Just a test book to see how my writing abilities are and for ideas nothing too special

The best/worst crafting system since i made it.



<bad grammar>
<you have beam warned>

Hi guys! This will be my first book that I will be writing. This book will be more of an anime novel because I love anime. If you're the type to imagine the action while reading then it a will be Japanese anime, but you don't have to.

Grammar:
Sorry if my grammar is very bad but hope you enjoy.

Mistake: 
Sorry guys I made a mistake on the picture where I put town instead of City

Theirs a guy name Taname who grew up in a normal world called Earth. He’s just a teen with no parents. He grew up living with his aunt. He got his job and all but one day he woke up finding himself in a different world that uses power. He doesn’t know how he get there and so who got him there?How did he got there?

Sorry if my novel is boring for you.

Hello!!! This is your dear Author, Digital! 

I just want to say thank you!!! Thank you for 100 collections for my first book, Love Me, Please! 

I didn't think I would get this far because there are a lot of novels out there, and somehow, you guys found this book. 

Thank you very much for sticking with Love Me, Please! even with my long breaks, my crappy grammar, ESPECIALLY MY CRAPPY GRAMMAR!

And since we're at 100 collections, I want to ask you how you guys found this? 

But anyway, since we're at 100 collections, I'm giving you all a present!

MASS RELEASE!!! ❤😆

Cheated by her fiancé with her younger sister, Musica's life took the most romantic turn as the one and only President of the Mu Company, Jarren Mu, is her husband. 

As the eldest daughter, it is her rightful place to be the President of her father's company. There were a lot of things to worry about. 

And her husband is surrounded by hundreds of famous women. And, his very beautiful secretary. She will definitely worry about that. 

She was married to him three years ago, how did that happen? 

Living under the same roof with him, how can you not fall in love with him? 

"You are my wife, is there anything wrong sleeping in the same bed?" he asked, getting on the bed. She puffed her cheeks and stood up, grabbing extra pillows from the cabinet. 

Placing the pillows between them, she pointed, "this is the line! Do not cross it!" she put her hands on her hips, waiting for his reply, but he only chuckled. "Like I'm the one who'll cross it." 

The next morning, Musica woke up, her eyes widening when she found herself cuddling with him. She screamed her lungs out, shouting, "YOU PERVERT!" 

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The younger sister of the Xiao Family, Lirica is pregant with the child of her sister's fiancé, Xian Kim

Banging on the door of the Kim Household, she shouted, asking for Xian when a man with dark black hair opened the door for her. His cold and aloof expression frightening her. 

He was the eldest brother of Xian Kim, Xunzhi Kim. 

Finding out that Xian has escaped, she had no choice but to take care of the child in her belly alone. But, Xunzhi didn't think otherwise. 

"I will be the one that will take care of you and that child. To compensate my brother's recklessness." He said. 

She furrowed her eyebrows, unable to understand him. Why would he want to take the burden of his brother when it's not his fault that she's pregnant? 

Xunzhi stood up, not waiting for her reply. "From now on, you stay here and I'll take care of you once you give birth to the baby and can stand on your own." 

She nodded. It was a crazy idea. But this was all she got. 

She sighed. It's just nine months. She said to herself. What's the harm in that? 

 
It was only nine months, indeed. But how can she leave when she's falling in love with him? And when there's more to know?

The Beach Awards 2018
Reviewed by, MissMaven
Publisher: Wattpad

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 8/10
Cover: 4/5
Originality: 5/5
Character Development: 10/10
Plot Development: 8/10
Description: 3/5
Enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 43/50

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: "There were a few punctuation mistakes, but this story honestly can't be confined by normal punctuation since it's a story told poetically. Overall, I always knew what the author was saying and nothing stood out as greatly flawed."

Cover: "The cover is delicate and beautiful just like the story, so I felt like it was perfect. The title is a little off but not completely inaccurate, so I just took off one point."

Originality: "This story was absolutely original. As soon as I started it, I didn't put it down until I was finished with the entire thing. Not only is the format original, the plot is too. Also, the blurb for this story was 100% accurate."

Character Development: "You watch this main character undergo a complete transformation in this book in as few words as possible. It's fantastic. The development is both physical and mental, and it's very beautifully done."

Plot Development: "This story's plot is unique in that several parts are meant to be assumed and not explained. There was obviously plot progression that aided the story, but it was not exactly obvious. This was on purpose, but I did dock a few points because it could be seen as confusing for some. I personally had to ask the author some questions at the end to clarify."

Blurb/Description: "It's 100% accurate to the story and really prepared me for what I was about to read."

Enjoyment: "I loved reading this book. Every chapter was pure enjoyment, and I highly recommend this book to everyone looking for an airy light hearted read. It's incredibly creative and beautifully written."

A series of poems all forming a short Korean Drama novel of two best friends that might just be in love with each other. Both have conflicted emotions and one might be lying. Watch out, you might just get fished into their washed up love story.

A Times New Romance story that was created to allow the reader to build their own details within the story. The main characters name, how she changed, and how it all really ended, the readers create it themselves. Let your mind wander with Naughty Fish!

Winner of The Beach Awards 2018 for the Chicklit category!
Naughty Fish made the Watty's 2018 Shortlist for poetry! It was also nominated as 3# for The Poet category. 

All Rights Reserved © 2019 by Times New Romance

Hello, it's your author Springtofu.

I would like to announce that this novel will go on a short hiatus for a day or two, I have always wonder a lot for the future and wanted more for this novel. After I read this novel from the start again, I realized there were major and minor mistakes I have made in terms of grammar and story line since this novel from the start I never did a proper proof reading on it.

I decided to rewrite the whole story and make it better. I am not deleting this book from Webnovel of course. I will continue to write here but whatever is publish on this website is the raw version of this story. The edited version will be posted somewhere else, in case you stumble upon the same title and have the same story line. If you guys are interested to read the edited version (grammar and story line improvised), I will let you know when it is out.

Thank you for your continuous support for this book. There will still be an update tomorrow :)

" When I'm ready, will you listen to me?"

He looks at the woman in front of him " I will wait as long as it takes just for you"
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Lee Jun Ting is an anti-social king and also a sole heir to the Lee family, Zhou Qin Yang is smart, sharp tongue and friendly but comes from a poor family and has an abusive father. Somehow these two still get along with each other even with completely different worlds. To them, as long the presence for each other is enough for them to feel like home.

7 years ago, she left him without a warning. He never got to tell his feelings nor did she manage to tell her to him. They then met each other again. Watch Lee Jun Ting and Zhou Qin Yang unfold their feelings they kept for 7 years, and their struggles to be together.

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the book cover is not mine, credits to the original owner. If any part of the story has similarities to another, it's pure coincidence. Do not repost this story anywhere else.

Hey guys author here. It been almost half a year and I have learned a lot and I still have a lot to learn. 

For everyone that has read everything up to this point I thank you for doing so since it must've been quite a bit troublesome doing so. 

My grammar was terrible at some points(mostly everywhere) and there were many mistakes that were(again, mostly everywhere) at the beginning of the series. 

I believe that mistakes are less and grammar has gotten. (Please say something if I haven't actually approved please as i dont wanna look like an idiot...)

Honestly this road as an author is an arduous one where I have learned many things and plan to implement into my future works.

 Legendary Reincarnated Contract Killer was a half baked project I started and seeing so many people liked it I focused a lot of my time into it.

As I look back at previous chapters, honestly they were really bad in my opinion. So many improvements could've been made.

However let's stop talking about my book and let me thank everyone who is still reading this with enjoyment.  I again thank everyone who are still reading this and thank them for enduring my terrible writing.

Without you guys, i probably would've just started writing something else and dropped this novel. The support I've gotten as i see collections rise let's me know that u guys hope to read more of my creation which make me feel warm in my heart. 

This journey in finishing RLCK will probably for another year. As I aspire to be an real author in the future. I hope you guys stick with me in the future and join me as I walk down the road.

Another thing is that I want ur opinions on the book so far. Is it good? Bad? Complete utter shit? Great? Godly? I need opinions and thoughts so i can improve this book to as best as i can.

Thank you for everything!

Reed Aniston grew up in an orphanage which was actually an assassin organization. He was taught everything an assassin needed to know at his age and became one of top if not the top assassin of his time.

Now his time has ended. Betrayed by one of his closest colleagues, he was captured.

He was interrogated for weeks, his captors used everything they could to make him speak, but nothing worked.  Then,they finally used the person he cared most. 

Forced to the end of his wits, Reed went berserk and massacred everyone. After killing everyone, Reed dies and take his first step to another world.

gonna update this probably 3 times a week. Gonna try to make my chapters the best as possible so you guys don't read terrible chapters.


PS Ranking

Rank 1- 6 chaps
Rank 2- 5 chaps
Rank 3- 4 chaps
Rank 4-10 3 chaps
Rank 11-25 2 chaps
Ranks 26-50 1 chap
After this will be PS ranking 

I owe you guys 11 chaps. welp ok (might die of over writing but it's fine) I DON'T FEAR DEATH

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I have a patreon account but I don't have much of a stock but if you want to help out there's a one dollar option! I would appreicate it if you do

Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Itz_Minh

https://ko-fi.com/S6S6F3CD

paypal.me/ItzMinh

I have a discord as well if you want to hop in on the fun!!  

https://discord.gg/BUnyWKX

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Hello Reader/Viewer Webnovel.




First, about the title of this Auxiliary Chapters, I want to write Novel instead Book, but after repeatedly voicing out, the word 'Book' seem better as the title for this Chapters.




This Book/Novel is originally created by me, but of course not purely everything is original, since I'm using some of other Novel/Book Concept, but the story is pure from my imagination and idea. the Concept like Cultivator, Qi, Zombie, Transmigration, OP MC, Shameless MC and other similar thing to other Novel/Book just merely about the concept, and I will try as much as I can to create Original Story around with it.






How came I'm run into this kind of Story?
I'm usually reading other Novel like Wuxia and other similar genre at first time I got into Online Novel World, and it's spread to other genre. And that lead to where I'm thinking to write about Cultivator and Zombie combination that I'm sure the Concept it's already exist out there, but what if the MC is Overpowered but not Overpowered? Maybe there already one exist, maybe not, but I will make sure the story is really different than other. This is where the Idea lead me to try writing/creating this story.






Why you Create/Write a Novel at Webnovel?
firstly, of course because Money, who didn't like about money? but after observing Webnovel for a long time, I'm not confidence that my story can be good enough to earn a little bit money from it, but still I wanna try first. I'm really have many Idea about story that I want to write/create. So, this will be my first story here on Webnovel and in the future if chance is coming I will try write more with, of course different genre, different story and different concept. [to the truth is, this is the Second novel that I wrote, the first one already here on Inkstone but I got stuck since the novel need more research and knowledge, it's only exist on my physical book first]






What this Auxiliary Chapters?
I'm really confused too, how to use this chapter. But I decided to make auxiliary chapters as Introduction, not just about the Novel itself. so the 'Author Thought' on Chapter will only be used for more explanation about the chapter itself or other notice.






About Author?
Since this is the first novel I wrote, and I'm not Native English speaker so there will be some grammar that wrong, word that not supposed to be there and here and I hope you all can help me with it, to correct me if I made a mistake so that I can improve my writing and grammar. And to still read it with my lack of ability, I'm only can say Thank You!


A little bit information about the background world of this novel/story. the World still have the same size like Earth, but with different topography map. for basic thing everything is the same like we usually encounter in our real life. I'm just try to change a few thing so that it will be slightly different.
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I WANT ENTER WRITING CONTEST WITH THIS NOVEL. SO I WILL RE UPLOAD ALL THE CHAPTER AND MAKE SOME ADJUSTMENT/FIXING TO THE STORY.
THANK YOU, HOPE YOU CAN STILL FOLLOW THIS NOVEL LATER ON.
KINDLY ASKING YOU FOR SUPPORT.

Some of the authors on Webnovels were inspired to write their own stories after reading the works of famous authors. Perhaps some of them believed that they could do a better job. Some of them ran out of things to read, so they decided to write the "story" that they want to read. While others… just want to write a story that they think will be popular to the readers.

Ironically, the stories that they had written also inspired other readers to write their own stories as well. Hopefully, this cycle will never end. So that the future generations will be able to read new and exciting stories that will show them a world filled with sword, magic, cultivation, and Lo--

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Xandarx: There's a reason for them to be famous as they have their style

Zenith: lol.

Xandarx: You can see it from their work, it's true. Like their character has embedded into the book. This is what make them different I think.

Zenith: I know. But not everyone is as great as you show them to be. They learn from their previous works While we are still struggling to finish one.

Xandarx: Yeah, I know.

Zenith: They move on and get better that's where the difference lies. If you see any CN author who made it big, you can see that they had their share of experience before getting there, or for that matter, any author in the Western world.

Murakami: Not necessarily publishing houses only accept works they think will sell.

Zenith: The ones who get it big the first time are rare.

Murakami: So you might not see how they built up to their debut novel. Authors can have 15-20 scrapped novels b4 they debut, and the public don't get to read a single one.

Reili: Yikes.

Xandarx: Yeah.

Zenith: That doesn't make the author lose his experience of writing those scrapped novels that's the point I was making.

Murakami: But it also means that it's more like hit and miss.

Reili: True because they don't get the feedback from fans.

Murakami: They get limited feedback from an agent/editor who doesn't want to read their work.

Zenith: Yeah, but it surely is better than nothing.

Murakami: And they're left with a bunch of abstract and vague advice that they have no idea how to implement.

Reili: If they don't enjoy it, the feedback won't be as insightful.

Zenith: They can learn from their mistakes from reading their own works.

Reili: Well…

Zenith: If possible, from platforms.

Murakami: If they knew how to do that they'd fix it and publish it.

Reili: It would make the process easier if someone who enjoys the book to give them better feedback.

Zenith: It's called rewriting from scratch, and it takes a tonne of time if the author feels more interested in some other idea of his, he would do that.

Reili: I suppose so since the author being inspired will bring his book along.

VKBoy: If the ones giving review are professional editors, then they don't necessarily have to have read your work with immersion because their suggestions will still likely cover the basic flaws that amateurish writers usually make.

Reili: Point taken.

Zenith: Yeah.

Murakami: @VKBoy if they spot those errors they'll put down the manuscript after the first page

Reili: Then again, its a little bit like movie critics. They may hate the movie, but fans love it.

Zenith: Yeah.

Murakami: And then send a reply saying, "Don't send in another manuscript until you learn how to write properly."

Zenith: Professionals in the said field prefer not taking risks. Especially in movies, but books, you can keep trying.

VKBoy: Well, if there are errors in the first page itself, that's a whole different thing, lol.

Reili: True.

Murakami: No, but a good editor can tell the writing quality from just the first page even if you've crafted it perfectly, they can just tell that the rest will be shit.

Reili: You have to also take into account of one punch man. The original comic looks terrible, but the redraw made it amazing.

Zenith: That's smartness of the creator.

VKBoy: Well, in one punch man's case, it got attention from the companies after it got popular in the online communities.

Reili: So a persons writing and grammar may be terrible, but with a little editing, the story itself could be amazing.

Zenith: You can let the editor do the Shi*t and focus on your story, It works.

Overlord Venus: Yeah, solo leveling is a good example. The story is bland.

Reili: But it would also help if the author re-reads the edit to make sure the essence of their story is still there.

HavenlyJeep: Essence and core backbone.

Zenith: @Reili It depends on what the author wants, and how much work he is willing to put in.

Reili: @Zenith true.

VKBoy: Of course, some editors just butcher the style of the author.

Reili: Same but honestly I just use Grammarly and the read aloud function in word to make sure the chapter makes sense.

Zenith: You can learn about writing, grammar, editing if you truly want. It is just the question of, would you?

Reili: I'm more into thinking up ideas and writing them than editing.

VKBoy: Editing is also writing, mate. Rewriting is where real writing lies.

Zenith: It's a skill in writing a story, but your choice.

Reili: Point taken.

Murakami: You can't be a writer without being an editor.

Zenith: Editing it yourself can help you keep the heart of the story.

Reili: That being said, the more I write, the better my basic grammar became.

Zenith: You will keep the feels right.

Reili: Editing is now part of the process.

Zenith: And not make it just sound or look better, you give what the story wants
And that is a great thing.

Reili: Creative freedom.

Zenith: I want to learn grammar and revise what I learned.

VKBoy: @Zenith Learning grammar will take years, so take it slow and steady. That way, memories stick with you for longer times.

Reili: I do read mtl sometimes since I can't wait for chaps, but then I find myself reading in broken English and must stop.

Murakami: I'd like to correct that statement VKBoy. Learning grammar is easy
learning "usage" is hard.

VKBoy: lol, if you read mtl, your IQ drops. Believe me, this can affect a person's writing skill in the long run.

Reili: Definitely, which is why I stopped.

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Author's Notes

I'm sure you've read this a few times in the previous chapters, but I had been reading MTL chapters for the past few years. I usually read "Completed" stories, and most of them are around 2-4k chapters each. Of course, I read the translated chapters first. After I reach the latest translated chapter, I will immediately jump to *cough* Google Translate.

Yeah~ I know. Reading chapters through Google Translate was the most…epic mistake I did in the past. I've finished World Defying Dan God, Battle Through the Heavens uhh…and a few more novels using Google Translate.

In the later years, I discovered lnmtl.com, which gave me a better translation (at least the names of the characters are not written like Cloud Che instead of Yun Che (Against the Gods). 

To be perfectly honest, If I didn't start writing, I would have continued to read these machine translated chapters even now. Reading MTL works if English is not your first language.

This is something that those with English as their main language will scoff at. However, for those who just want to read. As in reading something without worrying about anything else, then they won't care even if it's a machine translated chapter. As long as they will be able to read the NEXT chapter, then it's all good.

This is also the reason why I admire translators. If not for them, these stories that we are not aware of will not be able to grace us with their presence. I would like to thank the translators of my favorite novels like Lord of Mysteries, Release that Witch, Against the Gods, Cultivation Chatgroup, Second Coming of Avarice, and so many other titles that I won't be able to list here.

To my beloved readers, if there will come a time when you feel like writing a story of your own and you're reading machine translated chapters, please stop now. I'm saying this for your own good. 

I understand how you feel. Believe me I do, but for the sake of the story you're going to write in the future, heed my advice. Stop now, while you still have the chance. Learning how to write from scratch with broken English is a painful process.

Then again, if you find an editor who is a masochist, consider yourself lucky. Let them clean up your mess for you, so you can focus on writing your story, and learn the art of writing while you write.

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Have you ever wondered what your favorite Authors in Web Novels do during their free time? Don't forget that Authors are humans too and they have their own quirks and opinions. 

How can those Domineering CEO's that you love to read even compare to the manliness of our drop dead gorgeous authors who cries like little babies when they are stressed out and can't write anything due to Writer's Block!? Cultivation Chat Group can't even compare! 

Join our fearless Author Elyon as he show you a world filled with Frustrations, Stress, Anxiety, and Procrastination! 

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P.S The Cover Drawing is not mine. I just find it nice so I used it. Full credits go to the owner.

Hello readers, this is the author, DJ_Cactus! I just wanted to say a few things before I start with this book. First of all, this is my first ever book. With this in mind, I might not have the correct grammar in some parts of this book. I hope you guys understand this. I have no experience in writing a book whatsoever. Secondly, feel free to let me know in the comments. If you have any thoughts, concerns, suggestions, advice, things I need to improve on, please let me know. Anything, even if it's negative, would be really helpful for me to let you guys read some great story. Lastly, I want to say thank you for all the readers and the future readers for reading this book. It would also be much appreciated if you liked this book and recommend it to your friends. Much love!

-DJ_Cactus

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