/ Anime & Comics / Douluo : People are writing diaries in Douluo
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Su Ming dies unexpectedly and is reborn in the world of Douluo Dalu with a powerful ability called "Ultimate Wood" and a unique diary-writing system. This system grants him rewards every day he writes in his diary, including potent techniques like a Douluo version of Wood Style and even the Sharingan eye technique. Su Ming is determined to reach the pinnacle of the Douluo world using these rewards. However, he soon realizes that familiar characters like Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, and Hu Liena are not who he expected.
Read advanced chapters in pa(t)re(o)n(.)c(o)m/Shadow_D_X , ignore the brackets
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Hmm wimpy and selfsacrificial MC with a bad system. A lot of Nerfs and others benefit honestly more from it than him... you could think he is ron weasley and the system the weasley family... unwanted orangeheaded stepchild in a way. have i already mentioned the bad rewards from the system und dumb random nerfs? welp good point would be currently the high update frequency and the rather high writing quality. also some reactions can be funny... even though often things get repeated like 3-4 times for wordcount
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I strongly recommend the novel, even though I'm abandoning it here (chap 67) because the system wasn't to my taste, but in all aspects it's a good story. Maybe I'll come back in the future. Good job translator!
If you like it you will probably change your mind at ch.56. The female characters who can read the diary have no freedom, and the system becomes more and more of a person who's only goal is to give the carrot and the stick to the female characters forcing them on the road to become the MCs harem. In this chapter the system literally tells (female characters) them that they are Not allowed to appear where the don't in the plot, at the risk of death.
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At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.
I'm not surprised why the translator translated this novel. It's very enjoyable to read. MC solved the ridiculous and unreasonable plot about Tang San by bullying her and writing in a diary, making almost all the female leads know the terrible things that happened to them in the original story. I really like the plot of this story. The humor is not bad. There are scenes of MC showing love for girls all the time. So I recommend everyone to try reading it. Then you will think about how bad the original plot of Douluo Dalu is
It's such a good story as well as the quality is high. I am so happy to find this story keep it up author!!!!!!!
I went into this expecting somewhat translation level but this actually looking great as of chapter 100. The system seems to be working towards an excellent life for MC and not randomly screwing him over which is nice to see.
Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.
Tiene muchos capítulos, tiene buenas reseñas, y no parece una mala historia, Que más puedo pedir, directamente a la biblioteca y ya lo comienzo a leer.
One of the interesting stories, the description is good. Keep updating, Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Vergonzoso! Esos mc chinos si que son desvergonzados, incluso yo no me atrevo a escribir tantas estupideces en mi diario, pero mc llama "esposas" a todas las chicas que conoce de la serie original, sin embargo, la serie es divertida, aunque siento que ya he leído 10 novelas con la mismas tramas, no es culpa de nadie, es bien sabido que todas las novelas chinas son copias de las 10 novelas originales.
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A tradução está muito boa, espero que o autor não desista da tradução. 👍🙏👍🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️🙏👏👍✍️🙏👏👍👊👏🙏🙏🙏👏👍👏🙏✍️✍️🙏✍️🙏🙏🙏🙏👍✍️👍👍✍️👍👍👍👍✍️👍✍️🙏✍️🙏✍️✍️🙏✍️🙏
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If you want to read advanced chapters, go to my patreon, patreon(.)co(m)/Shadow_D_X, just ignore the brackets, i will be done translating this series by this month in patreon. 10 chapter/day