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Stuck with a top class gamer

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作者: Theothegiant

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I remember it like it was yesterday
blinding lights hyped crowed
and the the best gamer on stage performing live right infront of me.

if you tell me right then that she'd be living with me I'd probably be overjoyed or dont believe you at all...
but you know what they say.


never meet your heroes


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SeraphWedd

Is this book on hiatus? Here's a five star to help. 😁

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Connor_Owen

It's a great book, the story is very interestinga nd the characters are well made! keep up the good work ^^

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de_writer

So gaming stories aren't really my thing but I will say this story was quite enjoyable. Really liked the plot (although I wish the blurb had been written better - it really undermines the story) and characters were amazing. I'm really curious about how the two characters are going to get on. Grammar was okay but there were times it was a little messy with missing punctuation and capital letters. Otherwise, I'm excited to see where this author takes this story.

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Ninestar619_5803

WOW THIS BOOK IS PRETTY AWESOME! Never thought one would fell into trouble this way. But, the story, the back ground, world building, character development all are significantly great and outstanding. Like the book and add. Keep up the great work.

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Haizao
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Reading few the first batch of chapters was rather delightful. Theo has a great sense of pacing and character, and it really comes out in how his MC interacts with the people around him. There's a great sense of realism in how the MC thinks and responds, and overall I feel this story is a solid start that will blossom into something amazing. That said, there are some noticeable errors in writing that can be easily fixed with an editing pass or two, and I feel like more can be done to distinguish the settings, especially where the games occur. Solid 4.6 for now.

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StellaReads

Now this is what I like, the story is simple yet effective the emotions of characters can be felt easily and the author had done a great job portraying scenarios

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Blyinx

Nice start. It gives me player one vibes, and the general atmosphere of your writing is pretty upbeat and bright, it’s good vibes. First person is pretty difficult to pull of but your doing a good job so far

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GotMilkBlendS

A promising work. Great job, author! Keep it up!

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THE_GOAT_HIMSELF

This is a really good read I love reading about video games but this one is definitely of quality

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Kiyaji
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Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!

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Malakai_Darkstar

Upon completing the first chapter, I found myself instantly connecting with the protagonist, which may admittedly influence my perspective. The main character reveals that she has been living her life for her mother, which piques my interest in her upcoming character development. I eagerly anticipate witnessing her journey towards making decisions that bring her genuine happiness and personal fulfillment. This engaging narrative promises an insightful exploration of self-discovery and growth.

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chimychimes

didn't notice grammar mistakes, tried to give as much info, necessary to understand the world... though it sounds a little like an English essay

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