A life with the Author

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Yuri_is_Ntr

First of all, where other reviews author - Chan? You know ,those negative ones. Not objective enough ,huh?Surprisingly, that's wasn't Very NICE of you.But anyway. I honestly dislike those ntr starting cliches. It's pretty cheap. On the same level of "oh no, my family is killed. I am gonna train for tens years to become strongest. *Proceed to show already grow up mc. *You get the point, a bit too easy. And to my surprise, author-Chan makes something different. Not so much, honestly. I mean, there is a lot of "character development arcs" that's ends up with no changes. But it's first time for to see not only that's nothing happenes, but author praising himself and thinking he did something great. That's new. And extremely dumb.Either way, with his "nice guy" character, he just asking for Green hat. And he would definitely get another one. Pathetic shrimp deserves it.Adios, pedrilos.

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Godymandias

NTR. YOU CAN DELETE THIS REVIEW LIKE YOU DELETED KRYPTON'S BUT I HAVE INFINITE FREE TIME AND I WILL JUST REPOST IT. YOU CANNOT DEFEAT ME FOR I AM HIM.

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FAP_Master_

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CountPingus

NTR trash. Author justifies NTR despite saying he won’t write NTR

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please_be_gentle_

I convince myself that I'm writing this to let people know it's ntr but there are dozens of them already written so anyone who reading it already a cuck. To put it straight I'm bitter about a potential good FF ending up like this. I understand the authors point but just like I've replied to einlion logic and emotions go hand in hand so even though it's logically correct if it doesn't satisfy you emotionally you won't like it

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Ayries_Jesea

"Curiosity killed the cat" huh, I never understood this saying until now, there are already reviews that said there is an ntr and even on the synopsis said there. But I got curious and checked the said chapter that contains an ntr element, and regretted it. Why did you even have to make an ntr man.., I find tour synopsis interesting but why did you add that element, I can handle dark elements and some drama, but Ntr is the only thing I can't handle to read.😭

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Ero_no_Kami

Men saluting at Mc and praying for his luck

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Uzumaki_Kushina_21

don't read it . it contains NTR i regret giving him power stones and he has gall to say it's not NTR [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Oppenheimer

Really funny sypnosis. When he forced him to write a good sypnosis with the ntr tag

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Haku_Ouroboros

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_VIIX_

Now this is a weird one for sure. I usually try to avoid realism when I come to read fiction. I already get that too much in life afterall. But this one while being fictional and whacky at times, is so deep routed in realism that I really can't make heads or tails of it. First and foremost though I request all the wannabe Top G emo gigachads of this era of internet to not try this one. This contains NTR elements but it might as well be actual NTR for you. And this contains a MC with humanity and humility, someone who is good at many a thing while still retaining human empathy. And did I mention that the MC is humble? If I didn't then I'm doing it now, The MC is Humble. So don't try any further and kindly leave. It just isn't for you man.___________________________________________________________________________Hopefully the Top G's are gone. So we can go to the actual review. Writing Quality(Personally: 4/5) (WN standards: 4.7/5): This is one of the better written stories on this platform. Author uses simple English while still driving home the complexity. The writing Quality suits for a webnovel(not necessarily this app🌚). Requires some fine tuning of PoV shifts and there are occasional spelling mistakes that could be eliminated with proof reading. The fighting choreos are great as well, though I wish they were a bit longer. Decent flow of the story and there isn't any noticeable breaks tbh. ________________________________________________________________________________Story development(4/5): Once again I Emphasize that this is not the kind of fiction that I prefer to indulge in. That said it is a fine piece of work. Going back to my earlier point, it does contain NTR elements. But readers gotta have some patience. Nothing drastic happens in this story and deep down you'd realize that the reality is always crueler than this. Anyways the NTR elements here is a plot device. The author already muted it as much as possible. And wait a bit before you draw your weapons, alright. It is supposed to make readers angry, uncomfortable... just so that the complex character of the MC can be shown in the very next chapter and his drastic actions can be justified. And this whole scenario is like a grain of sand in the beach of this story. In the grand scheme of things it's just a plot device to justify a too drastic character development. That aside, this fic is the perfect example of Murphy's law. To the author, keep on doing what you're doing. Believe in yourself, you've a talent for this. Here everyone(including myself) can have an opinion. Don't put too much importance on them. Character Design(4/5): I don't like this kinda MC at all lol. He's the dream son of every Asian parent. He's great at many a things and he has good ethics, morals and professionalism. He is capable of human sympathy, empathy, anger, hatred and love. He's the bane of all Alpha, Sigma, Gamma, Lambda, Omega males out there. Even with all these reason to be arrogant, he's a goody two shoes Human. Evrything that can happen wrong goes wrong in his life. Sometimes comical, sometimes serious. Yet even with all this he goes on and on, taking everything in strides. This is honestly a great MC, that I do not like at all. To the author, I really want to see the inner struggles of the MC. How he copes with these inside his head. What he does wrong, how he overcomes his inner demons. That perspective is kinda missing in this story. ________________________________________________________________________________Updating Stability(5/5): I don't really cut any points here unless it's really bad. ________________________________________________________________________________World Background(3/5): The low score isn't reflective of the actual writing, instead my personal bias against realism stories and there's still so much more to explore hence I can't give full score. ________________________________________________________________________________Overall(4/5): Not a story for everyones's palette. Definitely not for Top Gs. Not for my kinda "drowning-in-fantasy" species either. But if you're a literature lover that wants to see the world of reality in a controllable supernatural settings, then please try it. For this is a great work. To the author, Wrong app to publish the story but I honestly don't know what the alternative would be.

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FandomExplorer_2nd

Bruh... So he is one of those authors who write something drastic such as {NTR} to make the story have a troublesome experience for the MC so that the mc can have a character development....While i kinda hate it a little because the girl that the mc NTR with it and it seems like the author is considering her again as a heroine or something in the future {I hope not and i certainly wont want to see the mc get NTR with his other girlfreind on the future plot}.....And i might sympathize with the readers why they hate this FF there is many type of readers out there The one that just hate NTR generally and doesnt want themselves to involve in it and The second one who immerse themselves to the book to the point where they think themselves as the MC which definitely explains why some readers hate a FF contains where the mc gets NTR and The third one is the Neutral Reader who just like reading good story even if there something bad happening at the mc but... of course there is a limit on how much they can tolerate a story with so much bad things happening... But best of luck author i guess...

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DaoistRIx97l

Is good, don't feel discouraged by the comments. They are people who have such sad lives that they have to imagine that they are the MC of the story to make themselves feel better. If you are not that type of reader, give it a try. The supposed cheating is not something out of this world.

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Melitia_Snek

Really? Did you have to put NTR in this?

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jeanpierregerardo

The truth since the appearance of the alleged author I did not like xd( reminds me of many annoying stories just as annoying mc , and worse with Ntr chapters( it is worse when you always decias there will be no Ntr , and in the end you just lie , you would have said from before uqe there will be brief Ntr , and not deceive many , with this worse I lower the desire to read and almost recommend it to others who ask me for stories ( with the cover I thought the girlfriend would be komi-san and not this) , if you had not lied ,

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Kenji_Shimura

I think the NTR part was unnecessary if you want to develop your character there are betters ways to do it.but you do you.

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Golden_dragoon

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tALvaNCH

I like the Synopsis handsdown to the MC hope he doesn't get tortured.........................................................................

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King_Jong

I’ve read to chapter 15. As of now its a 1 star for me. The reasons is there seem to be no goal for the MC. Also this feels like those system novel where the MC is the system slave. MC is like a slave to the Author. I’ll continue reading this novel and give another update.