The First Soul (40k)

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Knights_Errant

You are quite talented at writing guardsman.Hmm? what's this? you are dropping the fic? That's understandabl... stand against that wall guardsman. *bang*

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Daz_Art

all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.

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Yuna_sama

Such a lovely change of pace compared to other 40k fanfics, I love it… I hope it keeps going. Definitely not what I was expecting from 40k lol.

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PelerinliKeltos

I'm extremely curious to see the main character's relationship with the Emperor of mankind.

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Danny_Butts

why why must this be so God dang GOOD and so God dang SHORT !!! haha . . . sigh I suppose that's the trade off for both high quality chapters and daily updates huh 10 out of 10 do recommend

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Holy_Sheep

a great start to the story hope you continue it and don't drop it .....................................................................................

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Dominic_Zibuda

This is probably the best book this month, and maybe these last few months. I hope it gets all the recognition it deserves.

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ManasCiel

I don’t know much about the 40k universe but I found this enjoyable to read! Also the people complaining about the mc not being the mc are dumber than the korks, from what little I know about 40k, it is big with lots going on, so the author is setting up the world while also developing the characters of those he will use. Definitely worth a read! A try atleast!

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moh999

this is an absolute gem, I loved reading every word of it, it's so rare to have a warhammer fiction on this app, let alone one so good, extra points for having zero romance, another point for sticking to the Lore as much as possible even if the war in heaven was never discussed as intensively as you have done, so in short.. Love It and Totally recommended

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Freelancerok

Study the history of warhammer 40k. And if you're writing fan fiction, then spend more time with your main character!

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Dr_Void

has a great start continue as you are going and it will become great man!

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Jean_Ricardo

Very good......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Mr_Macaw

Best fanfic of Warhammer 40K for me, Don't drop please.........................................................................................................

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ImWatchingYou

Is this Warhammer???????¿...........................…...................... .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,

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Daoist_david

this is the best 40k fanfic (probably). Best fic

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_DEKIM_

I don't say this often but this work has no flaws. I'm not saying it's perfect. But it has no flaws✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

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CLO2610

This is good i need more................

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_VOIDLESS_

The progression of the story is mid not to fast not to slow just have the right pace to it. I can wait and see what you vision for the future is.

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Daoist632842

I like how the story is progressing thus far.I would like see how c'tan are created and evolution of the universe.keep up the good work 👏.