WARNING my stories generally lack spirit i write for fun and to free my head from this particular plot.

Expect inconsistency bullshit power ups and messed up logic and also don't expect good grammar.

"Why?" ,Ben asked in disappointment. 

"This is unfair." ,Jason demanded. 

"Calm down." ,Arjun explained the reason for them. Chaos and Astral Energy can't stay together. It was a taboo. If they are closer together, then that means only one thing. 

Explosion!

That is the reason why the Void never told about the existence of Chaos and Astral World to their counterparts respectively. Or else, this huge explosion would destroy everything into pieces. 

Arjun's explanation made them disappointed. But even if they wanted to, they have no choice but to say their farewell to their Avatars. 

Arjun said, "We can't do anything about it. It is for our safety."

"Astral World, Ah?" ,Sitaram was as calm as always. He said, "Then why nothing is happening to us right now?"

Arjun explained, " It's because your cultivation has been destroyed along with the creation of your Avatar. So yours and your Avatar's bodies are an empty shell. Even I depend on you ten. Even if I gave birth to only one Avatar among you, then the negative energy between me and Jimmy starts to form. Because my body would become affiniatewd to the Chaos Spiritual Energy. While Our Avatar needed only Astral Spiritual Energy. This will become mandatory as soon as any one of my ten selected candidates gives birth to their Avatar. Needless to say, nine of you."

"Then what should we do now?" ,Sitaram asked decisively. 

Arjun said, "The real bodies would come with me. I will take you to a place. And that will be where you will start your Void cultivation technique. And all your Avatars would go with Jimmy. And Jimmy would take them to a place. But remember. This will be the last time you will see them. As for our next meeting, I don't know when it would be."

The Void told him that this would be the moment of their last meeting. And meeting their Avatars is impossible. But Arjun didn't believe it. The fact that the Void couldn't establish a communication between it and the Void Qi, while he succeeded in his first try is the proof that he could turn this impossible into possible. 

Cultivation means endless possibilities. Arjun strongly believed that. If Void couldn't do it, it doesn't mean that he couldn't. The fact that the Void failed in establishing a communication with it's Void Wi, while he succeeded in his first try is the nest proof that even the Void could fail in some things. 

And most importantly, he had the assistance of his Void Qi now. As he advances in his cultivation, his Void Qi's knowledge will increase as well. So, he will definitely find a way to meet with his Avatar Jimmy in the future. It might take a huge time, but he will do it for sure. 

"Then let's do it. M" ,Sitaram made his decision. When an elder like Sitaram made his decision, then others wouldn't deny it. No matter who is strong, and who is weak in cultivation, Sitaram always received others respect! Here strong rules the weak concept doesn't exist. Even Arjun would listen to Sitaram's orders without any second thought. This is the respect he earned from others. 

"Let's go, then." ,Arjun said. 

Everyone started to walk. Everyone looked at their own Avatars one last time. They gritted their teeth as they had to be separated. 

Even Arjun was no exception. Even though both of them were one from soul, the fact that Arjun believed Jimmy as his little brother shouldn't be neglected. But this separation bound to happen. 

Arjun clenched his fists. This feeling was also like something is still controlling his fate from shadows. He gave command, "Void Qi! Establish another main mission! No matter how far we are, I need to have a means of communication with my Avatar! How lousy this communication system is, it doesn't matter. As long as my message reached Jimmy, and Jimmy's message reached me, everything is fine. But is their a way for such a long ranged communication?"

[Communication is possible!]

[Host's and Host's Avatar has the same origin!]

[This source is like the Host's and host's Avatar's Core!]

[If host and host's avatar gives permission to the Void Qi, then it is possible to use this source as the medium to only exchange messages]

[But the host could only depend on the system]

[The source will act as the means to manage the communication between split souls]

[Warning: Host and host's avatar could communicate through messages in letters and grammar. Host can't communicate with avatar through video or audio means]

"Then permission granted." ,Arjun didn't hesitate to give permission. As long as they could at least share their experiences with their Avatar, everything is fine. With this Arjun won't only communicate with his Avatar, he could learn the system in the Astral World as well. 

Even though he was a little disappointed that verbal communication is not possible, at least, he had a small means of communication with his Avatar. This really satisfied him. At least, something is better than nothing. 

Very soon, the real bodies and their Avatar quickly left to their destination. Arjun and Jimmy gave them the time to come out of their sorrow. 

After they calmed down, Arjun said, "Cultivation system is divided into different realms. Mortal Realm, Immortal Realm, God Realm and so on. In the Mortal Realm, there are four stages. They are Foundation Origin Stage, Body Origin Stage, Soul Origin Stage and Life and Death Cycle. Each stages are further divided into twelve levels. First you need to start cultivating in the Foundation Origin Stage. I will now take you to a place. It is the place filled with Chaos Energy! When you train in the middle of the Chaos Energy, you will be advancing in your cultivation."

"Till what level we can train in that Chaos Energy?" ,Sitaram asked. 

"Until you cross the threshold of Mortal and step into the Immortal Realm!" ,Arjun said, "That means, after you cross the Life and Death Cycle. After Life and Death Cycle, you had to undergo tribulation. After you succeeded, you will officially step into the Immortal Realm! That's when you will enter the Immortal Realm!"

"How long would it take for us to step in the Immortal Realm?" ,Ben asked. 

Arjun replied, "Around five thousand years!"

The crowd were speechless. They sighed. 

Arjun said, "Don't worry! No matter how much time you spent here, it won't even amount to even one second in the outside world. So be patient."

They nodded their heads in agreement. After that Arjun took them to the giant Chaos Energy where he previously trained. After the crowd stunned for some time to see such a giant Chaos Energy, they started their training in the Foundation Origin Stage. 

On the other side, Jimmy also began the nine Avatar's cultivation in Foundation Origin Stage in the middle of the silver colour Astral Energy. 

And then they were free. Now they started to wonder what to do in this five thousand years of precious time!

This is the world where magicians are respected.. and the weak people ar doomed. Arjun Kumar our main protagonist is dsired to become the great magician but later finds that he has no "magic core" at all. Arjun didn't fell disappointed. He trains in Willpower the lengthy and time consuming way.

But his fate changes when he meets a poweful Dragon named 'Magneel' who is kind to Humans and gives his power to Arjun and trains him. 

Join the adventures of Arjun and Magmeel who together joins in an adventures along with the interesting new characters who will be introduced in the future.

If by some miracle someone discovers this, I have one thing to ask...

How the fuck did you get here? It seems like a strange place to be, but who am I to question you. Ok, instead of inquiring about your current life choices, I should probably explain what I am trying to do here. Satire.

If you haven't figured it out yet - a rather astounding achievement if you ask me - I'm making fun of the common methods authors use on this site to write. As of right now, I have zero chapters up but am working on the "cultivation" genre. I get that it's low hanging fruit, but the other apples aren't much higher. Don't expect much from me; I'm lazy, uninspired, and probably just put a semicolon where it doesn't belong. Grammar was never my strong suit, but I can say that about almost every class I was in.

Feel free to correct my grammar, it is a big weakness of mine and I would like to improve it. I embrace all grammar nazis, but not because of the nazi part. No Klan meetings to be had in this here novel.
 
Oh, almost forgot to mention a little detail. If it ain't in the auxiliary volume, it's a safe bet to assume it's satire. I will try to make it obvious, but there is only so much I can do when it comes to text. 

Alright, time for me to start on it. Probably should have had the first chapter all typed out before I made this, but hey, I'm not one to plan ahead.

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Now just sit back potential fanfic writers and read my book, because soon you will learn how to prey on the less intellectually gifted through the use of foolproof cliches and feel good self-insertion!

Enjoy!

This novel is something that I will write in my free time since I am still studying, but I will try to make a chapter every day or every two days. 

 The novels will have harem, adventures, fights, mc op, and other things. Regarding the harem, I will try not to focus too much on this topic at the beginning, if not the development of the MC.

  Regarding grammar, my vocabulary is not very broad and I do not speak English but I will strive to improve my grammar.

 It would be helpful for me in the comments to give me constructive opinions on how to improve my novel

DO READ THIS FIRST.
As the chapter title hinted.
This is a chapter made to give the readers, an early heads up and review which is meant for reference to continue reading.

All this to avoid toxicity as much as possible.

These are some points that should be crucial to help you decide either to continue or not.
1. The content
Anything can get inside of the novel, even if disturbing ones. So, if you found hint(s) about them and felt you wouldn't be able to handle it, you are free (recommended) to back down. Challengers are welcome, tread on fully knowing this fact.
This one will definitely contain scene for the cultured ladies and gentlemen and scene that might stir your emotion or something.

2. Readers influence
I will make plot choices post for readers to affect the story to certain extent.
Self made petition to ask the same also possible but, remember! I never promise I would take it into account, and I am not obliged to follow that suggestion down to very details.

3. Correction
Typos and grammar arrangement or maybe idea used could be wrong, so any correction suggestions are welcome.
BUT, once again I might comply or ignore the suggestions.

4. Merit system
I will keep track of things and may release more chapters per month.
Planned release 5 per week (taking break on the weekends. So, use the sign in reward if you using apps to read as a tracker if impatient.)
I promise i will release at least 20 chapters per month (5 chapters x 4 weeks). This is meaning even if I got busy, I will try to dish out the remaining chapters of the 20 I promised within that month.
Of course, I can just give out more chapters but that's my readers reward.

5. Target
I started this one for a contest, and mainly for extra income. 
New users, expect to at least spend some fast passes to read.
In case any unfortunate event happened, I will do my best to take the best solution I can at that time.

Here's my sneak peek review.
Story : Revolving around evolution and starting with revenge. There will be hints here and there, so let your imagination go wild. Any genre can get in and leave as I wish. So enjoy.
Language : I will use english (some might say broken english or bad grammar) along with a part of languages I known. 
A little spoiler, I will use japan's chan, kun, sama, dono and etc. (For those who might know nothing, those are words which can't be fully translated to language which own nothing of the similar system. Like sama for example, X-sama could be "lord X" but not all would be that. One who loved to watch any Japan related surely understand.)
Grammatically, this point a bit hard to say. I will take it as you understand, I understand then all is well. Go to point 3 for it. It definitely included on point 4 as my gratitude to the kind soul.

in star rate system, the story get my 5 of 5 stars, presentation 5 as well and grammar would be 4 out of 5, as I often lost of the best word even I actually known that word.
Overall, I would rate this Novel of mine 4 out of 5 for many reasons.

WARNING
This novel contains 18+ and evolving.

Readers please do take care.
The works definitely will contain disturbing elements which might include gory, crazy ideology(maybe) or anything.

Challengers are welcome.
Read fully knowing that.




Story Sypnosis:
I am Daken.
No.
I was Daken, a soldier on his prime, but was framed for unknown reason. Was it my love for the kingdom's princess, Shiva Eternia Ethervalen?

A soldier with the power rivaling a general tossed away just like that. Fortunately, a voice warned me the attempts of ambushes and an assassination.

The voice told me to go into the Accursed forest, Gal A forest.The most dangerous place of all dangerous places ever known. Even getting close 50 meters from the forest was said to bring bad luck. 

Rumors said that will invite catastrophe. 
Some said it will erase the closest villages. 
Some, until the sightseer die.
Some, the whole kingdom.
Many rumors flying around, shrouding the forest with more mystery and fear.

BUT. There is one fact, well known to everyone who knew about this infamous forest.
The fact is not about it is or was cursed or anything.
The fact is no trespasser ever come back as survivor.
All dead, seen or not seen. 

That fact made it, a treasure forest. Like insects allured by sweet smell, humans allured by the resources and mysteries accumulated by the forest. From unranked directly to A after many adventurers below S rank failed to return. Then directly to SS rank until an S ranker's magic placate which indicating his life became ashes without warning. Greed fired up which then went to play the pride of the strong resulting in the hurt pride felt wrath toward the forest. 

It was said 7 vice guild masters along with the army of a kingdom tried to explore the forest all vanished just like that after all, except a messenger team consisting 5 S rankers adventurers, entered the forest.

From 5 seemed to be wasteful messengers, only 1 survived. A sole survivor who wasn't the strongest of the 5 nor was the weakest. It was said he was the only to focus on escaping with not even the slightest care of the tragedy happening behind him. He was determined to return home to do his last job as a mere messenger to report the tragedy.

It was said that kingdom was the strongest of in the history as well as the richest.

That had been the story shared from generation to generation, not clear wether it was a legend, a myth or a fairytale. 

But, one thing for sure.
That forest is the place i lost something important as a man.

Author:Sorry for the poor English and grammar im still learning.And also im not really good at making novels yet but im sure to improved along with this story.Thanks for understanding! Enjoy!!
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Vast world green and blue...Yet evil resides in all corner this is the world of Elerthia.World that falls under one banner the empire of Detroz.

World where the fairies,dwarfs and other mythical creatures becomes extinct and seems to be just legends.But they do live in the world long time ago..

"Malta!! where are you??"A teen boy medium built and height,white skin bit spiky hair wearing a crop top purple shirt and a boar feather short.His name is Zyldorico.

"Crap, I lost him again!"

(Indistinct chattering)

Zyldorico walked slowly to the sounds origin.He saw a gang of bandits.

"Ha ha! What a great catch!" A tall muscular bald men shouted.

"Youre the best boss!!With this we can moved and build a Bigger fort!! a medium height mo-hawk haired bandit says.

"Bunch of fools,so they caught malta!" Zyldorico reveals himself from the bandits,They turn their heads to zyldorico's.

"So what is the kiddo doing here in the middle of forest??"Boss bandit says.

"Boss maybe he's from noble family lets abduct him and take a bribe!"

"Idiot! Look at him he does'nt wear those noble's gown!"

"Give me my pet at once or i will force my self to hurt you"Zyldorico says in a serious tone.

"Ha ha ha ha ha" Laughter burst from the bandits.

"Dont make us laugh kid"

"Boss maybe i kill this little shit?"

The bandit then walks slowly towards zyldorico and grab his arm, Pulling it but did'nt even budge.

"You touch me, you ask for it"

Zyldorico punch the bandit's stomach and he falls to the ground.

"Youre strong for a kid,Kill him!!"Boss commanded all the bandits to kill zyldorico.

They rushed towards zyldorico attacking him endlessly but he easily dodging it.

After a few minutes they stop attacking because of tireness,and falls to the ground.Zyldorico is there standing safe and sound,Without a single scratch.

"(Fu*k he is not normal!!)"The boss turn his head and panickly runs away from zyldorico.

"(What a coward,and he leaves his fellow mates.Bastard)"

He walks and free malta from the cage
"There yah go,Next time dont try again wondering with your own"

Malta is a Dinosaur hybreed his face looks like a dragon.

"Let's head back now master is preparing for meal"

"Wait..."Zyldorico stop walking

"Hey kid i know you are behind those big rocks come out" the kid shows himself.

"What do you want? What are you sneaking for?"

"Sir,i saw how you fought those bandits..."
A short kid a little younger than Zyldorico wearing an ordinary peasant shirts.Name is Rowi.

"And what kid? spit it out"

"Please i beg you..Save my village from those greedy people!!"

"What so you mean to free?? Are they isolating you or something??"

"They force all the male elders to get logs from the forest without paying them and they work all day without rest,and the females hunting and cooking food for them."

"Abusing their power again?Hmm those bastards making my blood boil.Okay take me to your village."

"Thanks sir!!"

"Dont be so polite,Just call me zyl."

"Okay zyl"

"Ahhhh! What is that thing behind you?!"
rowi is shocked seeing a weird creature like Malta.

"Haha his name is Malta my Pet my father's gift when i turned 13 Years old"

"Amazing! I never seen that kind of creature before"

"Hmm good for you boy"

The two begin their walk to the ruined village.

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Author:Sorry for the poor English and grammar im still learning.And also im not really good at making novels yet but im sure to improved along with this story.Thanks for understanding! Enjoy!!

Zyldorico the 4th son of the former king began his journey finding his siblings that separated during the Great war by the Rebellions.He inherit one of the Dark Emperor’s power but not aware of the consequences.Upon the journey he will cross with the Powerful foes from the Emperial kingdom together with his siblings they plan to End the Ancient war that yet to be reborn in the present.But when the past began to unfold they will realise whom they dealing with.

Will they able to reclaim the throne and right all the wrong doings of the evils? Will they able to bring the justice to all of the victims?
Or they will be swallowed by the Dark Emperor’s power??

Hi guys,
I hope you guys are safe.
I have been reading your comments and reviews and have tried to reply to every comment and review.
some give 3star, 2star some are giving 4and5star also.
Some common reviews were about
My writing quality and I know it is not upto standards and many readers are finding it hard to read due to grammar. For grammar I have no excuse and for spelling as I use smartphone to write and that some spelling mistakes are made, during the process of writing or due to auto correction and I have tried to edit them but some just don't get edited in official version.
Like breast which should be beasts.
Ruin be rune etc.
Second:
update are irregular as I only write when I feel like writing else busy due to my study or read other novel.
Usually I read Machine translation of novel and many are raw version of novels in Webnovel. As I became curious to know about the latest developments and I can say I have got used to reading them and enjoy it.
After all I write for enjoyment and myself, so writing novel is more like hobby.
I am not paid for it, till now that is.
If I was getting paid I would have hired a editor by now.
That is why I am looking for free editor who can help me edit.
But every time is the same story, some guys reply. I want to help you and I say come lets have a chat in Discord. After that I never get a reply.
As for some uncommon reviews and questions like.
#Why have you dumped so much information in starting chapters which I as a reader, find irrelevant?
The answer is, that is common sense of how other magic uses cultivat but because Kai is not following the common method and basically skip magic apprentice stage and
I use it to explain the difference between others and Kai way of cultivation.
Note:I have already explained the logic behind law and Kai limitations in earlier chapter.
I will just add that chapter to volume 0.
#Question 2:
Why is the world name is Great magic world?
I have no answer to this. May be a random thought.
#Question 3:
Why is the rank of body potential and mage root have saint above divine.
Because I want it to be. No logic.
If you ever write a novel feel free to change it according to your wish.
Question 4:
#Why is it common for space rift occurance in the continent?
Well it due to incomplete and unstable laws of magic, cause due to world barrier.
Remember why I say, all magic users are not able to display full power and why true saint level magic user don't exist till now so evenJai and other are not match for true saint magic users as they have understanding of incomplete magic laws and cannot make any progress in their cultivation.
#Why is Kai able to make such decisions in starting chapters and is his memory so strong?
Answer to that is Kai father knowledge and wisdom which he shared with Kai.
As a hunter who lives in a dangerous world close to forbidden forest. He has some general knowledge of behaviour magic beasts and share it with Kai and he use this knowledge, wisdom, incomplete mage root to trace magic power left behind by to survive
the first day.
Later event you have read.
You will not expect such thinking abilities from a 6year child but magic root is closely related with development of brain and mental strength.
Higher rank mage root give better intelligence, memory power and greater brain development.
It was also one of the reason why Kai got possesed by Daoma in starting not to mention be is a magic emperor.
Kai's mage root went to deep slumber and so he didn't cultivated strong mental strength.
Possessing mental strength of a non magic user.
Don't ask questions in paragraph comments. Use chapter comments.
Ask questions if you have doubts ask.
I will reply as soon as possible.
For those who read my novel and supported me. thank you and thanks for power stones, gifts and responding to me.
Really going premium was a bad decision. I thought it will stop my novel from getting pairated on other websites. But it's still going on.
My novel veiws have reached 1million.
Planning to create a discord server for the readers. If you guys any thoughts let me know.
Thank you guys for reading.


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The great magic world where the magic is part of everyday live of people. Where users of magic are considered elite and everybody dream to become a grand Master.

There are words which are famous and knows to all magic users who want to reach the peak. Representing great deep of magic laws, which gives idea about the journey of great path of magic

MORTAL LIVE BY THEM, 
TRANSCEND KNOW THEM, 
SAINTS UNDERSTAND THEM, 
DIVINE TRANSFORM THEM, 
WORLD CREATES THEM.
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Editor:-
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If anyone willing to help me with editing let me know.

**Disclaimer**
This cover is not owned by me. If you want me to take it down just comment me.

I have never written a story or something like that before so leave everything to imagination and to grammar(free)

I was once a successful man but I want to meet God and I will.
••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
I Can't Die when I Died I will be back to 2006 
so I just wanna live my life full.

My father always said to me
"When you were born you cry and world rejoice and I hope when you died world cry and you rejoice "
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I never write a story before so don't ask me for much I am a newbie in English and in books.

dropping because no one comment which means no one likes it.

Taming the CEO's Unrestrained Wife is a work of fiction. The ages, names, places, and situations the author used doesn't have anything to do with anyone and was just a coincidence. The Author does not own the cover photo used and the right belongs to the rightful owner of the photo.

TTCUW won't have a stable update as long as the Author's first story Blue Moon Bride's not finished yet. TTCUW will only be updated when the Author has more free time to use to create chapters for her current and pending novel/s.

The author is not that good in English because it is not her mother tongue please bear with her English/grammar. She is not really a writer nor a professional one. The author writes to release some stress. Thank you in advance to those people who will read this novel. The author will try her best to update this as much as possible. Please feel free to leave a comment or a review for the author to know if she should change something and for her to improve her novel. Thank you very much!

Cassidy Chen, a once famous model and singer. She is a down to earth, educated and kind person. Everything is fine in her life. She has everything she wants, a happy and whole family, a good career and even the man of her dreams. She has them all. Until that night, a day before her wedding with the one she loves. Everything falls apart because of it and in order for her to fix herself, her family allowed her to stay outside the country hoping that she will be able to move on and be back to her original self. She was completely broken, she gave her all for her love to the one who she thought loved her the way she loves him but everything was just a lie in order for that man to build his own company. He only used her. 

After five long years, she was now a mother to a son, the son whom she loves despite what his ex-lover did to her. People already forget everything about her even the man who once she loved moved on and was in a relationship with the woman he cheated on her, her best friend. Determined to get revenge for herself and for her son, and because her family asked her, she came back and live her life for her family especially her son. Coming back home, the once kind Cassidy Chen became an unrestrained person and only those who she considered dear to her are the only ones whom she will show her soft side.

“I am going to get back all the things that are rightfully mine.” She declared.

Nathaniel Li, a famous businessman and CEO of an entertainment agency. He was the only son of the well-known Li Family. He was respected by everyone in the industry although his personality is not quite likable and he was controlling at times. He is a man of his words and as long as he knows that he is right no one can stop him. But one-day things change because of his family’s connection with the Chen’s he was forced to meet and get to know Cassidy Chen. 

What will happen if a controlling man meets an unrestrained woman? And what if they were both forced into a marriage? Will life be smooth for them or will their life be forever a mess?

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