vorlefan

vorlefan

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Check out my first novel, Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds: https://www.webnovel.com/book/traveller's-will_25553012106498105

2018-12-28 加入 Brazil
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vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
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If you enjoy a nice first-pov story, then I'm sure to recommend this one. The main character is interesting to read his thoughts and how he perceived the word. Also, the introduction and the starting of the game is one of the turning-points that it will get you hooked in. ~ Keep up the good work :)

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vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Commented

hahaa nice!

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vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Replied to baandrews

Thanks for the review :)

vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Replied to Sithaari

What a good review!

vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Replied to Jeanne_Maia

Um brasileiro com bom gosto por aqui xD

vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Replied to R4GE

What a good review!

vorlefan
vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Posted

This novel is new and for that, my review is more a incentive than criticism about the story itself. It has points it needs a few touch to improve, like the writing quality, but it has potential. I like the scenario that resembles a mix of steampunk and that movie Wall-E. Going to return later for a better review. Give it a try, you may like it.

vorlefan
vorlefan
vorlefan
6 months ago
Commented

good fighting!

  • Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds original

    Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

    Fantasy ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SURVIVAL ANTIHERO

    4.82

    This is the tale of the Traveler, a man driven by a quest for meaning and a thirst to define his own worth. Follow him, as he journeys through a world shrouded in darkness. As his story is told, he shall confront his deepest fears in a relentless battle for survival. His path is fraught with cruel sorrow, wandering, and the relentless pursuit of freedom from a cruel fate. Bear witness to a journey fueled by unmatched will, where one man’s struggle shall be the catalyst to ignite a legend! ~ Synopsis, courtesy from BrokenAmbition --- Q/A: Is this your first attempt at writing a novel? Yes, this is my first attempt at writing a novel. English isn't my first language, so I would appreciate any help pointing out grammar mistakes and other errors. I'm excited to share the world I've been building since my teenage years. What can readers expect in terms of progression? The first arc, consisting of roughly 50 chapters, will introduce the main characters, the power system, and some world-building concepts. Following this, the story will be packed with action, adventure, numerous battles, mysteries, and clever plots. How will the writing develop? The writing will continue to improve in the later chapters. There may be some inconsistencies between the early chapters (1-23) and the later ones (after chapter 23). I plan to rewrite the earlier chapters in the future, but please bear with me as I manage a heavy work schedule. What should I expect from the story's pacing and focus? The novel has a slow-to-medium burn pace. It is character-focused, with a rich blend of world-building. Some details will be revealed through dialogues, while others will emerge from the background composition. Think of it like an orchestra: the characters are the main instruments, with the world-building, power systems, and society forming a slow-burning backdrop. What makes this novel unique? The power system is based on psychological aspects such as personality, traits, and flaws. It incorporates duality, meaning nothing is static or set in stone. A weaker character can defeat a stronger one by exploiting the opponent's flaws and traits, emphasizing strategic thinking. What are the tones of the story? The story has its dark elements, exploring societal struggles and madness. However, I also love the sense of adventure and fun, so readers can expect some lighter, humorous moments. How long are the chapters? Each chapter is approximately 2000 words. What is the chapter release schedule? I aim to release at least five chapters a week.

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