RWBY: The Phantom of Remnant

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FireIsMyBlood

So far i love your story abd how it is progressing and how you devilping the character. I like how your going to give him memories of alternate versions of himself from different animes

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Nixolas_Zinn

It could be better, early on there's unique ideas, but this is that typical, I'm op and a massive chad type story, there are various oc's which have balanced semblances and the like, and like most op rwby fan fics, the mc has 2 semblances at the level of 3.5 dnd in versatility. Long story short, it's the standard op harem novel that gets stale real~ fast. Whilst there's interesting ideas, updates are slow, the content is lackluster and filled with clichés and common tropes, and the general content is similar to various anime and books that it's boring to read. I wanted to drop this book the moment I saw naruto in the first few chapters, thinking it was going to be exactly the same as 5 other fanfictions, but honestly it was an even bigger let down than if it was. The author uses a anime system for his semblance, which 3 star rating for that alone, but then they combine a harem system..... haaa, yeah tbh it's a slog and boring to read. Grammar is good, but the content for a monthly updating story is a complete let down tldr: Novel's boring, slow updates for lackluster content. Some originality, but to little to keep the content feeling fresh. If you like trashy op-mc harem novels then welcome, otherwise avoid it

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DDax

0/10.wasted time ............................ .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Undead_Shinobi

I know where this is going, so pick this up & have a read you will not be disappointed. A lot of badasses to come, so sit back & enjoy the ride.

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NoirZero11

✌😬👍🏻............................ 🖐😎🤙............................................ Very nice still wondering how will the teams will turn out And Merry Christmas 🎉

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MangaxNovel

This is better than the rest of all the RWBY fanfiction I have read.Please give us more. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Oppai_Dragon_3633

This is how you do a RWBY FANFICTION ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Glace

The story is great and i love how it just flows, i told many before but myself who made RWBY novels belive that everyone who makes a RWBY novel is great the idea is awesome, so to me, it’s better then my own, also updates more then me 😅, keep up the great work.

LV 15

Zeferath

Start to finish didn't even take a day. Just kept reading so to you author I beg of you to not drop this story as I'm obsessed with your story. Nothing bad can be said about this story. All that read this I bid you to support the author.

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zumokuta_

Its amazing so far hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjaiudhebwiwushdeoehebewjueheneishdbejs7shebeksishsneushe Just did that to reach 140 letters

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JOKER_JAY

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work

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DaoistZIJh4p

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epicabyss

excellent work plz keep it up I ended up reading the whole thing in only 2 days. since I couldn't put it down. I look forward to more chaps and how far you're going with this. excellent workmanship. Believe it!!

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BLANCK

Really love the story. The mc isn’t too op nor is he a pu@@y and the development is really great. Try it, you won’t regret it- (I hope you don’t cause it emerald is good).

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D21

........................................................................ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hey, I really liked this story, keep up the good work!☺☺☺

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Kemji

The story is quiet interesting and the development is great the author has to keep our interest by updating more often I know it's not easy but he can try and not keep us hanging so much. I personally want to see this story go far.

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Bloodriot123

I thoroughly enjoy reading this story, it has everything I look for in a MC and in the heroines each with their own personalities. But I see that the Author has not updated in a couple years that is why I will be asking for more chapters in the latest chapter and giving all my spirit stone so other have a chance to reading this amazing story.

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WhiteWarlock

If I had to summarize this in one word...I wouldn't be able yo find said word, for this fan fiction is just leagues above others to the point that a single word isn't good enough to describe it. From the moment I started reading to now, thus story has always had me on the edge of my seat while reading it. From dramatic moments like when emerald was kidnapped, yo these hilarious moments with crow, and how Magna always manages to flex on others while still being new and original everytime he does, the story gives off an exhilarating feeling, making me get butterflies in my stomach. The characters dialogues are refreshing while still keeping the original personalities of every RWBY character, and the OCs are all well thought out and have amazing character building. Magna and his powers are shaped in such a way that it makes you see him as Op but also think of him as restricted and very hardworking as his powers have drawbacks which are also pluses. Honestly, there is too much to say about this story and its great points, but I will stop with the review and tell you to simply read the story, for you will not regret it, and also thank the ingenious author for this original and great take on RWBY fan fiction and crossovers. My personal favorites were the AOT, Danny Phantom, The Seven Deadly Sins, and One Piece crossovers with Magnas power. Once again, thank you, and keep up the amazing work, I am patiently waiting for another great chapter by you whenever it comes out.

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Logan_Sullivan

I really like this story so i hope it keeps going till the end by the way it would be awsome to have a dante or vergil cluster in the future

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Daryl_Robinson

I love the fanfic but I still don't get the whole 1 to 2 month wait between chapters 😕 but eather way I would like you to continue with this.