/ Anime & Comics / A Hentai System in the World of Danmachi
摘要
While I was reading the first volume of “Danmachi,” I suddenly felt my cock grow. It grew so much that it started to hurt.
Suddenly, my sperm gushed out. Before I could understand what was happening, I realized I was in a familiar place.
[ Welcome to Hentai System ]
[ First mission: Cum 10 times in 24 hours. ]
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Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute
A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?
before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea
Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅
I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)
way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺
It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.
I need 1000 more chapters of this. Please please please please. This fanfic hits the spot. It’s got a decent protagonist. Used the source material well…in my opinion.
Letting it marinate some more, if it’s anything like the last version I don’t doubt it’ll be a good read.
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this danmanchi fanfiction is very good. even without the smut part. so try this one to thoose interested.
If I'm honest the only good thing is the lemon scenes, the rest like character development and so on in general is short, damn it, I've seen better ones, if you want an example, read Marvel's impregnation system, I won't say that this one has potential or something is good In reality, the only good thing it has is that the protagonist is not an idiot and knows what he wants, besides that, nothing
Bem melhor que a versao anterior. Nao que fosse ruim, mas realmente a parada de controle da mente e chato pra caralho. Ansioso pra quando aisha descobri a gravidez.
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If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.