My Wife Morgan can hear my thoughts! (FATE SI)

LV 4

Glebby_Boi

The premise of the story is great. However, it’s quite obvious that gpt was used, and instead of elevating the MTL, it kinda feels like summaries of the chapters. This results in a bland and vague text often repeating itself. This is less of a rewrite and more of a gpt copy and paste. I’m sure the original work is good, however, this ain’t it.

LV 4

leylin_slytherin

looks like you put MTL thorugh an AI to make it even worse; MTL's bad grammar is tolerable.... for some gems AI writing , excessive use of unnecessary adjectives , phrases .... is never tolerable BOTH in one , Ughhh !!! i'll give 5 for update stability

LV 4

Azathoth2

Have read the MTL and I find it a interesting read

LV 13

Champion_collector

iIwas looking to read it but it was removed and there was an my wife is tiamat

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Nicolas_Nil

По качеству перевода ничего не могу сказать, потому что на русский еще перевожу через Яндекс. История приятная, есть флафф, китайщина почти не лезет. Немного скомкана концовка, но в целом все прекрасно.

LV 4

RoneGreninja

...............................................So far I like this and translation are preety good..................................................

LV 1

Elemise

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