One Piece: Ace The Emperor of Flames

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Error_007

What's with this obsession with Nami? Are there no other navigators in this one-piece world apart from her? You build a character who seems to care for Luffy, then you go ahead and take one of the most precious crew members from him. I don't get it. Is it that hard to build a character from scratch? Then why don't you just get Laffitte?

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Yanagi_sense1

Missing tag: Harem I mean, all his crew members are girls like come on bro[img=faceslap]

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GolgoStar

the world of one piece is so huge, but why do you only focus on those who appeared in the original work? yes we saw Shiki kidnap Nami to make her his navigator but that was the basis of the film. so emperors don't have navigators worthy of the name? And this Pokémon collection where you pass understanding and they evolve, I gave up after Vivi and Tashigi joined, it's not my cup of tea anymore. Others will probably like it.

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OldFellow

Missing tag: System.

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SugarHoneyIceTea

I remember reading this ff once so freaking sure... r u gonna rewrite the ff on ur vision or just translate it ?

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Mario_Russo_0188

Buona fanfic per ora,continua così non fermarti mi raccomando,fai sedere Ace su trono vuoto hahahahaha. ............. ............................

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Pov_Andres

"One Piece: Ace The Emperor of Flames" offers an intriguing premise by exploring Ace's early life with abilities and powers from birth, providing a unique perspective on the character. The dynamic between Ace and Dadan is interesting, showing how a rough bandit becomes a maternal figure for him, adding humor and humanity to the story. However, the story presents some significant issues. Ace's premature manifestation of powers, such as speaking and eating meat shortly after birth, feels unrealistic and disrupts the coherent gradual development of the character. Additionally, the narrative is often overloaded with unnecessary details and lengthy dialogues that slow down the plot's progression. Despite these issues, the fanfic has positive aspects. The relationship between Ace and Dadan develops interestingly, and Ace maintains his essence as a character without becoming a perverted stereotype. The harem, though present, is not forced and feels more like a romantic comedy. The story can be a decent read if you're looking for something to pass the time while waiting for updates on your favorite stories. However, the realism issues and pacing of the narrative could be improved. Who knows, perhaps the following chapters might offer a different and more satisfying experience.

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Sohal_Ahmed_2001

The story is good but its filled with too much word padding making it a hassle to read and needs at least five chapters to make any progress in story

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Binded_Ginger

Alright this is an honest review from me missing tags : Harem but if you can get through those 2 then it's honestly a decent read, the harem isn't necessarily shove down your throat like "I just met this women, next moment we in bed and having some steamy action" na it just feel like a romance comedy. This story isn't too heavly reliant on the harem aspect, but mostly on story progression, it's not the greatest, but it's still good enough. so far, from my aspect the MC who is Ace still feels like Ace, and is a cool guy, not a perverted dude who would flip skirts. highly recommend if you're looking for something to pass the time for waiting for your favorite stories to update.

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Belial47

bro please give link to original translation or name

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nikko213

thank you Author sama !!!!.................

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VulgoRick_Passos

Excelente, uma ótima fic, traz o que a gente quer ver, mudanças, um prota forte e que busca mudar o mundo. Espero que continue assim e por favor, mande mais um capítulo autor-nim

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_Alenkar

Full of rubbish that keeps dragging others down for no reason, due to technical things, if it were at least netorare content I wouldn't say anything, it doesn't hurt to get the author's attention, but it keeps throwing it into the evaluation? It has to be really without a future.

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Creus_Sun

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