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Bittersweet Life

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作者: ElJaneDM

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SHE

Who had fair and glowing skin... Thick, long, and shiny black wavy hair... A pair of aqua-colored, sparkling eyes. And the one who'd been loved by elders, admired by children, and the pride of the family.

SHE is my sister...

My sister, who had everything that I don't, who got all that I want and received all that I've longed for.

I hate her, but I want to be like her.

Despite being a boy, I strived to be an equal to her. I've grown my hair and taken good care of my skin. I achieved the perfect replica of her.

But just being only a copycat has never been enough.
I lived as a living picture of her image and became the scenery of my family who misses her. I'm still not equal.

Then one day, no one saw it coming...

A circumstance occurred that twisted the cycle of our world which I did not expect would change everything that we used to and opened the door to the next chapter of my bittersweet life.

The circumstance that crossed my path to the girl I never thought would play a huge part in my life...

That one girl who spoiled me with attention and filled my empty existence with genuine affection.

But... In just a blink of an eye, death took her from me.

Her sudden death caused dubiety to all of us...

Suicidal? No... Someone surely murdered her...


But... Our only question is...
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Who?


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Junever_Daylo

What an exciting chapters! It is so intense. I really love it! This story is worthwhile.. I hope you keep updating it and don't lose the spice of every chapters.. Goodluck..

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Dankie123

cool beans dude...............👋🤚🖐✋🖖👌👌🤌🤏✌🤞🤟🤘🤙👉👈👆👉☝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Braiden_Hawkins_5082

It amazing im not kidding about it i’m normally not a big fan of these types of books but this book is perfect all I needs now is the rest of The chapter of the book

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JJ_Prakoso

Here is my thought about this novel based on what I have read so far, Character: I do really like the characters due to they have different personalities from one another. Tristan and Trish as a character are very decent, especially they are distinct with another when comes to reacting on the situation. Another thing I like is the author creates a dialogue as if they are talking like a real human being on the character interaction and I appreciate that effort. World-Building: So far the world-building is quite fine for now or I can say it's alright. But, I believe the author can further more the world-building within the story or even the surroundings. Writing: Even though the writing is pretty smooth and can feel the flow, but there are also minor flaws. Such flaws are grammar placement and it's pretty small and easy to be fixed. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I would love to see more chapters. Thank you and keep up the good work!!

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Mel_Aniv

The author has a great knack for details and narration. A big plus too at the plot and the character dialogues and interactions. The characters were very realistic and act life-like. This got potential I must say and the author will improve more in the future. I am not the best reviewer but I tried to point out things that may help the author. And I hope that It did help 🙏 You got my support! 👍

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Karan_Mewada

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Bad_Totodile

It's actually very complicated and sweet, the story seems real and has a life. The writing is also good and clean, so easy to understand. I hope the author never lose hope in writing and in life. keep on fighting/writing. Gambaree

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Madyan_wani

The synopsisis quite intriguing..for one moment i felt it...idk how ..The author depicts the scenario the best way as it si. I love the characters, background and the story development. Hope it continues further..Good luck to author!!! Fighting

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rzasrsna

This is intriguing and satisfying to read! I got hooked by the chapter one! Pity for trish I hope she will be fine and nothing worse will happen! and I hope tristan will play his part and to not disappoint people around him special his sister!.😸 after all this novel is promising and I coudn't wait to read the other chapters. keep it up and goodluck to your journey as an author.😻

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callmeotooosan

Acting like a proxy for his sister and hmmmmmm possible crossdressing (was there any---i dropped a review after reading chapter 2----ah ah I had to find out). Author-nim, the plot incited me to read another chapter, as I'm always a sucker on pretend-identity type of novels, and it didn't disappoint as it was to .my expectations. The occasional grammar mistakes are bearable, not to the point that it would make one unable to read it so it's a plus. All in all, I love your wooooork!! (sorry for shipping Tristan and Whif----)

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_lixiethy

I read the chapter 1 before dropping a review but... I wonder what will happen to Tristan now that he had to be a proxy and act like her twin sister. This is interesting! I never knew the first chapter will make me read all of if up to the recent. Thank you for your hard work, Author!

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caichii

reading the synopsis, I already knew that the plot would be something really heart touching. this story could relate to many people out there, teens alike who would do anything just to be appreciated. I myself is one. overall, this is an amazing book. beautifully written too! I love your writing style. keep up the good job!

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ElJaneDM

Hey, Good day readers. I am the author of this novel. I used the review section to announce this, I don't know if this is appropriate. I just want to apologize for some messed up and rambled chapters that are kinda confusing. I am going to have a massive edit of this novel starting in December. I hope you will give me some time to make this a better one. Thank you 😇

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supporthero

Here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: The most obvious reason here is the shifting tenses that most authors have problems dealing with. I mean, I know it is hard to keep the tenses in uniform without making the novel sounds really awkward. Next thing is the ellipses. Chill with the ellipses, dear author. I think in every sentence that you drop there is like an ellipsis. But other than that, there is nothing more. SoU: 4/5 Reason: Still waiting for the next update, ngl. SD: 4/5 Reason: Great story development. But I need more squeeze and a little of background for the characters. CD: 4/5 Reason: I love the characters. But I think they need a clearer image of what they look like or what they are in the novel. Some characters were getting out of their own role. WB: 5/5 It was an outstanding book. Good world background and yeah, that thing do happens sometimes. Overall: 4.2/5 Reason: I have not much to say for this novel. The author clearly knows what she is doing other than the problem with the shifting tenses and the usage of the ellipsis.

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ElJaneDM

Hiii Everyoneeee! I am the author of this novel and of course, I am supporting my own work! I will do my really best to update this as frequently as I can despite my busyness... So please, bear with me... Hopefully, you'll support my piece and be part of my MC's journey till the end! Thank you so much! Love you all😍

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Chapter 236: 'E: Change 2' 2 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    ONE 3 years ago
  2. 2
    The Start!! 3 years ago
  3. 3
    Actually... Tristan has... 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Please. Let me do this. 3 years ago
  5. 5
    SPECIAL CHAPTER 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Just a Girl stuff 3 years ago
  7. 7
    First Test? 3 years ago
  8. 8
    'Meeting Summer' 3 years ago
  9. 9
    'Stone of Courage' 3 years ago
  10. 10
    "It's alright Tristan.." 3 years ago
  11. 11
    'Gale Sebastian' 3 years ago
  12. 12
    'S-She noticed. What should I do?' 3 years ago
  13. 13
    'Falsification' 3 years ago
  14. 14
    'My sister and who?' 3 years ago
  15. 15
    'Happy Birthday!' 3 years ago
  16. 16
    'Why am I smiling?' 3 years ago
  17. 17
    '22nd!' 3 years ago
  18. 18
    'Molested?' 3 years ago
  19. 19
    'Accusations' 3 years ago
  20. 20
    'Busted' 3 years ago
  21. 21
    'Payback!' 3 years ago
  22. 22
    'Warmth and coldness.' 3 years ago
  23. 23
    'Painful Truth' 3 years ago
  24. 24
    'She's everywhere!' 3 years ago
  25. 25
    'Angel Figurine' 3 years ago
  26. 26
    Am I really swinging this way? 3 years ago
  27. 27
    Two Options 3 years ago
  28. 28
    She got worse 3 years ago
  29. 29
    Mysterious Room 3 years ago
  30. 30
    "I... I like you" 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Torn 3 years ago
  32. 32
    'When did you become my mother?' 3 years ago
  33. 33
    'S-She nearly killed the man' 3 years ago
  34. 34
    'Yeah... I should wait' 3 years ago
  35. 35
    'Where my passion lies' 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Like A Captured Birds. 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Apologize 3 years ago
  38. 38
    'I'll meet her' 3 years ago
  39. 39
    'Favor' 3 years ago
  40. 40
    'Happy and Satisfied' 3 years ago
  41. 41
    'You make me fall in love with you even more' 3 years ago
  42. 42
    'I delivered him well to hell' 3 years ago
  43. 43
    'We need to talk' 3 years ago
  44. 44
    'We need to talk' |2| 3 years ago
  45. 45
    'No. Coming here wasn't a mistake. Yes. Definitely not!' 3 years ago
  46. 46
    White Tulips 3 years ago
  47. 47
    White Tulips 2 2 years ago
  48. 48
    'I just can't afford to see the past repeat itself' 2 years ago
  49. 49
    'Traitor' 2 years ago
  50. 50
    'I found you, bitch' 2 years ago
  51. 51
    Heart Lockets 2 years ago
  52. 52
    Why? 2 years ago
  53. 53
    'I will never accept this!' 2 years ago
  54. 54
    'Melissa' 2 years ago
  55. 55
    'The Voice' 2 years ago
  56. 56
    'She's gone' 2 years ago
  57. 57
    'Grief' 2 years ago
  58. 58
    Grief |2| 2 years ago
  59. 59
    'Vigil' 2 years ago
  60. 60
    'Tired' 2 years ago
  61. 61
    'The Note' 2 years ago
  62. 62
    'Weak Evidence' 2 years ago
  63. 63
    'The calls' 2 years ago
  64. 64
    'The calls' |2| 2 years ago
  65. 65
    'Belligerent' 2 years ago
  66. 66
    'Suspicious' 2 years ago
  67. 67
    'Top of the Lamppost' 2 years ago
  68. 68
    'Footage' 2 years ago
  69. 69
    'Hoodies' 2 years ago
  70. 70
    'Incomprehensible' 2 years ago
  71. 71
    'Locate: Part 1' 2 years ago
  72. 72
    'Locate: Part 2' 2 years ago
  73. 73
    'Clear Motive' 2 years ago
  74. 74
    'Fridge Magnet' 2 years ago
  75. 75
    'Video' 2 years ago
  76. 76
    'Nightmare' 2 years ago
  77. 77
    'Symbol of Apology' 2 years ago
  78. 78
    'Not Yet' 2 years ago
  79. 79
    'Selfishness?' 2 years ago
  80. 80
    'I am really glad' 2 years ago
  81. 81
    'Given Hoodie' 2 years ago
  82. 82
    'Interview' Part: 1 2 years ago
  83. 83
    'Interview' Part: 2 2 years ago
  84. 84
    'I refuse to take the interview' 2 years ago
  85. 85
    'Torn Picture' 2 years ago
  86. 86
    'Interview Part: 3' 2 years ago
  87. 87
    'Distrust' 2 years ago
  88. 88
    'Determined' 2 years ago
  89. 89
    'Strange Cat' 2 years ago
  90. 90
    'Track down' 2 years ago
  91. 91
    'Impureness' 2 years ago
  92. 92
    'Cuff Bracelet' 2 years ago
  93. 93
    'Prime Suspect' 2 years ago
  94. 94
    'Watched' 2 years ago
  95. 95
    'Touched a Sore Spot' 2 years ago
  96. 96
    'Touched a Sore Spot: 2' 2 years ago
  97. 97
    "It was Summer's father, right?" 2 years ago
  98. 98
    'Choke Mark' 2 years ago
  99. 99
    'I Got You' 2 years ago
  100. 100
    'Good news?' 2 years ago
  101. 101
    'Rely On Me' 2 years ago
  102. 102
    'Questioning.' 2 years ago
  103. 103
    'Dangerous Tactic' 2 years ago
  104. 104
    'We are a family' 2 years ago
  105. 105
    'Lucas' 2 years ago
  106. 106
    'Similar' 2 years ago
  107. 107
    'Fix' 2 years ago
  108. 108
    'Confessor' 2 years ago
  109. 109
    'Lily' 2 years ago
  110. 110
    'Arrested' 2 years ago
  111. 111
    'Arrested: 2' 2 years ago
  112. 112
    'Not done with you yet.' 2 years ago
  113. 113
    'Sign' 2 years ago
  114. 114
    'Own Plan' 2 years ago
  115. 115
    'Photos' 2 years ago
  116. 116
    'Photos: 2' 2 years ago
  117. 117
    'Photos: 3' 2 years ago
  118. 118
    'Hitman' 2 years ago
  119. 119
    'Hitman: 2' 2 years ago
  120. 120
    'He seemed changed?' 2 years ago
  121. 121
    'Harry and Tanya' 2 years ago
  122. 122
    'Harry and Tanya: 2' 2 years ago
  123. 123
    'They both committed suicide' 2 years ago
  124. 124
    'Suicide Pill' 2 years ago
  125. 125
    'Confession' 2 years ago
  126. 126
    'Unrequited' 2 years ago
  127. 127
    'Unrequited: 2' 2 years ago
  128. 128
    'Brown Envelope' 2 years ago
  129. 129
    'No Detour' 2 years ago
  130. 130
    'Thrown off the Cliff' 2 years ago
  131. 131
    'Thrown off the Cliff: 2' 2 years ago
  132. 132
    'Blood and Flesh' 2 years ago
  133. 133
    'Crucial Statement' 2 years ago
  134. 134
    'Bracelet's Owner' 2 years ago
  135. 135
    'Bracelet's Owner: 2' 2 years ago
  136. 136
    'Bracelet's Owner: 3' 2 years ago
  137. 137
    'See you in hell, Reign' 2 years ago
  138. 138
    'See you in hell, Reign: 2' 2 years ago
  139. 139
    'Love Karma' 2 years ago
  140. 140
    'Huge Help' 2 years ago
  141. 141
    'The Missing Diary' 2 years ago
  142. 142
    'Box of Evidence' 2 years ago
  143. 143
    'Box of Evidence: 2' 2 years ago
  144. 144
    'Gale's Phone' 2 years ago
  145. 145
    'Gale's Phone: 2' 2 years ago
  146. 146
    'Help Me Out' 2 years ago
  147. 147
    'Reign' 2 years ago
  148. 148
    'Reign: 2' 2 years ago
  149. 149
    'Reign: 3' 2 years ago
  150. 150
    'Damnation' 2 years ago
  151. 151
    'Damnation: 2' 2 years ago
  152. 152
    'The Crime: Part 1' 2 years ago
  153. 153
    'The Crime: Part 2' 2 years ago
  154. 154
    'The Crime: Part 3' 2 years ago
  155. 155
    'The Crime: Part 4' 2 years ago
  156. 156
    'The Crime: Part 5' 2 years ago
  157. 157
    'The Crime: Part 6' 2 years ago
  158. 158
    'The Last Crime' 2 years ago
  159. 159
    'Memory of You' 2 years ago
  160. 160
    'Unexplainable' 2 years ago
  161. 161
    'Nostalgia' 2 years ago
  162. 162
    'Nostalgia: 2' 2 years ago
  163. 163
    'Nostalgia: 3' 2 years ago
  164. 164
    'Last Will' 2 years ago
  165. 165
    'I Hate My Blood' 2 years ago
  166. 166
    'False Memory' 2 years ago
  167. 167
    'False Memory: 2' 2 years ago
  168. 168
    'False Memory: 3' 2 years ago
  169. 169
    'Did you know my father?' 2 years ago
  170. 170
    'Rot in Jail' 2 years ago
  171. 171
    'Anew' 2 years ago
  172. 172
    'Hear me out' 2 years ago
  173. 173
    'Insane' 2 years ago
  174. 174
    'Insane: 2' 2 years ago
  175. 175
    'Insane: 3' 2 years ago
  176. 176
    'Edit' 2 years ago
  177. 177
    'Edit: 2' 2 years ago
  178. 178
    'Edit: 3' 2 years ago
  179. 179
    'Session' 2 years ago
  180. 180
    'Edit: Session 2' 2 years ago
  181. 181
    'Edit: Family Bonding' 2 years ago
  182. 182
    'Edit: Dare and Confession' 2 years ago
  183. 183
    'E: Mysterious' 2 years ago
  184. 184
    'E: Mysterious 2' 2 years ago
  185. 185
    'E: Mysterious 3' 2 years ago
  186. 186
    'E: Hidden Crime' 2 years ago
  187. 187
    'E: Desire' 2 years ago
  188. 188
    'E: Finding' 2 years ago
  189. 189
    'E: No Remorse' 2 years ago
  190. 190
    'E: Finally' 2 years ago
  191. 191
    'E: Finally 2' 2 years ago
  192. 192
    'E: Miserable' 2 years ago
  193. 193
    'E: Put In The Right Place' 2 years ago
  194. 194
    'E: Leaving' 2 years ago
  195. 195
    'E: Lost her Sanity' 2 years ago
  196. 196
    'E: Aden' 2 years ago
  197. 197
    "E: Aden 2" 2 years ago
  198. 198
    'E: Found Treasure' 2 years ago
  199. 199
    'E: Found Treasure 2' 2 years ago
  200. 200
    'E: Her Back Story' 2 years ago
  201. 201
    'E: Her Backstory 2' 2 years ago
  202. 202
    'E: Her backstory 3' 2 years ago
  203. 203
    'E: Completely Crazy' 2 years ago
  204. 204
    'E: Comepletely Crazy 2' 2 years ago
  205. 205
    'E: Court Room' 2 years ago
  206. 206
    'E: Court Room 2' 2 years ago
  207. 207
    'E: Ghost' 2 years ago
  208. 208
    'E: Ghost 2' 2 years ago
  209. 209
    'E: Ghost 3' 2 years ago
  210. 210
    'E: Doubt' 2 years ago
  211. 211
    'E: Doubt 2' 2 years ago
  212. 212
    'E: Doubt 3' 2 years ago
  213. 213
    'E: Observing' 2 years ago
  214. 214
    'E: Revealed' 2 years ago
  215. 215
    'E: Attacked' 2 years ago
  216. 216
    'E: Attacked 2' 2 years ago
  217. 217
    'E: Plan' 2 years ago
  218. 218
    'E: Plan 2' 2 years ago
  219. 219
    'E: Plan 3' 2 years ago
  220. 220
    'E: Plan 4' 2 years ago
  221. 221
    'E: Plan 5' 2 years ago
  222. 222
    'E: Escape' 2 years ago
  223. 223
    'E: Escape 2' 2 years ago
  224. 224
    'E: Pitiful' 2 years ago
  225. 225
    'E: Voices' 2 years ago
  226. 226
    'Voices 2' 2 years ago
  227. 227
    'E: Confusion' 2 years ago
  228. 228
    'E: Observe' 2 years ago
  229. 229
    'E: Hung' 2 years ago
  230. 230
    'E: Hung 2' 2 years ago
  231. 231
    'E: Hung 3' 2 years ago
  232. 232
    'E: Happy?' 2 years ago
  233. 233
    'E: Come back' 2 years ago
  234. 234
    'E: Come Back 2' 2 years ago
  235. 235
    'E: Change' 2 years ago
  236. 236
    'E: Change 2' 2 years ago
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