Stockpiling My Abilities In Each Life

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0Mashroom

Overall the novel i'll give it a 7/10 from its writing alone I can tell that be author have some experience with handling its character, some my issued are the grammar need some improve but further reading I guess Author fix some of them. Too bad it's only 50chps it would be nice if were full blown series with at least 100+ chps. my only tips I can give is that expand more with r world building & characters I'm sure some of your new titles will surely be better.

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BurnFeelings

The story is quite captivating, and it got off to a good start in capturing the attention of the readers. I've read several chapters, and so far, I think the plot is good, and I'm excited to see what happens next. The storyline is well-structured, and it never failed to pique my curiosity about what would happen next.

LV 3

PsionicMind

Amazing writing quality and fleshed out characters. The story is so good that it makes me loose the sense of time. Aah the flow .... I wish I had the author's skills

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VertiKalEl

The narration style gives me vibes of an African woman narrating a legend to her kids or grandkids and I love it. it feels rushed but if this is maintained throughout the novel it can be a good and innovative as well as bold narration style. Great book. Only issue would be punctuation. the commas are excessive. maybe watch a YouTube video on how to use commas and full stop. There. A 5 star book will be born.

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Prince_Firelorn

An interesting read indeed albeit very few grammatical errors here and there, the story and plot makes up for it. As the story begins you get and idea of the world and the background, especially with the tower at the center. I also love the personalities of the characters as they feel genuine the more you read their interactions. Good writing good plot, excellent story.

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Lee_Grace

Promising plotline Nice descriptions Worth reading. I haven't read so much about systems and all and still trying to understand leveling and so on and I think this book is good for that. Not just reading but also learning.

LV 15

One_Winged_Angel

Writing Quality: There are very few errors that caught, which is the obvious and very small mistakes that most non-English as a first language speakers have to deal with on a consistent basis. Everything is extremely well written and is easy to read, while flowing smoothly. Update Stability: Chapters are updated daily which is great! Nothing to say here! Story Development: Wow! What a great twist on the tower and system genres! The unique twist on Ho-Seok's ability is done well so far and the rewards he receives are a great boost to his powers! I can't wait to see how this progresses further and how OP he truly can become! Character Design: Ho-Seok is a well developed character. I rather enjoyed his interactions with Calin and they felt natural. None of the introduced characters have felt flat and each one has their own personalities to hate to love or love to hate on! World Background: The world is expansive! Unique areas and the tower provide an excellent focal point to expand into different regions with more variety. The author does a great job at writing the world around the characters and really draws you in. Overall: Not enough great things to say about this novel! Absolutely recommend checking it out and I promise it wont disappoint!

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An_Average_Author

I like the overall concept of this novel; I have never seen it before. The characters so far are pretty well-built, and the world is good. There is redundancy at times and some grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, I looked further into the novel, and it seems the author has fixed most of these issues.

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Grandmasters

The author is not an ordinary one....he has above average writing skills and writings. Also what I liked the most was his concept and Idea which has huge potential. The plot is niche and some moments made me feel my emotions in which I didn't feel for a moment in reading novels. Also, my only advice is to show more than tell. Other than that, well you are good to go! hehe

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Moonlight_senora

Lord, help your daughter😩😩 Me can't stop reading books about system 🤭🤭 All day, reading system books, and now, this book also has been added to my list👍😊. The storyline is good🤠 and no error in grammar. It's so easy to read and understand. Good job to the Author👏👏 Anyone can read it and wouldn't be disappointing at all.

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CetusWritings

Hey Guys! The author here and I just want to thank all of the readers who have been reading up until now and the first season of the series finally ended so I want to thank you all and I hope you will be waiting for the next season.

It is a good story but I don’t like the narrator style.