The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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SpeedyG

This story is awesome, is original and plot makes sense, right amount of time skip w/o leaving unexplained gaps. It keeps you engaged in every chapter...

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war777

really excited to read more! one of the few twilight fanfic's that adds to the wold.

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Apollocus

It's quite good even I like the set up at the start and he seems pretty realistic as a person. I saw some people saying that oh he has no ambition and why did he learn to fight only after fighting a vampire. Well it's plain and simple, he can't die and it isn't even the start of the original twilight series we are still in old times and right now he is just enjoying life and what is currently happening is just the set up. Now for the fighting, that was the first vampire he fought and everything before that he could just one shot since he can't die. Like you can't tell you need something until you experience failure that shows what needs to be improved and how you can improve your weaknesses. All in all very good and I want more chapters.

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mow

Not for me, the MC lacks ambition its just boring, dude spent over a thousand years doing nothing but living in tribes and did not even bother to learn any combat arts until after his first vampire fight. I honestly see no point in putting him this far before canon cuz he's doing nothing with his thousand years beside learning combat arts now and going around healing humans. If someone is this far back I expected some form of legacy being created like a Kingdom or a very strong Clan of descendants but nah its just yapping until canon finally arrives.

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TinyBookDragon

The author isn't lying when they say 'average writing'. The grammar is fine but expect inconsistencies and an incompetent and dumb MC. He hides from a vampire, a vampire that should be able to hear his heartbeat and smell him. After being alive for over a thousand years he states that he still doesn't know how to fight and only decides to learn after fighting and killing a vampire. He learns how to use weapons even though the only thing that can hurt a vampire is another vampire. So many other things but you get the point.

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Beans_on_a_tree

What can I say? 😘 ----------------------

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Raventan

live more than 1000+ year but master of none even trash these day better than this if they have that much time you try to write this you should make it better mc if this keep going to the way of modern time MC can only be beggar or homeless with this MC kind of mindset he will achieve nothing

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Valkorion_2003

This story was so good that I couldn't stop and binged the whole thing in practically one go. Then I spent half an hour looking for something, anything like this to scratch the same itch and found nothing. It was torture. Amazing story, love the premise and the idea of the mc's small changes throughout history. The pacing is perfect. I can imagine that pacing would be the most difficult part of writing a story like this, one that covers such a long period of time but it was well done. I never felt bored. 10/10 would recommend!

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MARLENE_ANGEL

OK AS A FAN THAT CAME LATE INTO THE STORY. START IN CHAPTER 12O..I LOVE THIS NOVEL IS A FUN READ..THE PLOT STORY IS FUN AND THE CHARACTER ARE FUN..I LOVE THE MC CHARACTER HIS FUN..ONE QUESTION WILL THE MC CREATE THE TECHNOLOGY TO TRAVEL TO OTHER PLANETS GALAXIES OR OTHER UNIVERSES AND WORLDS WHEN THE TWILIGHT STORY IS OVER . CMON AUTHOR THIS NOVEL HAS A LOT OF FUN POTENTIAL STORY..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT THANK YOU.

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Bad_news_83

Make Alice Cullen mc mate please if possible Alice Cullen mc mate Alice Cullen mc mate Alice Cullen Romantic mate for mc please Alice Cullen As mc wife please ?

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jMinerva1718

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vImCrAzYv

This is one of the best stories I have read in over 6 years of being in webnovel. Every chapter has a story that truly explains the joys and pains of being immortal. With the addition of Twilight, you made a difference in what being an immortal is. Keep up the good work!

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behind_your_sister

BEST TWILIGHT FANFIC .............................................(I WANT SOME TWILIGHT FANFIC RECOMMENDATIONS)........................................

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LightningGodWolf

This is one of the best Twilight Fanfics I’ve read so far. The story really pulls you in, with perfectly executed timeskips, and interesting changes to the story. I hope it doesn’t get dropped and keeps being a great read.

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Daoist_Viking

Every day I wake up, I open this stupid app to check up on this stupid story to see if there’s any new chapters released because I can’t stop thinking about reading it. I would highly recommend this fanfic. It is a slice of life story about an immortal living through life just chilling, and it is a very comforting story to read. I think the world is well built up. Can’t wait to see how everything is gonna fit in when we come to the main storyline. 10 out of 10 would highly recommend.

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DaoistElxnbZ

He will have children in the future ................................................................................................................................

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Snake_Aries

This incredible work captured me and did not let go until I read it completely! It was the best hours, and I'm glad that I was lucky enough to stumble upon it on the Internet, so then I'll be able to remember funny moments from this story, and I'll be warmed by all the events and feelings I've experienced since I started reading and ending with the last chapter at the moment! I'm expecting a sequel and I'm ready to wait forever, but that doesn't mean I have it! We're not getting any younger here!) As for the grizzly attack on my favorite character in the Saga, Emmett, I think it will be an intriguing event when Rosalie faces a choice, and I'm looking forward to reuniting the whole family and approaching the two thousandth years! Thank you for the great story that gave me unforgettable memories and brightened up my time!✨✨✨

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Daoist239562

I loved every part of this novel....thank you author for such a wonderful piece of work ....😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍,..............😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Sarowar_Hussain_5330

Mr Author don't listen to anyone's bullshit. Just write what you like and your initial intention. It's very relaxing to read about him just living his life. There are many novel there about ambitious mcs, world domination, being a god, etc. But yours is unique. So keep it up.