A brain storming session were my readers can comment on my ideas with their own suggestions

(These will only be explanations about myself and why everything will happen slower. Also why I chose this story. If you just want to read the story you can basically skip this) :)

I'm German and had English since 5th grade, so I'm fairly decent with the English language if I can say so myself. So apart from spelling, punctuation and maybe a grammar mistake here and there it should be readable.

Now something concerning the story. I'm a big Starcraft and Star Wars Fan so I would love to write Stories about those Universes, the only Problem being that they are so vast and complex that I don't want to write Stuff that's wrong and just ends up breaking the Story/Universe-Immersion.
That's why I chose Pokémon. Everybody knows and loves the Universe and there's not many Laws and Aspects you have to look out for. 

Worst Problem for the story will probably be that I'm a student and most of the time don't have much time on my hands. Moreover, I only played Pokemon Games in German, so I will have to google every single Pokemon Name and Attack - making my Time Problem only worse.
This will be my first story and the first one that I wrote since I was a small child so bear with me. :| 
All advice is welcome if you have any good Ideas plot-wise I have no problem implementing them. I have a general idea where I want to good with the story but nothing for the long term. :D

The Novel-cover is temporary until I find something better, draw something better myself or some kind of Cover-Miracle happens.
 
Ok, let's do this!


(REPOSTED AS AN AUXILIARY CHAPTER!) (EVERYTHING THAT FOLLOWS ARE COMMENTS FROM THE ORIGINAL FOREWORD CHAPTER)

_SomeRandomGuy_
Go for bro👍🏻

usernanne
What I really wish to see at least once, Is an Self/OC insert story that plays out in a time frame of at least a few decades instead of just a few years. What I also find important is for the MC to not always win and maybe even experience huge amounts of loss regardless of preparation and personal power.

AngelElfMask
You've been learning English since the 5th grade and are better at your second language then I am. I am 19 and been learning French since Kindergarden and I only cant to 12 and I only know 3 words being Bonjour (Hello) Aurevior (Bye) and Niege (Snow) I have even had my cousin tutor me and I still cant get it for the life of me :(

Bloosk (as an answer to AngelElfMask's comment)
You're telling me you've been trying to learn French for 14 years but only know 3 words and 12 numbers? Reeks of a lie.

AngelElfMask (as an answer to Bloosk's comment)
Believe it or dont *shrug*

Me (as an answer to Bloosk's comment)
I learned spanish since,... like 9th Grade until 11th grade and only know like 3 sentences. But that's not as long as 14 years so I would agree with you on that, unless he really really wasn't into learning french :D :D :D

BankroMist
gogogogo

PraiseTheSun99
Hey man don't be worried about the small mistakes, i'm in college and still suck at writing. 😭😂

Kylleny2black1 (as an answer to PraiseTheSun99's comment)
... :)

Kylleny2black1
... :)

A 23 year old Student dies in a motorcycle accident. Not having done anything evil in his short life God lets him choose in what Universe he wants spend his next life. After some thinking he decides the wisest choise would be something harmless like the Pokémon Universe. 

Waking up he has to realize that his new Life won‘t be easy as he wished it would be. 
Now stuck with his new body he has to find a good way to live on his own....

This is my very first novel. So, the chapters will be short. *winces* Sorry about that...



I would like to make a few things clear to all my future readers...

First off, my home language isn't English. So there will be some grammar mistakes. I try to fix as many as I can, but they'll still be there. "Oh boy, now they're going kill me...", *clears throat* R-r-right, on to the next point.

I started writing because I love stories and I have a lot of ideas stuck in my mind. When I was younger, playing with my dolls helped me to get the stories out of my mind. But since I gave my dolls away, I got stuck with stories always in my mind. So I thought to myself "what the heck, I'll just write these ideas down" And so my ideas gradually started to form a story.

I also started to take my writing a bit more serious because I would like to improve my writing skills. I ask that if you come across a mistake I made to please point it out. That way, it helps me to learn from my mistakes and write better.

I've recently started to draw my own pictures for my story. All pictures used in the story are my own. I'm not very good at drawing but it's fun and helps me to actually see the world I created with my own eyes.  So I hope you'll like them even with their many flaws! :-)

Also, I'm a grade 11 student and I'm writing in my spare time. Thus my story is progressing very slowly. *sniffle*



I kindly ask you to bear with me.

Please let me know what you think in the comments. (Plus, seeing some comments will help to keep me motivated)

Well, I hope that you'll like my novel!

The Shadow Forest is a beautiful, peaceful place...on the outside. But a danger has been lurking in its shadows for a long time. 

A prophecy: A hero will rise to defeat the evil with a weapon no man can wield. 

Within the Shadow Forest, twelve years ago, a tragedy shaped the future of a young woman. Now, alone, broken and moulded by the hardships of life, she lives in the cursed forest, trying to keep others from nearing the Death Bridge - the place where bodies disappear and screams of horror echo. 

But in her veins, an ancient power stirs.

She meets a curt, handsome, white-haired warrior and a bandit with a frightening physique and a soft heart. Learning of the prophecy, the trio sets off on a danger-filled path to save the kingdom.

They will face mysterious creatures, fight fierce battles and uncover terrifying secrets all while emotional struggles follow them like shadows.  

What will prevail? Light or darkness? Love or sadness?



(Keep in mind that this story is purely fictional...also, some things may be based on different mythologies)

*This book contains some mild violence*


Update schedule: 1 chapter per week

everyone, I am sorry but I have decided to drop this story, for good. I don't see a point in writing it anymore, I don't have the time either, I could spend the time I write this doing more useful things.
This story was meant to spread ideas and all but now I feel like it has turned into wish-fulfillment, I don't like where it is heading.
if anyone feels like it could have been better or achieved something, you can rewrite or continue the story with the image in your mind and post it on your profile I don't care about it. 
I will continue writing my original (A Journey to Eternity) and post chapters once in a while.
As for other reasons that I dropped it:
1. Writing fanfiction has no use for me personally, I originally wanted my ideas to be known and my writing skills to improve with writing this and since it clearly is not anymore then I will stop.
2. the very Few retarded Readers out there. there is a simple way to say this if you don't like a story then stop reading it, nobody cares about your opinion, don't share it. it will make the Author's mood gloomy no matter the person and result in him dropping the story, especially fanfiction because most Author's don't make money out of it and are most likely writing it out of passion and admiration for the original story or a character or etc. you ruin this feeling by flaming them, if you wanna share your opinion speak with logic and reason and help the Author become better by giving your opinion/advice in a respectful manner, I can go into a long discussion about this matter but lets stop it here.
3. the point of every story is to teach us how to be better, Romance at love and understanding the opposite sex, sci-fi at science and possible future of our technology, anime and things like that help open your mind and creativity sometimes they teach useful life lessons too, I can go on and on about this. my fanfic didn't have that feeling to it, any story that teaches nothing useful to its readers is just wasting the reader's time, it may make the reader feel good but in fact, is ruining their life by wasting their time for nothing. Having fun reading is not the most important part of it, the most important part is to learn and evolve. Wish-fulfillment stories have only two uses that I can think of, making the reader feel good about himself and heal some psychological problems, I don't wanna sin like that against people who support my story.
4. The problem with Webnovel's system is the fact that it forces you to have the feeling to write, I don't know how it does this but I reached a point where I couldn't stop writing, this caused alarm bells to ring in my mind and it made me rethink writing Fanfic. this could be only me though because when I don't write in Webnovel it causes me to feel this pressure to post a chapter.
that is pretty much it, I don't want to waste any more of your precious time so this is it.
Don't waste any more spirit stones on this Fanfic, it is dead for good.
If you enjoyed this Story, Check out my A journey to Eternity, I am trying to write a unique Xianxia story, I suggest you read it when it hits 30 chapters because till then I am considering how the plot and ending should turn out, what information and teachings I want it to share with the reader and etc.
THE END.

A teenager complained to god because living on the earth was so restricting and there existed no adventures or anything interesting in the world except entertainment like anime, games, movies, etc. 
"I wish I could go on an adventure like those fantasies and be a godlike character". 
A God took pity on him, Granted him his wish not knowing that in the future it shall cause unimaginable chaos.
(MC will awaken in warring states era (Naruto) as Madara Uchiha's supposedly dead younger brother, Akihiro Uchiha)

Helloh Reader-San
This is my first time writing, well, in this site which I'm very new at, pft I don't even have a cover cause my laptop just suddenly broke out and I cant upload the cover currently.
This are the things that I think you readers should know.

1. Mysterious Things
There are things that are left to be not explained, currently. Because it will be just clues to the future things that will happen. So if there are things confusing, well, leave it confusing. But actually, there won't be that much mystery as how this just follows the canon of the story of Harry Potter. 

2. Story
Yes, I will follow the canon of the story. There might be a thing or two that will change, I won't be the author that will change the story entirely for the mc . He may be more talented as he got the plot's armour of course. But I won't be make the MC rebellious and such.

3. Dialouge
There will be dialouges where the speaker is not said. But it will play out like this always.
Person One:
Person Two:
Person One:
Person Two:

See that, I will never do it like this where two dialouges will be consecutively said by the same person as the rest will be confusing.
Never like this:
Person one:
Person one:
Person two:
Person two:

4. Dropping Chance
There will be a chance that I will drop this, and I already want you to know that. I only made this because of the time I have because of Covid19, I'm also writing other books in other sites, which if you add this one up, it's already 5 books I'm working at everyday. But the thing is, I treat the other three books seriously and doesn't publish it until I'm done with the whole story, and that's because I know how everything will play out. Not like this book and the other one book, where as I write, I get ideas while working on it. Might seems stupid but that's how I like it.

5. Copyright 
Of course, I don't own Harry Potter, I'm merely just using the story as m a fullfiller of my imagination and to spend time doing something and actually leveling my skills.

6. Mistakes
Yes, I'm a human, I do make mistakes. Such as grammars, spelling, and basically, my life is a mistake. I'm open for anything, I'm a laid back guy tbh, hate me like me, neither I care for really.

I'm not pursuing you to enjoy the story, give me some stones nor anything like that. I merely made this book for my satisfaction. And would like to share it with you guys for some idk reason.

7. If you find my story bothering, bad, or anything negative, please say it immediately. I mean, if your reason is rational. I'm very open to criticism, and even try to say how can I improve it, I would thankful to try it so. Even though Im writing five books, doesn't mean I'm already good. Bruh, you will puke once you see prolouge. I'm actually new in writing. And just really I write to fulfill what I want to happen in certain story's. 



8. Lastly, Ideas
I do know some readers here wants also their imagination or ideas to be fulfilled. That's a natural thing for readers to feel. Well, if someone do comment an idea that they want to happen. I may consider it or not consider it. That's one of the hard things in making a fan fiction that follows the canon. It's because you have to watch out for the things your MC will do, and it's consequences, you have to be logical, and things the MC should be always rational to continue with the plot. 

So I'm sorry if your idea doesn't get to happen. 
But then, I'm not expecting a lot of viewers. I once made a book on watpadd, when like, years ago, and hell it was already an achievement to get hundred viewers in it. 

Btw, when it comes to updating, idk even know if it will be frequent, even tho it's quarantine time I'm still busy af. 

This is basically it, lmao, btw, watch out for memes. Some references might pop out.

The Wizarding World was blissful as the young wizard hero, Harry Potter, has once again saved the world from the dark wizard, Voldemort.

Unknown to them, there were a lot more people who help to defeat the dark lord. But it just revolves the young man, Harry there, Harry here, Harry everywhere, as always.

Peculiar to his schoolmates, Ron, Hermione, and other more, one stand out from the rest. Unfortunately, not because of his heroic nor anything good in particular, but because of his bad deeds. A man named Elliot. 

But truth, he was framed.

After the sorrowful life he had, he had the chance to change himself.

Himself from the past.

Creating an empire that will stand high among the rest.

(DROPPED)

Hello everyone! I'm sorry I haven't been writing much... I'm busy

I do have some GREAT news though! Me and a group of friends are going to make the story a Roblox Game! Idk when we will start, but we will sure learn how to code. I did make a group though, so join it! If you tell me you liked the story and join the group, I'll put you in the "Dragonbreather" role!



Roblox Group ~Firebound~ 


https://www.roblox.com/groups/6143664/Firebound#!/about 



Rules:

Be appropriate in the chat

No OD'ing (Online Dating)

No cursing

Don't spam the Creator/Vice Creator, the Main Admin, and the Admins about anything - if you have a question, contact the Creator via Email/Roblox and the Vice Creator via Email/Roblox/Discord Server (when made)

Read the QnA's before asking any questions

Don't ask for personal information

_______

I will post the QnA'S here so you can see them first-hand:



Q: How do I become Admin?

A: The Creator has to know you in real life/contact me when she needs you if you don't live close, and know you are trustworthy. You have to be a person over the age of 10 and under the age of 18 (unless she says you can join). If you keep begging me after she says no/don't answer, she will ban you from the game for a month. Sorry, but we warned you. Asking again though is perfectly fine, just please don't spam/ask after she said no the second time



Q: Can I friend you, the Creator

A: She will follow you if you donate 5+, that is so she can help keep track of who paid the group and maybe a giveaway of 200 Caracki (either every month or every few months). If you read the story, like it, email her the screenshots as proof, and donate over 80 robux, she will DEFINITELY friend you! Your support is really needed!!! Remember though, you can always follow her and join the game! Just don't spam her and ask for things, she will give things out when the time comes/she wants to.



Q: Can I friend an Admin?

A: Email the Creator personally what Admin, why, and she will tell them. She will email you the answer asap. Remember, you can always follow them too!



Q: How do I become a Dragonbreather?

A: You have to join the group AND like the story! If you don't know the story and where to find it, it's named Firebound on Webnovel (A free reading app with comics and novels) - https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13697866405856005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305870114



Q: Can I be a character in the story?

A: Not a Whinok Child or an Amulet Maker, sorry. You can tell the Creator what type of Breather you want to be though, and she has a list of names she can give you. Or if you have your own name, she will take it to consideration. If she agrees, you will be in the story and maybe an NPC in the game to talk to (She will make sure to write in the "Credits" who you are.) if the group agrees. She will give you 100 Caracki, just join her and tell her who you are, the type of Breather you choose, and your Roblox name (so make sure you wrote it down because we might not remember)



Q: Can I offer you my ideas?

As: YES! ABSOLUTELY! All ideas are wanted, just email the Creator or contact the Vice Creator via email or on the Discord Server, and we will get back to you asap (if we accept an idea, the Creator will write down who they got the idea from and give them 50 Caracki when they join the Creator's server)



Q: Can I help create things/with the music?

A: Like the Creator wrote for Admin, she has to know you in real life/contact her when she needs you if you don't live close, and know you are trustworthy. You have to be a person over the age of 10 and under the age of 18 (unless she says you can join). If you keep begging her after she says no/don't answer, she will ban you from my game for a month. Sorry, but you were warned. Asking again though is perfectly fine, just please don't spam/ask after she said no the second time (when you ask her again, it needs to be AT LEAST a week apart from the first time)




Q: Can I get free things/a discount?

A: That depends on many things. It won't just be for one person if the Creator were to do discounts, or give out free things. If people bug her, she will rise the price of in-game bought items for two months (things that cost Caracki). If she joins a server, and people DON'T bother her and DON'T ask for things, she will give out things like food and Caracki bought at the store. NOT ROBUX (if there are people asking and others not, the ones who aren't will get free things. They shouldn't be punished for other's choices)



Q: Can I get a refund from the things I bought?

A: What the Creator recommends on doing is take a video/screenshot(s) of your purchase and make sure you get what you bought. If you bought something and it doesn't work, exit out of the game and retry. If it is still not there, email the Creator or the Vice Creator the video/screenshot(s) of you purchasing the item and you reloading the game/Roblox. If they see that you didn't get it, the Creator will definitely give back your money (and maybe 125 free Caracki for the troubles)



Q: Can I subscribe to you, the Vice Creator, and/or a tester on YouTube?

A: You can, if you want, to get updates, a notice for giveaways, and previews! This is not required, but for certain giveaways, you MUST be subscribed to that person to be in it. It is not required though if you don't mind missing out on giveaways, previews, and updates. (The creator will also make some videos showing her coding, her cat, something about the story, and MAYBE her outside with some friends in general/in the group [if they agree])



Q: Can I join your Discord Server?

A: Yes, absolutely! The Creator doesn't have Discord herself, so the Vice Creator owns it. That Server is for posting ideas, questions, comments, or concerns on. Don't spam him please, and most importantly, don't send anything else that isn't related to the game or story. If you come to say hi, that is fine, but don't come to have a chat. It's for those who have questions, comments, concerns, and ideas (was not created yet)




Q: How did you think of any of this?

A: "I loved dragons as a little kid, and in my 5th grade class, we had to write about something. I wrote about a dragon named Winter (Creator - WinterIceNSkyDragon1) meeting a dragon named Skullfire (Tester - G0RL0K), and that's when it started. I have been writing since. Then I thought that I can create a game for people to enjoy, and they can also read my story. Vice Creator is Icestriker, Main Admin is Oceanwave, and an Admin/Music Composer is Poisonland," writes the Creator



Q: Can I send a fan-pic of a dragon you made/an OC?

A: You can if you like, and the Creator might post it on the wall where you create your character. If she chooses to do that, you will earn 50 Caracki per drawing. Send it to the Creator via email for her to go over it (if not picked, don't worry! Send in more and see if you'll be picked! [Name will be on the game info/group {if your in the group} and the picture])



Q: I have a different question

A: Great, we are glad to help in any way we can! Email the Creator or contact the Vice Creator via email or the Discord Server, and we will get back to you asap

____________


Here are the ranks in the group:


Creator/Author - WinterIceNSkyDragon1


Vice Creator - MRBOBBERSIN


Main Admin - WinterSpirt06


Music Composers/Admin - SpaceUnicorn1011, Merrybear06, _


Build Helpers/Admin - Natthatcat17, cupcake_lover929, Min3craftDerp, G0RL0K


Admin - kyle302230, master_alexis2,  XxgirlswontheworldxX

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Donated - [Players who donate to the group]


Dragonbreathers - [Players who join the group and are reading the story {have to comment on story and/or email the Creator or Vice Creator screenshots to receive credit}]


Members - [Players who join the group]

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Contact Info/Follow Us!



Creator/Author's
                 ~Email: winterashunay@gmail.com

                 ~Roblox: WinterIceNSkyDragon1

                 ~Xbox: WinterInSDragon 

                 ~Pokemon Go: WinterInSdragon; 4690-4653-6027

                 ~Discord: N/A

                 ~Youtube: Winter Ashunay - sub for updates, previews, and more (when the game is made)


Vice Creator
                 ~Email: xdragonslayer115@gmail.com 

                 ~Roblox: MRBOBBERSIN

                 ~Xbox: IPeeSometimesYT 

                 ~Pokemon Go: N/A

                 ~Discord: Crusader#6118

                 ~Youtube: IPeeSometimes - sub for updates (when the game is made)

Main Admin
                 ~Roblox: WinterSpirt06

Builders

                 ~Roblox: Natthatcat17

                 ~Roblox: cupcake_lover929

                 ~Roblox: Min3craftDerp

                 ~Roblox:G0RL0K
                       ~Youtube: G0RL3X (both G0RL0K's and master_alexis2 channel)


Music Composers

                 ~Roblox: SpaceUnicorn1011

                 ~Roblox: Merrybear06


Admins

                 ~Roblox: kyle302230

                 ~Roblox: master_alexis2

                 ~Roblox: XxgirlswontheworldxX





~Work In Progress~

As the world started, dragons roamed the Earth. There were mammals to prey on and to have as friends, and there was plantation where there was suppose to be. Water was where its suppose to be, and mountains pierced through the ground. One day, the great God Opalheart and his mate, Rainbowquartz, had a son named Prismshard. As he grew cold and selfishness took over him, he wanted to be the god of the whole world. One night, he killed his mother in her sleep, thinking his father would die from being heartbroken. Turns out he was wrong, so he tried to find all eleven amulet makers (animals that were chosen to watch over the Whinok Children). They refused and killed him on the spot, but his soul transferred to one of the amulets: sky. It is said that whoever receives this amulet will either perish or overcome it and defeat Prismshard forever. As Opalheart is devastated, he agrees with all eleven amulet makers to make an amulet for special children named a Whinok Child. These children would have a shiny glow to them and their eyes, they would have two types, and they will be left at some point by their parents. As they set out across their land of Dragonheart (what the Dragons call their Homeland, AKA Earth) looking for a hiding place to find all of them, the prophecy of the Whinok Children would be united and Dragonheart would forever be saved from these endless souls. Knowing this, Prismshard's children, the Fierce Ones, will fight until all Whinok Children get captured, weak, and suffer until they die from his own power.

I've never really written about myself before. I don't know if it's cause I don't really value myself enough? Or because I'm not a narcissist? I think I over think myself.

Can you tell I'm a little odd? Well I've never really wanted to do anything, not anything worth value anyway. I mean I've got no skills to speak of, this is really the only thing I really enjoy. Except for other... slightly less acceptable things. (if you catch my drift)

I am a writer, and not a very good one. But lets get into this.

I love writing, when I was a highschool student I found it as a kind of... escape. writing that first story helped this shitty Author through a lot of deep shit I will get into later.

So, ever heard of Wattpad? Well that's where it all started for me. I was introduced to the app by a mutual friend of mine, lets call her H. She was writing Adult stories, use in the business call... Smut. it's kind of like fifty shades of grey with terrible writing. She asked a Friend and I to read it, and I did. But the first thing that was on my mind was that I wanted to do that.

NO NOT WHAT SHE WROTE ABOUT. I wanted to take a crack at writing, English was one of my favorite subjects in school. I loved reading but had an average reading level. So, I set up a Wattpad account. My first account has a pretty weird name, all because I rushed it.

I needed a name for the app, I was too embarrassed to go by my real name. So I used my Ps4 user name. RedisDead, but I fucking spelt it Readisdead. That was my first account.

Now the only time I had ever tried my hand at writing was in the 8th grade, creative writing section of English. Plus it was a short story, so I was running on ideas that were pretty, cliche. 

Story Number 1- Prince of the Sun and Moon
I wanted to say that this story does not in fact, have anything to do with the sun or moon. I wrote this because I was on an Anime binge, specifically magic Academy ones. Remember the magic Academy thing, that will be a main concept for my other "creations" later.

I don't really know what to say about this one, it's one my first stories and was my first attempt at fantasy. Let me tell you, I can't get enough of fantasy. Nothing makes you feel better about your sad life than creating a new one for your imaginary characters to run wild in.

Thinking back to how I was then... I feel bad, I was going through a lot of emotional problems. 

I was a shut in, I can't say for certain what happened but one day I just decided I would rather stay inside my room then go outside and play. I never really made friends, but being bullied by everyone in your grade can cause that. People were always nice in highschool though, I think they might have felt bad. Or they were making themselves look better infront of everyone else. Being nice to the weird kid, congrats.

So, you can guess that if I didn't like those people you bet your ass I never felt attracted to anybody. But I did fall for a new kid. 

Will call her K for now. That smile... she was weird, but a hot kind of weird you know? She was quirky and funny and had a face that made my heart melt like butter in a microwave. She was chubby too, like a cute little marshmallow.

But looks can be deceiving. Wish I would have known that before falling in love but hey, does anyone?

She wasn't always a terrible person. But my class has a way of bringing the worst out of people. Or maybe it was my fault? 

Fuck, if your reading this what would you say K? I need the answers but we don't talk.

okay, lets look at this from my perspective.
She was always nice to me, I mean REALLY nice. laughing at my stupid jokes and always greeted me with a smile. But my dumb idiot brain did register that SHE FUCKING LIKED ME!!

Okay so eventually she started wearing longer sleeved jackets all the time, she started acting differently. Started ignoring me occasionally, called me annoying and being rude.

Then I saw something that broke my heart. Her arms, they were sliced up. Not alot but still, she was cutting. I expressed my concern for her but she gave me the cold shoulder. 

A couple weeks go by and she skips school here and there I don't see her, then the day that makes me hate myself. Now I promise you, she did not kill herself. This is not one of those stories.

I'm excited she's back at school and I see her again. I catch her when she's taking off her hoody and... She lost weight, alot of weight.

It finally hit, she's dealing with depression. But why? Did someone call her fat or something? 
This pisses me off, I'm a pacifist by nature at this point but I'm ready to throw down.

But now that I have a little more clarity on the situation, I sometimes think me. 
See a couple months later I make a new friend. Call this guy... F.

He's tall and actually funny once you get to know him. He's actually still one of my closest friends.

I introduce F to K, they hit it off and eventually start dating. I kind of stop talking to F because he starts dating the girl I'm in love with but that's not important.

what is the fact that a month or two into them dating that K tells me something. Something that spirals me into a deep depression for a long time.

K-"So do you like me?"
Me-"yeah your one of my best friends!"
K-"you know what I mean like LIKE me. Because when I first met you I had feelings for you."

What the actual fuck? She's dating my BEST FUCKING FRIEND and tells me this shit? Not cool man, is this some kind of way to torture me?

Ever since they got together she seemed to be back to normal. So I was happy, but deep down I wished I was him. Comment if you ever felt like this. I would love to talk to someone about it.

Honesty? I felt pathetic, worthless. If I had worked up the courage I would be the one getting kissed. I kept telling myself I wasn't ready. But forget how I felt, lets go back to K.

she had suddenly lost weight. Alot of weight, treated me different.

Is it my fault? Did she think I didn't feel that way because she was slightly over weight? She dropped the weight because of me. That's how I felt but right now, I know that's the case. She didn't really care about me or F all she cared about was herself. Get all the attention she believed she needed. She had Mommy issues. 

Think I'm being harsh? She straight up cheated on F and broke up with him. Then to make matters worse... She ran away for two weeks.

This unfortunate series of events destroyed F, he hated himself. Let's put the kind of man he was into perspective. He didn't take shit from anyone, he liked to laugh and was happy to make others laugh. But when she ran away from home he locked up.

I'm not using names on purpose, because I don't want people who I know to read this and get mad. But I want to tell you this, the human heart is fragile. 

I say this because we laugh about it now. F, I'm glad your alive man.

F was five feet from killing himself. He went home the day he found out and dug out his dads old 45. He was ready to pull that trigger.

F is a strong ass dude, he managed to put the gun down. Put it away, he's only ever told me this. So for the sake of my friendship... Don't read this F. 

Well. That's all for now my friends, I'd tell you more but I think it got a little dark there.

Kind of a set of me talking about... well me and my Boring life as someone who found a way to cope with life by writing

Hello everyone, this is Voidne's Book of Ideas.  
In this book, I will share funny story ideas that I think is good, but have not the time to write.  (Feel free to pouch ideas from here if you want to get into writing).

I will basically put plots that I made in here, and you guys feel free to make a novel out of them if you want~.  But you should tell me when you write it XD, cuz I wanna read too :3

And if you are stuck at any point during your writing, I can provide you with ideas ( But it is preferable to ask your readers for ideas, because interactions between the readers and the writer are healthy ).

Novel ideas I have, but have no time to write.  Sharing those ideas in the hope to support people who are getting into writing  but cannot think of any plot.  I will be glad if you used my plots as references, and am going to support you if you ever needed any suggestions. 

Not saying that my ideas are the best.  I am a human, so my ideas might be flawed, but they should be good enough for new writers at most.

So the winner of the raffle is DarkMaster0386:
Name: Saint Caroline
Age: 18
Weapon: Rapier
Devil fruit: none
God's gift: Pure Yin Qi Manual
Weapon comprehension: Swordsman or whatever rapier is
Personality: Elegant like a noble but not super arrogant
There were 3 that really caught my eye, but this was the one I thought fit into the future of the story best. You'll see why in the not so distant future.
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On a side note. I know a lot of you are upset about the Roman disappearance and I'm not going to say much other than:
1. It won't be forever.
2. It's important for both Roman's and Ori's future.
3. DO NOT try to threaten me with your views/stones to get me to change the story! As much as I appreciate all my viewers and the stones you give, please remember this story is for free and I'm not going to beg for your views. 
This is a practice book where I get to experiment with different ideas and concepts, this is just one of them. If after the return of Roman you still don't agree with that idea then please explain why without throwing your toys out the pram for a story you're not writing!
Not all of your comments went unnoticed. LonelyGodKing, your idea about having me having you as the readers find out about Roman's disappearance alongside Ori was actually a good one and I am upset I didn't think of that when I was writing it. For others if you have any feedback that's constructive (positive or negative) please say so in an adult like manner. 
To sum up I will not be going back and "Fixing it", nor will I change my plan so Ori goes and gets Roman back in the next 3 chapters. If you wish to stop reading as a result it's a shame, but I understand.

Orion Kartia's life was cut short and he was now forced to transmigrate into the wonderful world of One Piece but thankfully he has a few gifts to help him get started! 

This is purely fan-fiction. It's just a way for me to practice my English whilst writing something enjoyable.

This book is targeted at avid One Piece fans as there is a lot of terminology that can only be understood by people who follow the manga/anime.

The release schedule for normal working weeks will be as follows:
Mon - 1x Chapters
Tues - 1x Chapter
Wed - 1x Chapters
Thurs - 1x Chapter
Fri - 1x Chapters
Sat - 2x Chapters
Sun - 2x Chapters

Any mass releases or dead periods will be announced in advance.

Thank you for all the support so far but please don't hold back with the criticism as well... I need it to improve my writing. I welcome all criticism, as long as it's constructive!

I'm mainly using this to test the waters and improve my writing, as I'm also working on the story I'm most proud of and looking forward to releasing!

I won't be releasing that one for the foreseeable future as I want to have written the majority of the story in advance as the goal is to get paid on the back of it. And there are too many potentially good novels that finish half way through for one reason or another. I don't want my main novel to be one of those!

Thanks for taking the time to read this, please read the full description too :)

I have many ideas about the novel that I want to write so I hope that I can write them in an interesting way for you.

This is my first time writing and I'll wait for your feedback to improve.

Although I'm doing this for fun I hope to release something with decent quality.

Considering this, I hope writing to improve as I write the story.

I won't ask for support other than your comments good or bad, and maybe if you consider it the power stones to help the story reach more readers.

Thanks and I hope you like it <3

One day, Dante was riding his bike as usual when a car and a truck crashed into each other.

A tire from the truck flew into his head, killing him instantly.


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I'm writing this fanfic just to kill time, and hopefully, you can find in it something to kill your own time too. I'll do my best to deliver something readable and improve the quality of it
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If you are looking for harem fanfic with an idiotic horny mc, you can go read something else.

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You can expect plot holes and more in the story as I am not really a fan of the show and don't know a lot of details, I'm learning while I write.

I'll appreaciate your suggestions to help create a better story.

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