/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
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As he arrived to the Shinobi World, Aragami Kyomu can get a different unique passive skill every month, that's why every month everything change for him, to various forms of training even to his everyday life.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
70 chapters of MC changing the plot and acting like some big shot and Sakumo story happen exactly the same way without any change, MC who should know the future acting like braineless youngmaster and pulling his sword to kill sakumo teammate for sprouting nonsense after everything is said and done.. when he literally had years to stop this or make preparation was just much brainless Chinese logic for me. It takes special kind of ret@ rd to have so little creativity.
The translation is perfect. however, the story, not so much. The MC becomes Kage level when he's like 9 years old. He helps kid Obito and Kakashi achieve similar strength. He crafts divine level weapons and artifacts and distributes them willy-nilly. He displayed prime Madara levels of strength during the war as a 10 year old. Basically, he is a really overpowered protagonist typical of self insert fan fictions. However, what really irks me is the fact that the entire population of the Naruto world has been dumbed down to accommodate this MC, all of them believe his stupid excuses about how he's able to accomplish such feats and how he has such artifacts that even kages would dream of. Additionally, all the Chinese elements in the story are impossible to pair properly with the Naruto world, when characters call each other "brother" or they eat medicinal cuisine, or they refine their Chakra to further their cultivation it just feels off to me.
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While it was interesting at first, the story kinda became dull with just how boring and uninteresting Kyomu is. Their is not much drive in him and he doesn't even have an interesting personality that really makes him fun to read. The chapters felt so dull and dragged on that i really wanted to skip chapters. These translated stories are rarely good.
Here is my honest review. First of all, take the book more like an original than a fanfic. As for Grammer, it's alright. although sometimes the names get mixed up, it's still good. Mc will not involve himself in romance until quite late in the story SPOILER Sakumo dies but it seems essential to the plot rather than irritating. Mc becomes strong from start but not to the point of being at six paths level in 6 Chapters. so it's enjoyable Mei and Yugito may be in the harem.
Good fanfic with slow paced story. Maybe ill changed my opinion about this after 100~150 or so chapters (because most CN novel has poison at mid~latter chapters)
Missing a villain tag. MC went from an upstanding character to full-blown mini Danzo.
Apesar de algumas coisas absurdas aqui e ali para crianças de 5 anos, essa história é fenomenal, sendo que o clima leve com que ela é levada e os momentos de comédia são perfeitos, faz muito tempo que eu n vejo uma história fanfic como essa. 5 estrelas com certeza.
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Pretty fun, and interesting to read, some mistranslations with the names and such but it’s not a big deal. I’m slightly worried at how the passive skills change each month but we’ll see how that goes, so far it looks like it’ll be good, Looking forward to more :D
going from +200 chap. still wondering when personal development, with training+ friendship, changed to politics+ world conquest. It's a shame, I liked the beginning of this story.
Read this if you're in the mood for a power fantasy webnovel. The story quickly gets boring if you have a refined taste like mine. (Sorry for being cocky, but I'm being honest. If you read any actual literature, this is total garbage.) There are some questionable things in the story. There is romantic tension between Tsunade and the protagonist, and I must remind you. When this is occurring, the protagonist is not even a teenager yet. In the story, characters like Guy, Kakashi, Obito, and so on become yes-men. If you get deep enough into the story, Tsunade's "most precious thing" is stated to be her virginity. This is disgusting, and it further diminishes Tsunade's already 2nd-rate character.
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One of the best Fanfiction Books I've ever read. Not to mention the shameless protagonist antics, his characteristics are shown to keep the reader entertained. The story may be boring with the development of other characters, but it's quickly made up for with the rapid progress of the protagonist. The update of his power level is also good, 10/10 for me.
You better keep translating this fanfic if not i will literally find your house and send spam to your wifi
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