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Story about a Magician who awakens the Darkness Element, going on a DxD adventure filled with girls, treachery, and a tad bit of tomfoolery. I have a patreon for 10 advance chapters if you want to read ahead (patreon.com/Accel14)
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I really like it, especially since I'm currently watching Nige Jouzu no Wakagimi. And I quite like the character of the main character. And there are also updates - 2-3 chapters per day, which can't help but please
damn one of the best representation of Sosuke Aizen if he were born as a human in dxd. Damn its good. Please don't drop it author. Its rare seeing dxd fic without mc changing races within the first few chapters and also being goody two shoes. Thank you for your effort Author-san.
The conclusion I came to after reading it was that it is rushed, from the protagonist to the way some characters act or little explanation about their abilities, not just how Mc uses these abilities but how they fictionalize the world in general because the author changed both. many things in the "magic system" that were supposed to affect and change the entire world of the original dxd. 1•The protagonist: He is Chūnibyō inside his head I felt he was a rational person, a little grumpy, of course inside his head because the Author wanted a cosplay of Aizer as Mc on the outside he is very polite at the same time which can be rude sometimes now you ask me where this chūnibyō is, this occurs at random times when the MC seems to have a personality disorder that creates a megalomaniac version of him that only seems to have painful (shameful) thoughts and you know what that's not necessarily bad, far from it, it's great in a villain. The problem is that the villain is also the protagonist, which makes it impossible not to find the way he acts, thinks and speaks funny thanks to these sets that form his psyche (did I forget the place that has a villain flavor? oops) there are several examples of wonderful villains who have some or even all of these sets of personalities like Aizen, Sukuna and I would say even Dio, these villains are supported by two things from my point of view: charisma and their power, one of these two cannot be missing if you You have these two things, you can forget the rest if you want motivations, plans, past, it doesn't matter if you have that. As you can see in my text, the protagonist's charisma is confusing to say the least because the author was very quick to show and develop his personality in relation to power, I explain in the skills. 2• Ways of acting of some characters: They act hastily in relation to the mc, at least those who are not ignored, that is, Akeno and Raynare, it is strange to say the least how quickly they began to treat the mc with confidence and even attraction, since he turned one into a slave and the other has known him for two weeks, the other characters have so little dialogue in relation to these two that it becomes a little strange if you compare them to them. 3•Skills: The Author modified the magic system, especially human magic, making the wizard's magical element more important than it was in the original, at least I think, since even in the beginning where the protagonist is learning magic we only have two paragraphs that explain almost nothing about this subject and finally add, a basic spell like "mana steps" that I think the author doesn't realize how stolen the ability to run at a speed that surpasses the senses of even a supernatural being is . It's a huge exaggeration, especially since with such a useful spell, the demons should have their own version of it (seriously, why don't the demons that showed up have this!?!??!?!) There are a few more things I want to explain further , I'm afraid my perversion in writing great things has gone too far, I'm just going to keep my word to talk about the MC's power here, he gains power at an accelerated pace as he himself says to Kiba "In the space of just over a week , somehow, I reached you all." and like all fast-paced things, I don't think his power gain was good because he's human, a human wizard, who knows what? four different spells? ☝️•The stupidest thing about me writing this is that the author might just write “you're asking too much of a fic” so I'm going to have to go along with that because that's the truth.
I don't like it. It is excellently written and very thorough too but the MC to me goes off the deep end way too fast. I mean he went from an ordinary human to a psychological sociopath in a matter of days of learning dark magic. He lacks empathy, regret, better yet emotions in general. I am not a fan of those who are chaotic neutral/chaotic evil as the MC great as a side character but not as a MC. So overall a no for me but others may enjoy it
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I hope that Issei becomes stronger than in canon and is able to win some of the fights against the MC. I also hope that he doesn't have a miserable end like in stories where Issei doesn't get along well with the MC. Instead, I wish he would become a tough rival that cannot be truly defeated.
The mc is a good character with is written well, up until he evolves later in the story and becomes a dragon. After that the story starts to fall off, he starts making seemingly pointless decisions and the other characters writing starts to fall off as well. Story is an 8/10 up to that point, after that it becomes a generic copy and paste MC personality on a harem collecting quest, story is a solid 5/10 after that ngl
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It would be much more intresting if he knew abaut dxd world in hes old life ore some thing like that. Now story develpment is meh
One question and if you make Akeno betray Rias when they meet again because personally I think her potential stagnates by staying with the Gremory and always being a stupid competitor for Issei's attention as if it were a race to see who will get her. Gives her pathetic virginity, what do you think of this suggestion?
everything was good til mc become a dragon and start obsessed with yasaka. romance development was good before, but author just ruined it with mc forcing himself to yasaka. i thought mc is smart, cunning, and calculating type like aizen or sukuna, but the mc is hornier than i thought. the story is like 70% of training arc, i dont want to comment about it. and the writing style is kinda weird for me with all the MC's inner self thought, that's annoying to read it ngl.
For a new writer this story is very well put together. The story pacing isn't inconsistent and doesn't have any major jumps for no reason. The main character design (Taka) is a good combination of Aizen and Sukuna, or that is what it looks like at this point in time. He isn't "Evil" just for plot convenience, every action Taka has taken has been true to his characterization. As far as update stability, well we have had a chapter daily. Some days we have had Multiple chapters dropped. The world background, well it's DxD and the original "canon" didn't really explore any of the verse. So any background we see in this will be better. Writing quality, well that speaks for itself. No one has commented any grammar issues or inconsistences. Overall this story is 5/5 for the DxD genre for me.
nice ................................... ( kill isei and i will get you another 5.0 )
Imagine an Aizen Sosuke in the dxd world, but someone who starts from scratch and has no knowledge of the plot. Another thing I need to point out is that the author has not only benefited from the bleach or dxd world when giving spells or skills to the main character, he has added a lot of variety and seems to continue to do so. The plot has changed from the beginning. I'm looking forward to the sequel. I hope there won't be too much drama in the betrayal part. (google translate)
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Overall great DXD fic. This is his first work and he's dropping heat like this, the story is great, his character isn't a wuss and straight up 'betrays' Rias and crew once their usefulness ran out, the updates are frequent, and the world background is dxd and we all know dxd. I know the dragon trope is played out in DXD fics but this one is done pretty well and is quite different from how it usually happens. Maybe not everyone's cup of tea as he isn't collecting a pokemon harem. There was even a guy crying about it and gave a one star review because the mc didn't get with rias even though they barely interacted and was calling the mc a cuck because issei and Rias are a thing even though the mc had no intentions on Rias in the first place and was only using them. I guess in that guys mind anyone who isn't dating every woman ever to exist all at once is a cuck. Impeccable logic.
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...Are you intrested in a story of a weird guy,that get off by making his enemies stronger so that he could be defeated by them? Even if that's literally a nonsense and impossible? Well,i don't... What is wrong with you? Are you a masohist? What kind of perverted creature you are?
I really like this story and how often new chapters are added, I hope it doesn't get abandoned. I wish you good luck with your continued creation
Thought I should make some things clear about this story here. 1. Keep in mind that the Villain tag is there for a reason. 2. He will not reincarnate as a Devil, so if you're one of the people who don't like reincarnated MC stories then this might be to your liking. 3. There will be occasional smut chapters, but they will be very far and few between. Though it exists in this story, it is not the focus of it. If you have any more questions, you can leave them here and I'll respond when I get the chance to.