Inside the Multiverse (Marvel and DC)

LV 10

fake_lion

Hi everyone, this is the fake lion the author of this novel, this novel may have problems with grammar because English is not my first language, but it is a story that I will write with great affection, it is a Marvel and DC fan fiction, but the beginning is only in the Marvel universe, I hope you like it and read a few chapters to see if it's good.

LV 11

TrappedInMyHead

Not a proper review since I haven't actually read it yet, just a placeholder, so that any kind soul can tell me who the MC ends up with and if it ends up being harem or not. I like classifying the characters as "friends" or "love interests" when I read, so that I don't get too attached to a female character that won't end up with the MC (I know it is strange, but it's a habit I picked up after reading ISSTH and DE). Sorry about this author-san, since it's basically me saying that I won't read until I know, but pls don't yeet this.

LV 11

Mysteries_

it had potential, but unfortunately the author made one of those dumb protagonists who think with muscle, seriously the guy could choose any starting power but chose physical strength just because he couldn't be as fast as the flash hahaha, nothing different, don't even waste your time here my friend, that the beginning already says a lot about how this story will be.

LV 4

RuberX

man I don't know how to put it in much better light but it doesn't feel human to me it feel but is good in story just don't feel right but as you do you

LV 4

Nyxio

Idea was nice but neither the MC nor the author are mature or smart enough. The pricing in system is wonky and author and MC make bad decisions and seemed to believe they are right. I was thinking that maybe author is smart and deliberately giving MC worse powers but I was overthinking. This book is limited by author's wisdom. Good try for a young teen author but it's not good enough for veteran readers.

LV 14

PeaofLife

Has great potential. Pretty good. Nice start there seems no to less grammatical errors. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

LV 4

_VOIDLESS_

The story progresses nicely so far, we all know something tragic will happen to force the mc to make hard choices

LV 10

fake_lion

I'll say it here before you get annoying me, if you don't like my work just don't read it, it's a good fanfic with an MC that isn't that different at the beginning of any hero that reincarnates, and the pace is slow and there are no fights at all chapters. If you have constructive criticism to give, or a review to warn other readers not to waste their time reading, you can, but I will delete any Review that is only 1 star because I know that my work is not complete garbage to have this evaluation. You can write a bad review and give it 3 stars, you can write a bad review and give it 2 stars, if I see that it makes sense, I won't delete it. But I'm going to delete all 1 stars, even one that has a book as an explanation because I know that there are a lot of stupid people on Webnovel who just want to harm the writers and lower the stars, the webnovel knows that and that's why it created this author mechanism delete reviews.

LV 13

Fenrirzero9999

Don’t forget mental strengt and soul strength He should buy unlimited mind potential Unlimited soul potential Unlimited power potential

LV 2

Joaoterminus3110

very good, don't give up..................................................................................... ..............................................................................................................

LV 4

Professor_Light

Good Story so far, a few typos here and there and some weird uses of words like bandit instead of Robber or thief(btw here is the difference between a thief/robber/bandit/. A thief does not use force, but rather stealth. Burglars and shoplifters are examples of thieves. A robber uses force (violence) or threats of force. A bandit is a robber, and he might have an element of revenge or politics in his life.). And some conversations feel awkward like there are something missing or its just that they speak like beginner English speaker. Oh they also speak in name basis not using Sir/Ma'am/Mr./Mrs./Bro/Mate/Master and etc. they also did not use slangs in their conversations. Some scenes/scenario are seems kind of forced. If you want some help use grammarly or some other apps

LV 13

Josh_Richie

Author, I don't know how you'll be taking this, but i'ma say it the way I see it. This fanfic is way too centered around the MC, Jack. Everything goes his way, and nothing ever goes awry. It's weird. Very weird. Like God just created a world for him as his play ground or something. it lacks emotions, thrill, schemes and stuff like that that usually accompanies Marvel Universe. Also, characters like Tony, Peter, Natasha, In fact all the characters are just too trusting. Like they can't ever find a fault in Jack. That's weird on so many levels. Even the Year is weird. Keep up your good work though, this ain't for me

LV 2

ZephurosStormheart

The word trust is used too often and sometimes it reads a bit like a script but other than that I've really come to enjoy this Fic. The MC seeks power but isn't willing to screw others for it which is a plus and he genuinely seems to form a warm caring bonds with the other heroes.

LV 5

MorningWood_Dao

Don't know why, it's so hard to continue reading this novel, first 10 chaps. some inconstancies, weird wording/translation, glaring plotholes. feels like author really doesn't care if the novel turned out good or not. first impression matters, not everyone want to continue reading in hoping it gets better latter. should have fix/rewrite it, i hope

LV 15

RothdogTheGamer

This is a very developed and well thought out story takes a different spin on the marvel thing. Time lines all messed up leaving the mc wondering what canon knowledge is useful. I love this story

LV 4

Ireallylikereading

all i want to say is that the mc is one of the worst ones out there and that all those people who gave this "thing" five stars are either fake or have problems

LV 10

BFanTbandSKr

I really liked this fanfic, the rhythm is a little slow, but I prefer it that way than stories where everything happens without a break

LV 3

Mr_Drasuz

A nice Marvel story with a overpowered Hero. We will see where the story is going. Update regularly, I didn't see any spelling mistakes, Change the story a little bit but follow the main plot

LV 14

shashank_bhatt

Good story, Have a lot of plot points. I have read all the chapters posted till now, so I am saying this that you should give it a try if you like Marvel. Mc uses his system well and isn't an idiot so there are many things to like.