Artem_5195

Artem_5195

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2022-04-07 加入 Ukraine
徽章 3

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Artem_5195
Artem_5195
14 days ago
Commented

A bit too much, Tom wasn't majestic at the beginning, and he was humiliated as a half-blood. Even then he wasn't. She's more like Grindelwalt.

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
1 months ago
Replied to legendaryweeb

Если вы измените имя героя на японское, то могут подтянутся новые читатели. Многих отталкивает китайские имена

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
1 months ago
Replied to Artem_5195

Hero's name

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
1 months ago
Replied to Kalik2k

If you change the name, new readers may be attracted.

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
1 months ago
Posted

The story is very interesting, which deserves 5 stars. I can't judge the grammar, I read through a translator. But if you came to read the comments to decide whether to read or not, then the story is super, you won't regret it.

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
4 months ago
Replied to Artem_5195

Damn, I wrote it through a translator and it distorted half the meaning of my comment. In short, the point is that everything was ok before, but in the last chapters, Chinese ego creeps in. But I like the story and a request to the author to record such moments, well, if it's not a joke.

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
4 months ago
Commented

How many chapters of Chinese ego and there was no trace, and here it just went wild: descendants of dragons, their excessive love for grief in which girls themselves impose themselves, the emperor, etc. It seems like they like to show that they are better than others, especially in their novels the plots are different and interesting, but in all of them, as if under a carbon copy, there are certain scenes, plot twists and the hero's behavior. Translator, you can slightly replay such moments, for example, the soul of the descendant of the dragon can be presented as a character and an idea of ​​​​a dragon. Well, the translation is good until the last chapters such moments are unnoticeable. So thanks for the chapter)

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
4 months ago
Commented

Damn, the soul of a dragon's descendant, ahahaha, the Chinese have a lot of self-esteem

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
4 months ago
Commented

I have a question when his son offends the heavens. His father will become the heavens?

Artem_5195
Artem_5195
4 months ago
Commented

У мене питання коли його син образить небеса. Його батько стане небом?

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