The Don's Heir: A Campus Underworld

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Kaitelin

Writing Quality: Hands down for the smooth flow of the story, as there were no grammatical errors I have seen all through the 17 chapters I have read at first. Only seen one error, which is a wrong name mentioned of the Sterling brothers. Updating Stability: I could see that the author has a set schedule of 4 chapters per week for the updates, which isn’t bad at all. If more chapters would be added, like making it 7 chapters/day, maybe there’s the likelihood the story would gain more readership. Story Development: The story got me hooked instantly, chapter per chapter, because the elements of suspense, surprise, and anticipation remained that kept me entertained and focused on what’s to come next. Character Design: As the main character was introduced, I could see that there is more than meets the eye with her development as the catalyst in the evolution of the duality of her own life engaged in the nature of the underworld crime scene and of the academy's. Even the other characters who were involved with the MC are all differentiated with their respective roles in the world they are engaged to. World Background: For every scene taking place where our MC and the other characters are involved, it’s all being orchestrated within this famous university, and not less than the ambiguous world of criminals with enemies pitting against each other. Overall, keep it up, author!

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Chidera_Confidence_4323

For some reasons I thought I would be able to scroll fast to the end of each chapter, but I must confess that got glued to them line by lines... a one novel filled with emotions, morals and lessons.. Keep it up author

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Tinora

Well written Author !! Nice plots and characters Suspense too Overall great job Highly recommended !!!

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blaj_lord

This book is something else, keeping writing Author!

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Ebuka_7014

who is Lucas sterling, really intrigued by his interest in Avery

The Don's heir is one book I will definitely recommend to any reader on this platform. I love the story development and I can't wait to unlock more chapters 🥰

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datafrikie

This is a very good book. I would definitely recommend it. The author can work on complexity of the characters. Plot twist is quite creative.

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rheatobi

This is one of the best stories I’ve read in a while. I just love how well edited the story is👍

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KBKayboy

interesting story line. and i wanna know how avery will overcome her past and forge a new future ahead. keep it up author

I had my reservations when I first stumbled on this book. I didn’t think I would like it because I’ve read books with similar plot. But then, few chapters later and I’m so hooked! Welldone Author

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Kelvin_Croaker

This is a mind blowing story. I staying glued to enjoy every bit of it. I recommend for any reader. Nice job author

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Kayode_6466

very Interesting cant't wait to see how Avery will forge her path. keep it up author

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panmayelkopba

This story is really getting me hooked by every chapter. Can't stop reading but keep anticipating to see what happens next. Kudos to you author. Your piece of writing is really awesome ❤️

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datafrikie

This book is quite interesting. I got hooked from the start. Smooth story line and exciting plot twist so far. Such an enjoyable experience...

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Aaron_Amos_4106

This is quite a piece i won't stop reading, good one Author, keep going!

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Osarumwense_Osakue

Perfect book with one of the best storylines and plots I've seen on this platform 🔥💯❤️ I'm really enjoying the journey I'm being taken on by the writer when reading this book.

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panmayelkopba

I love Avery's personality. Not wanting to belittle her personality base on her family's past.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep on author. I'll follow till the end

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ogunsuyigrace87

This is a nice write up, Author. I really enjoyed the world build up and I Cant wait to continue reading

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Toria_Brighton

I must say this story is so intriguing. Alot of drama, emotions just displayed in the first few chapters

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Adewole_Tinuade

This is really mind blowing !!! Really great read y’all, and the plot twist? I highly recommend it and I look forward to seeing more books like this