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Review after chapter 88 I've read this despite all the bad reviews of this novel. And I've got to say that this is an interesting story. The volume 1 is too bland. There's no character development and world building. He's the only character in the whole volume. The others are just extras that he killed. I think that most people got bored and didn't pass through volume 1. I think you can skip volume 1 and start with chapter 20. It will not affect your reading. The volume 2 is the start where a lot of characters appear and the world is slowly forming. The world is too large and we currently couldn't explore it because he's staying in one city. We're currently in chapter 88 and I've got to say that there's a lot of things that will happen in this story considering what explained in the last arc. 88 chapters weren't enough to decide this story like those other novels. Maybe, this wasn't even ten percent of the novel. The only downside of this story was the poor grammar.
As of Chapter 110 Writing Quality: 5/5 Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far. Story Development: 4/5 The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5 The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds. Updating Stability: 5/5 If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates. World Background: 4/5 Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand. Overall: 4.4 I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.
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Hello author. Please tell me why chapters are published so rarely? This is very much one of the best novels I have read and I look forward to every chapter, but they come out very rarely. I'm afraid that you will stop writing... Please answer)
I really like this work, especially chapters 637, the Walphurgis Night arc, among several others, when Souta's colleagues see his intention to kill, it gives me goosebumps. Souta's evolution in the story really begins when he returns to Imperium and his drastic change when he collects one of his items from the game, the Nightmare Mask, I hope the work starts posting more frequently again, I have many theories regarding the Leshi family, his death in the capsule, and his fifth evolution. I eagerly await the next chapters.(sorry for my mistakes im brazilian and english is not my best language)
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I went into this thinking that it was a copy of Re:Monster since the obvious goblin evolution trope is present in this story but I'm pleasantly surprised. Good stuff author
I wish the author would drop more chapters a week I love the story honestly my favorite novel to read
This story started out quite well. The later chapters though are not edited as well and the author starts to repeat sentences changing up the wording slightly for no apparent reason aside from maybe to increase his word count. If you can get past these issues, the story itself is rather enjoyable.
For me everything is good except the power level introduction as mc bearly even 1 or 2 evolved and he gets to face top level powerhouse or end level boss that's what saddened me most for the people of the same level he is monstrous genius who growing stronger rapidly but the way I see it his rapid growth can't keep up with the story how it kept on introducing top level powerhouse one after another all he relied on is ether his status boost that is temporary or external help which is quite annoying as I quite prefer A MC who like to solve things with his own strength more like based strength unlike this one MC all he relied on is stat boost through the sword or other and I really do request the author to ether Make MC reach top level powerhouse fast or stop introducing to boss level powerhouse to mc because to me all it is doing is making mc look like amature without pride and look pathetic
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sir author do u have discord or not i want to join to see the illustration of the character
I aspire to write this well, this guy must have gigabytes of background created on the characters and the world he has built. What an awesome story!
One of my favorite books in WN!! I do hope the author finishes this story. The concept, world building, characters and pacing is quite good. kudos to the author.
It is unfortunate written by someone with a third grade reading leven whi believes sonic the hedgehog is peak character design. Constantly smirking his way through every scene while the lack of punctuation makes it impossible to read comfortably. The story is also incredibly generic with not an interesting hook in sight. TLDR it is a less interesting and more poorly written Re:monster.
Other than update stability this is one of the best fantasy transmigration novels on the platform
Are we getting a mass release ? Is that why it’s been a month since we got a chapter ?
Can someone help me remember the title o a novel where a girl contracted some dragon with sssss class power. and to note, the dragon is some Isekaid guy
Great at the start. Though all the prophecy, slow evolution and forced foreshadowing reduce the quality of the reading experience.
Review after 200 chapters. Over all a good story the world and character building are great. Quite a few grammatical errors but over all the story is fantastic. I definitely recommend reading this book especially if you like a well rounded mc who has actually character development that is reasonable and realistic to why he changes.
overall i can say balanced no too op no too weak.when the story starts mc make him stable fast and start exploring.they way author give mc monster traits and human mind is way too good, it's doesn't mean that he becomes too op he needs to climb stairs like others.mc have dignity as well when he starts his legion, this way mc looks more cool.overall pretty much good story you can try and you will find many things new.
This is a book that you need to read for while before you can start enjoying. It doesn't even get edited at first. That said world building is a strong suit here. There is always something interesting and engaging for mc and friends to engage with. Character building is not as good especially mc.The person never really changes despite various opportunities. The same is true for most of cast.
I had to drop the book, all the reviews about no mistakes are lying. The MC stats are not calculated right, monsters more than rice his level and an evolution higher than him have equal or lesser stats than him. If you want an OP MC who does not struggle much than this story will not irritate you.
Really well written. Not too fast and not too slow. Looking for ward to this story getting to its first hundred chapters . Please keep posting regularly !!!!
Review after chapter 88 I've read this despite all the bad reviews of this novel. And I've got to say that this is an interesting story. The volume 1 is too bland. There's no character development and world building. He's the only character in the whole volume. The others are just extras that he killed. I think that most people got bored and didn't pass through volume 1. I think you can skip volume 1 and start with chapter 20. It will not affect your reading. The volume 2 is the start where a lot of characters appear and the world is slowly forming. The world is too large and we currently couldn't explore it because he's staying in one city. We're currently in chapter 88 and I've got to say that there's a lot of things that will happen in this story considering what explained in the last arc. 88 chapters weren't enough to decide this story like those other novels. Maybe, this wasn't even ten percent of the novel. The only downside of this story was the poor grammar.
As of Chapter 110 Writing Quality: 5/5 Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far. Story Development: 4/5 The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5 The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds. Updating Stability: 5/5 If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates. World Background: 4/5 Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand. Overall: 4.4 I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.
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Hello author. Please tell me why chapters are published so rarely? This is very much one of the best novels I have read and I look forward to every chapter, but they come out very rarely. I'm afraid that you will stop writing... Please answer)
I really like this work, especially chapters 637, the Walphurgis Night arc, among several others, when Souta's colleagues see his intention to kill, it gives me goosebumps. Souta's evolution in the story really begins when he returns to Imperium and his drastic change when he collects one of his items from the game, the Nightmare Mask, I hope the work starts posting more frequently again, I have many theories regarding the Leshi family, his death in the capsule, and his fifth evolution. I eagerly await the next chapters.(sorry for my mistakes im brazilian and english is not my best language)
揭示劇透 I went into this thinking that it was a copy of Re:Monster since the obvious goblin evolution trope is present in this story but I'm pleasantly surprised. Good stuff author
I wish the author would drop more chapters a week I love the story honestly my favorite novel to read
This story started out quite well. The later chapters though are not edited as well and the author starts to repeat sentences changing up the wording slightly for no apparent reason aside from maybe to increase his word count. If you can get past these issues, the story itself is rather enjoyable.
For me everything is good except the power level introduction as mc bearly even 1 or 2 evolved and he gets to face top level powerhouse or end level boss that's what saddened me most for the people of the same level he is monstrous genius who growing stronger rapidly but the way I see it his rapid growth can't keep up with the story how it kept on introducing top level powerhouse one after another all he relied on is ether his status boost that is temporary or external help which is quite annoying as I quite prefer A MC who like to solve things with his own strength more like based strength unlike this one MC all he relied on is stat boost through the sword or other and I really do request the author to ether Make MC reach top level powerhouse fast or stop introducing to boss level powerhouse to mc because to me all it is doing is making mc look like amature without pride and look pathetic
揭示劇透 sir author do u have discord or not i want to join to see the illustration of the character
I aspire to write this well, this guy must have gigabytes of background created on the characters and the world he has built. What an awesome story!
One of my favorite books in WN!! I do hope the author finishes this story. The concept, world building, characters and pacing is quite good. kudos to the author.
It is unfortunate written by someone with a third grade reading leven whi believes sonic the hedgehog is peak character design. Constantly smirking his way through every scene while the lack of punctuation makes it impossible to read comfortably. The story is also incredibly generic with not an interesting hook in sight. TLDR it is a less interesting and more poorly written Re:monster.
Other than update stability this is one of the best fantasy transmigration novels on the platform
Are we getting a mass release ? Is that why it’s been a month since we got a chapter ?
Can someone help me remember the title o a novel where a girl contracted some dragon with sssss class power. and to note, the dragon is some Isekaid guy
Great at the start. Though all the prophecy, slow evolution and forced foreshadowing reduce the quality of the reading experience.
Review after 200 chapters. Over all a good story the world and character building are great. Quite a few grammatical errors but over all the story is fantastic. I definitely recommend reading this book especially if you like a well rounded mc who has actually character development that is reasonable and realistic to why he changes.
overall i can say balanced no too op no too weak.when the story starts mc make him stable fast and start exploring.they way author give mc monster traits and human mind is way too good, it's doesn't mean that he becomes too op he needs to climb stairs like others.mc have dignity as well when he starts his legion, this way mc looks more cool.overall pretty much good story you can try and you will find many things new.
This is a book that you need to read for while before you can start enjoying. It doesn't even get edited at first. That said world building is a strong suit here. There is always something interesting and engaging for mc and friends to engage with. Character building is not as good especially mc.The person never really changes despite various opportunities. The same is true for most of cast.
I had to drop the book, all the reviews about no mistakes are lying. The MC stats are not calculated right, monsters more than rice his level and an evolution higher than him have equal or lesser stats than him. If you want an OP MC who does not struggle much than this story will not irritate you.
Really well written. Not too fast and not too slow. Looking for ward to this story getting to its first hundred chapters . Please keep posting regularly !!!!