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The Advent of Spirits

Anime & Comics 133 ตอน 2.2M จำนวนคนดู
นักเขียน: Spirits_everywhere

4.68 (56 เรตติ้ง)

อ่าน
เกี่ยวกับ สารบัญ

เรื่องย่อ

"Where am I"?

"Hey, you're finally awake. Come, let's play"

"Who am I"?

"Ehhh, Shido, you had forgotten everything already?"

"What is happening to me?"

"I don't know. I just woke up as well."

A young boy could be seen wandering around the streets, not knowing anything about himself. Except the fact that he wields powers, quirks, as society called them and how to wield them.

He had no recollection of his family, friends, names. The only thing he has was a puppet on his left hand that seemed to have a life on its, no his own.

Follow his journey on discovering who he was.

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Volume 1: Hero or Villain (MHA/BNHA/My hero Academia)
Volume 2: E***** and C********* ()
Volume 3: W**-**** e** ()
Volume 4: M**** and K****** ()
Volume 5: S************ ()
Volume 6: S****** and D**** ()
Volume 7: A******** in the S** ()
Volume 8: M******* and L****-** ()
Volume 9: F***** ()
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Disclaimer: The pictures were found on internet and I took the liberty to edit them a little. The original pictures does not belong to me, and so are the contents of the original manga, anime, and light novels. They all belong to their respective creators and owners, and only the main character is my creation.

Parental Guidance Suggested
  1. Hajiri
    Hajiri ให้ความสนใจ 187
  2. Spirits_everywhere
    Spirits_everywhere ให้ความสนใจ 95
  3. TheSleepySilverW
    TheSleepySilverW ให้ความสนใจ 49

สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์

Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

56รีวิว

4.68

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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เขียนรีวิว
Kokushibou

Me, when i see the fifth My Hero Academia ff in 1 week's................................................................................../:

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4yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
DaoistNineCircles

I see you asking why your novel doesn't get a lot of attention. As someone who has read a lot of fanfics, both popular and unpopular, perhaps I can tell you why. The first turn off is the main character. He's pretty.. one-dimensional. I just don't feel any depth. Happy go lucky, amnesia, misses the "warmth" of a family, etc etc. If you want to write this type of character, try OC-drama, not fanfiction. He's pretty morally grey I'd say, but all of the "evil" things you say he does such as murdering and slaughtering gangs are talked about solely in past tense, we're only told he does these things and not shown him doing these things. To me, at this point in the story at least, he just seems like a plot device instead of a character. I don't particularly know why you've decided to shift the focus of this story onto other characters, but the results show, even you yourself admitted it was a bad move making him a teacher. In my opinion, you shouldn't have made him OP. A more ideal scenario is him knowing a little about his powers, but him having to train in order to unlock them. That could have been interesting as we could actually see him struggle and grow, but if you really think about these past 70 or so chapters, nothing really happened. I mean, there was a dream (flashback?) of some sort and he became a bit more mature and silent but nothing else really happened towards him. He's just incredibly bland. I get it already. He isn't a hero, he's just doing it for "fun". No need to say it 30 times. If you hate the prospect of him being a hero so much, just make him a villain. Another thing is the.. err. romance? It was very quick and forced. I think there could have been a more dramatic encounter, and I feel as if Eri opened up to soon. It should have taken along time for them to trust each other, but I honestly cannot be bothered to stick around to see their relationship anymore. You already said you wouldn't be writing any R-18 because you're not 18 (so do you not watch or read hentai because you aren't 18? there's a lot of things you aren't supposed to do until your 18 but you probably do them so I see no problem with writing fictional lemon but you do you I guess). Eri has pretty much been reduced to a background character who the MC goes shopping with sometimes or something. Should have focused more on them instead of the main cast of BNHA. Furthermore, I'm really not a fan of child protagonists. You keep hyping up his "mysterious" identity, but it's getting tedious at this point. It just felt like nothing really happened at all in the entirety of the story. It just feels forced, bland, and congested. I think you should try writing OC instead of fanfiction, you have a very hard time developing the main characters of your own story and instead opt to develop the mcs of the anime your mc is in. Not my thing.

3yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Eom
LV 4 Badge

Things that writen here is from chapter comment, because of laziness I just copy pasted here. Before reading I hesitated a lot too, only reason I can give is I think readers think this is MHA only fanfic (because as long it is MHA fanfic I really wouldn't even look at it) only reason I try to read this fanfic because of Date a Live picture and powers you give it to MC. *Only advice I can give is take away My Hero Academia from title because this not MHA only fanfic. *Other is maybe before you going to next world 5-10 chapter earlier tell the what is next world is so maybe people that not interested in MHA can read for next world. And thanx for this novel there is really nothing bad I found about it because of binge reading I have still not give it review maybe copy past this lol.

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
interesting_knight

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yes

4yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Void_Queen

For those who like date a live here are some links to read some fan-fics that I find interesting: https://archiveofourown.org/works/24982576/chapters/60482917 https://archiveofourown.org/works/17061125/chapters/40116746 (lemon chapter from the fan-fic link above) https://archiveofourown.org/works/20236486/chapters/47959873 https://archiveofourown.org/works/18725896/chapters/44416288 https://archiveofourown.org/works/16978599/chapters/39906261 https://***.webnovel.com/book/elohim-the-spirit_18220992306898705

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
HOS
LV 4 Badge

Idk why this novel haven't entered the top rating but its definitely underrated and I like the author is meticulous to detail like giving yoshinon different forms while the characters feels like a characters not an AI yes man. Still reading to catch up with the latest update so I might edit this later.

3yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
interesting_knight

I just noticed that I already have two other reviews in this fanfic.. its weird. Most of the time you can only write one review. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Nafsu_geass28

Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge Is this a huge harem? harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
TimHQ
LV 14 Badge

It's good, I like the mystery about his powers and how he doesn't know about them, worldbuilding is well it's a fanfic, you actually hear something about how the characters think which is nice, story is going smootly, writing quality is good, few mistakes here and there but you read over it pretty easiliy

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
interesting_knight

I am once again writing a rating. My phone died so I couldn't read it. So here I am in another gadget. My laptop without a battery. Constantly charging, without power it dies

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
interesting_knight

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3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Be_n
LV 4 Badge

I dont know why this story isnt rated yet, but it is a gem. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ahmed_khaled

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4yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
SageofNothing

gggggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Flaashii

Well, the start was great and such but I will list at least the things I do not like and why I dropped it. 1. He is younger than the main cast 2. the love interest is Eri (he moved up the age to 7 for her mc is 8-9 or something like that) and that's it only those 2 things made me drop it, I just did not like those developments.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
3yr
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Captain_Deadpool

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SupDood
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This stuff is unique in every way because he wasn’t the same age the protagonist and he had Eri as a love interest also his powers are cool. Also I like MHA stuff jn general do 5 stars

3yr
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wisdomseeker

Hey. .. This much better than your other Fanfic no hard feelings, i just like a OP Protagonist. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
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รุ่นล่าสุด:
Chapter 133: Chapter 133: Leaving the World 3 years ago

จำนวน 1 : Hero or Villain

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Arrival in new world 4 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: How to earn money 4 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: The song that revitalises souls 4 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: Becoming famous 4 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: Collecting information 4 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Intense Fight (I) 4 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: Intense Fight (II) 4 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Wandering around the neighbourhood (I) 4 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: Wandering around the neighbourhood (II) 4 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Wandering around the neighbourhood (III) 4 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: First human friend 4 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: Meeting All Might (I) 4 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Meeting All Might (II) 4 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Meeting All Might (III) 4 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Healing All Might 4 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: Eri (I) 4 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Eri (II) 4 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Thoughts 4 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: Making an identity 4 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: Meeting (I) 4 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: Meeting (II) 4 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: Shopping and Fear 4 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: 5 Years later 4 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Successor? (I) 4 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Successor? (II) 4 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: First Official Meeting (I) 4 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: First Official Meeting (II) 4 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: Favour 4 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: The darkness within the country 4 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Training (I) 4 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: Training (II) 4 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Recommendation exams (I) 4 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: Recommendation exams (II) 4 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: Recommendation exams (III) 4 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Recommendation exams (IV) 4 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Recommendation exams (V) 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Public exams (I) 3 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Public exams (II) 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Is this a date? 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Quirk assessment test (I) 3 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: Quirk assessment test (II) 3 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: Quirk assessment test (III) 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Trial of battle (I) 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: Trial of battle (II) 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: Trial of battle (III) 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: Trial of battle (IV) 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: Trial of battle (V) 3 years ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48: Trial of battle (VI) 3 years ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49: Trial of Battle (VII) 3 years ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50: Discussion 3 years ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51: [No Title] 3 years ago
  52. 52
    Chapter 52: USJ (I) 3 years ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 53: USJ (II) 3 years ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 54: Aftermath 3 years ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 55: Talk 3 years ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 56: [Spoiler] 3 years ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 57: UA Sports Festival (I) 3 years ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 58: UA Sports Festival (II) 3 years ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 59: UA Sports Festival (III) 3 years ago
  60. 60
    Chapter 60: UA Sports Festival (IV) 3 years ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 61: UA Sports Festival (V) 3 years ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 62: UA Sports Festival (VI) 3 years ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 63: UA Sports Festival (VII) 3 years ago
  64. 64
    Chapter 64: Aftermath 3 years ago
  65. 65
    Chapter 65: Hero Names 3 years ago
  66. 66
    Chapter 66: Stain and [Spoiler] 3 years ago
  67. 67
    Chapter 67: Hosu Incident (I) 3 years ago
  68. 68
    Chapter 68: Hosu Incident (II) 3 years ago
  69. 69
    Chapter 69: Final Exams (I) 3 years ago
  70. 70
    Chapter 70: Final Exams (II) 3 years ago
  71. 71
    Chapter 71: Meeting with who? 3 years ago
  72. 72
    Chapter 72: Mini Confrontation 3 years ago
  73. 73
    Chapter 73: Beaten by children? 3 years ago
  74. 74
    Chapter 74: Training from Hell 3 years ago
  75. 75
    Chapter 75: Test your courage gone wrong 3 years ago
  76. 76
    Chapter 76: The Attack (I) 3 years ago
  77. 77
    Chapter 77: The Attack (II) 3 years ago
  78. 78
    Chapter 78: The Attack (III) 3 years ago
  79. 79
    Chapter 79: Fight (I) 3 years ago
  80. 80
    Chapter 80: Fight (II) and Revelation 3 years ago
  81. 81
    Chapter 81: All Might vs All for One 3 years ago
  82. 82
    Chapter 82: Conflict 3 years ago
  83. 83
    Chapter 83: Resolution and [Spoiler] 3 years ago
  84. 84
    Chapter 84: Unlocking Potential? 3 years ago
  85. 85
    Chapter 85: 1/6 Potential of Eri 3 years ago
  86. 86
    Chapter 86: Purifying Qlipha Crystal 3 years ago
  87. 87
    Chapter 87: Provisional Hero License Exam (I) 3 years ago
  88. 88
    Chapter 88: Provisional Hero License Exam (II) 3 years ago
  89. 89
    Chapter 89: Provisional Hero License Exam (III) 3 years ago
  90. 90
    Chapter 90: Provisional Hero License Exam (IV) 3 years ago
  91. 91
    Chapter 91: I have no title... 3 years ago
  92. 92
    Chapter 92: The Big Three 3 years ago
  93. 93
    Chapter 93: 2/6 Potential of Eri 3 years ago
  94. 94
    Chapter 94: Eri's Revenge (I) 3 years ago
  95. 95
    Chapter 95: Eri's Revenge (II) (Edited) 3 years ago
  96. 96
    Chapter 96: Eri's Revenge (III) 3 years ago
  97. 97
    Chapter 97: Eri's Revenge (IV) 3 years ago
  98. 98
    Chapter 98: Grandfather 3 years ago
  99. 99
    Chapter 99: I'm Willing! 3 years ago
  100. 100
    Chapter 100: Yo! 3 years ago
  101. 101
    Chapter 101: She's my Girlfriend 3 years ago
  102. 102
    Chapter 102: Tour Around School 3 years ago
  103. 103
    Chapter 103: Let's Pray 3 years ago
  104. 104
    Chapter 104: I'm in love with you 3 years ago
  105. 105
    Chapter 105: Gentle's and Brava's Love 3 years ago
  106. 106
    Chapter 106: How to Live 3 years ago
  107. 107
    Chapter 107: Japanese Hero Billboard Charts 3 years ago
  108. 108
    Chapter 108: Nomu Attack 3 years ago
  109. 109
    Chapter 109: Fighting Back 3 years ago
  110. 110
    Chapter 110: Aftermath 3 years ago
  111. 111
    Chapter 111: Joint Training 3 years ago
  112. 112
    Chapter 112: First Round of Battle 3 years ago
  113. 113
    Chapter 113: Second and Third Round of Battle 3 years ago
  114. 114
    Chapter 114: Fourth and Fifth Round of Battle (I) 3 years ago
  115. 115
    Chapter 115: Fifth Round of Battle (II) 3 years ago
  116. 116
    Chapter 116: Paranormal Liberation Front 3 years ago
  117. 117
    Chapter 117: Showbiz Lesson 3 years ago
  118. 118
    Chapter 118: Talk with Principal Mouse (Again) 3 years ago
  119. 119
    Chapter 119: Christmas Kiss 3 years ago
  120. 120
    Chapter 120: Recommendation 3 years ago
  121. 121
    Chapter 121: Hawks 3 years ago
  122. 122
    Chapter 122: Daily work with Endeavor 3 years ago
  123. 123
    Chapter 123: Practical Reports 3 years ago
  124. 124
    Chapter 124: Start of War 3 years ago
  125. 125
    Chapter 125: [Spoiler] 3 years ago
  126. 126
    Chapter 126: Music from Flute...? 3 years ago
  127. 127
    Chapter 127: How Scary... 3 years ago
  128. 128
    Chapter 128: Welcome to the World...of Spirits 3 years ago
  129. 129
    Chapter 129: Reversing Nomus 3 years ago
  130. 130
    Chapter 130: Bye, Eri 3 years ago
  131. 131
    Chapter 131: [Spoiler] 3 years ago
  132. 132
    Chapter 132: Green-haired Girl 3 years ago
  133. 133
    Chapter 133: Leaving the World 3 years ago

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