摘要
The fantasy VRMMORPG, Battle Worlds, is one of the most played games in the world.
In this game, there's a legendary player that could defeat a "Boss" on his own.
His name is Blood(In-Game-Name).
Blood is a legendary player that surpassed all the players in the world. He completed hundreds of quests and dungeon raids alone.
When Blood was going to log off, suddenly the virtual capsule that he was wearing exploded causing him to die.
His soul didn't go to the cycle of reincarnation but it was sucked by something causing him to transmigrate into a body of Goblin.
This is a story about a boy that was transmigrated in the body of a Goblin. Follow him as he rises through the ranks and become the most powerful monster in the world.
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Tags: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, World Travel, Sword and Magic, Late Romance, Tragedy, Game Elements, Non-human protagonist, System, Beast Companion, Gods, Demons, Hero, War, Modern, Slice of Life, Dungeons, Scheme, Conspiracy, Evolution, Cheat, Weak to Strong, Drama, School Life,
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Review after chapter 88 I've read this despite all the bad reviews of this novel. And I've got to say that this is an interesting story. The volume 1 is too bland. There's no character development and world building. He's the only character in the whole volume. The others are just extras that he killed. I think that most people got bored and didn't pass through volume 1. I think you can skip volume 1 and start with chapter 20. It will not affect your reading. The volume 2 is the start where a lot of characters appear and the world is slowly forming. The world is too large and we currently couldn't explore it because he's staying in one city. We're currently in chapter 88 and I've got to say that there's a lot of things that will happen in this story considering what explained in the last arc. 88 chapters weren't enough to decide this story like those other novels. Maybe, this wasn't even ten percent of the novel. The only downside of this story was the poor grammar.
As of Chapter 110 Writing Quality: 5/5 Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far. Story Development: 4/5 The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5 The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds. Updating Stability: 5/5 If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates. World Background: 4/5 Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand. Overall: 4.4 I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.
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Hello Author here! First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook). I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably... Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore. Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms. Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.
An embarrassing school slice-of-life power fantasy. Emotional age of whoever wrote this is around 12. It actually started out okay, but later it regressed more and more. Oh and of course MC always "smiles", every little thing he does is done with a smile. Quite stupid and creepy. How much trouble is it to write less awkwardly?
This story has a mc that doesn't link to being a goblin, there is no real background created, the writing is quite bad, just the addition of a better translator could make the story more enjoyable, the story has been rather haphazardly put together and I can't say if it's the world or the characters, but it just isn't good enough. On the positive side, there is a non-human mc which is quite different and interesting. So I would recommend this if the writing get corrected alot, but not at the moment.👌
This story is so amazing, I never expect to read such an amazing work. If you are fan of isekai this is a recommendation, Keep up the good work author!!!!
It's a good story. It's an action pack story. Although there's a little grammatical error it's still readable. I recommend this one. Good luck to this author, more power.
Read up to chapter 16 From what I read it's pretty uninteresting with it not really explaining anything like the main character goblin boy, he's so boring and all that's done is fighting and it's not even fun nor interesting, The main focus is stats and evolving but even that is done poorly. The dungeon sounds lame with pretty poor world building and the protagonists background is pretty boring he's the BEST player in the game because... he got lucky with a broken item yeet Also I think I would've kept reading but fate and prophecy showed up and I hate those. Maybe it gets better as you go on who knows Summary: a pretty boring novel that shoves you along
Im trying to read this, but its messy as heck. The numbers rarely make sense in relation to whats happening to the point I’d say the author shouldn’t have done a system. Most writers shouldn’t because its really messy with a lot math involved behind the scenes to make everything work well that most just never do. The way the creatures work don’t make sense, and fights are either too long, or just messy because of grammar to the point I skipped paragraphs. The character is almost none existent outside of standard MC tropes. I mean literally he clears a dungeon by himself, and finds an earing that was part of his old set of gear when he was a top player. Then proceeds to kill creatures in groups despite being lower level with less skills. He is apparently building a combat mage that can do everything. The author warns about the bad grammar, but won’t fix it. Its just lazy I now understand why I got free fast passes for this novel. Please don’t waste your time on this novel.
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The grammar and missing words are killing my brain cells. Whilst the story does have potential, it is squashed by the inconsistent MC(the humanoid monster-killing dilemma+just bad decisions) and the bad worldbuilding. The whole thing feels like a bad superhero movie. The action does pull me in but that is where it stops. There is no ˇ"meat" to this novel, there is no motivation, the bear surrenders just couse the author wanted to. In conclusion, if the author fixes his grammar this could get a 3 star rating and as for the story I just don't know.
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Just as the author himself already stated, his English isn't very good... Especially his awful grammar makes it hard to enjoy this novel. Having an capable editor would instantly improve my rating of this novel. I am at chapter 69 and so far this novels seems to be a nice copy-mix of the standard transmigration/system/evolving monster/magical academy novels. You won't find much novelty here, but at least it's a solid mix of well known and liked themes. There have been some stupid cliché encounters and scenarios, but I still hope, that it won't go out of hand. If you are bored and don't mind ignoring bad grammar, this novel is recommendable.
Well I have to say the story development if fine, if not good, but your lacking in some parts (mostly grammar). Some of things you need to fix is grammar, world building, and character design in that order. I like the goblin stuff, but I’ve read stories like it (re:monster). The best part about this novel is the stability of updates, but after you finish the story that wouldn’t matter anymore, so I would have to rate it lower. But, overall it’s an alright read not bad but not good either just in between. P.S: Author if you are reading this please find an editor or a fan willing to correct the mistakes in the story
jesus christ. author please get your grammar right... you keep using simple past, past progressive and simple present but each of them incorrectly. Get an editor to help you. As of now unreadable by anyone with the faintest grasp of the english language...
Ok updated Review due to my opinion changing, I didn't feel my previous review was quite accurate. Ok first off this novel definitely has a feeling of being influenced by RE:Monster, this mainly shows up in the monster progression as the more you level up in this game like world the closer you get to evolving, only if your a monster race tho. This story does follow a similar structure though where the MC gets stronger through taking a part of the monsters he fights (in this case their souls); However, it deviates in that the MC is required to slaughter hundreds in order to raise one stat point and does not tske any of their inherent skills. The world building is not bad, there are alot of familiar elements but it also manages to retain some of the game like feel through the MC encountering dungeon puzzles which he must solve and a mysterious amnesia which slowly gets cured through his continued investment in intelligence. This means that the MC has a real outsider feel like he's not a natural part of the world or that he has just merged with an alreadynexistung character. This is both a positive and a negative as it means that in the first arc is a bit slow as he has no defined goals other than what his system provides but it is also nice to not have him on a generic revenge quest which so many stories seem to force in to give their main characters purpose. The fights aren't bad, there not to suprisinh alot of the time however as generally the ways he beats the bosses and overcomes his main challenge have been setup chapters beforehand. This isn't necessarily bad it's just a bit predictable. Overall I do enjoy this story and think that if your into a power progression story like RE:Monster or Dragon Evolve God you will enjoy this story. P.s in my previous review i said the world feels similar to Skeleton Knight in another world, no lo ger hold thst viee due to world building done in recent chapters.
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Uninspired and the systematical abuse of the english language doesn't make it any more readable. MC doesn't reincarnate as much as gets perma-logged into a goblin body. Attempts at explaining the game world makes it just more confusing as dimensions are not the authors strong suit. Stats are there just for the number to go up and seem to be arbitrarily infinite or completely gone depending on the situation, no feel whatsoever for any aspect of reality in this novel
Love the story and mystery aspect of the novel. The characters seem well fleshed out and unique. The World building is probably my favourite part of the novel. With the many nations, continents and characters it really makes for an interesting story. The gaming quirks are also nice. The only downside would be the grammar but it's easy to understand and doesn't affect the story. I love this novel so make sure to keep updating it!!
Omg I love this series. Lucian and hazel couldn’t be any cuter. The first book had me on an emotional roller coasters. Just started the second book and I cannot wait to see what happens.
REVIEW TIME!! The story so far is great. This is so fascinating and fun to read novel. I hope the Author will do everything he can do make the story more greater. I recommend this Novel to all Readers. Keep up the goodwork
This Novel sat in my Library for quite a while because of the negative comments ... a month ago I thought about giving it a shot ... it's true the writing quality is bad but it has improved a bit with time. Character development took OKish but it still requires quite a brushing ..... But the most disappointing thing is the use of Heavy Plot Armours .. repeatedly.. Certain bets and terms /deals were used according to the wordings " you have to follow every command of mine / I will own everything you have if I win " and people readily agrees ( People are not that stupid and these are not ordinary people who we are talking about but powerhouses! ) without thinking the pros-cons of such a deal . Take example of Yanagi , a senior at his institute and most the powerful youth , readily agreed to the term " you will obey every command ... " if one could interpret , it is similar to a slave contract ! , ( My words ) , it should be properly mentioned what " everything" means in this novel - everything could include ones money , property , Mana Fruits , and Weapons but it can also include ones time , body , soul , his wife / husband and family... a clear cut defination is Very much required .. And don't talk about the Plot Armours... if one is giving it a try.... they will surely understand what I mean ... While the chapters are relased frequently , this story is not my Cup of tea ... Dropping it ..
Really well written. Not too fast and not too slow. Looking for ward to this story getting to its first hundred chapters . Please keep posting regularly !!!!