credible fear for the story but it can be used to add some character growth as the MC could become arrogant fighting fodder for so long, only to be beaten by a cannon villain like Shigaraki when they fail to take his threat seriously and they (or someone else) gets hurt by the MC's arrogance. I also feel like your relationships between characters could do with some work. This is usually very difficult for a fast paced story like yours, so I would advise either remove some time skips and slow the pacing or thoroughly plan interactions between characters. I think it would also be more organic if the MC had more interactions between his parents or friends just as slice of life as it would give the MC more depth and avoid you as a author falling into the troupe of having a cool and strong MC with no depth or actual character to him. all in all I think your story has great potential and could be really good just work on the interactions and his use of Haki and it would be even better.

The writing quality of the story definitely reads like some lame chinese translation. With all the usual culprits, like certain wording, its especially noticeable in the hero exam chapters with the whole *imaginary robot* thing and the green skinned robots. Also All mights disciple? please, that's so dumb. Updates seem ok? but its early and I think there is a lot of suspicion of this being a stolen translated work. Story development is terrible if I am being honest, the MC seems to be trying to be that cringey "cool" guy in most chinese fics. Also the typical thug types with the extras? This goes hand in hand with the Character design, I personally feel the Main character gets his powers too soon, I feel we would have liked a more drawn out skill progression story where he explores his abilities instead of becoming impossibly strong from the very beginning. Obviously the world background here doesn't really matter with pre-established ground work laid out by the creators of MHA. Overall I think my review if fair for this work, the author, if this work truly isn't stolen or a translation work I would look into rewriting the story, it has a lot of potential with a unique powerset that I feel is honestly more well explored in line with the power progression of the story.