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A book on hiatus...or maybe not!

This an attempt at the genre of Eastern fantasy by the author, portraying the story of dual protagonists, Zeph(the one who is white Blaze) and his counterpart Sauren, engaging through the senseless world where powers and supernatural are just everyday things to encounter and people killing people without any recuperation is the normalised thing. In short, it is a world where the strong rule over the weak and the step to becoming strong is churning their body up to light up their potential of the body. Set in an ancient yet magical fantasy setting, White Blaze is an author's first writing experience so you can see and feel the development of the quality of writing as the chapter progresses.

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Deus_Mundum

This book is a great find, character don't feel like they are forced to do stupid things for the sake of making the mc look good . The fact that there are multiple side stories of other main characters instead of switching POV every few chapters make them feel like they have their own lives outside that of the mc . And also author please answer this, what happened to his grandfather's katana, did he sell it or is it stored somewhere .

3yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
darlingnellyy

This is a very exciting read, and it was very addicting to keep reading. The author did an amazing job with this story, and I could tell they worked very hard, so I really suggest reading this story

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TofSpades

What an underrated story! Absolutely amazing. Its got above 50 chapters and the view count is surprisingly low. This book needs more recognition, like can we just talk about that banging first chapter!! Great work Author!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Khawla_Amini

I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
reibei
LV 15 Badge

The grammar makes the book borderline unreadable and takes away from the story. The story in itself seemed interesting but I can't make it past the second chapter

3yr
ดู 8 การตอบกลับ
phoenixhyperion

With my review, you'll have ten. Then you can get your overall rating. Showing support here author! You have a very interesting plot in mind. With the old man rescuing and training the kid, you created a tinge of mystery with the boy's identity. I'm still in the initial chapters, and I'm looking forward for more. Great job with this author! Keep up the good work!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Copper_mask

shameless review by author. Hello guys this novel is weak to strong mc journey novel. But don't worry not only we have mc but also other characters with their own background and story. You have to check one this out if you are fan of adventure and action series. I have given myself little less than 5 stars because honestly there are some typos in first 20 some chapters but this doesn't make any effect on your reading experience. Please give it a try and read till end to enjoy the story...... last but most important thing ..... HAPPY Reading:)

4yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Bitter_sweet

I like this book, it’s unique but still in a popular genre that is popular nowadays. I like the story development and the characters are likable.

4yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
preet_0
LV 14 Badge

I liked at first but now dropped you are giving more chapters to side characters than zaph and after making his face bad looking i lost all Intrest in story You are not Giving anything to MC of worth watching him 1= he is Bad fighter 2= he don’t even have a body due to curse 3=before he had above average face but Now you even made him Ugly 4=more than him we got the story about his friends He made in guild Atleast give him something So we can look forward to watch him I really liked if he at least had his face good looking but you made even that worse

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Cvpro
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Have just started and the quality of writing is very poor. Writing upfront in intro or comments that there are some issues with grammar is not enough. Writers need to be serious about their work and just having imagination is not good enough. Some tips: 1. Review your work multiple times before you post it. You will correct most of the issues yourself. This is especially for those who claim to be non native speakers/ writers of the language but can still decently frame the sentences. 2. Get an editor if you are lazy.

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
dragonslayernjd

Don't know whether the people that wrote reviews on this novel have very low standards, or if they have never read an actual good book. Writing Quality The writing quality in this book is terrible. So many gramatical errors that it actually confuses me how the author didn't find anything wrong with it when he proofread it (hopefully he did). The writing quality makes it seem like the author doesn't care enough to actually fix them. Stability of Updates No problems here. Story development I mean, the story development in this novel is pretty good. I like the pacing of the story and that it is not too fast paced nor too slow. Character Design I don't have any complaints with this section either, I think the characters are well written and have their own personalites and goals. World backround Nothing special in this category, the world isn't described well, it's the epitomy of "average". Some advice for the author in this category, try to describe the mc's surroundings more. It just feels like you couldn't care less about giving us a world that we can imagine. Conclusion Below average. Those two words sums up everything I think of this novel. Don't get me wrong, I am not intending on bashing the author, but c'mon dude, you could atleast make it seem like you care about your work. There's so many grammatical errors where it seems like it was written by a fifth grader. I don't get how there are so many 5 star reviews on this novel, this is nowhere near perfect, very far from it actually. But whatever floats your boat I guess.

3yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
DeflectingBlade

First of all I really like your book. Even tough english isn’t my strong point and m not qualified enough to criticize you But i’ll really appreciate it if you could Do some proof-reading ..

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3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Fallen_Asora

The yakshas (Sanskrit: यक्ष yakṣa; Pali: yakkha) are a broad class of nature-spirits, usually benevolent, but sometimes mischievous or capricious, connected with water, fertility, trees, the forest, treasure and wilderness

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3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Crystillia

Im going to say it....... this is good, reql good. Well done for overcoming the language barrier author. When you have time, go back to old episodes and recorrect. The potential here is spectacular.

4yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
GoneSoSoon

This is a genuinely mind-grasping story! For anyone wondering they should read this or not, I can truly say that I've loved touching upon this.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Alex_Itsios

Check out this novel! I really loved it! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DarkseidEquation

The battle system of this story is very unique and it is great seeing the progression of the Zeph's character but also his abilities which increases interest in the book.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aeipathy_02

Wow! The narratives for this one is clear and easy to read. The MC has a unique persona the same with the other characters that's make them alive and enjoyable to read. The world background is written well. Overall this story is a great read plus it already has 70 plus chapters which is great for binge reading. Great Work author!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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Chapter 305: Skill no longer forbidden 3 years ago

จำนวน 1 : Volume 1

  1. 1
    Prologue 4 years ago
  2. 2
    Solid Base 4 years ago
  3. 3
    (Only)New Technique 4 years ago
  4. 4
    Its White Blaze 4 years ago
  5. 5
    Sparring(Beating?) 4 years ago
  6. 6
    Last Sunset -1 4 years ago
  7. 7
    Last Sunset-2 4 years ago
  8. 8
    Travel 4 years ago
  9. 9
    Gephyr 4 years ago
  10. 10
    Misson? 4 years ago
  11. 11
    Off to Mission 4 years ago
  12. 12
    Violetfiend Ape 4 years ago
  13. 13
    Rook Village 4 years ago
  14. 14
    Shock! 4 years ago
  15. 15
    Hard Battle 4 years ago
  16. 16
    Sauren's Resolve 4 years ago
  17. 17
    C rank Mercenary 4 years ago
  18. 18
    Representative 4 years ago
  19. 19
    Stand off 4 years ago
  20. 20
    Gathering of Heroes 4 years ago
  21. 21
    Match one- Zeph vs Tailor 4 years ago
  22. 22
    Sauren's First technique- falling meteorites 4 years ago
  23. 23
    Change in Competition 4 years ago
  24. 24
    Chance meeting 4 years ago
  25. 25
    Challenge-Polar 4 years ago
  26. 26
    Challenge-Issekan 4 years ago
  27. 27
    Last 4 standing 4 years ago
  28. 28
    4 Finalist 4 years ago
  29. 29
    Final Rank 4 years ago
  30. 30
    Technique 4 years ago
  31. 31
    To Help or not? 4 years ago
  32. 32
    Spirit Contract 4 years ago
  33. 33
    Efforts 4 years ago
  34. 34
    End? 4 years ago
  35. 35
    Lady's might 4 years ago
  36. 36
    To Gephyr 4 years ago
  37. 37
    Exhibition 4 years ago
  38. 38
    At the Venue 4 years ago
  39. 39
    Show case -Artifacts 4 years ago
  40. 40
    Mask 4 years ago
  41. 41
    Night Feast 4 years ago
  42. 42
    Match 4 years ago
  43. 43
    A chance from Bushin 4 years ago
  44. 44
    Decesion 4 years ago
  45. 45
    Space Break 4 years ago
  46. 46
    Emergency commission 4 years ago
  47. 47
    Serpent Pearl? 4 years ago
  48. 48
    Serpent Queen Anastasia 4 years ago
  49. 49
    The Naaga tribe 4 years ago
  50. 50
    Favor to be repaid in future 4 years ago
  51. 51
    Meeting Test 4 years ago
  52. 52
    The Oda 's Relic 4 years ago
  53. 53
    Demon Communions 4 years ago
  54. 54
    Crulior 4 years ago
  55. 55
    Parting Ways 4 years ago
  56. 56
    On Journey 4 years ago
  57. 57
    On Journey (2) 4 years ago
  58. 58
    Aries Clan warriors 4 years ago
  59. 59
    Confrontation 4 years ago
  60. 60
    Death 4 years ago
  61. 61
    Advice 4 years ago
  62. 62
    Trade Cavaran 4 years ago
  63. 63
    In the Capital 4 years ago
  64. 64
    Adonis 4 years ago
  65. 65
    Lost Arm 4 years ago
  66. 66
    Seamus 's Over limit 4 years ago
  67. 67
    Student or Disciple 4 years ago
  68. 68
    First lesson! 4 years ago
  69. 69
    On the other side 4 years ago
  70. 70
    Nether flames Contract 4 years ago
  71. 71
    Raiken 's trial 4 years ago
  72. 72
    Finals - Group battle 4 years ago
  73. 73
    Post Trauma Seamus 4 years ago
  74. 74
    Chains of Hydra -unleashed 4 years ago
  75. 75
    Welcome to Darkness 4 years ago
  76. 76
    To Learn from Assassin 4 years ago
  77. 77
    Rose Guild 4 years ago
  78. 78
    Anger 4 years ago
  79. 79
    Summoning 4 years ago
  80. 80
    Anax 4 years ago
  81. 81
    Target 4 years ago

จำนวน 2 : Volume 2

  1. 82
    Oni 4 years ago
  2. 83
    Back to the Living World 4 years ago
  3. 84
    Future of Demons 4 years ago
  4. 85
    Set off 3 years ago
  5. 86
    Ruin unearthed 3 years ago
  6. 87
    Trapped 3 years ago
  7. 88
    Survival 3 years ago
  8. 89
    Bone hide Centiverm 3 years ago
  9. 90
    Lightning Odonos 3 years ago
  10. 91
    Escape 3 years ago
  11. 92
    Hunting Expedition 3 years ago
  12. 93
    Tenji-Nuve-Sauren 3 years ago
  13. 94
    A well-spent Night 3 years ago
  14. 95
    Ranzaki-city of gold 3 years ago
  15. 96
    The Black Market 3 years ago
  16. 97
    Ensis Clan (Infiltration) 3 years ago
  17. 98
    Success 3 years ago
  18. 99
    Teacher to the Girls 3 years ago
  19. 100
    Team Recruitment 3 years ago
  20. 101
    Task- To Hunt Noxcella 3 years ago
  21. 102
    Dark Forest 3 years ago
  22. 103
    Silence ! 3 years ago
  23. 104
    Unknown Creature 3 years ago
  24. 105
    Nether Flames 3 years ago
  25. 106
    Danger 3 years ago
  26. 107
    The Red Eye Nightmare 3 years ago
  27. 108
    Dream World 3 years ago
  28. 109
    Task Finished 3 years ago
  29. 110
    Gains from the Night 3 years ago
  30. 111
    Spar with Rain Style SwordArt 3 years ago
  31. 112
    In the City 3 years ago
  32. 113
    Massacre 3 years ago
  33. 114
    Asura vs Black Raven 3 years ago
  34. 115
    Thunder Light Cloak 3 years ago
  35. 116
    Mosul-Black Raven 3 years ago
  36. 117
    Devils of Shadows 3 years ago
  37. 118
    A Request to Wraith 3 years ago
  38. 119
    Drifting in the Night 3 years ago
  39. 120
    Purge of Ranzaki 3 years ago
  40. 121
    Ambush 3 years ago
  41. 122
    Strategy 3 years ago
  42. 123
    Strength Reveal 3 years ago
  43. 124
    Meaning of Army 3 years ago
  44. 125
    The Butcher Regiment 3 years ago
  45. 126
    Meeting in the late night 3 years ago
  46. 127
    Meet up 3 years ago
  47. 128
    Dangers of Expedition 3 years ago
  48. 129
    Journey to Hunting lands 3 years ago
  49. 130
    Raven Fledgling 3 years ago
  50. 131
    Flute Spirit 3 years ago
  51. 132
    The fight of Tuphor 3 years ago
  52. 133
    Salient Promotion 3 years ago
  53. 134
    Small Errand 3 years ago
  54. 135
    Gift from Anax 3 years ago
  55. 136
    The Ambushers 3 years ago
  56. 137
    A forest of trees ? 3 years ago
  57. 138
    Inferno 3 years ago
  58. 139
    Assistance 3 years ago
  59. 140
    Fateful meeting 3 years ago
  60. 141
    Betrayal 3 years ago
  61. 142
    Exousia and Zeph 3 years ago
  62. 143
    Separating to their Paths 3 years ago
  63. 144
    Battle with Oneself 3 years ago
  64. 145
    Self confidence 3 years ago
  65. 146
    Surprised 3 years ago
  66. 147
    Challenge(1) 3 years ago
  67. 148
    Challenge(2) 3 years ago
  68. 149
    Challenge Completed 3 years ago
  69. 150
    Demon's Surgical Strike 3 years ago
  70. 151
    Calm and Intense Duo 3 years ago
  71. 152
    Declaration of War 3 years ago
  72. 153
    Test of Morality 3 years ago
  73. 154
    Warrior Hunting 3 years ago
  74. 155
    Seed from the Demi-Human war 3 years ago
  75. 156
    Desperate Fight 3 years ago
  76. 157
    Solok- The Thrasher 3 years ago
  77. 158
    Collective Efforts 3 years ago
  78. 159
    Werewolf Summoning 3 years ago
  79. 160
    Domination 3 years ago
  80. 161
    Just in Time 3 years ago
  81. 162
    Favor Recalled 3 years ago
  82. 163
    Sachem 3 years ago
  83. 164
    Raiken's Training 3 years ago
  84. 165
    Summon to The Sorcerers 3 years ago
  85. 166
    Hunting Expedition - Real Test 3 years ago
  86. 167
    Cold Trail Mission 3 years ago
  87. 168
    Game of Patience 3 years ago
  88. 169
    The Arachnid Trap 3 years ago
  89. 170
    Quake - Again? 3 years ago
  90. 171
    The Crop Prison 3 years ago
  91. 172
    Ilios Clan Head 3 years ago
  92. 173
    A Father's Keepsake 3 years ago
  93. 174
    Survivors 3 years ago
  94. 175
    Belief 3 years ago
  95. 176
    Awakened Will 3 years ago
  96. 177
    Red flame Crystals 3 years ago
  97. 178
    Gephyr's struggles 3 years ago
  98. 179
    Meeting the Queen 3 years ago
  99. 180
    Confrontation 3 years ago
  100. 181
    Hard work or Secret Art 3 years ago
  101. 182
    The Compromise 3 years ago
  102. 183
    Crystal Found 3 years ago
  103. 184
    Dilemma of Decisions 3 years ago
  104. 185
    The River Awakens 3 years ago
  105. 186
    The Battle of Giants 3 years ago
  106. 187
    Common Enemy 3 years ago
  107. 188
    Vulkab Region 3 years ago
  108. 189
    Forbidden Preparation 3 years ago
  109. 190
    New Couple 3 years ago
  110. 191
    Crazy Recruits 3 years ago
  111. 192
    War on doorsteps 3 years ago
  112. 193
    Preposterous Boast 3 years ago
  113. 194
    Interrogation 3 years ago
  114. 195
    Gamble 3 years ago
  115. 196
    Sneaking into Kings chamber 3 years ago
  116. 197
    Failure 3 years ago
  117. 198
    No regrets... 3 years ago
  118. 199
    Last Power up 3 years ago
  119. 200
    Ineffable Destiny 3 years ago
  120. 201
    Acceptance 3 years ago
  121. 202
    To take immediate offence 3 years ago
  122. 203
    Able Queen? 3 years ago
  123. 204
    It's Because who I am 3 years ago
  124. 205
    Mind-Altering Insight 3 years ago
  125. 206
    Overcome 3 years ago
  126. 207
    Paranoia 3 years ago
  127. 208
    Gathering 3 years ago
  128. 209
    Together in it 3 years ago
  129. 210
    Battle while outnumbered 3 years ago
  130. 211
    Isley vs Demons 3 years ago
  131. 212
    CounterAttack 3 years ago
  132. 213
    Chaos Brewing 3 years ago
  133. 214
    Caught Offgurad 3 years ago
  134. 215
    Reversal 3 years ago
  135. 216
    Unexpected 3 years ago
  136. 217
    Grabbing opportunity 3 years ago
  137. 218
    Surprise 3 years ago
  138. 219
    Beast of Air- Griffin 3 years ago
  139. 220
    To finish the battle 3 years ago
  140. 221
    Arrival of Threat 3 years ago
  141. 222
    Hope of Departed 3 years ago
  142. 223
    Back to Living 3 years ago
  143. 224
    Frenzy of Rage 3 years ago
  144. 225
    Killing (1) 3 years ago
  145. 226
    Killing (2) 3 years ago
  146. 227
    Killing (3) 3 years ago
  147. 228
    Killing (4) 3 years ago
  148. 229
    One More Chance 3 years ago
  149. 230
    Introspection 3 years ago
  150. 231
    Nightmare 3 years ago
  151. 232
    Neutral Affinity 3 years ago
  152. 233
    White Blaze 3 years ago
  153. 234
    Serpent Blade 3 years ago
  154. 235
    Loyalty 3 years ago
  155. 236
    Trouble 3 years ago
  156. 237
    Failed Queen 3 years ago
  157. 238
    Avenge 3 years ago
  158. 239
    Assistance or walking into trouble! 3 years ago
  159. 240
    Pearl Explosion 3 years ago
  160. 241
    Resonance 3 years ago
  161. 242
    Visit 3 years ago
  162. 243
    Vermillion Heir 3 years ago
  163. 244
    Challenge for fight 3 years ago
  164. 245
    Holding back 3 years ago
  165. 246
    Fire Dragon 3 years ago
  166. 247
    Demon Horde 3 years ago
  167. 248
    Four eyed Crulior 3 years ago
  168. 249
    Nether Flame Cloak 3 years ago
  169. 250
    Kwastir vs Zeph 3 years ago
  170. 251
    Will to Kill 3 years ago
  171. 252
    Divine Punishment 3 years ago
  172. 253
    Struggle 3 years ago
  173. 254
    White Flames 3 years ago
  174. 255
    Trying to run 3 years ago
  175. 256
    Ajana level 3 years ago
  176. 257
    End-1 3 years ago
  177. 258
    Possession 3 years ago
  178. 259
    Defeating Crulior 3 years ago
  179. 260
    Blood Forbidden Art 3 years ago
  180. 261
    Sauren's back 3 years ago
  181. 262
    End-2 3 years ago
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