HP: Bad Intentions

LV 11

Max1mus

Hey guys, Max1mus here! Here is my shameless Author Review. I have tried my best to enhance the reader experience of this translation work. Hope you have a good time reading it. If you do or don't leave a review either way. Also if you have questions about the novel you could comment under this review and I will gladly answer.

LV 2

R0B

Good fanfic, but bad translation. Don't get me wrong, the translation and grammar is understandable. The problem is that this fanfic use vague words for names, skills, items and etc. For example "invisible monster"... Even now I have no clue what kind of monster is that... Just give it a name... The same problem happens everytime some sort of name is used...

LV 4

harrisdavidwilliam

it is readable, but the problem is the name of the spell and the name if the magical animals are wrong, like the invisible animal, its seems like its a demiguise, also the transformation magic, the right one is transfiguration, also the phantasm shift isnt it apparition, he even named an acramantula spider as an eight eyed giant spider, even some of the magical plant named are wrong

LV 4

Bouncy_Beast

first word of the first chapter is "Summon the guardian" and two sentences after that theres a "staff" not then a spell called "Phantom transportation" lol. if you don't see the problem let me help you, they are the translator's synonyms for "Expecto patronum, wand, and apparition". at least try to read what you are uploading author.

LV 14

Sidecharacter1

Currently in the third chapter. I am the first reviewer besides the Author. Great work so far. I hope it stays like that. Keep it up Author-San! Also if you like Naruto you could check my fanfic Naruto: Mixed Heritage

LV 5

Acuario

Jajajaajaajajj,Esa sipnosis me gano,ojalá la historia sea igual de buena ............................. ................................... ..... ........

LV 12

jakom

Aah yes. I've just read the first five chapters Nd I already want more

LV 2

Herbivore

I love that story, that can become a master class for sure ! I really want to read more Haha !

LV 14

faesr

harem////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

LV 1

lectorviciado

maliiiiiiiiiisima traducion palabras totalmente diferentes y a ratos se vuelve inposible de comprender la continuidad

LV 5

Deadrule_vivek

This fanfic is pretty funny, don't expect deep plot while reading this... Just read it as a comedy fanfic instead TL quality is decent and readable, could be better eg comprehension ability is written as brainiac ability Which was confusing to me as I thought mc got abilities of Brainiac from dc 😂

LV 11

kasee

Great Potential hopefully it lives long enough to reach it

LV 11

Paul_obam

like like like like like like like like like like

LV 11

PostAnimeClarit

Good story so far. I can see the harem tag hopefully it makes sense.

LV 12

Adriana7885

The writing is 100/10 BUT I really dislike the harem not that I hate harems in general but this one in particular sucked I just didn’t feel their emotional connection and he honestly acted like an idiot when he was with girls

LV 1

Hannah_Bonilla

I have really been enjoying this story. While the translation isn't 100% it isn't hard to follow along or comprehend. The main character may be a little over powered but it doesn't happen in away that makes the storyline boring or overly predictable.

LV 4

Grimskull

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 4

kisna24

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