NocturnOwl

NocturnOwl

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Stay the course and Keep going forward. All the best friends :D If you would like to get in contact with me this is my discord server https://discord.gg/HxZm2AAmVZ

2022-01-29 加入 Global
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NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
1 months ago
Replied to squid_guy

Thank you so much friend, I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying the story, already making my motivation bubble up. I plan to go over the first 50 chapters of gene system at some point and restructure the writing since the earliest chapters are when I was finding my footing as an author. I'll fit that in at some point i got so much to juggle. I'll be getting some Marine System chapters out today. I'm late on it and it will give you something to read as they are free right now expect two hopefully by the end of the day.

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
1 months ago
Replied to gaming_orical

Thanks for pointing this out been really busy fixing this quickly now.

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Posted

This book has been a very enjoyable readthrough. I haven't done reviews in a while but this was definitely worth my time. With only 5 chapters at the time of reading, the story is captivating and enthralling to read through. Ill start off with writing quality. The quality of the writing is top tier with barely any spelling or grammar mistakes. Not just this but the overall writing style makes it very easy on the eyes to read and digest. For stability of updates the author has just started but is already maintaining daily uploads which I can certainly say is a good thing because I need more of this story. The development of the story is very intuitive and complex, having moving parts in the background of main climaxes. The way the power dynamics shift in the first episode was incredibly captivating not to mention when the first demon sword was unveiled. The way the plot is focused and knows where it's going leads me to want to binge through even more chapters. The character design is top tier, having very vivid descriptions for each character for their looks and what they were with unique and interesting personalities that feel alive. The mc is well developed with a lot of mystery to his backstory, his personality is unique and intriguing, having good morality and not being afraid to use it whilst still being confident in his own abilities. The mc gives off luffy vibes at times with how dead set his goals are and how he wont stop to achieve them declaring them openly. The world building and background is that of feudal japan but still remaining fresh and interesting transporting the reader to another world experiencing a wide breadth of culture through the author's brillant understanding of this setting. I highly recommend people give this novel a try. I struggled to put it down, I can already tell this story is going to become something amazing from the first 5 chapters alone and the other is keeping a decent schedule at the moment. I can't wait to see how the plot develops going forward. I can already see so many interesting twists in the works.

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

This has the makings of an amazing story, please keep writing author im already wanting more chapters i have to see what happens now. My guts telling me Mirai is going to have a massive confrontation at shous house. Keep going im devouring your story.

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

I love Mirai and Shou quality friends i swear i can already tell these two are gonna form a brotherhood of sorts.

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NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

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"But not for free," Mirai continued, his tone shifting to a mock-seriousness. "I'll need some dumplings and a bit of mon in return, alright?"

鬼剣: My demon sword

鬼剣: My demon sword

Fantasy · Miraishoto

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

Really good chapter I loved the introduction of the mc here, really got to see a full range of his personality.

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

I wonder just how many demon swords there are. If they have different rankings and if you can make one.

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

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"Very well, as you wish; I stand before you," the Shogun announced, his voice cutting through the chaos. Leaving no room for hesitation, he lunged forward with his blade, but the enemy samurai dodged with ease, his sword crashing down toward the Shogun, who quickly parried with equal force, causing both to stumble back.

鬼剣: My demon sword

鬼剣: My demon sword

Fantasy · Miraishoto

NocturnOwl
NocturnOwl
2 months ago
Commented

Damn poor kid lost his twin that is devastating.

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"Brother! Brother, wake up, please!" Mirai cried over the lifeless body of his twin brother, his small, pale fingers digging into his fallen sibling's hand as he tried to pull him free from the stones pinning him down.

鬼剣: My demon sword

鬼剣: My demon sword

Fantasy · Miraishoto

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