Wang xiu ying. heiress of song enterprises.

twin sister framed her.
parents disowned her.
she takes revenge and take back what is her.

Feng yang, the king of business empire,
nobody dared offends him.
 
he helps her to take revenge. pampers her.

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English is not my first language. please do not hesitate to comment correction regarding spelling and grammar.
thank you!❤️

this is an original story.

Hi guys,
I hope you guys are safe.
I have been reading your comments and reviews and have tried to reply to every comment and review.
some give 3star, 2star some are giving 4and5star also.
Some common reviews were about
My writing quality and I know it is not upto standards and many readers are finding it hard to read due to grammar. For grammar I have no excuse and for spelling as I use smartphone to write and that some spelling mistakes are made, during the process of writing or due to auto correction and I have tried to edit them but some just don't get edited in official version.
Like breast which should be beasts.
Ruin be rune etc.
Second:
update are irregular as I only write when I feel like writing else busy due to my study or read other novel.
Usually I read Machine translation of novel and many are raw version of novels in Webnovel. As I became curious to know about the latest developments and I can say I have got used to reading them and enjoy it.
After all I write for enjoyment and myself, so writing novel is more like hobby.
I am not paid for it, till now that is.
If I was getting paid I would have hired a editor by now.
That is why I am looking for free editor who can help me edit.
But every time is the same story, some guys reply. I want to help you and I say come lets have a chat in Discord. After that I never get a reply.
As for some uncommon reviews and questions like.
#Why have you dumped so much information in starting chapters which I as a reader, find irrelevant?
The answer is, that is common sense of how other magic uses cultivat but because Kai is not following the common method and basically skip magic apprentice stage and
I use it to explain the difference between others and Kai way of cultivation.
Note:I have already explained the logic behind law and Kai limitations in earlier chapter.
I will just add that chapter to volume 0.
#Question 2:
Why is the world name is Great magic world?
I have no answer to this. May be a random thought.
#Question 3:
Why is the rank of body potential and mage root have saint above divine.
Because I want it to be. No logic.
If you ever write a novel feel free to change it according to your wish.
Question 4:
#Why is it common for space rift occurance in the continent?
Well it due to incomplete and unstable laws of magic, cause due to world barrier.
Remember why I say, all magic users are not able to display full power and why true saint level magic user don't exist till now so evenJai and other are not match for true saint magic users as they have understanding of incomplete magic laws and cannot make any progress in their cultivation.
#Why is Kai able to make such decisions in starting chapters and is his memory so strong?
Answer to that is Kai father knowledge and wisdom which he shared with Kai.
As a hunter who lives in a dangerous world close to forbidden forest. He has some general knowledge of behaviour magic beasts and share it with Kai and he use this knowledge, wisdom, incomplete mage root to trace magic power left behind by to survive
the first day.
Later event you have read.
You will not expect such thinking abilities from a 6year child but magic root is closely related with development of brain and mental strength.
Higher rank mage root give better intelligence, memory power and greater brain development.
It was also one of the reason why Kai got possesed by Daoma in starting not to mention be is a magic emperor.
Kai's mage root went to deep slumber and so he didn't cultivated strong mental strength.
Possessing mental strength of a non magic user.
Don't ask questions in paragraph comments. Use chapter comments.
Ask questions if you have doubts ask.
I will reply as soon as possible.
For those who read my novel and supported me. thank you and thanks for power stones, gifts and responding to me.
Really going premium was a bad decision. I thought it will stop my novel from getting pairated on other websites. But it's still going on.
My novel veiws have reached 1million.
Planning to create a discord server for the readers. If you guys any thoughts let me know.
Thank you guys for reading.


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The great magic world where the magic is part of everyday live of people. Where users of magic are considered elite and everybody dream to become a grand Master.

There are words which are famous and knows to all magic users who want to reach the peak. Representing great deep of magic laws, which gives idea about the journey of great path of magic

MORTAL LIVE BY THEM, 
TRANSCEND KNOW THEM, 
SAINTS UNDERSTAND THEM, 
DIVINE TRANSFORM THEM, 
WORLD CREATES THEM.
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**Updates**
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Editor:-
Daoist Apocalypse (1-25)and AFoximmortal
(From ch74 to ch91)
If anyone willing to help me with editing let me know.

**Disclaimer**
This cover is not owned by me. If you want me to take it down just comment me.

Hey... it's BenFang here. I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but that's all I seem to be able to carry... I won't be uploading any chapters for a while. I'm not sure how long I won't be able to write either. 

The reason for my statement is because my computer which I write this on finally broke. I knew that it would happen eventually, it's been on the verge of breaking for the better part of a year and a half. I don't know how long it will take me to get a new computer since I don't have a job and I'm a minor. Honestly, it could be anywhere between a few days, weeks, or a few months. 

To be honest, I could try to write on my phone (like I'm doing right now to write this message for you) but I just don't feel comfortable doing so. I wrote on my computer so that I could use editing software to check my spelling, grammar, and other things. It wasn't perfect, but it helped. I would simply be too embarrassed to continue writing if the quality dropped because of the lose of my computer. 

Anyways, I will try to get a new computer as soon as possible, but I don't think it will happen soon. Please forgive me for not being able to promise more chapters soon. When I do get a new computer however, I will try to write a lot more to make up for it. At the very least, I will try to keep a more consistent schedule when I get a new computer.

Until next time, your loyal author, BenFang322

"I created the Anime Worlds System to fulfill the dreams of many, to allow you to experience the impossible and live the amazing. But, Not every anime is a pleasant, love-filled dream world, nor is every anime a dark, death-filled nightmare. Welcome to the Anime Worlds System and enjoy your long, long stay in my paradise." - Oracle

The celestial emperor of immortal beasts was reincarnated as a black snake in a desolate era which cultivators, demons and devils fought fiercely to become true immortals and have lived as long as the heavens themselves...
  In this world ruled by mortals wu yu will find a way to ascend the heavens and even transcend them, follow him on his journey as he takes back his throne as a primordial emperor.
  ...
  Ima say this so no one goes crazy- I am not the best writer but I will try to improve however I can, but the more I write the better I will get, if you have any ideas to make the story better plz leave them down in the comments

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  Join the discord server to discuss about the novel and the chapters

Ariana was ready for bed. She spent the whole day trying to fight off Cayden and Lobo's overprotective actions. Edlyn was being strangely clingy, though Ariana loved the affection she couldn't enjoy it because of the boys. Some childish bickering and a noisy lunch. Her entire day was nothing but a giant headache and to make matters worse she also had to sort out her notes in her in between classes. There was no time left, she needed to start preparing for the up coming examinations.
Though it was ony a month away, she did not want to be caught off guard or worse cram in informaion at the last minute. At least be organizing her notes with simple deductions she could come up with a a break down of the material and associated it with practical work.
With a heavy sigh Ariana packed up her materials after the last bell rang. "Are you ready to go to the library?" Edlyn asked with a sweet voice. Ariana looked at Edlyn with sleep filled eyes. "Noooooo.... I don't even want to go anymore. I just want to go to bed and sle-ep." Ariana groaned. Edlyn looked conflicted as she bit down on her lower lip, she didn't know how to respond. "Don't go then." Talisha suggested with a shrug. "No, I can't. It's not right. I said I was going to be helping Lucius study. I'm not going back on my word, so I will go." Ariana sighed. 
"Then why complain?" Talisha asked with a bored face and tone. "Because I can." Ariana replied flatly. 
"I'm going too. I don't want you to get too exhausted." Edlyn said as she hooked her arm around Ariana's. "Me too! You never said it was going to be one on one." Halina laughed. "And I really don't mind a quick refresher." Talisha rolled her eyes at Halina then looked at Ariana. 
"Refresher my a**! Exams are a month away but I might as well sponge off of the study session. It's not everyday you can learn from a perfect student or learn their tricks of the trade." Talisha said as she gave Ariana a quick wink.
"Fantastic! I was hoping you guys would want to come along!" Ariana said as she beamed brightly but her eyes reflected some worry. She quickly grabbed her packed satchel and was lead out by Edlyn.
....
"Are you sure this is what is going to be on the exams? I mean it's the first time we will be taking them and this seems a little.... I don't know? Lacking?" Talisha asked as she looked over her own notes. "No. I actually have no idea what will be on the exam but the best way to prepare for it is to perfect your foundation. From there we can expand out and focus on the highlighted points of the course curriculum. Then the last two weeks it's paying attention. I don't know how each teacher works but I'm hoping that each one will drop a hint or two on what we should expect." Ariana explained.
"That sounds logical but for hypothetical purposes how would you answer the opinion based questions? I would assume there would be one or at least some essay style question." Lucius asked. "Grammar and spelling." Edlyn and Ariana said in unison. "I'm sorry, I don't see how grammar and spelling would be important. It's an opinion piece as long as they can read it does it really matter?" Halina asked as she removed her pencil from between her nose and upper lip. She was bored and hated studying the most out of the four girls so she found that fun made her mind focus. 
"Regardless of what you write, good, bad or mediocre, grammar and spelling make a huge impact on the overall piece." Ariana replied. "Don't get it." Halina said in a bored tone. "Okay let me give you an example. Say Ms. Hadley makes us write a short answer question. It's called short because you don't need to write an essay, in fact you can answer the question in bullet form but Ms. Hadley is a stickler for spelling not so much grammar. So answer the question, how are clouds formed?" Ariana asked as she looked at the group members.
"Water heats up, flies upwards and they get cold, attach together then cloud." Halina replied with a mocking smile. "Sure but you answered it in a way so you would avoid writing difficult words." Ariana pointed out. Halina flinched and she sheepishly looked away. "The sun heats up the surface and water rise into the air. This creates evaporation, a type of gas made of water. The hotter it gets the further the water rises as moisture and the further it rises the colder it gets up in the air. Then the water droplets start to group together and create condensation. Which means they turn into clouds." Edlyn responded proudly.
"Right but here's the problem it's a short answer question. What if Ms. Hadley being who she is, points out it's too wordy? It's a short answer so break it down. What are the important parts?" Ariana asked. Edlyn frowned and dropped her gaze. She silently slipped into deep thought. 
"Water heats up, turns into evaporation. The moisture rises and at a certain height the water cools and forms condensation." Talisha answered cautiously. "Right." Ariana said with a big smile. "Hold on that's way too simple." Lucius grumbled. "Of course! Again Ms. Hadley could care less about grammar so you could easily answer with bullet points. Break up what Talisha said and boom, boom, boom. Done." Ariana replied.
"How do you know you have it right?" Halina asked. "It can't be that simple to just come up with an answer like that. What if she wants something more detailed or want more fancy words?" Ariana looked at Halina and she could see that her curiousity was sparked. "Easy. Look at what the question is worth. If it's two marks just two fancy words need to be spelled correctly, if it's four but there are only two fancy words well fill in the blanks. The point of a short answer is to answer in a small amount of time. Just like multiple guess." Ariana said with a small laugh.
"Hold on this went over my head. Where did marks come in?" Talisha asked as she waved her pencil at Ariana. 


First Arc:

"Don't leave me! Just look at me and stay awake!" Words that haunted Ariana's dreams for as long as she remembered. Dying in the arms of her lover as they both are surrounded and engulfed in flames. 

However Ariana's quirks never stopped her from living her life. Her journey starts from when her adoptive mother sells her at the tender age of 12, afraid that she was stealing her adoptive father's love. A blow to her head unlocks her past life's memories and life skills. 

Any object she touches relating to her past life unlocks her past skills and education. Using her memories she changes the brothel she's sold to into a maid cafe, and slowly changes her community. 

While creatures called Lumas are born from her powers to protect Ariana but who are the Lumas really protecting? Especially when she gets her period on her 13th birthday and it morphs her into a humanoid garnet dragon.

Second Arc:

In a world full of magic, beast men, warriors, adventurers and elementals could there really be something more frightening then a girl with mixed blood? Garnet dragon, child of the jewel eyed priestess and the soul of someone who was summoned from Earth.

Ariana is fully awoken to who she is and has started her life in St. Verusha Academy as their perfect score student. She will have to grow into the young lady she wants to be while trying to unravel the mysteries of her life. 

With the help of Cayden, her childhood friend and the the Lumas, Ariana will discover the roads she can walk down. The only problem is will she choose destruction or human evolution? Love or world dominance? Revenge or forgiveness? Or will she allow her human mind and heart to be devoured by the darkness inside of her because of a massive betrayal from the one person she thought meant the most to her?

Some argue that various works by authors that do not meet the requirement of fine grammar and spelling are rubbish. Here, each person has his own opinion, and let him stick to it and impose his opinion on others as the ultimate truth, it speaks only of ignorance of life. It is diverse.

Is the work of authors with poor grammar garbage? In my opinion, no. Each author tells his story, passed through his worldview, attitude, understanding of life, his experience and thoughts about the world. It's always interesting for me to read this personally.

I'm a bibliophile, I read a lot of classic works of art, Tomass and Gernih Mana, Feuchtwanger, Mark Twain, Stvenson, Romain Roland, Galsworthy, Tolstoy and all his volumes and there are about 19 of them! I didn't read Dostoevsky, I didn't like him. But Azek Azimov, Ursuda Le Guin, Tolkien, Kipling, Conandoyle, Louis Besenar and others I read with pleasure. Li Bo, the poetry is gorgeous. Novels of feudal and late feudal China, Japan, Korea. Novels and novels by Chinese prose writers of the early 20s and 80-90s of the 20th century.

In general, I read about 10,000 books. Fiction, fantasy, poetry, historical novels, ballads, myths and legends.

After that I became interested in reading historical documentaries - about the history of the Silk Road, Archeology, History, Ethnography, Etymology, the Big Game, the story of the confrontation of imperial intelligence in the vast regions of the Silk Road.

I read about 550 books, from the 16th to the beginning of the 21st century.

I have some kind of base for evaluating short stories and novels.

Sometimes works written flawlessly in terms of grammar, alas ... they are completely devoid of meaning, they are not interesting, they do not have fascinating stories, conclusions, experience, thoughts. But work with poor grammar, on the contrary, have unique information. Of course, not all works, but there are some.

Therefore, when assessing the creativity of another person, the author, being so categorical in evaluations, says only that you have a maximalist who still knows life poorly. This is the right of choice, each person, and to impose a choice on another according to my preferences, I consider this not comme il faut. Well, here everyone has a point of view.

In fact, this is an eternal question - what is more important? Beautiful text form or good content? Bestsellers are those works that combine good text and good content.

I am the author myself. But not a professional writer, but a techie. I don't know much about composition, about the intricacies of writing good text. But I have a very interesting content. Is my story garbage? I do not think so? Do I respect the reader? Sure. But writing is better so far I can't. Nevertheless, I have my own circle - readers who are interested in my work. There are not hundreds or thousands of people, but a couple of dozen will be typed.

I write in the genre - a documentary historical fiction, there are many interesting facts about the Silk Road with which I wanted to share. If I were waiting for the moment when I could write well in terms of English grammar ... I would not be able to share it now ... maybe in a couple of years ... and still I would not be able to write like this they write - people from English-speaking countries. This is a favorite topic of native speakers to reproach those who learn this language in their ignorance of the intricacies of the language they learn, grammar and spelling errors ... As we say, the dog barks, the caravan goes on. That happens.

English is the world language of communication. Moreover, for me it is the third language. I speak English well, but my grammar is lame. I admit it. Yes, I need to teach her, but I don't think I can write in perfect English.

The overall result - write as you can, share your thoughts, in the era of information, the content itself is important and not its form. One way or another, it can help others, they can come to a new thought and write a story about your topic that you would like to read yourself!


As they say in the East - do good and throw it into the water, a person will not know, the fish will know!

Peace and prosperity!

Thoughts of why and why stories are written.

All the same English, he has not improved in 18 days.

I'll figure something out, try to correct the text.

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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Hello everyone, I am the author.  Please read it until the END!
Unfortunately, this is not a new chapter bt an announcement and it will remain here until the new chapters come out. 
I want to thank everyone for this amazing opportunity and deeply apologize. As readers, you deserve better, as a matter of fact, the best, and I have not been delivering proper results.  It is with a sad heart that I have to admit that I have lost the flow of this character. However, I am editing all the chapters from the beginning to make sure the spelling errors get fixed and the grammar is improved giving me the chance to get in his mind again. Once I reach the latest chapter I will continue the story from that point and this time I am determined to rise up to your support. So be sure to send encouragement and stones so the novel can be found by even more readers. As I have stated before I read every single comment and if you have a like from me that means I have read what you said and pondered on it. Also if you see a spelling mistake or bad grammar be sure to comment it below and I will try to fix it ASAP. The review will be 2 chapters per night which started last night so I should be making new updates in 3 weeks time, I am already excited to get back on this horse!
I'll update here daily, now finished ch 17.
Thank you for all your support and love.

We make many choices daily like what to wear; but what if the stakes were much higher and consequences were someone’s life? How many would remain kind-hearted? John will ponder this question many times as his new starting point becomes clear.
“Am I still human? If not, then why would I act like one?”

Each auxiliary chapters is the story of a side character and their beginning. If you like them to be continued, post a comment on the respective chapter. (Their length varies)
Unfortunately, it does not indicate my daily updates on them but I just finished Sep and Gil, check them out and let me know what you think. 

Updates will be 7 chapters per week.
If ranking falls under:
300, +1 ch
200, +2 ch
100, +3 ch 
Less than 100 will be twice a day.

hello readers, recently I've checked all the reviews and comments I've received till now. after reading everything, I've confirmed one common thing of all of them. that is almost no one have any problem with the plot, but it's just that the grammar is very off and there are lots of spelling mistakes. 
First of all, I have a proper 9-5 daily job. i come home at 6-7 and sleep by 10-11. so at the maximum, I would hardly get 3-4 hrs daily. and within that time, I need to give some time for my parents, some time for my girlfriend, some time for some online games and reading some novels and some time for writing this fanfic.
honestly, with the time I have, publishing a chapter even per 2 days is hard. with my poor sense of grammar and with little to no rechecks, there's bound be lots of mistakes. but still, many readers persisted for more than 90 chapters. and the number of collections almost reached 4000. I'm thankful for that.
so, I have a question here. think of it as a poll then. I read some previous chapters and just as many readers complained, there are lots of spelling mistakes. I'm planning to recheck and correct the mistakes of the past chapters but with the time I have in my hand, it would delay the publishing of ongoing chapters.
So, what should i do now? 1.should I just forget about the past chapters and continue just as it is and edit them after the end of the fanfic? or 2.should I just delay the current ongoing chapters for a week and look at them?. I'm open to suggestions until the next chapter is published.

Note: This novel is dropped and has been handed over to the author "Snowstar". He is fixing errors and editing the chapters and has my permission to rewrite and additional chapters in the middle of the story as long as the overall story doesn't change.
Please support the same fanfic with a better writing quality under the name "The Senju Prince".

The Beach Awards 2018
Reviewed by, MissMaven
Publisher: Wattpad

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 8/10
Cover: 4/5
Originality: 5/5
Character Development: 10/10
Plot Development: 8/10
Description: 3/5
Enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 43/50

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: "There were a few punctuation mistakes, but this story honestly can't be confined by normal punctuation since it's a story told poetically. Overall, I always knew what the author was saying and nothing stood out as greatly flawed."

Cover: "The cover is delicate and beautiful just like the story, so I felt like it was perfect. The title is a little off but not completely inaccurate, so I just took off one point."

Originality: "This story was absolutely original. As soon as I started it, I didn't put it down until I was finished with the entire thing. Not only is the format original, the plot is too. Also, the blurb for this story was 100% accurate."

Character Development: "You watch this main character undergo a complete transformation in this book in as few words as possible. It's fantastic. The development is both physical and mental, and it's very beautifully done."

Plot Development: "This story's plot is unique in that several parts are meant to be assumed and not explained. There was obviously plot progression that aided the story, but it was not exactly obvious. This was on purpose, but I did dock a few points because it could be seen as confusing for some. I personally had to ask the author some questions at the end to clarify."

Blurb/Description: "It's 100% accurate to the story and really prepared me for what I was about to read."

Enjoyment: "I loved reading this book. Every chapter was pure enjoyment, and I highly recommend this book to everyone looking for an airy light hearted read. It's incredibly creative and beautifully written."

A series of poems all forming a short Korean Drama novel of two best friends that might just be in love with each other. Both have conflicted emotions and one might be lying. Watch out, you might just get fished into their washed up love story.

A Times New Romance story that was created to allow the reader to build their own details within the story. The main characters name, how she changed, and how it all really ended, the readers create it themselves. Let your mind wander with Naughty Fish!

Winner of The Beach Awards 2018 for the Chicklit category!
Naughty Fish made the Watty's 2018 Shortlist for poetry! It was also nominated as 3# for The Poet category. 

All Rights Reserved © 2019 by Times New Romance

Hi everyone this is the first novel I write I'm very sorry if there's a wrong spelling and wrong grammar cause I'm not good at writing essays I hope you guys can forgive my wrongly spelling and  and I you guys enjoyed my novel

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