ZEN: Didunia Fiksi

LV 6

FAP_Master_

rekomendasi dunia kedua :AOT. Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

LV 4

Smoll_FuHua

Harem or Die H A R E M [img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp]

LV 4

Ikanasin_

CRAZY UP MIN HAHAHA [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 13

AntiWorldSystem

Yup ..... Fanfiction ..... But it's more like a copy with a slightly modified plot change ..... .. .. So i dont know if its good or not. .. .

LV 1

murdererlululul

MC jepang lainnya yang ingin memiliki kekuatan yang untuk melindungi haremnnya...membosankan.......ini sama saja dengan Beta MC dengan Mcyang tidak mau menerimanya

LV 4

Kirai

Kalau boleh tau update nya tiap hari apa?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

DaoistAMK8yW

it's a good fanfic I hope you will up this fanfic again and good luck for this fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 and up next chapter ok👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

LV 5

Just_ForFun

the story is good but the relationship with the girls feels forced and lacks originality and his relationship with Rinko was not at all necessary other than that the story was very entertaining and good . thank you for your work

LV 4

89Mouraai98

The story is boring, the same story as the anime, without changing, just switching Kirito into Zen 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 10

Mr_SlimePB

bullshit, if it was a real person with a real personality then he wouldn't have saved his childhood friend who stayed awayed from him. if his childhood friend didn't scorn him or hate him that he can see then it would have been fine and understandable. But if it is just based on speculation that his childhood friend didn't actually hate him or dislike him then it is definitely bullshit. Everything about how he acts is bullshit. this is practically bullshit written all over it. i mean, if he is a normal person then he wouldn't act anyway he did in the first chapter. for example, imagine you are in his place, your childhood friend stayed away from you and you think that he/she hates or dislikes you, well you probably won't think much of it, probably just mark him/her as someone that doesn't deserve to be seen as a friend or such(actually childhood friends doesn't mean a thing, it just means that it is your friend when you were a child) But then one day, you found your childhood friend(ex-childhood friend) about to fall(or die) but then you went to save him/her, that would be the part where i would call bullshit, that is one of my least favorite event in the story. the author probably didn't know how an ordinary person thinks in a situation, he should at least think what he would feel if he is in that situation. probably going with a cliche reason like the childhood friend doesn't hate mc or dislikes him, he/she can't interact or can't say goodbye to him cuz its urgent business. i just can't read these kinds of things, at first i thought this novel would be good because the starting is quite good, typical mc getting bullied then doesn't hate or dislikes the bullies. I dropped it after reading the first chapter, so if i missed anything then i blame the chapter.

LV 4

Fandi_Saja

crazzy up Thorrr 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

Ehila_Ramadani

Up up up up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 10

Cantik_Tangguh

Menarik! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

M_Rizki_Fauzan

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LV 4

Ikanasin_

Second World Black Clover kayanya bagus masih nyambung tema magic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]