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I apologise for having to repost this but i wanted to make some changes here and there. To my all my loyal readers ill be making sure to post a lot more new chapters to compensate for this. This book has now been reposted in full and i will be making changes along with new chapters dont miss out this will be a rebirth of My Marine System.
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So like fr fr fr this book is and I am totes into that kinda thing my man making this story like fr fr fr and doing all that sxc stuff you do and just gonna keep flexing my bro did you get me?
Sea based apocalypse stories are just as rare as snow and other environments. the cover is actually fire and the synopsis is attractive hence why I am taking a small peek and with the pages already accumulated I am happy with what is already being said. Please keep up the good work author!
That's really a good one. I enjoyed reading it. Can't read to read more. Even i write if you like you can check it out. Do you have a editor as you wrote it very well. Good luck
There are few chapters, then I can't dive deep into the story itself. This review intends to help you with some points as well, give you a little push for you keep up the good work. Points to improve: Writing Quality: It has some few grammar mistakes, and sometimes the flow is a bit broken and difficult to understand. Character Design: It lacks a bit of inner-thought, painting the character's image from metaphor's usage and mannerisms. My tips: Try to imagine it like a movie or a screen play. The reader wants to form a connection with the story, however for this to happen, it needs some chains to be bonded. Metaphors, mannerisms, picturing the inner-thought. The usage of the narrator to explain a bit of the scenario, it helps to form the bound. All in all, keep up the good work :)
great structure, great story over all, i like the way you did emotions with rain and i understand that this book may have been edited here and there. but im just gonna go off what I read I sense a deep lore as deep as you oceans this story resided in! Imagine this is me reviewing the unedited ver of the chapters imagine how could it is now! Keep going Nocturn! You got this
Coming here due to another friend asking me to do so and was not disappoint really. Good dynamics and interesting characters so I can't argue. Rain already has my interest so I will be happy to continue my journey with this author.
It was a pleasure to find this piece, a real piece of work here! I love finding new pieces to read along the way and enjoy! I hope you continue this as it sounds interesting! I will keep an eye out!
AWESOME! I am super glad to have found this on the front pages just surfing around! the sea monster guy just pops out telling me this is either isekai or something else I am just trying to figure out what xD I am def for real for real giving this a go!
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With so many stories to chose from this one stood out the most making me intrigued. the mc already comes off very relatable and the story looks promising to me.
Looks like I am first which is awesome, but this story has a unique premise that isn't zombies or that other muck. Already its an emotional roller-coaster with a boy and dog. The author is amazing at articulating Rain;s journey into this new world. Easily could be a smash hit manga if given such, but visuals are there mentally and descriptions are captivating making this an intense read. I def give a recc for those coming into this story blind.
Nice plot for a new book of yours... Kinda reminds me of the Manhwa Leviathan nice 🙂... There are few chapters available but those few chapters are quite intense. Keep uploading more. I'm expecting a great story from this novel of yours.