Naruto: You Call This A Medical Ninja?

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GGFanfiction

Honorary Author Review: Let me know what y’all think and if there is anything that needs improvement

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Raja_Sihir

If you can, please change the MC's name to a Japanese name so it's not confusing. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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GGFanfiction

Hello Everyone, I changed the MC’s name to Reiki I might’ve missed some spots please also I had to go over chapter 12-14 please let me know if there is anything wrong there

LV 4

Knight_Noctis

It's not a bad story for a translation. But sadly, with the rate that kid gets everything , he would be way too much op . The biggest problem is the way mc reveals stuff so easily, and nobody questions him . Like the Thunder God jutsu or the incursio armour. Like people just accept it and move on . It gets pretty boring then .

LV 4

Domanick_Jamison_6982

like both story and translation is good but it (the translation) feels so choppie and missing pieces of story that its giving me a headache

LV 14

Shireneko

Interesting story. However, the reason for such a low score is directly because of the story lack of progress. We see Danzo constantly trying to kill the MC and the MC doing f*ckall. At this point of the story I decided to drop it since it's obvious that the same point will recur being: Danzo attack, MC defend himself, Hokage meet Danzo, "It's your last warning, Danzo.", and everything restart from there. The translation work if good and the cheat nice but in the end it's nothing more than that.

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kinshi

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