/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Faint Smile.
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When a man from our world dies unexpectedly, he finds himself face-to-face with a disheveled deity offering him a second chance at life. With a spin of a cosmic roulette, he is reincarnated into the Naruto universe, armed with the formidable powers of Teresa of the Faint Smile from the anime Claymore.
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First, it's corn, you're gonna eat good. Regardless, there aren't a lot of chapters for me to leave a detailed review yet. However, from what I've read, corn is focusing on the "growing up" phase more than his other fics this time. Which can be interesting (or not, for that matter, we'll have to see). Regardless, it looks good so far.
I've read 15 chapters and can already tell it's going to be a banger. Maybe the mc will steal Itachi's crows? Pass onto the mantle of Bringer of Corn to this new mc.
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it's okay and too predictable, usual from this author at early chapter the story is somewhat good but quite later gone downhill. maybe it's too early, but for me beside from mc power that slightly interesting, other thing feel like cookies cutter orphan mc who have hidden power seek revenge for his family death.
Ok, first up it’s corn, so it’s a great book by default. Second I love claymore and this is the first time I’ve even seen it mentioned in a fic. I’m excited and my day is made.
I pray for a Non-Harem story. In fact, to hell with romance. Nowadays people always think romance is a requirement in fanfics. Good romance is hard to write. I'm here for the character interactions, especially the bromance with Itachi, and the exploration of his powers. Their benefits....and their consequences.
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Love the author but when the MCs actions lead to his parents dying i gotta subtract a star. Ignoring the fact that its been overused immensely, the MC also little memory of canon. His parents dying were due to his own error and to change literally nothing even when he reacted. just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. idk just felt forced and generic. other than that a decent story.
The story is good, the reading is pleasant and the MC is not op as soon as he is born, but I will only give it 3 stars because Shisui's personality is depressing and out of place. The author tries to make him similar to Gojo, he killed the character and is so unbearable to read that I had to skip all the chapters he appears in so I wouldn't stop reading this story. I can't wait for him to commit suicide soon.
Writing Quality - 5 🌟 No issues for me here Story Development- 4 🌟 It's good but at points could be predictable. Character Design- 5 🌟 In my opinion, this is the highlight of this fic. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 2 chapters a day is fine by me World Background - 4 🌟 It's still in the early stages but I feel like nothing new is being brought to the table. It feels like a generic Naruto fanfic with an MC having some unique abilities. I want to see some character depths and unique backstories. Basically, your spin on the world of Naruto. It's lacking a little in this department for me. At least for the moment. Still, it's 10/10 recommended. Keep up the good work Corn.
Corn, another series, another bookmark. It is what it is. Allow me, to indulge once more. Good luck and hope you finish this series my man. Pre-emptive 5 stars.
I will not lie, I am not a fan of the “main character loses memories trope” and so in a moment of weakness, I doubted the all mighty corn. I have so far only been proven wrong. I beg for forgiveness and promise it will not happen again.
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