A brain storming session were my readers can comment on my ideas with their own suggestions

This is my very first novel. So, the chapters will be short. *winces* Sorry about that...



I would like to make a few things clear to all my future readers...

First off, my home language isn't English. So there will be some grammar mistakes. I try to fix as many as I can, but they'll still be there. "Oh boy, now they're going kill me...", *clears throat* R-r-right, on to the next point.

I started writing because I love stories and I have a lot of ideas stuck in my mind. When I was younger, playing with my dolls helped me to get the stories out of my mind. But since I gave my dolls away, I got stuck with stories always in my mind. So I thought to myself "what the heck, I'll just write these ideas down" And so my ideas gradually started to form a story.

I also started to take my writing a bit more serious because I would like to improve my writing skills. I ask that if you come across a mistake I made to please point it out. That way, it helps me to learn from my mistakes and write better.

I've recently started to draw my own pictures for my story. All pictures used in the story are my own. I'm not very good at drawing but it's fun and helps me to actually see the world I created with my own eyes.  So I hope you'll like them even with their many flaws! :-)

Also, I'm a grade 11 student and I'm writing in my spare time. Thus my story is progressing very slowly. *sniffle*



I kindly ask you to bear with me.

Please let me know what you think in the comments. (Plus, seeing some comments will help to keep me motivated)

Well, I hope that you'll like my novel!

The Shadow Forest is a beautiful, peaceful place...on the outside. But a danger has been lurking in its shadows for a long time. 

A prophecy: A hero will rise to defeat the evil with a weapon no man can wield. 

Within the Shadow Forest, twelve years ago, a tragedy shaped the future of a young woman. Now, alone, broken and moulded by the hardships of life, she lives in the cursed forest, trying to keep others from nearing the Death Bridge - the place where bodies disappear and screams of horror echo. 

But in her veins, an ancient power stirs.

She meets a curt, handsome, white-haired warrior and a bandit with a frightening physique and a soft heart. Learning of the prophecy, the trio sets off on a danger-filled path to save the kingdom.

They will face mysterious creatures, fight fierce battles and uncover terrifying secrets all while emotional struggles follow them like shadows.  

What will prevail? Light or darkness? Love or sadness?



(Keep in mind that this story is purely fictional...also, some things may be based on different mythologies)

*This book contains some mild violence*


Update schedule: 1 chapter per week

Hello everyone! I'm sorry I haven't been writing much... I'm busy

I do have some GREAT news though! Me and a group of friends are going to make the story a Roblox Game! Idk when we will start, but we will sure learn how to code. I did make a group though, so join it! If you tell me you liked the story and join the group, I'll put you in the "Dragonbreather" role!



Roblox Group ~Firebound~ 


https://www.roblox.com/groups/6143664/Firebound#!/about 



Rules:

Be appropriate in the chat

No OD'ing (Online Dating)

No cursing

Don't spam the Creator/Vice Creator, the Main Admin, and the Admins about anything - if you have a question, contact the Creator via Email/Roblox and the Vice Creator via Email/Roblox/Discord Server (when made)

Read the QnA's before asking any questions

Don't ask for personal information

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I will post the QnA'S here so you can see them first-hand:



Q: How do I become Admin?

A: The Creator has to know you in real life/contact me when she needs you if you don't live close, and know you are trustworthy. You have to be a person over the age of 10 and under the age of 18 (unless she says you can join). If you keep begging me after she says no/don't answer, she will ban you from the game for a month. Sorry, but we warned you. Asking again though is perfectly fine, just please don't spam/ask after she said no the second time



Q: Can I friend you, the Creator

A: She will follow you if you donate 5+, that is so she can help keep track of who paid the group and maybe a giveaway of 200 Caracki (either every month or every few months). If you read the story, like it, email her the screenshots as proof, and donate over 80 robux, she will DEFINITELY friend you! Your support is really needed!!! Remember though, you can always follow her and join the game! Just don't spam her and ask for things, she will give things out when the time comes/she wants to.



Q: Can I friend an Admin?

A: Email the Creator personally what Admin, why, and she will tell them. She will email you the answer asap. Remember, you can always follow them too!



Q: How do I become a Dragonbreather?

A: You have to join the group AND like the story! If you don't know the story and where to find it, it's named Firebound on Webnovel (A free reading app with comics and novels) - https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13697866405856005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305870114



Q: Can I be a character in the story?

A: Not a Whinok Child or an Amulet Maker, sorry. You can tell the Creator what type of Breather you want to be though, and she has a list of names she can give you. Or if you have your own name, she will take it to consideration. If she agrees, you will be in the story and maybe an NPC in the game to talk to (She will make sure to write in the "Credits" who you are.) if the group agrees. She will give you 100 Caracki, just join her and tell her who you are, the type of Breather you choose, and your Roblox name (so make sure you wrote it down because we might not remember)



Q: Can I offer you my ideas?

As: YES! ABSOLUTELY! All ideas are wanted, just email the Creator or contact the Vice Creator via email or on the Discord Server, and we will get back to you asap (if we accept an idea, the Creator will write down who they got the idea from and give them 50 Caracki when they join the Creator's server)



Q: Can I help create things/with the music?

A: Like the Creator wrote for Admin, she has to know you in real life/contact her when she needs you if you don't live close, and know you are trustworthy. You have to be a person over the age of 10 and under the age of 18 (unless she says you can join). If you keep begging her after she says no/don't answer, she will ban you from my game for a month. Sorry, but you were warned. Asking again though is perfectly fine, just please don't spam/ask after she said no the second time (when you ask her again, it needs to be AT LEAST a week apart from the first time)




Q: Can I get free things/a discount?

A: That depends on many things. It won't just be for one person if the Creator were to do discounts, or give out free things. If people bug her, she will rise the price of in-game bought items for two months (things that cost Caracki). If she joins a server, and people DON'T bother her and DON'T ask for things, she will give out things like food and Caracki bought at the store. NOT ROBUX (if there are people asking and others not, the ones who aren't will get free things. They shouldn't be punished for other's choices)



Q: Can I get a refund from the things I bought?

A: What the Creator recommends on doing is take a video/screenshot(s) of your purchase and make sure you get what you bought. If you bought something and it doesn't work, exit out of the game and retry. If it is still not there, email the Creator or the Vice Creator the video/screenshot(s) of you purchasing the item and you reloading the game/Roblox. If they see that you didn't get it, the Creator will definitely give back your money (and maybe 125 free Caracki for the troubles)



Q: Can I subscribe to you, the Vice Creator, and/or a tester on YouTube?

A: You can, if you want, to get updates, a notice for giveaways, and previews! This is not required, but for certain giveaways, you MUST be subscribed to that person to be in it. It is not required though if you don't mind missing out on giveaways, previews, and updates. (The creator will also make some videos showing her coding, her cat, something about the story, and MAYBE her outside with some friends in general/in the group [if they agree])



Q: Can I join your Discord Server?

A: Yes, absolutely! The Creator doesn't have Discord herself, so the Vice Creator owns it. That Server is for posting ideas, questions, comments, or concerns on. Don't spam him please, and most importantly, don't send anything else that isn't related to the game or story. If you come to say hi, that is fine, but don't come to have a chat. It's for those who have questions, comments, concerns, and ideas (was not created yet)




Q: How did you think of any of this?

A: "I loved dragons as a little kid, and in my 5th grade class, we had to write about something. I wrote about a dragon named Winter (Creator - WinterIceNSkyDragon1) meeting a dragon named Skullfire (Tester - G0RL0K), and that's when it started. I have been writing since. Then I thought that I can create a game for people to enjoy, and they can also read my story. Vice Creator is Icestriker, Main Admin is Oceanwave, and an Admin/Music Composer is Poisonland," writes the Creator



Q: Can I send a fan-pic of a dragon you made/an OC?

A: You can if you like, and the Creator might post it on the wall where you create your character. If she chooses to do that, you will earn 50 Caracki per drawing. Send it to the Creator via email for her to go over it (if not picked, don't worry! Send in more and see if you'll be picked! [Name will be on the game info/group {if your in the group} and the picture])



Q: I have a different question

A: Great, we are glad to help in any way we can! Email the Creator or contact the Vice Creator via email or the Discord Server, and we will get back to you asap

____________


Here are the ranks in the group:


Creator/Author - WinterIceNSkyDragon1


Vice Creator - MRBOBBERSIN


Main Admin - WinterSpirt06


Music Composers/Admin - SpaceUnicorn1011, Merrybear06, _


Build Helpers/Admin - Natthatcat17, cupcake_lover929, Min3craftDerp, G0RL0K


Admin - kyle302230, master_alexis2,  XxgirlswontheworldxX

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Donated - [Players who donate to the group]


Dragonbreathers - [Players who join the group and are reading the story {have to comment on story and/or email the Creator or Vice Creator screenshots to receive credit}]


Members - [Players who join the group]

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Contact Info/Follow Us!



Creator/Author's
                 ~Email: winterashunay@gmail.com

                 ~Roblox: WinterIceNSkyDragon1

                 ~Xbox: WinterInSDragon 

                 ~Pokemon Go: WinterInSdragon; 4690-4653-6027

                 ~Discord: N/A

                 ~Youtube: Winter Ashunay - sub for updates, previews, and more (when the game is made)


Vice Creator
                 ~Email: xdragonslayer115@gmail.com 

                 ~Roblox: MRBOBBERSIN

                 ~Xbox: IPeeSometimesYT 

                 ~Pokemon Go: N/A

                 ~Discord: Crusader#6118

                 ~Youtube: IPeeSometimes - sub for updates (when the game is made)

Main Admin
                 ~Roblox: WinterSpirt06

Builders

                 ~Roblox: Natthatcat17

                 ~Roblox: cupcake_lover929

                 ~Roblox: Min3craftDerp

                 ~Roblox:G0RL0K
                       ~Youtube: G0RL3X (both G0RL0K's and master_alexis2 channel)


Music Composers

                 ~Roblox: SpaceUnicorn1011

                 ~Roblox: Merrybear06


Admins

                 ~Roblox: kyle302230

                 ~Roblox: master_alexis2

                 ~Roblox: XxgirlswontheworldxX





~Work In Progress~

As the world started, dragons roamed the Earth. There were mammals to prey on and to have as friends, and there was plantation where there was suppose to be. Water was where its suppose to be, and mountains pierced through the ground. One day, the great God Opalheart and his mate, Rainbowquartz, had a son named Prismshard. As he grew cold and selfishness took over him, he wanted to be the god of the whole world. One night, he killed his mother in her sleep, thinking his father would die from being heartbroken. Turns out he was wrong, so he tried to find all eleven amulet makers (animals that were chosen to watch over the Whinok Children). They refused and killed him on the spot, but his soul transferred to one of the amulets: sky. It is said that whoever receives this amulet will either perish or overcome it and defeat Prismshard forever. As Opalheart is devastated, he agrees with all eleven amulet makers to make an amulet for special children named a Whinok Child. These children would have a shiny glow to them and their eyes, they would have two types, and they will be left at some point by their parents. As they set out across their land of Dragonheart (what the Dragons call their Homeland, AKA Earth) looking for a hiding place to find all of them, the prophecy of the Whinok Children would be united and Dragonheart would forever be saved from these endless souls. Knowing this, Prismshard's children, the Fierce Ones, will fight until all Whinok Children get captured, weak, and suffer until they die from his own power.

Helloh Reader-San
This is my first time writing, well, in this site which I'm very new at, pft I don't even have a cover cause my laptop just suddenly broke out and I cant upload the cover currently.
This are the things that I think you readers should know.

1. Mysterious Things
There are things that are left to be not explained, currently. Because it will be just clues to the future things that will happen. So if there are things confusing, well, leave it confusing. But actually, there won't be that much mystery as how this just follows the canon of the story of Harry Potter. 

2. Story
Yes, I will follow the canon of the story. There might be a thing or two that will change, I won't be the author that will change the story entirely for the mc . He may be more talented as he got the plot's armour of course. But I won't be make the MC rebellious and such.

3. Dialouge
There will be dialouges where the speaker is not said. But it will play out like this always.
Person One:
Person Two:
Person One:
Person Two:

See that, I will never do it like this where two dialouges will be consecutively said by the same person as the rest will be confusing.
Never like this:
Person one:
Person one:
Person two:
Person two:

4. Dropping Chance
There will be a chance that I will drop this, and I already want you to know that. I only made this because of the time I have because of Covid19, I'm also writing other books in other sites, which if you add this one up, it's already 5 books I'm working at everyday. But the thing is, I treat the other three books seriously and doesn't publish it until I'm done with the whole story, and that's because I know how everything will play out. Not like this book and the other one book, where as I write, I get ideas while working on it. Might seems stupid but that's how I like it.

5. Copyright 
Of course, I don't own Harry Potter, I'm merely just using the story as m a fullfiller of my imagination and to spend time doing something and actually leveling my skills.

6. Mistakes
Yes, I'm a human, I do make mistakes. Such as grammars, spelling, and basically, my life is a mistake. I'm open for anything, I'm a laid back guy tbh, hate me like me, neither I care for really.

I'm not pursuing you to enjoy the story, give me some stones nor anything like that. I merely made this book for my satisfaction. And would like to share it with you guys for some idk reason.

7. If you find my story bothering, bad, or anything negative, please say it immediately. I mean, if your reason is rational. I'm very open to criticism, and even try to say how can I improve it, I would thankful to try it so. Even though Im writing five books, doesn't mean I'm already good. Bruh, you will puke once you see prolouge. I'm actually new in writing. And just really I write to fulfill what I want to happen in certain story's. 



8. Lastly, Ideas
I do know some readers here wants also their imagination or ideas to be fulfilled. That's a natural thing for readers to feel. Well, if someone do comment an idea that they want to happen. I may consider it or not consider it. That's one of the hard things in making a fan fiction that follows the canon. It's because you have to watch out for the things your MC will do, and it's consequences, you have to be logical, and things the MC should be always rational to continue with the plot. 

So I'm sorry if your idea doesn't get to happen. 
But then, I'm not expecting a lot of viewers. I once made a book on watpadd, when like, years ago, and hell it was already an achievement to get hundred viewers in it. 

Btw, when it comes to updating, idk even know if it will be frequent, even tho it's quarantine time I'm still busy af. 

This is basically it, lmao, btw, watch out for memes. Some references might pop out.

The Wizarding World was blissful as the young wizard hero, Harry Potter, has once again saved the world from the dark wizard, Voldemort.

Unknown to them, there were a lot more people who help to defeat the dark lord. But it just revolves the young man, Harry there, Harry here, Harry everywhere, as always.

Peculiar to his schoolmates, Ron, Hermione, and other more, one stand out from the rest. Unfortunately, not because of his heroic nor anything good in particular, but because of his bad deeds. A man named Elliot. 

But truth, he was framed.

After the sorrowful life he had, he had the chance to change himself.

Himself from the past.

Creating an empire that will stand high among the rest.

(DROPPED)

(These will only be explanations about myself and why everything will happen slower. Also why I chose this story. If you just want to read the story you can basically skip this) :)

I'm German and had English since 5th grade, so I'm fairly decent with the English language if I can say so myself. So apart from spelling, punctuation and maybe a grammar mistake here and there it should be readable.

Now something concerning the story. I'm a big Starcraft and Star Wars Fan so I would love to write Stories about those Universes, the only Problem being that they are so vast and complex that I don't want to write Stuff that's wrong and just ends up breaking the Story/Universe-Immersion.
That's why I chose Pokémon. Everybody knows and loves the Universe and there's not many Laws and Aspects you have to look out for. 

Worst Problem for the story will probably be that I'm a student and most of the time don't have much time on my hands. Moreover, I only played Pokemon Games in German, so I will have to google every single Pokemon Name and Attack - making my Time Problem only worse.
This will be my first story and the first one that I wrote since I was a small child so bear with me. :| 
All advice is welcome if you have any good Ideas plot-wise I have no problem implementing them. I have a general idea where I want to good with the story but nothing for the long term. :D

The Novel-cover is temporary until I find something better, draw something better myself or some kind of Cover-Miracle happens.
 
Ok, let's do this!


(REPOSTED AS AN AUXILIARY CHAPTER!) (EVERYTHING THAT FOLLOWS ARE COMMENTS FROM THE ORIGINAL FOREWORD CHAPTER)

_SomeRandomGuy_
Go for bro👍🏻

usernanne
What I really wish to see at least once, Is an Self/OC insert story that plays out in a time frame of at least a few decades instead of just a few years. What I also find important is for the MC to not always win and maybe even experience huge amounts of loss regardless of preparation and personal power.

AngelElfMask
You've been learning English since the 5th grade and are better at your second language then I am. I am 19 and been learning French since Kindergarden and I only cant to 12 and I only know 3 words being Bonjour (Hello) Aurevior (Bye) and Niege (Snow) I have even had my cousin tutor me and I still cant get it for the life of me :(

Bloosk (as an answer to AngelElfMask's comment)
You're telling me you've been trying to learn French for 14 years but only know 3 words and 12 numbers? Reeks of a lie.

AngelElfMask (as an answer to Bloosk's comment)
Believe it or dont *shrug*

Me (as an answer to Bloosk's comment)
I learned spanish since,... like 9th Grade until 11th grade and only know like 3 sentences. But that's not as long as 14 years so I would agree with you on that, unless he really really wasn't into learning french :D :D :D

BankroMist
gogogogo

PraiseTheSun99
Hey man don't be worried about the small mistakes, i'm in college and still suck at writing. 😭😂

Kylleny2black1 (as an answer to PraiseTheSun99's comment)
... :)

Kylleny2black1
... :)

A 23 year old Student dies in a motorcycle accident. Not having done anything evil in his short life God lets him choose in what Universe he wants spend his next life. After some thinking he decides the wisest choise would be something harmless like the Pokémon Universe. 

Waking up he has to realize that his new Life won‘t be easy as he wished it would be. 
Now stuck with his new body he has to find a good way to live on his own....

As I sleep, there is a voice trying to call out to me. 

"Hey, Wake up.."

I turned my head away. But the sound still didn't go away, instead the voice became even louder, Then, I felt a bit pain above my forehead.

"Write a good story, please make good books!"

I opened my eyes slowly. I didn't remember what I've been doing, nor have I found who was the voice calling out to me, and so too, was the wall I looked at which had some anime drawings plastered on with post-it's of notes beside. As I start to recall what I was going to say or do, just then, the tv in the bedroom turned on despite i was doing nothing, right I was surprised just getting up, and I remember about the book I was practising, as I ignore what happened just now, I get up and grab the phone on the stand and start typing words.

"Hello people, whoever reads my practice story book, I've come to tell you all about some stuff about this book, so here we go!"

All I could remember was when I finally broke down, my heartbeat was pounding like crazy for seconds, and I wanted nothing but to lie down on my bed for a brief rest, perhaps caused by 5 consecutive days of studying and working overtime  at my job I have pushed myself to the limit, to be honest I thought I was dead for a second, oh well, anyway, I am announcing a couple things relating to the story.

"Alright then, this story the way I wanted it to head has broken because of me, why sadly, cause of my practising and trying complicating paths for someone like me, I can't see how this is heading anymore, so it is like a puzzle with bad spellings and even different story writing styles or words layout.

"Despite that I'm still going to be posting here, as for the original story, I plan to re-write the whole thing once someone or myself finds the writing of it ok, what I mean is the way I try explaining my story's for the readers and my interest that I'm satisfied with so I could write more story's as I have a lot of ideas, but my way of explaining is awful I say."

"Next chapter is Kate, to be honest I am never going to do a word layout again, as this chapters side is complex because it's a gaming fantasy i tried from a different book, as the 1th chapter of this book is near the original path, but sad, cause the words are missed up with miss spelling words that ruined it."

"I think I might change the title temporarily or not, I just do not know, ya know.."

"I really want to get good at writing novels for others to read not for my own fame, but to be interesting to read, as light novel books that inspired me to try to write, only thing is I would like to see what I wrote or I gave a great story ideas for someone else to develop on and one day become anime."

"Alex and Kate are my childhood imagination story about anime, as It was a past writing from notes on my old phone and my past View as well as trying to change and fix misspelling behaviour, but now it's like I said broken, won't be good chapters from the original but if you plan to read still, Thank you, and Sorry for the mess


Time [4:34 am] Sunday February 23.

[Author Has Left The Server.]

This is a story about Alex the demon lord he never seen his parents only portraits of them his mother past away giving birth to him his father going in war everyday Alex alone then his father passed away the servants in the house takes hold of  the power to control the country using Alex as their puppet Alex not knowing he was a puppet matures and Learns about what's going on by with his surroundings and his encounter with the hero that was about to slay him changing his destiny and his kingdom that was lost full of evil he changes his people from there evil way since long age. With a Mystery path ahead of him he takes charge coming through tough encounters and happy counters all stuff he never got to truly enjoy in his life with his kind heart or dark heart that changes him for the better or worst through his adventures in this Cruel world

I've never really written about myself before. I don't know if it's cause I don't really value myself enough? Or because I'm not a narcissist? I think I over think myself.

Can you tell I'm a little odd? Well I've never really wanted to do anything, not anything worth value anyway. I mean I've got no skills to speak of, this is really the only thing I really enjoy. Except for other... slightly less acceptable things. (if you catch my drift)

I am a writer, and not a very good one. But lets get into this.

I love writing, when I was a highschool student I found it as a kind of... escape. writing that first story helped this shitty Author through a lot of deep shit I will get into later.

So, ever heard of Wattpad? Well that's where it all started for me. I was introduced to the app by a mutual friend of mine, lets call her H. She was writing Adult stories, use in the business call... Smut. it's kind of like fifty shades of grey with terrible writing. She asked a Friend and I to read it, and I did. But the first thing that was on my mind was that I wanted to do that.

NO NOT WHAT SHE WROTE ABOUT. I wanted to take a crack at writing, English was one of my favorite subjects in school. I loved reading but had an average reading level. So, I set up a Wattpad account. My first account has a pretty weird name, all because I rushed it.

I needed a name for the app, I was too embarrassed to go by my real name. So I used my Ps4 user name. RedisDead, but I fucking spelt it Readisdead. That was my first account.

Now the only time I had ever tried my hand at writing was in the 8th grade, creative writing section of English. Plus it was a short story, so I was running on ideas that were pretty, cliche. 

Story Number 1- Prince of the Sun and Moon
I wanted to say that this story does not in fact, have anything to do with the sun or moon. I wrote this because I was on an Anime binge, specifically magic Academy ones. Remember the magic Academy thing, that will be a main concept for my other "creations" later.

I don't really know what to say about this one, it's one my first stories and was my first attempt at fantasy. Let me tell you, I can't get enough of fantasy. Nothing makes you feel better about your sad life than creating a new one for your imaginary characters to run wild in.

Thinking back to how I was then... I feel bad, I was going through a lot of emotional problems. 

I was a shut in, I can't say for certain what happened but one day I just decided I would rather stay inside my room then go outside and play. I never really made friends, but being bullied by everyone in your grade can cause that. People were always nice in highschool though, I think they might have felt bad. Or they were making themselves look better infront of everyone else. Being nice to the weird kid, congrats.

So, you can guess that if I didn't like those people you bet your ass I never felt attracted to anybody. But I did fall for a new kid. 

Will call her K for now. That smile... she was weird, but a hot kind of weird you know? She was quirky and funny and had a face that made my heart melt like butter in a microwave. She was chubby too, like a cute little marshmallow.

But looks can be deceiving. Wish I would have known that before falling in love but hey, does anyone?

She wasn't always a terrible person. But my class has a way of bringing the worst out of people. Or maybe it was my fault? 

Fuck, if your reading this what would you say K? I need the answers but we don't talk.

okay, lets look at this from my perspective.
She was always nice to me, I mean REALLY nice. laughing at my stupid jokes and always greeted me with a smile. But my dumb idiot brain did register that SHE FUCKING LIKED ME!!

Okay so eventually she started wearing longer sleeved jackets all the time, she started acting differently. Started ignoring me occasionally, called me annoying and being rude.

Then I saw something that broke my heart. Her arms, they were sliced up. Not alot but still, she was cutting. I expressed my concern for her but she gave me the cold shoulder. 

A couple weeks go by and she skips school here and there I don't see her, then the day that makes me hate myself. Now I promise you, she did not kill herself. This is not one of those stories.

I'm excited she's back at school and I see her again. I catch her when she's taking off her hoody and... She lost weight, alot of weight.

It finally hit, she's dealing with depression. But why? Did someone call her fat or something? 
This pisses me off, I'm a pacifist by nature at this point but I'm ready to throw down.

But now that I have a little more clarity on the situation, I sometimes think me. 
See a couple months later I make a new friend. Call this guy... F.

He's tall and actually funny once you get to know him. He's actually still one of my closest friends.

I introduce F to K, they hit it off and eventually start dating. I kind of stop talking to F because he starts dating the girl I'm in love with but that's not important.

what is the fact that a month or two into them dating that K tells me something. Something that spirals me into a deep depression for a long time.

K-"So do you like me?"
Me-"yeah your one of my best friends!"
K-"you know what I mean like LIKE me. Because when I first met you I had feelings for you."

What the actual fuck? She's dating my BEST FUCKING FRIEND and tells me this shit? Not cool man, is this some kind of way to torture me?

Ever since they got together she seemed to be back to normal. So I was happy, but deep down I wished I was him. Comment if you ever felt like this. I would love to talk to someone about it.

Honesty? I felt pathetic, worthless. If I had worked up the courage I would be the one getting kissed. I kept telling myself I wasn't ready. But forget how I felt, lets go back to K.

she had suddenly lost weight. Alot of weight, treated me different.

Is it my fault? Did she think I didn't feel that way because she was slightly over weight? She dropped the weight because of me. That's how I felt but right now, I know that's the case. She didn't really care about me or F all she cared about was herself. Get all the attention she believed she needed. She had Mommy issues. 

Think I'm being harsh? She straight up cheated on F and broke up with him. Then to make matters worse... She ran away for two weeks.

This unfortunate series of events destroyed F, he hated himself. Let's put the kind of man he was into perspective. He didn't take shit from anyone, he liked to laugh and was happy to make others laugh. But when she ran away from home he locked up.

I'm not using names on purpose, because I don't want people who I know to read this and get mad. But I want to tell you this, the human heart is fragile. 

I say this because we laugh about it now. F, I'm glad your alive man.

F was five feet from killing himself. He went home the day he found out and dug out his dads old 45. He was ready to pull that trigger.

F is a strong ass dude, he managed to put the gun down. Put it away, he's only ever told me this. So for the sake of my friendship... Don't read this F. 

Well. That's all for now my friends, I'd tell you more but I think it got a little dark there.

Kind of a set of me talking about... well me and my Boring life as someone who found a way to cope with life by writing

[Disclaimer the one who wrote this chapter is the author Sinbi]

Sitting in front of his computer, a sad but sweet song in Korean could be heard throughout the quiet room.

While contemplating between whether or not SinBi wanted to play games or write, a notification suddenly surfaced on Discord.[1]

"DING!"

"Let's play some normals!"[2]

Seeing the message sent by his friend, SinBi replied with one word.

"Later!"

After replying, SinBi tabbed out of Discord onto Google Chrome, preparing to write. However, the situation hadn't ended as he immediately heard a series of 'dings.'

Opening Discord once again, words continuously flooded his screen causing SinBi to stare in stupefaction.

"Now!"

"Now!"

"Play now!"

"You're not busy at all!!"

Relenting, SinBi didn't know whether to cry or not. "Okay, just 1-2 games, I really have something to do!" Immediately sending an angry emoji[3] afterwards.

Logging into League of Legends, SinBi accepted the party invite that he had received upon going online.

Joining the party, he saw 3 of his other friends also online while deciding to join their VC.[4]

"Yo, Yo, Yo!" Entering the call, SinBi promptly greeted his friends while calling his role decisively. 

"Top Lane!"

"Yeah, yeah, we already knew you were gonna go top."

After sorting out their roles, the party of 5 started a match while everyone talked about who's gonna carry or who's gonna be feeding.[5]

SinBi was quiet though because he was trying to play his KPOP on the Rhythm Bot.

As the bot joined and started playing his playlist, his friends immediately whined. "Bro...don't you have any Chinese songs to play? Why is it always KPOP that you're so obsessed with?"

"What, play songs I can understand please! English!!"

"If you wanna listen to your songs so bad, just queue it up, hmph." Not caring about their remarks at all, SinBi focused on the game.

"Camille is teleporting bot, I'm following, continue fighting, we can 3v3."

"Their jungler is in the river, I can come but I'll be late." SinBi's friend A immediately called out.

"Sivir, Sivir, no flash!"

"I have ult, keep chasing."

"Okay stunning in 3, 2, 1!"

One player after another fell on the enemy team by SinBi's team. "Okay, we win! GG!"[6]

Finishing his game SinBi wanted to log off, telling his friends that he had to do something. 

"Okay, that's it for me, cya."

But his friends didn't let him off the hook. "What? You're leaving after we won? Haven't you heard of the phrase 'continue if you're winning?' before?"

"But…" SinBi had no idea what he was going to say as he already knew that he couldn't go write with his friends persuasions. And what was this 'continue if you're winning' phrase? What utter nonsense! Did he not hear of the phrase 'quit while you're ahead' before?!

Okay, letting out a slight chuckle, SinBi had to admit that his phrase was pretty nonsensical too…

"Fine…" Giving in once more, he continued to play.

What was meant to be one game that took about 40 minutes prolonged to hours after hours.

Finally after who knows how long, all his friends had to go as SinBi stretched his body while checking the time. 

10:00PM

". . ." Scratching his eye while blinking a couple more times, SinBi made sure that he was reading the clock correctly.

"Well...crap." It's already this late?!?!

He still had to write, shower, brush his teeth and do some studying…

"Ugh...I'll just write 2 chapters tomorrow. It's fine."

Walking up his stairs to the restroom, SinBi took a shower, brushing his teeth afterwards before studying a bit, becoming sleepy extremely quickly.

Going onto his bed, SinBi quickly dozed off dreaming a bit.

DING DING DING DING

Loud sounds of sirens reverberated through SinBi's room. 

Waking him up, he continued to lay on his bed with his eyes closed while trying to reach and find his phone. 

After stumbling around for a bit, SinBi finally managed to open his phone and shut the alarm off before sleeping again. 

Yet after another 5 minutes, the same type of sounds could be heard once again. 

DING DING DING DING

"Annoying…" Muttering in a soft voice, SinBi finally got up and took a quick shower before scrolling through the notifications on his phone.

This was what he did every day as soon as he woke up, except sometimes he would browse his phone before taking a shower.

"Novel has been updated…"

"Novel has been updated…"

Message from Discord: "Hey are you awake?"

"Webcomic has been updated…"

Clearing it all, he decided to read the newly updated chapters of the novels he was currently reading.

Finishing them all, SinBi played his KPOP playlist once again, learning from his previous mistake not to show himself online on Discord so his friends wouldn't get him to play again. "I have to write no matter what today…"

Opening up Google Docs, SinBi re-read his previous chapter to jog his memory before writing the next one.

Except, he didn't know where to start…

Starting off a new chapter was always confusing for him, questions surfaced on his mind as he wondered how he could go about it.

Pondering for a bit, SinBi thought of a pretty emotional idea for his main character as he started writing.

However once he got into it, SinBi became unsatisfied, erasing the words he wrote down while starting over again.

He does this multiple times and sometimes more than he should, but SinBi would always be satisfied with his writing after a while.

Getting more in-depth into his writing, SinBi did some research over the fan-sites, wikiapedia[7] and digging through old chapters of the original novel to make sure that there were no loopholes with his fan-fiction.

Speaking of this, SinBi didn't understand the hate with fan-fictions at all!

Were fan-fictions not novels? Just because they weren't original ideas doesn't mean that the amount of work placed into writing one was easy. 

Sure there were some novels that weren't up to par, but he knew that his was very good!

He not only spent a long time thinking and writing about his ideas, he also takes a long time thinking of new names for characters, setup and background of how his story was gonna be different while also researching and digging through the original novel's chapters so some of the ideas didn't coincide and make loopholes that were confusing to the readers…

At times, reading some of the original novel's on WebNovel, SinBi would think to himself that he puts way more work than some authors who are writing their own original story…

Sometimes, the truth may not be what it seems.

Just because someone was good or talented at something doesn't designate them as a genius or prodigy…

You wouldn't know how much effort and work they put in behind the scenes...you should always recognize them for their hard work and look beyond the conclusions that you jump to.

Although sometimes they may be true, but most of the times, the truth can oftentimes be shocking.

"Don't lose track of a gem, jumping to glitter."

...…..

Hey guys! SinBi, Rwgey, or Rum here! If you guys don't know me from the Webnovel Discords, I am the author of a fan-fiction novel called 'The Queen's Avatar.'

And as many of you may have guessed, it is a fan-fiction of the novel 'The King's Avatar.'

If you're into video games, I highly recommend the novel!! And maybe you can stop by my novel too. :)

Now with that said, this was the first time I was writing something like this so I hope you guys can bear with the awkward transitions between the third person view.

Still I hope you guys enjoyed my perspective in writing and what I think about the Webnovel community.

While reading, you may notice that there are numbers behind some of the acronyms/words, that was there to define some of the uncommon words/terms that you may not be familiar with, if you are curious and want to know what they mean, here they are!

[1] Discord - Voice Chatting Software/Program. 
[2] Normals - Referring to a game mode inside the video game that was represented in the chapter.
[3] Angry Emoji - The emoji that was used:
[4] VC - Voice Call/Voice Chat. Joining a call with people that requires a microphone to talk into.
[5] Feeding/Carrying - Terms generally used in Gaming, feeding means you're trolling/doing bad. Carrying means you're doing exceptionally well, figuratively, 'carrying your teammates on your back' in the game.
[6] GG - Good Game, generally said after a round or the end of a game as a form of 'good sportsmanship.'
[7] Wikiapedia - Spelled like this on purpose, it's a variation of Wikipedia that gives information on various fan-made pages like 'The King's Avatar.'

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P.S The Cover Drawing is not mine. I just find it nice so I used it. Full credits go to the owner.

Getting alot of questions and i figured i would answer them and maybe put some thoughts down.

Why i'm not releasing chapters faster. I've gotten quite a few messages asking for a faster release and what-not so i want to tackle this first. I don't know about others, but writing is hard. I have tons of ideas and scenarios play out in my head quite a bit, but transferring that onto paper and making it a coherent story is harder than it seems (to me atleast). Extending the release date from every day to every two days gives me plenty of time to get my thoughts out correctly so i'm not rushing and writing something i feel is sub-par just because i have to hurry and pump it out.  I have the general outline of what i'm doing with the story and where its eventually going to end up and finally end. But that doesn't mean i have everything ready for every world down to the detail. Hell, i'm not even set on which world is going to be next out of a list of a few. As i mentioned previously, i do have chapters saved up for later worlds but i'm not there yet and it may be while to get to that point. 

Speaking of the future, there is an overarching plot that has started recently. While i enjoy just going to another world and mucking around, i felt it would be better with more structure to go along with that. An actual objective to be fulfilled, not just having fun. I set goals early on and i set a vague job along with an unknown enemy. Somes world he will be going back to, maybe on missions, maybe just to visit. I'm separating the entire story into three 'books'. The first book is Alex by himself traveling. The second book is when he meets back up with Medusa. And the Third book is a secret for now. I have no set length on how long they're going to be yet.

I have some thoughts to break the 'mold' for when the story progresses more. Events are going to happen that cause chaos in quite  a few places. 

Now to talk about the current arc and how it pertains to future arcs. I'm taking it slow, i think thats obvious so far. The first plot point was jumped into immediately but once Alex began to interact witht he world, it slowed down. Its not just going to be non-stop action and plot points. I may even make up my own developments that aren't canon. In my opinion, when the worlds feel more alive, and the characters are more flushed out, incidents and fights feel more impactful. If i just had this arc be like 5 chapters with the ending reveal being like 'yo i'm king Arthur' it would be meh as opposed to setting up these budding relationships. Alex forging bonds with those around him and then finally being like yeah i'm actually the former King of Camelot. Thats my opinion atleast, i feel like the 'epic moments' having more set up provides a better pay-out. 

I think i covered most of what i wanted and i can't think of anything else at the moment. As always leave any suggestions about worlds or anything like that. I don't guarantee i'll use any but they sometimes gives me good ideas.

In his first life, he died dreaming of a normal life. In his second life, he felt something missing. In his third life..... 

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A version of Proto Arthur from the fate series travels to different worlds.

Blah blah Patreon, https://www.patreon.com/BasketSlayer

Hello
For those of you who are wondering why I'm not writing is because
1) my ideas are all over the places, I tried writing but it seemed bland.
2) I started this just for fun, but I still don't want to produce something bad.
3) I didn't plan ahead about the story
4) There's  also a bit financial problem
5) need to search in detail about the Naruto and the others where the mc will go

Theres also the fact that I lack good novel vocabulary and writing style so I need a bit time for all those research thus my last chapter was a bit rushed and poorly executed.
So I'm asking for 1month break then I'll come back with the best novel.

Thx for reading and PEACE  ✌️ OUT

After an unfortunate death our protagonist was given a choice to go to a different world and start anew. Join him on his adventure to travel throughout the anime verse 

Hello guys I am a new writer and I'm just trying this out to see how far I can go and how much I can butcher my fav anime and novel hahahah, so please be lenient with me as I might ... uhhh scratch that as I will make some mistake.

write me some idea of what you'd like and which anime world.

cover by some guy in discord

1-3 chapters per week, and if possible I’ll try to do more.

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