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Novel Reader : Self Proclaim 1 star Novel/Fanfic Inspector 4 - 5 ✰ - Good grammar, Nice Story, Nice Plot, Fun, Bearable grammar, Bearable story 2 - 3 ✰ - Kinda Bad Grammar, Kinda Bad Story 1 ✰ - ☠

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FandomExplorer_2nd
23 hours ago
Commented

I swear of this girl is somehow connected to Nintendo like Nintendo's daughter?, Cause if you know Nintendo used to be a illegal Yakuza playing card game before becoming the 'Nintendo' that we know of today.

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FandomExplorer_2nd
4 days ago
Commented

Damn... She really reminds me of Junko Enoshima's character, But more refined?, In a way it makes this story more good 😊👍

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FandomExplorer_2nd
1 months ago
Commented

Keep it up and TFTC

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FandomExplorer_2nd
1 months ago
Posted

This is actually well put... Like sometimes when I read a fanfic I usually don't like it when they make the story OOC like when I was reading this I was hoping roshi's perverted action would not change but as the story progressed I changed my mind and I like how to character development is going. Overall 8.7/10

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FandomExplorer_2nd
6 months ago
Commented

Carne village lol 😆😋 it can mean Meat Village in English depending on the language

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FandomExplorer_2nd
8 months ago
Posted

Apple 🍎 That's all I could say other than the author slow updates but I do think the author could just... How could I say this maybe 🤔 fix the viewer's comments?, Nah that sounds wrong maybe the right word is improve it cause it feels dry... Like the Sahara desert overall decent good grammar and the character act their personality good not like an ooc

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FandomExplorer_2nd
8 months ago
Replied to Monotone_Bear

Your weird you always comment on other person's comment .w., But I guess that don't really matter? But I do agree though on some of your 'Recomendation'.

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FandomExplorer_2nd
8 months ago
Commented

Hmm... This makes me think if the MC picks the first option, I would have think he would either investigate the kamakura project and maybe make the reserve course student content in the school?.. I don't really know there is a LOT of ways the MC could prevent the "The Biggest, Most Awful, Most Tragic Event in Human History." being removing Junko Enoshima would be the obvious one... But from what going from the story I think Junko is a potential GF? Dunno keep it going mah guy

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FandomExplorer_2nd
8 months ago
Replied to Monotone_Bear

Yoo... That's crazy, I just listened to that song before reading this chapter..And I must say the instrumental is good and their language in Brazil as they sing it is good, It's my first time hearing a Brazilian song and bruh it was about The coffin of Andy and Leyley so... I guess not many people will like it or understand it cause some people don't know the game is about.

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FandomExplorer_2nd
9 months ago
Commented

Wise man one said.. If one thing end in a failure adapt, overcome and improve, May your writing skill get better and create high quality story.

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