Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return

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daniel_rahn

My only question is, its there any romance here, cuz I'm sick of good Lord of mysteries fics that doesn't have romance, i don't care if its not the main focus, i just think its unlikely or boring to have a novel without romance, personal opinion of course

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Cloud_Clpid2

The mc has a power similar to the sefirah castle that has to do with rules and it’s described pretty well and not completely overpowered as a cheat. The biggest issue I’ve had with the novel so far is the butchering of names like Xio being called Hugh and Loen Kingdom being called Rune Kingdom

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Indiskyz

I really want to like this but the translator is really trying to make it as difficult as possible. Overall it reads well however it is impossible to ignore the fact that they simply refuse to get the names right. Loen has become Rune and Xio (a woman) has become Hugh. I assume the translator is just using AI to do it but even still they just need to take 2 minutes to go through a chapter looking for names to correct and fixing them. There is also the pathway names and other stuff that needs correcting but comparatively it’s a minor issue compared to just getting the characters names right.

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GrizzWald

I really like your story but their is one thing that is absolutely killing me. You have misnamed one of the protagonists, you have been calling Xio Derecha, Hugh when that's just not her name.

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Velliolx

a unique story of lord of the mysteries hidden gem fanfic

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CreationGODBlack

More More More More!! Chapters a lotta Chapters, It's great!;;;;;;!!

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Daos_Nine_Heavens

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JivanGod_01

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CreationGODBlack

Spectacular Spectacular spiderman.........

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Tony_Enri

This novel deserves a higher score, at least a 4.7. It's very good and intriguing, the mc is just like klein and has his own "gathering" but instead of people like fors and audrey he has outer gods. He interacts with klein through people like audrey but doesnt take part in the canon meetings. He actually has impact on the world, especially at the higher levels, the plot has been changed very heavily by the most recent chapter. the sub plot mystery with him and his relation to the King in Yellow is also very intriguing. Honestly the only fault this novel has is the translation sometimes changing the names of different characters and places

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Bocifer

Probably the best lotm ff i have ever read, not so much Action at the begininng but IT gets better, the MC got an easier Journey than Klein because he has metaknowledge, his own Cheat in Form of Hall of Stars and ofcourse him beeing a noble a lot more money. Oh and there IS also a very good romance going on, which rarely Happens in lotm ffs.

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Knight61

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Velliolx

good fanfic brotheman .................

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RobustIdiot007

Really impressive for a guy to write almost a 100 chapters without any support I'll leave this and a couple of power stones in the future brother

LV 5

samsara

The character development is amazing and the plot is so original that you wonder if the original author wrote this fanfic

LV 4

Nefoolim

I really like this story, but I’m going to give a purely critical opinion after more than 200 chapters. To start, I’ll be direct: if you can’t stand a character’s name changing several times in the same chapter, or that the Beyonders' powers are not similar to those in the original work (completely nerfed—for example, SPOILER, at one point the MC gets attacked by a sequence 7 witch, who is completely stupid even though sequence 8 enhances intelligence and scheming skills, takes a fatal blow but doesn’t use mirror substitution, which I remind you is a very important ability for witches and what makes them particularly annoying, like a magician’s paper figures, and doesn’t use any curses... etc. This isn’t the only case), if you also can’t stand that the MC’s power system isn’t well written and even seems neglected (he advances to sequence 6, and so far, there’s no information on the upgrades and powers he’s gained—though maybe this will be explained later, but I don’t have much hope given the number of flaws in this story. There’s no improvement of lower sequences upon advancing, a pathetic digestion method even though the MC is supposed to know how it really works, and not just follow the potion’s name... etc. And there are other flaws, but there are too many for me to remember them all), or that there are missing chapters because the author or editor doesn’t care—well, don’t read this, you’ll lose your mind (like me, but I’m already invested and have nothing else to read). But it does have its good points. It’s one of the rare LotM fanfics with romance, slow but interesting and not rushed, which I like. A story that is, for the most part, logical, and if you can overlook the flaws, it’s easily in the top LotM fanfics. The MC doesn’t care too much about keeping the plot on its original course, which I like, as I find an MC who worries too much about the original plot and does everything to keep it on track to be stupid and pathetic. I really feel that what’s preventing it from being in the top are mainly the writing and the Beyonders' power system. The rest is secondary in my opinion. In short, I recommend it only if you have thick skin and some patience, otherwise, go for something of better quality.