If you are reading this, that means that you want to know. That you are a Seeker and you seek for the true knowledge. Beware, once you begin to read, you will never be the same.

If you still want to continue, please, be our gest and join our girls and their friends in their journey to the true power: knowledge.

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Hello, I'm the author. It's my first story in English. However, I hope you will enjoy it. If you do enjoy, please, show your love and support and leave a nice feedback in the comments' section or a review.

Thank you.

This book's creation was for the purpose of proofreading and critiquing other people's novels on Webnovel.com

Through this book, I'll be indirectly showcasing several books as I go in-depth with each chapter pointing out any inconsistencies, basic spelling/grammar errors and typos, and anything that doesn't make sense.

I already predict that the comment section will probably get filled with active discussion over these books.

Note, if you came here for a novel, tough luck. There is no novel, this is only for editing/proofreading/revisions/critique. Though if you were looking for something to read and some of these reviews were worth it, then good for you. :D

What app the best for this situation of mine? Because many people say my fan-fic grammar is so shitty I want to continue this series but at the same time I want to drop it because I want to re-write something else maybe...

But yeahh....this is not going to work if my grammar problem not fixed please tell me what the best app for Spell-checker or Grammar or even proofreading app....

for now i'm sick and still lying on the bed because of fever...
Someone please gave me an advice...

He lost everything when he was born in this world, live a difficult life until one day he found something he wanted to do...

He no longer feels lonely since he met his best friend that changed his view on life, he began to love this life, with a hobby like reading, playing games, loving his pet and even adventure to see everything on this world.

Unfortunately, He died after trapped inside the sinkhole that suddenly appeared when he camping on the forest in with his comrade on Amazon while looking for an uncontacted tribe and endangered animals for their documentary......

Fortunately, something miracle happens to him when he almost lost hope.

Boku no Hero Academia x Katekyo Hitman Reborn with multiverse adventure~
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this is a story about a man who has a dream to have a Family and Become someone who can adventure once again...

OP MC, Slice-of-Life, Easy-Going, Slow-pace,

I'm not an English native speaker......if you think the grammar is bad I'm sorry.......

1 chapter /week or more 
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This is my first time so guide me please :) i hope you guys enjoy reading this...


The cover image is also not mine as it was taken from zerochan


Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in this fan-fic except some character later.

Volume 1 is a coming of age story of a teenage devil. Where Volume 2 is a story dealing with the travels of an adult devil.
Volume 1 has a lot of character building that transforms James from a young teenager into the young adult Soulless.
I want to thank all the loyal web novel fans who have given me power stones during Volume 1 allowing me to make it to Volume 2. Immortalizing them in Volume 1's foreword.
Special Thanks to: Silent_Void, BlueCastle, Sander_Oniisan, HunterRise, Hondu, Rajuraj04895272, Beyond_Birthday, shreyam7, Classic_Balrog, the_fat_otaku, AyomideO, The_Founder, Walter_Jones, MaouSystem, Master_Nineheaded, Ale83, Fhjbvdg, robert_harris, Paranoid_Bro35, & LucyferMorningstar.
Without your power stone support, I would have never made it to Volume 2.
If you find any errors place them in paragraph comments. This is a web novel, therefore there is no editor to catch my mistakes.
I try my best with my own proofreading and grammar programs but sometimes I fall short. I depend on readers like you to help me make this novel the most enjoyable experience for all readers.
Whatever type of reader you are I hope you enjoy my novel!
Thanks
-Dryder/Dan Ryder/Authorsan

Suffering oppression, Soulless forsakes his devil clan. With his Soul Eyes, he carves his own mark in the brutal Abyss. Through hook or crook, nothing will stop the young devil lord! Tune in every day for his shameless actions and his cruelty. Enjoy… The Rise of a Devil! 

Novel Discord: https://discord.gg/52yGSsv

Doing some proofreading, Don't how much it will help my Grammar is total shit
I will try to do my best, Some horrible spelling mistakes are there. The least I can do is to remove them

watch an otaku born in douluo dalu as tang san's big brother to help him dominate through the continent. 

It's a fanfic, I don't own Douluo Dalu or unrivaled Tang sect or any other novels

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"What should we do? Shall we go ahead or go back?" asked Smoke feeling proud of her team who choose to maintain their rationality and kept calm while completely believing her even after such a chaotic revelation.
After hearing everything, another question was if they should find out more or should they come back with a precise plan. Not only because of the dangers that the mission would make them face but mainly because there were many innocent people who they had to rescue. Their one single uncalculated step will not only cost their team but also cost many other people their lives. 

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"Go ahead" everyone spoke at the same time while Zhi Xin said, "Go back."
Smiling Smoke answered while looking at Zhi Xin, "5 v/s 1 not possible, my group say's go ahead."
"It's dangerous." warned Zhi Xin as he was aware that they are practically walking into a tiger's den which was already laid with traps to catch them.
"We love danger's " answered Fire.
"Playing with danger's is our specialty" added Sugar
"We practically eat, sleep, and dream danger's " added Red
Looking at Zhi Xin not saying anything further smoke started speaking and informing about the strategy,
"Step1- call reinforcements- chile. Make sure we have enough medical supplies and space to take the injured back with us.
step 2- hack both the cameras and figure out the number and condition of people we could rescue. Make sure to store the data, it will be useful.
step 3- We will follow the same pattern for entering while the pattern will shift while exiting. Entering, I will go ahead, Fire and Red side to side, Sugar will follow. Chile will make sure reinforcements arrive on time. During exit, Sugar will lead, Red and Fire will maintain Side to Side, I will follow.
step 4- make sure everyone is safe and sound
step 5-blast the entire place.
Any opinion?" Asked Smoke after she finished instructing.
"No" "Yes" came the voices of everyone. While everyone said No Zhi Xin was the one who said Yes.
Looking at Zhi Xin Smoke was waiting for him to explain while giving him a look saying -care-to-explain-.
(READ IN AUTHOR'S THOUGHTS) 
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This novel is undergoing editing and proofreading, please  make sure that you are reading the latest version. Which is only available on W*E*B*N*O*V*E*L*
Thankyou. 

On their wedding night, 
Zhi Ruo was scared and nervous, sitting  on the bed she was awaiting her husband since hours. 
"This is the first time I will be meeting him... Shall I run away? Anyway he will not be able to find me, afterall who marries without meeting even once" 
The door opened and a handsome man entered:
Qing Shan moved towards the bed with a steady pace that was neither hurried nor slow.
Zhi Ruo: What ae you doing?
Qing Shan: What a husband should do.......


Since getting married, the almighty boss became a wife slave and everyone was filled with limitless dog food.

Well first of all he cultivates
second of all he does stuff 
and thats "cultivation and stuff

This is the end of the first volume. It was mainly an introduction for the main cast, exploring their motivations for playing Classmancers. To spice it up, the finale had some action which gave a taste of how a competitive match looks like.

The second volume will continue with the entry exam, showing how Lars and Julia fare and who ultimately makes it into the club. The draft for the volume is already done, so it's all about proofreading and editing now. Starting with the chapter release tomorrow, I'll resume my usual schedule of releasing one chapter a week.

Meanwhile, you're welcome to give some criticism, rate the fic or even leave a review. This is a very niche type of web novel, so I'm sure I did some things right and some things terribly wrong. It'll be helpful to know what you think works and what doesn't, so I'll learn how to execute this story better.

If you got any spare power stones, please consider spending some on this novel if you're enjoying it  ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Imagine a shonen sports story. But, it’s not about baseball or soccer. No, this one is about playing a MOBA video game!

And no, it’s neither League of Legends nor DotA. A BRAND NEW ORIGINAL MOBA, the one MOBA to rule them all - Classmancers!

The game has become so big, that even schools recognize it as a sport. They even allow students to participate in Classmancers clubs and compete against other schools! Who will be the one going to nationals!?

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For Yuel, a team sport is like a chessboard that comes to life. There’s no greater fun than deconstructing every opponent and predicting twenty of their moves in advance.

And, Classmancers is the ideal stage for such psychological warfare, for it’s a sport in which game theory reigns supreme. At least, usually, it does.

There are also goofs like Lars, who got -200 IQ, yet boast godlike mechanical skill that triumphs against all odds. He’s like your typical OPMC which a cheat, except the cheat does nothing for his intellect.

Yuel and Lars are like water and fire. In other words, 100% compatible! That’s why they form an unlikely duo and set out to dominate Classmancers’ competitive scene!

However, to challenge their OPness, the two will run into rivals who are just as OP! Some of them will turn their teammates immune to Yuel’s psychological attacks, while others will redirect Lars’s almighty strength against himself.

In this harsh environment, the two will keep struggling, struggling, and struggling some more, following their promise to reach the pro scene.

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NOTE: Since the site doesn't support italics yet, I'll be using [text] tags for thoughts in this version of the story.

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RELEASE SCHEDULE: Monday and Thursday. Two chapters a week.

GAME WIKI: https://classmancers.wikia.com/

HOMEPAGE: https://darkclaymore.wordpress.com/classmancers/

PATREON: https://www.patreon.com/darkclaymore
You can read up to 3 chapters ahead on Patreon.

I see the rat man commanding those rats to dig holes and the lines are gradually been formed. I sound the alarm using the system.

Notice to All-New E mission has started  (accept or not?)

As everyone in the safe zone has received the notice whether to take part in the new mission.



There is a person far away from the battle who looks like a rat talking to his walkie-talkie, he may be requesting for further more backup, I nearly forgot that vending machine sells those weapons. Thus I go to the machine and bought a standard issue SLS sniper rifle from the vending machine, return back home and position my sniper rifle on the window, take aim and pull the trigger, the bullet hit the person's shoulder and I shoot again to make sure he is down, that rat man just comes down without knowing what hit him. That I think it is just a fluke no way my shooting skill is that good or mere overlying on the scope, and some more it is not even zero.

Notice you have killed a war chief in rat army congrats all rats will have 10% movement speed and 20% birth rate reduced

 

Due to my "lucky" shot on that rat man, we are safer now, the mission for the other survivors become easier due to the fact. I have killed the one who is commanding the pest.

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People keep whining that this story needs more proofreading, 

But I have not seen anyone wanting to help in the discord.

One fine day, lordol have a dream on preregistered of the certain event, on the next day, he suddenly noticed that his world took a drastic change.

From its earlier peacefulness, he found himself in a world that seemed a dungeon with no escape, where everyone seeks for a safe zone, either by paying, stealing, or building one by using hunt materials earned through their fight for survival.

Hi everyone,

Firstly, I just want to give a seriously sincere apology. I read a really heartbreaking review just now where a reader said they were giving up on the story because of my slow updates. For all the early readers, most of you know I have always been slow on updates due to juggling my studies and work which were always a priority to me.

I have been busy recently working on publishing the first volume of "A Gatekeeper and the Celestial Sovereign" as a Paperback/Hardback with illustrations (proofreading, editing, typesetting etc). 
I have been working with an amazing artist named Rodrigo Gil Chavez who has made some amazing art for the upcoming physical Book. 
You can see the trailer for the book and some of the great art on my website, Writing Pilgrimage, or on my Youtube which has the same name. 
 I really wanted to make something special for all my amazing readers who have stayed with me despite my slow updates to commemorate the end of the first arc which is only two chapters away.

Because I've been working on that and I was waiting on a good time to announce it, I have been holding back on publishing more chapters.
I feel awful though for making you all wait and for having a lot of you disappointed in me.
So I will publish the last two chapters of this arc/volume this Saturday at 10am GMT.

If you want to keep up to date with the official Book release of the first volume than subscribe to my website or YouTube channel: Writing Pilgrimage.
If you want sneak peeks of the amazing illustrations by Rodrigo than definitely check out the trailer which is on YouTube!!!!

After this I solemnly swear to update with at least three chapters a week.

Mao Lu is a regular Beijinger, well except for the fact that he's in a lot of debt and is best friends with a conglomerate heir.
 He works hard to make money and struggles with his daily life until one day he receives a letter. 
A letter that changes everything. 
Follow his adventures as he travels between dimensions, falls in love with a powerful prince and uncovers a terrifying conspiracy.

The first volume will soon be available as a fully proofread and edited eBook and Paperback with illustrations. To be ready for the pre-order and pre-release join the mailing list on my website: https://writing-pilgrimage.com or subscribe to my YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5vuT5l1K1uVnfLTQQpNAuw

Official cover: Art by Rodrigo Gil Chavez

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This is a Danmei Novel

-Release schedule: Crazy, I am the worst at regular set updates.

-If ranked in the top 100, 1 bonus chapter
-Ranked top 50, 2 bonus chapters and some extra romance. 
-Ranked in top 10 (If that ever happens I would be so grateful.) 3 bonus chapters ***on the following Wednesday the week after rankings.

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grammar and proofreading

Seekers [Under proofreading]

A Collection of Criticism

Dropped: The Creator Adventure

Devil's Rise

douluo dalu : A great big brother

Husband's lovely wife

Cultivation & Stuff

Classmancers - A MOBA Esport Story

Tactical RPG World

A Gatekeeper and The Celestial Sovereign

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