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Bittersweet Life

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作者: ElJaneDM

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SHE

Who had fair and glowing skin... Thick, long, and shiny black wavy hair... A pair of aqua-colored, sparkling eyes. And the one who'd been loved by elders, admired by children, and the pride of the family.

SHE is my sister...

My sister, who had everything that I don't, who got all that I want and received all that I've longed for.

I hate her, but I want to be like her.

Despite being a boy, I strived to be an equal to her. I've grown my hair and taken good care of my skin. I achieved the perfect replica of her.

But just being only a copycat has never been enough.
I lived as a living picture of her image and became the scenery of my family who misses her. I'm still not equal.

Then one day, no one saw it coming...

A circumstance occurred that twisted the cycle of our world which I did not expect would change everything that we used to and opened the door to the next chapter of my bittersweet life.

The circumstance that crossed my path to the girl I never thought would play a huge part in my life...

That one girl who spoiled me with attention and filled my empty existence with genuine affection.

But... In just a blink of an eye, death took her from me.

Her sudden death caused dubiety to all of us...

Suicidal? No... Someone surely murdered her...

But... Our only question is...
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Who?

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Junever_Daylo

What an exciting chapters! It is so intense. I really love it! This story is worthwhile.. I hope you keep updating it and don't lose the spice of every chapters.. Goodluck..

3yr 6

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Dankie123

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3yr 5

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LV 4

Braiden_Hawkins_5082

It amazing im not kidding about it i’m normally not a big fan of these types of books but this book is perfect all I needs now is the rest of The chapter of the book

3yr 4

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JJ_Prakoso

Here is my thought about this novel based on what I have read so far, Character: I do really like the characters due to they have different personalities from one another. Tristan and Trish as a character are very decent, especially they are distinct with another when comes to reacting on the situation. Another thing I like is the author creates a dialogue as if they are talking like a real human being on the character interaction and I appreciate that effort. World-Building: So far the world-building is quite fine for now or I can say it's alright. But, I believe the author can further more the world-building within the story or even the surroundings. Writing: Even though the writing is pretty smooth and can feel the flow, but there are also minor flaws. Such flaws are grammar placement and it's pretty small and easy to be fixed. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I would love to see more chapters. Thank you and keep up the good work!!

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3yr 3

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Mel_Aniv

The author has a great knack for details and narration. A big plus too at the plot and the character dialogues and interactions. The characters were very realistic and act life-like. This got potential I must say and the author will improve more in the future. I am not the best reviewer but I tried to point out things that may help the author. And I hope that It did help 🙏 You got my support! 👍

2yr 2

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Karan_Mewada

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LV 3

Bad_Totodile

It's actually very complicated and sweet, the story seems real and has a life. The writing is also good and clean, so easy to understand. I hope the author never lose hope in writing and in life. keep on fighting/writing. Gambaree

3yr 1

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Draejon

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3yr 1

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LV 10

Madyan_wani

The synopsisis quite intriguing..for one moment i felt it...idk how ..The author depicts the scenario the best way as it si. I love the characters, background and the story development. Hope it continues further..Good luck to author!!! Fighting

3yr 1

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LV 2

rzasrsna

This is intriguing and satisfying to read! I got hooked by the chapter one! Pity for trish I hope she will be fine and nothing worse will happen! and I hope tristan will play his part and to not disappoint people around him special his sister!.😸 after all this novel is promising and I coudn't wait to read the other chapters. keep it up and goodluck to your journey as an author.😻

3yr 1

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LV 3

callmeotooosan

Acting like a proxy for his sister and hmmmmmm possible crossdressing (was there any---i dropped a review after reading chapter 2----ah ah I had to find out). Author-nim, the plot incited me to read another chapter, as I'm always a sucker on pretend-identity type of novels, and it didn't disappoint as it was to .my expectations. The occasional grammar mistakes are bearable, not to the point that it would make one unable to read it so it's a plus. All in all, I love your wooooork!! (sorry for shipping Tristan and Whif----)

3yr 1

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_lixiethy

I read the chapter 1 before dropping a review but... I wonder what will happen to Tristan now that he had to be a proxy and act like her twin sister. This is interesting! I never knew the first chapter will make me read all of if up to the recent. Thank you for your hard work, Author!

3yr 1

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caichii

reading the synopsis, I already knew that the plot would be something really heart touching. this story could relate to many people out there, teens alike who would do anything just to be appreciated. I myself is one. overall, this is an amazing book. beautifully written too! I love your writing style. keep up the good job!

3yr 1

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LV 3

ElJaneDM

Hey, Good day readers. I am the author of this novel. I used the review section to announce this, I don't know if this is appropriate. I just want to apologize for some messed up and rambled chapters that are kinda confusing. I am going to have a massive edit of this novel starting in December. I hope you will give me some time to make this a better one. Thank you 😇

2yr

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LV 11

supporthero

Here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: The most obvious reason here is the shifting tenses that most authors have problems dealing with. I mean, I know it is hard to keep the tenses in uniform without making the novel sounds really awkward. Next thing is the ellipses. Chill with the ellipses, dear author. I think in every sentence that you drop there is like an ellipsis. But other than that, there is nothing more. SoU: 4/5 Reason: Still waiting for the next update, ngl. SD: 4/5 Reason: Great story development. But I need more squeeze and a little of background for the characters. CD: 4/5 Reason: I love the characters. But I think they need a clearer image of what they look like or what they are in the novel. Some characters were getting out of their own role. WB: 5/5 It was an outstanding book. Good world background and yeah, that thing do happens sometimes. Overall: 4.2/5 Reason: I have not much to say for this novel. The author clearly knows what she is doing other than the problem with the shifting tenses and the usage of the ellipsis.

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2yr

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LV 3

ElJaneDM

Hiii Everyoneeee! I am the author of this novel and of course, I am supporting my own work! I will do my really best to update this as frequently as I can despite my busyness... So please, bear with me... Hopefully, you'll support my piece and be part of my MC's journey till the end! Thank you so much! Love you all😍

3yr

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