Lurking Secrets Of A Billionaire

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Daoista98pbz

Very good story and great characters Love it

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Hana_Chow

Interesting story but grammar is causing confusion.

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KBKayboy

i can't believe Richard used her and dumped her for step sister Jennifer. so heartbreaking. this story is quite interesting and i recommend it to readers.

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Steven_Chance

interesting story, this is an amazing book always wanting more.

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wendelt_thomas

The story is great highly recommended and can’t stop talking about it

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julietallest

I always dislike women fighting over a worthless man. If she had given the man the slap and walked out with dignity, I would have rated full stars.

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Heather_Lamonth_8103

an intresting novel , with a very good plot

I love this book so much I won't like🥰. I would unlock more chapters definitely 😁

This is a very interesting story. A good twist kudos

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ogunsuyigrace87

This is a good read altogether; that is if you take away the too much repetition of 'I'. it almost gave me a headache.. smiles keep up the good work writer

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Toria_Brighton

This is indeed a book that got me hooked. It was worth every bit of my time☺️

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Godsent_Banky

I've fallen in love with Luciana. The story is good, the start was great, the emotions are well portrayed but you need to work on your past tense and present tense so we the readers won't get confused.

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Philip_Aniezue

Amazing story. Richard shouldn't have betrayed her the way he did.

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Comfort_Niggles

this story is good I am already loving it

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chekwaschike

Betrayal from the one you call sister can be the worst. Jennifer is a heartless b*ch!

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Mr_O_

First of all, I want to congratulate you. You’ve managed to create an atmosphere full of intense emotions, and that’s one of the strongest points of your story. Luciana is very well-developed in terms of her pain and inner conflicts, and the dialogue flows naturally, which adds realism to the scenes. Also, the plot of betrayal and secrets is quite intriguing and keeps the reader hooked. However, there are a few details you could refine to improve the flow. I noticed that in some parts, you switch between present and past tense, which can confuse the reader a bit. Also, while the emotions are well captured, there are moments where more detailed descriptions of the setting or actions are missing, which would help immerse the reader even more in the story. Lastly, in some moments of high tension, like Luciana’s confrontation with Jennifer and Richard, you could delve deeper into what she’s feeling in that moment to make the impact even stronger. In summary, the story has a lot of potential, and with some adjustments in narrative consistency and descriptions, you could take it to another level. 👌

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Maabu01

Nice work Author, I'm just a few chapters in and i can say your work is worth admiring, I'm definitely continuing. kudos Author👍

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KBKayboy

love and recommend this book. keep it up author.

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JWB_Kante

Good work from the author, keep updating please

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MATT_Bro

intriguing story, looking forward to more.