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Honestly this is one of my top 5 books. I recommend it to anyone who wants a good story that doesn’ have all the cliches that are on this app. It does have some, but not all. The protagonist is amazing trying to realize what he is and the world building is amazing. I can also say this is a kingdom building novel as well but that is almost a spoiler.
all I'm gonna say is weird spot to end and i hope it's just a new season 865 chapters and 880 total. hope for some good news
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It has a good story with a different but still very cool and interesting version of isekai, and it has good characters plot
I'm on chapter 12 so far and I must say this is nice so far. Can anyone give a hint on when the romance part starts?
Good story and characters, the update time is reasonable, and the background of the world is understandable and isn't just some random sheet.
Author, why u don't evolve to goblin ? Sure your intelligence will be exponentially better. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
absolute retard characters, repeated word count padding text, nonsense magic system. If you don't mind the brain cancer, it can be fun to read. What can I say, it's WebNovel... I'm writing this review at chapter 69.
Translation is good, no doubt. But the story is really bad. The inconsistency of the mc's mood is really distracting, and the smirk... bro he smirks like atleast 6-7 times per chapter. it gets irritating after some time. The battles are really bland, the MC is low level but too op. i mean like, the f.
Who is the strongest in the story Bryan or souta 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😅😅😅😅😅💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪🔥😅🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
AWESOME NOVEL I hope you won't drop it. World building is amazing, I really would like to play this game. Im looking forward to some romance between Souta and Lynn[img=update][img=recommend]
not sure how the story is but just by the synopsis I can say I'm getting Re:monster vibe
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mc could end a fight faster if he used everything he got from the start, but what he did was to limit his strength just like what happen at chap 603, just because the one he was fighting was a B rank, he limit his strength just to match his enemy, and then later got a bit of trouble because of it, haiisttt I hate that kind of thing, author making a fight scene that could end within a single chapter into a more prolong fight to generate more word count and chaptersss..... zzzzzz🥴
A really good read for me. The adventures are exciting and world building was solid. Characters and plot are well molded. The MC is japanese so i assume that it's another japanese isekai works. But it's not the typical indecisive, irritable and dense MC that i got tired of. All in all, it's interesting and i got hooked up. It deserved an adaptation, but personally, no need, i don't lack the imagination haha..
the story is really interesting, and the world development is excellent. my biggest hang up is honestly the grammar. if you need someone to help with edits, I would be willing to help you, or you could set a discord server and outsource it to fans
Solid world building, not the best but definitely not bad. Honestly the only issue I had was the grammar, but the author really improved since the beginning.
Maybe the writing improves, but I'm a few chapters in and the author repeats themselves and there's a lot more "telling" than "showing" going on. I think I've been spoilt by my favourite webnovel on this site.
good plot,just lacking in descriptions.with a minimal grammar error..the phasing of the story is not so fast and not so slow either..overall..worth reading..
Love the Story, love the character, love the world building and the power system. however for the last month pr so updates have been very infrequent to the point where you're paying for privilege for a month and basically only get 4-10 new chapters total which to me seems like money wasted, I could see myself paying for privilege every other month or so though.(05-08-2022) I'm putting a date here incase it improves since that only seems fair to me.
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This novel has terrible grammar throughout. However it is a captivating read, and once you get past the first volume you become addicted to the growth of the character.
I survived until chapter 28 - I could not handle the typos anymore. On average one per paragraph. Too many repetitions. In general, the story is interesting. Worth to spend time on it AFTER some serious proofreading.
Really love the story~😊😊amazing plot that wont't let you down after each chapter ,really amazing💕💕 the development of the character are also great👌
try it!! i promise you this story is different then other novel!! character and world building progress slowly and you need patient when reading it!!
Good book, good story, good characters. But sadly not for me. Got too much of the friendship is power, moe Japanese feeling to it. Was expecting something different I guess since the mc clearly had future knowledge of the world, knew how to get stronger and was a monster... Guess the author took a different route.
Honestly this is one of my top 5 books. I recommend it to anyone who wants a good story that doesn’ have all the cliches that are on this app. It does have some, but not all. The protagonist is amazing trying to realize what he is and the world building is amazing. I can also say this is a kingdom building novel as well but that is almost a spoiler.
all I'm gonna say is weird spot to end and i hope it's just a new season 865 chapters and 880 total. hope for some good news
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It has a good story with a different but still very cool and interesting version of isekai, and it has good characters plot
I'm on chapter 12 so far and I must say this is nice so far. Can anyone give a hint on when the romance part starts?
Good story and characters, the update time is reasonable, and the background of the world is understandable and isn't just some random sheet.
Author, why u don't evolve to goblin ? Sure your intelligence will be exponentially better. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
absolute retard characters, repeated word count padding text, nonsense magic system. If you don't mind the brain cancer, it can be fun to read. What can I say, it's WebNovel... I'm writing this review at chapter 69.
Translation is good, no doubt. But the story is really bad. The inconsistency of the mc's mood is really distracting, and the smirk... bro he smirks like atleast 6-7 times per chapter. it gets irritating after some time. The battles are really bland, the MC is low level but too op. i mean like, the f.
Who is the strongest in the story Bryan or souta 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😅😅😅😅😅💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪🔥😅🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
AWESOME NOVEL I hope you won't drop it. World building is amazing, I really would like to play this game. Im looking forward to some romance between Souta and Lynn[img=update][img=recommend]
not sure how the story is but just by the synopsis I can say I'm getting Re:monster vibe
....................................................................................................................................................... k m ,
mc could end a fight faster if he used everything he got from the start, but what he did was to limit his strength just like what happen at chap 603, just because the one he was fighting was a B rank, he limit his strength just to match his enemy, and then later got a bit of trouble because of it, haiisttt I hate that kind of thing, author making a fight scene that could end within a single chapter into a more prolong fight to generate more word count and chaptersss..... zzzzzz🥴
A really good read for me. The adventures are exciting and world building was solid. Characters and plot are well molded. The MC is japanese so i assume that it's another japanese isekai works. But it's not the typical indecisive, irritable and dense MC that i got tired of. All in all, it's interesting and i got hooked up. It deserved an adaptation, but personally, no need, i don't lack the imagination haha..
the story is really interesting, and the world development is excellent. my biggest hang up is honestly the grammar. if you need someone to help with edits, I would be willing to help you, or you could set a discord server and outsource it to fans
Solid world building, not the best but definitely not bad. Honestly the only issue I had was the grammar, but the author really improved since the beginning.
Maybe the writing improves, but I'm a few chapters in and the author repeats themselves and there's a lot more "telling" than "showing" going on. I think I've been spoilt by my favourite webnovel on this site.
good plot,just lacking in descriptions.with a minimal grammar error..the phasing of the story is not so fast and not so slow either..overall..worth reading..
Love the Story, love the character, love the world building and the power system. however for the last month pr so updates have been very infrequent to the point where you're paying for privilege for a month and basically only get 4-10 new chapters total which to me seems like money wasted, I could see myself paying for privilege every other month or so though.(05-08-2022) I'm putting a date here incase it improves since that only seems fair to me.
揭示劇透 This novel has terrible grammar throughout. However it is a captivating read, and once you get past the first volume you become addicted to the growth of the character.
I survived until chapter 28 - I could not handle the typos anymore. On average one per paragraph. Too many repetitions. In general, the story is interesting. Worth to spend time on it AFTER some serious proofreading.
Really love the story~😊😊amazing plot that wont't let you down after each chapter ,really amazing💕💕 the development of the character are also great👌
try it!! i promise you this story is different then other novel!! character and world building progress slowly and you need patient when reading it!!
Good book, good story, good characters. But sadly not for me. Got too much of the friendship is power, moe Japanese feeling to it. Was expecting something different I guess since the mc clearly had future knowledge of the world, knew how to get stronger and was a monster... Guess the author took a different route.