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One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock
3.98 (49 評分)
摘要
Traveling through the world of pirates, he also became a noble Celestial Dragons.
Lakeman just wants to enjoy a luxurious life.
Unexpectedly, as soon as he attended an auction, he met the three Hancock sisters who had just been captured, and the binding system was awakened at the same time.
As long as you bind a genius, you can get the other person's daily practice benefits.
【You have bound Boa Hancock! 】
【You have bound Kizaru! 】
[You have bound One Piece’s deputy, Pluton Rayleigh! 】
【You have bound Doflamingo! 】
"Originally I just wanted to recruit talents from all over the world, but why are there more and more beautiful girls?" Lakeman looked at the group of beauties beside him and fell into deep thought.
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This is translated work. Not my original. I have mainly fixed spelling and grammar errors while adding smut to story.
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The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.
Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw
hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕
Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author
Great fanfic so far. Author doing a pretty good translation and the story is also smooth, hopefully it continue so.
not for everybody, slice of lemons, not many fights, and MC will be very OP sinse he is a tenryuubito with a system. still room for some charater develop tho, like MC gain power from system, but it does not increase his will (haki), or give him fighting exp, hope he will work for thouse
This is cool, the truth is that the proposal sounds interesting.............................................................................................
Sensacional y muy pero muy pero muy bueno espero por favor que lo continuas Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias
good job author , you can still see that it is a Chinese story and there are some errors in names and frases bu still good job
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ES UNA BUENA HISTORIA LUJURIOSA PERO BUENA, TE HACE DAR CUENTA DE QUE SI INCLUSO CON LA MORAL DE NUESTRO MUNDO AL OBTENER EL ESTATUS DEL PROTAGONISTA, NOSOTROS ACTUARIMOS DE LA MISMA FORMA QUE EL
It's entertaining, and it has an interesting premise, keep it up. --------------------------------------------------------------------------
I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring