Adapting to the Multiverse

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ValkyrBlack

Listen I like the update stability and the writing is awesome but the reason for 3.2 is that the MC has chosen to be reborn as a slave. It has turned me off so bad I have no clue what to tell you. I loved the first 2 chapters but then he made himself a slave then agreed to help a society of slavery supporting females just by looking at his mother because she was hot or she said he will be trained to be strong. See the entire society of this species in Star Wars don’t even see this as wrong. The MC knows that some other NightBrothers were killed due to minor things by NightSisters so why isn’t he a nervous wreck. The MC also made a ‘great’ decision of having 4 arms and being super strong in the force as if he couldn’t stand out enough as a male in a society that enslaves them. Every single Sister will be out there to enslave him, f*ck him, torture him then kill him just for the opportunity to brag that she killed a mutated male slave. Every society has trash entitled brats at the top who can do anything with power, this is not different. He can’t do anything without his mother’s supervision the same mother who wants her son as a slave. No matter how much the word ‘Champion’ is used he is still a slave! See you can’t do anything about this society as it is cannon but unless there is a revolt against females of this cult or making the sisters have a taste of their own medicine I have no intention of coming back. I don’t know how he will leave because the cult head (who is obviously female and has probably killed every attempt of male revolt and tortured countless) will never let a male of that potential leave ever! Still you do you! Those who want to read about slave MC politics about him being a ‘champion’ read slave of some complete female family whose any member can kill or torture him and not suffer consequences because he is male, be my guest. This has made me rant so hard! Sorry for the rant but not for the review. Gg. Goodbye.

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Weirdo

Five star review so no one would come here and raid my castle.. This is own good star war fanfiction. I didn't know about future, but right now it's an okay for me... Good luck!! Write more!!! Don't drink and gift a newly bought laptop to your drunk neighbour daughter for awesome drunk s#x yesterday....

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Airforce_821

so far so good I love the start It made the character feel more interesting I like the idea. I hope to keep reading and I will keep reading as long as you keep the chapters coming. the only real thing I have to say is I wish there was more to read right now.

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ThatDudeGoku

So far at 4 chapters your fic is doing quite well, keep it up kind author 5 stars.

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Nameless_Godless

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Faceless_Prick

Author sama... I'm lost for words actually as this will likely be my first and only review as i don't review but this time, just bravo author

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GreyKnights

Great story so far i hope he is not a slave for to long ".....................................................................................

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Tome_of_Origin

A great story so far. The plot has amazing potential. I can't wait to see the adventure this story takes me through.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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tommy_king

Its a Star Wars fan-fic with possable universe travel. the tags i would add are [strong] [op] [male mc] [multiverse travel] [star wars] Definitely worth a read as it is very good I was pleasantly suprised at the prolog before the main story started, it was definitely one of the better ones i’ve read on this site. The story itself is really good and im hoping we can get a chapter where he hunts something thought Impossible and proves his worth I like where to story is going and even if i dontt agree with mc at part i can understand where he is coming from. i also hope that he becomes the arena champion for Asajj Ventress and then the 2 of them take control of his species and stop the males being seen as slaves or just leav the world. My only real problem with the story is i dont know what his goal is. you’ve talked about the people who sent earth of the future into the void so i is as thinking that they are his end hoal bit there really isnt a connection between mc and the future earth so i dont know what his goals are. 🤷🏻‍♂️ other than that everything else is amazing and i want more chapters. also if mc just wants to live a new life without dealing with the other people plz make Asajj Ventress his wife, cool badass assassin wife. im looking forward for more content. thx

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kuxrom

классное начало 5 звёзд --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Daoist721221

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cosmic_caveman

brilliant 👏 👏 great writing quality with excellent story development with a unique character background unlike the usual man dies,gets given op powers by random god,reincarnats ,etc... .I believe this has great potential .I really recommend this.👍

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Xandalar

Super good story

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Dao_PNJ_Rage_Quit

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Someone_was_here

Well up to chapter 10 I really liked it That is it Continue writing author. Done

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Vitor_Gamer_Br

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