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Star Wars: A Single Wish

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作者: easyread

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I don't own Star Wars. Disney owns Star Wars.

This Fanfiction is something I have played around with for a very long time. In my head at least and I want to write some stuff about star wars. This is a wish fulfillment and I don't expect that to get through some of the thick skulls of readers.

I won't be updating this regularly, and I wont be giving it a schedule. It's just something I'll write and update when I feel like it. This story isn't set in the skywalker saga, I don't want to get within a light year of that radioactive waste dump. While the original trilogy, clone wars, and mandolorian were excellent that's where the list ends.

I don't want people writing reviews for this story, but I won't say you cant. I just want people to read a star wars fanfiction that is better then most out there. I wont lie I'm inspired by A New Player In The Force. However, my story wont be anything like that fanfiction though I really suggest you people read it. Its actually written by an educated teacher whos fighting leukemia.

I won't bore you guys with anymore talk so I'll get right into the synopsis now.
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A young boy, no older then 15 lies dying in his hospital bed. The reason he is here is because of the illness he inherited from his mother. He doesn't resent anything about his mother or what he got from her, only that his death be as quick.

Before he rested his diseased body on this bed, he would comfort his mother while he could still be considered healthy. His mother passed fast compared to the rate he is going. The Opal family dies with him, and nothing can stop that.

One of the things the two did was watch movies and T.V. shows, and their favorite was everything star wars. With Nathan Opal on his last day he is happy that his painful torment shall end. This is where the story begins.

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easyread

I've been a fan of Star Wars a long time, and most of what I have to say is in the synopsis. So I wont be giving this story a schedule, but it won't be THAT LONG between updates. I hope this is cool with all you guys. Let me know anything about the lore that might be useful.

3yr 30

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AnotherAtlas

I think the book is really good, but it's not for me. It's a very emotional story and I'm not a big fan of those. Another personal gripe I have is that he will, based on his talks with god or whoever that was, only remember his memories with his mother + only when the 'time is right'.

2yr 25

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Rubi_Stone

very high votes for such a fast going story that has no core. mcs power is too boring for well known reason, and that with lots of dumb time skips. wont number all mistakes, this story is litered by them in every chapter

8mth 4

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Morgriff

Was pretty good at first. writing is decent for web novel. the pov transitions are kinda bad but it's not a big deal. then mc becomes the world's biggest emo cry b*tc* you can imagine. it's like anakin from the prequel movies only a thousand times worse. he finds out the jedi kept his parents death a secret from him and he proceeds to go on a rampage killing allies, women, children, and anyone even slightly in his way. he also acts like he's some how morally superior to the sith while monologing to himself how he doesn't even care about the thousands of innocents he's killing. it just gets completely ridiculous and annoying all at once and I eventually dropped.

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2yr 82

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Will_Caruso

Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about.

3yr 44

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LV 4

WalterHeisenberg

Just started reading and I’ve read that the Mc doesn’t have his memories? What’s up with that? It’ll just be a OC with the highest potential with the force.

2yr 14

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FadeKnight

i like the start. i like the time period. i like star wars. I don't know how to rate this with only the chapters I've read but I'll rate it 5 stars as a place holder because i like the promise and whats happened so for

3yr 5

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Will_Caruso

3yr 3

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Werph

Story so far is great. Grammer is great. Backstory of the mc has great potential. The start of the story is in the old republic timeline, which is the best timeline. The comments explain everything you need to know about the lore so dont worry just sit back and enjoy the story.

3yr 3

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CP_Strats

You really need to work on pov changes, it's happens randomly with 0 warning, one moment you are reading from the main character perspective, the next it's the moms, it's just sudden and can get confusing

1yr 2

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Kurosis

Don’t like the fact this doesn’t have a 5 rating so here full marks. ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………

2yr 2

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srevdar

Ok, so this will just be a preliminary review. First of all, I like the story and KOTOR timeline is my favorite, so I really enjoy this. Second, the grammar is quite good so another plus. Now I only have one problem with this, and that is the POV changes. You change the POV without warning, and sometimes it's not that obvious and it can get confusing by the time you realize. A prompt at the beginning of the new paragrapth when the POV changes will make this a whole lot better. [Character Name POV]

3yr 2

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dozkiller07

I don't know anything about star wars.can I read it too???? do u explain the situations of what happening around so I can get an idea what happening there

3yr 2

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ReaderVult

I shouldn't be surprised because I'm a fan of The Ancients World, but this fan fict is really good. So now I'm fan of this one too, because the author seems to always do a great job. I love your writing style author-sama, don't change ;) I wish you succes

3yr 2

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starking

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3yr 2

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fouidea

good read .,..,,..,.,.,.,.,..,..,.,.,.,.,

2mth 1

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Azazel_0919

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SpookierSapling

This is amazing and I love this story. Rarely do I see a Star Wars fanfic and usually it’s just mid or really subpar, but this is great. I enjoyed all 122 chapters that I’ve read and I binged it through one night. That doesn’t mean the chapters are short by the way, I just decided to read it all at once because I was so invested in the story and I liked it that much. Thank you author for the chapters and story!

1yr 1

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Morrisw

I absolutely love this time period and I'm really enjoying the story. Very excited to see where it goes. --------------------------------------------------------------------------