What will happen if the past meets the future? A happy ending or sad ending?

Some might think that i am fool but they do know little about me...... 


This story was just base on my emagination and its my first time writing a story i hope i will not make enemy because of my poor english ☺ 

Please help me help you

everyone, I am sorry but I have decided to drop this story, for good. I don't see a point in writing it anymore, I don't have the time either, I could spend the time I write this doing more useful things.
This story was meant to spread ideas and all but now I feel like it has turned into wish-fulfillment, I don't like where it is heading.
if anyone feels like it could have been better or achieved something, you can rewrite or continue the story with the image in your mind and post it on your profile I don't care about it. 
I will continue writing my original (A Journey to Eternity) and post chapters once in a while.
As for other reasons that I dropped it:
1. Writing fanfiction has no use for me personally, I originally wanted my ideas to be known and my writing skills to improve with writing this and since it clearly is not anymore then I will stop.
2. the very Few retarded Readers out there. there is a simple way to say this if you don't like a story then stop reading it, nobody cares about your opinion, don't share it. it will make the Author's mood gloomy no matter the person and result in him dropping the story, especially fanfiction because most Author's don't make money out of it and are most likely writing it out of passion and admiration for the original story or a character or etc. you ruin this feeling by flaming them, if you wanna share your opinion speak with logic and reason and help the Author become better by giving your opinion/advice in a respectful manner, I can go into a long discussion about this matter but lets stop it here.
3. the point of every story is to teach us how to be better, Romance at love and understanding the opposite sex, sci-fi at science and possible future of our technology, anime and things like that help open your mind and creativity sometimes they teach useful life lessons too, I can go on and on about this. my fanfic didn't have that feeling to it, any story that teaches nothing useful to its readers is just wasting the reader's time, it may make the reader feel good but in fact, is ruining their life by wasting their time for nothing. Having fun reading is not the most important part of it, the most important part is to learn and evolve. Wish-fulfillment stories have only two uses that I can think of, making the reader feel good about himself and heal some psychological problems, I don't wanna sin like that against people who support my story.
4. The problem with Webnovel's system is the fact that it forces you to have the feeling to write, I don't know how it does this but I reached a point where I couldn't stop writing, this caused alarm bells to ring in my mind and it made me rethink writing Fanfic. this could be only me though because when I don't write in Webnovel it causes me to feel this pressure to post a chapter.
that is pretty much it, I don't want to waste any more of your precious time so this is it.
Don't waste any more spirit stones on this Fanfic, it is dead for good.
If you enjoyed this Story, Check out my A journey to Eternity, I am trying to write a unique Xianxia story, I suggest you read it when it hits 30 chapters because till then I am considering how the plot and ending should turn out, what information and teachings I want it to share with the reader and etc.
THE END.

A teenager complained to god because living on the earth was so restricting and there existed no adventures or anything interesting in the world except entertainment like anime, games, movies, etc. 
"I wish I could go on an adventure like those fantasies and be a godlike character". 
A God took pity on him, Granted him his wish not knowing that in the future it shall cause unimaginable chaos.
(MC will awaken in warring states era (Naruto) as Madara Uchiha's supposedly dead younger brother, Akihiro Uchiha)

Hello,  I'm a new author in writing a story so i do apologize early on for plot holes and grammar mistakes hopefully you all can help me by providing good feedback and helping me with my story. Please do not forget I'm new to writing i've seen people read a story for 2 years and still complain about plot holes and Etc. I will be using Grammarly to help me in writing my story

There once was a boy named keno his father was the King of rekin Kingdom

Chapters per week 2 may vary due to school

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I am In need of a artist to draw my book cover

Dear reader,

I haven't finished this story like I thought I would. I started writing this story in honor of a friend who last her life, because she loved her cousin. Her family found out about their secret love and the pain was to much for her.
I wanted to write a story, about two lovers who were cousins to help people understand it better.
I didn't think it was right for her to be treated the way she was. I thought if it was ok for a boy to love a boy, or a girl to love a girl,  then cousins being lovers shouldn't be so bad.
However, I am not a writer as much as I always wanted to be. I'm dyslexic, I misspell a lot and worse of all know matter how hard I try, I can't write a story I can't make one up like most people can. I write what's true and real, or I bass it off my life. 

I have a cousin named Max, we're close he's my best friend I trust him with my life. 
in order to write this story, I needed help I based it on my time with my cousins last summer, I just changed a few things the cuddles and hugs the romantic feeling, that was all my friend, what she told me what her family hated her for. 
Max wanted to help me with it by pretending to date me, so that I could better understand what my friend went through. We would have conversations through texting much like any teenager would with their boyfriend or girlfriend. 
It got out of hand,
I started to forget that he was my cousin, it was an everyday thing we did.
I don't know what I was thinking, it was wrong and stupid of me.
I guess I just needed a way to escape my problems and he did too,
I thought maybe this was his way of getting back at his ex, or running away from real life like I was. 
It was wrong of me in so many ways.

Today on Monday, March 16.
His sister went through his phone, 
she thought that everything we said was real. 
I told her about the story and what we were doing, but she doesn't want anything to do with me anymore. 
I can't live with that, I lost the respect of all my cousins and who ever else she told.
I'm not sure what I'm going to do now, I'm not sure if I'll keep writing this story or not.
I know what ever happens, I deserve it.


Tell me dear reader,
what would you have done?
Should I keep writing this story?
Should I leave home?
Thank you for reading. goodnight.

Some of the authors on Webnovels were inspired to write their own stories after reading the works of famous authors. Perhaps some of them believed that they could do a better job. Some of them ran out of things to read, so they decided to write the "story" that they want to read. While others… just want to write a story that they think will be popular to the readers.

Ironically, the stories that they had written also inspired other readers to write their own stories as well. Hopefully, this cycle will never end. So that the future generations will be able to read new and exciting stories that will show them a world filled with sword, magic, cultivation, and Lo--

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Xandarx: There's a reason for them to be famous as they have their style

Zenith: lol.

Xandarx: You can see it from their work, it's true. Like their character has embedded into the book. This is what make them different I think.

Zenith: I know. But not everyone is as great as you show them to be. They learn from their previous works While we are still struggling to finish one.

Xandarx: Yeah, I know.

Zenith: They move on and get better that's where the difference lies. If you see any CN author who made it big, you can see that they had their share of experience before getting there, or for that matter, any author in the Western world.

Murakami: Not necessarily publishing houses only accept works they think will sell.

Zenith: The ones who get it big the first time are rare.

Murakami: So you might not see how they built up to their debut novel. Authors can have 15-20 scrapped novels b4 they debut, and the public don't get to read a single one.

Reili: Yikes.

Xandarx: Yeah.

Zenith: That doesn't make the author lose his experience of writing those scrapped novels that's the point I was making.

Murakami: But it also means that it's more like hit and miss.

Reili: True because they don't get the feedback from fans.

Murakami: They get limited feedback from an agent/editor who doesn't want to read their work.

Zenith: Yeah, but it surely is better than nothing.

Murakami: And they're left with a bunch of abstract and vague advice that they have no idea how to implement.

Reili: If they don't enjoy it, the feedback won't be as insightful.

Zenith: They can learn from their mistakes from reading their own works.

Reili: Well…

Zenith: If possible, from platforms.

Murakami: If they knew how to do that they'd fix it and publish it.

Reili: It would make the process easier if someone who enjoys the book to give them better feedback.

Zenith: It's called rewriting from scratch, and it takes a tonne of time if the author feels more interested in some other idea of his, he would do that.

Reili: I suppose so since the author being inspired will bring his book along.

VKBoy: If the ones giving review are professional editors, then they don't necessarily have to have read your work with immersion because their suggestions will still likely cover the basic flaws that amateurish writers usually make.

Reili: Point taken.

Zenith: Yeah.

Murakami: @VKBoy if they spot those errors they'll put down the manuscript after the first page

Reili: Then again, its a little bit like movie critics. They may hate the movie, but fans love it.

Zenith: Yeah.

Murakami: And then send a reply saying, "Don't send in another manuscript until you learn how to write properly."

Zenith: Professionals in the said field prefer not taking risks. Especially in movies, but books, you can keep trying.

VKBoy: Well, if there are errors in the first page itself, that's a whole different thing, lol.

Reili: True.

Murakami: No, but a good editor can tell the writing quality from just the first page even if you've crafted it perfectly, they can just tell that the rest will be shit.

Reili: You have to also take into account of one punch man. The original comic looks terrible, but the redraw made it amazing.

Zenith: That's smartness of the creator.

VKBoy: Well, in one punch man's case, it got attention from the companies after it got popular in the online communities.

Reili: So a persons writing and grammar may be terrible, but with a little editing, the story itself could be amazing.

Zenith: You can let the editor do the Shi*t and focus on your story, It works.

Overlord Venus: Yeah, solo leveling is a good example. The story is bland.

Reili: But it would also help if the author re-reads the edit to make sure the essence of their story is still there.

HavenlyJeep: Essence and core backbone.

Zenith: @Reili It depends on what the author wants, and how much work he is willing to put in.

Reili: @Zenith true.

VKBoy: Of course, some editors just butcher the style of the author.

Reili: Same but honestly I just use Grammarly and the read aloud function in word to make sure the chapter makes sense.

Zenith: You can learn about writing, grammar, editing if you truly want. It is just the question of, would you?

Reili: I'm more into thinking up ideas and writing them than editing.

VKBoy: Editing is also writing, mate. Rewriting is where real writing lies.

Zenith: It's a skill in writing a story, but your choice.

Reili: Point taken.

Murakami: You can't be a writer without being an editor.

Zenith: Editing it yourself can help you keep the heart of the story.

Reili: That being said, the more I write, the better my basic grammar became.

Zenith: You will keep the feels right.

Reili: Editing is now part of the process.

Zenith: And not make it just sound or look better, you give what the story wants
And that is a great thing.

Reili: Creative freedom.

Zenith: I want to learn grammar and revise what I learned.

VKBoy: @Zenith Learning grammar will take years, so take it slow and steady. That way, memories stick with you for longer times.

Reili: I do read mtl sometimes since I can't wait for chaps, but then I find myself reading in broken English and must stop.

Murakami: I'd like to correct that statement VKBoy. Learning grammar is easy
learning "usage" is hard.

VKBoy: lol, if you read mtl, your IQ drops. Believe me, this can affect a person's writing skill in the long run.

Reili: Definitely, which is why I stopped.

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Author's Notes

I'm sure you've read this a few times in the previous chapters, but I had been reading MTL chapters for the past few years. I usually read "Completed" stories, and most of them are around 2-4k chapters each. Of course, I read the translated chapters first. After I reach the latest translated chapter, I will immediately jump to *cough* Google Translate.

Yeah~ I know. Reading chapters through Google Translate was the most…epic mistake I did in the past. I've finished World Defying Dan God, Battle Through the Heavens uhh…and a few more novels using Google Translate.

In the later years, I discovered lnmtl.com, which gave me a better translation (at least the names of the characters are not written like Cloud Che instead of Yun Che (Against the Gods). 

To be perfectly honest, If I didn't start writing, I would have continued to read these machine translated chapters even now. Reading MTL works if English is not your first language.

This is something that those with English as their main language will scoff at. However, for those who just want to read. As in reading something without worrying about anything else, then they won't care even if it's a machine translated chapter. As long as they will be able to read the NEXT chapter, then it's all good.

This is also the reason why I admire translators. If not for them, these stories that we are not aware of will not be able to grace us with their presence. I would like to thank the translators of my favorite novels like Lord of Mysteries, Release that Witch, Against the Gods, Cultivation Chatgroup, Second Coming of Avarice, and so many other titles that I won't be able to list here.

To my beloved readers, if there will come a time when you feel like writing a story of your own and you're reading machine translated chapters, please stop now. I'm saying this for your own good. 

I understand how you feel. Believe me I do, but for the sake of the story you're going to write in the future, heed my advice. Stop now, while you still have the chance. Learning how to write from scratch with broken English is a painful process.

Then again, if you find an editor who is a masochist, consider yourself lucky. Let them clean up your mess for you, so you can focus on writing your story, and learn the art of writing while you write.

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P.S The Cover Drawing is not mine. I just find it nice so I used it. Full credits go to the owner.

Yo. Makina_ here. don't know what's happening anymore. I uhh. This has never happened before. I mean, It's my first time writing on webnovel. Can someone write on your books without permission? I've seen Makina's notes that I didn't write. Please fix it. I didn't delete them. It's proof that someone's tampering with my novel. So I will leave the story "The Trolley Problem", like this. Unfinished. I just don't want someone doing this. As long as they're not posting/altering my book, I'm fine with that. But for now, I'll leave this one. It will resume this story once I feel like the person messing with me is gone. In it's stead, I'm writing a new story! One that has supernatural powers. This book is submitted to a supernatural power writing contest. This book clearly has not reached that stage. It's going to be an exciting ride for all of us. I'm sorry for abandoning this story. If you're reading this, thank you and please support my other work.  

I'm sorry for this news. It just feels like I'm not developing my own story anymore. Also, to the person writing, feel free to do so. Write new chapters! I want to see what you come up with. And next time, please contact me if you want to collaborate. I'm not a professional. I definitely need help. You're in charge of this story now. Please make it into a good one.

- Makina_.

Written: Saturday, October 12 6:53 PM

T̷̨h͞ìs ̨l͝es͞şo̷͏̕ǹ͟'҉s̵̢̢ ҉w̸͘ay ͜͏ţ͟o̸͜o̵ ̶̛b̴̧͠or̕iǹ͝g͞͞!̸ ̧T̕͠͠h̕ȩ̧͢ ̡͜b͟o̴̡y̨̨ ͢t̶̷ho̵ug̷h̀t̢̀̀.͜ ̶̢W̨͝h̛į͟͠le d̷̢o̕ź̛͘i͢͠͠n̴̸͏g̴͢ ͡ò̷͡f̸̡f̨͟͠ ̶̕dur͘i̡n̸g͜͡ cla̶̶̕s҉̸s̨͠͡,͢ ̀͢a ̧v̕o̷͢͡i͘͝͡c̨͢ę ͝ó̸̀n͠҉̡ ̶̸̧hi̛s͞ ̶̢͟ḑr̕͡͏e͟am̨ s͞pe̵̡̛a͏͡k͞s͏ ̸a̶n͢͞͡d͜͞ a͟s҉ks҉͜ ͜ḩ͡ím ̡̀ą̷ ͏͝q̴͞u̸͡e͜s͡t̴i̢͞o͏ǹ̶.͘͠ ͏T̵hè̸̢ ̀͝T͘͠r҉͏́ò̴l̸͢l̛̀͢e̷͢͞y̡͘ ҉P̵̢r̡ob͢҉l͠e̶m̸̴.̶͞ ͟A̵͜ ̕m̵̨o̵͝r̡̛al ͠d̸i̷͡lęm̸̕ma҉.̸͞͞ ̧͢͡"͝҉͘Wí̶l̀͞ĺ҉ y̕̕͢o̴u̕͏ ̀s̡a̴c̵̶͘r̡̛i͟f͢͟ic͡҉̸è̛͞ ͢͜oņe͏͏̴ ̴̢͢p̛͟͏e̵r̸̀͟so̸ń ͘t͏o ̶̡͜sa̶͟͜v͏̧e̷̡͘ f̛̛͡i̸̷̕v̢͜é͟?͢͟͝"̶ ̷T̢h̸̛e͞ ̧̢͝b́ǫy̵͘͏ ̨conf́̕i͟ḑ͟e̶͜n̶͝t̶͢l̨y͘̕͝ anş̶́w̸er̛s̕͘͞,̛ ̵̛s͢҉a͘͜͞y̨͏͘in͘͝g̢ ̀̕t͏͜h̨a̵t͟͡ ̵͢h͡è̶͞'͡͏d́͘͘ ̀͟s̀͠a͏̴ćr͠͡i̧͡f̀͜i̕c̴͟e ̷̛h͟͝í͜m̡͡s̛e̡͜ĺf ̨̕i̵̛ņş͘͢tȩ̴͜a̛͟d̛ ̵i͘͡f̵͢ ͝t͠h͝at̀ ͏̧̨c̛͠o͏u̸͟͞l̵̛͝d ̸̡ş̵͘a̡͘͡v̵̕͜e ̵҉s̨͝į͡x́ p̴̴͠e̕op͝l͞e.̢ ̢͏U̵̴p̛͝o҉̵n͠͏ ̨͘w̕a̛͠k͜i͞n̴͘g u̡҉̵p̷͏,͢ ̶h͝ís͟ ̷̕͝lí̶̧f̨ę̷ ͘͟bȩ̷̸c̷a̴m̡e ͝u͡n̸̕u͞s̴̵̡ų̀͟al̨l͟y͢͝ ̸e̴̡̛ven̸t̶̨f͠ul̵͠.̶ ̢I̧f̡̕ ̨̕he̡ ͏͜e̵͏̢x̕p̛͝e̵r̵ię̛n͜͢c̸e͜͡s̀ ҉̀s͘͢͝o̡͏m̶e̸̛t͞h̛͜i̶҉҉n̴g ͟s̷̡i͢͏m͡͏i͏̛l̴aŕ͜ ͟t̨͢o͞ ̛͡th͜͜é ̛͘͞t̸͜r̛o͜͡l͘l͡͝e̵̷̕ỳ̶̨ ͘pr̛̕͟o̴̶b̷͜le̕҉m̧,̵͠ ͞w̷̸i̷̵̛l̛l̴ h҉ę̛ ̸b̕e͠ a̸̴b͘ļ͡é̸ t̴ó ͘s͟t̡͢a̧n̷҉d ̛b̷̕͝y̷̨ ̸h̶i̢̕s̨͜ s͟͜e̶͝l̸͏̢f̵̢l͞e̵̴ss͡͏̡ ̨wo̡r̷̨d̶͏s̀?̶͟

There was someone I loved who loved angels. And I started writing this story for that person. When I found out that we couldn't live as one, I stopped writing because of that heartbreak. 

But I'll very well finish this story. It would be a sin to do otherwise. I would wrong my two babies, Black and Eve if I don't complete this story. 

I know I'm a crude in writing. There are not many subplots. I don't develop my side characters well. My world isn't much detailed. But I gave this story everything I felt about love. And I've tried to keep this story without any R-rated scenes. 

I'm just a man with a little story to tell and I'd like you guys to help me by telling my mistakes and where I can work harder. I welcome every suggestion critique. If there are still errors left, feel free to tell in the comment section. I regularly read them.

For those who have read the unedited story, thanks for staying with me. I'll update another prologue in auxiliary volume to tell where I'll be going with the story and continue further updated after my exams are over. By the way, do you guys like this cover or previous one? 

Thank you and enjoy! :)

I put this on kindle and I sadly had to keep that exclusive to kindle for three months. That's why I removed it. I'll update every chapter now. Sorry...

Hi everyone! This is my first story. So please Support me. Constructive comments are welcomed. Please don't be harsh as I am still in the learning phase. If there is any mistake please point it out as it will be helpful for me to improve. 
Now a few words about the story plot.
One day I had this strange dream, I travelled back in time and faced a Zombie breakout. so cliched right😅 I thought so too..  Not only that, I also had a crush, love rival and a bestie. After waking up I had a lightbulb moment and thought of writing a story out of this crazy dream. I always wanted to try writing a webnovel always stuck at how to take the story forward but this time I am a bit confident in bringing this story to you all. Let us travel together with this strange dream of mine. 
Once again this is my first time writing a web novel so please be understanding and Kindly advice me on my mistakes and suggestions are welcomed too as it will help me improve and inspire me to write more. Love you all and please support me and my story. I hope it will be to your liking.

Opening her eyes Lina found that she travelled back in time. What a cliche. Maybe this is her last chance to turn things back. A chance at life, love and to face the upcoming apocalypse.


This story revolves around a challenging crisis and her love life.

Please give this story a chance??

Q: How can you start writing a sequel to a story you haven't finished yet?
A: Project Soul is a very ambitious project of mine, the story is immerse, its Universe is incredibly huge and can lead to many side stories/events in different timelines, it's literally a never-ending story. Even though I haven't finished the main story (which is currently at about 80% finished) I can already set a new storyline way after the events of the main story.

Q: Is the story still the same? What is it about?
A: The core elements of Project Soul are the same as in Project Soul Reloaded, it's not a direct sequel, it's a different story but the core elements can be found all around the storyline, and it's very spiritual. I can't talk a lot about it (spoilers)

Q: Do you have any writing skills?
A: No, the truth is, I write mostly what I feel, I've been developing such a huge project with no writing skills at all, however, I know what I want to do. I carefully write the dialogue between characters, and when it comes to narration, the best way to show what is happening is by showing it, I could show a scene if I edit it myself and that will help a lot.

Q: There are so many genres? Can you clarify that out?
A: Action and adventure are the main genre. However, it will focus strongly on the supernatural and spiritual themes. It will explore the different layers of humanity, anger, joy, sadness, death, life, and transform them into a beautiful, innocent message.

Q: Is it worth reading your story?
A: Project Soul Reloaded is a story that has a lot of fighting, a lot of action, but at the same time it has many heart-breaking moments, scenes, dialogues, etc. If you like that combination, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

Project Soul Reloaded follows the story of a young guy named Tadashi. One day, after being knocked down and failing to save a girl from being beaten to death, he felt that there was no reason for him to live like he wanted to, protecting the people he loves.
However, a mysterious identity helps him redeem himself and uncover the secrets of his life and who he really is, leading to his awakening and unlocking a series of powers he once had.
With his new supernatural powers, he can now fight those who cause damage to people, as well as discovering more of his true identity.

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