I can tolerate pain... How could I tolerate your pain....

Hi guys this is my first time to write something in English..... It is only 5 chapter so try it and comment how I'm writing.....

Epilogue
In the monitor room, Dr. Hans is closely watching Sakuya's movement.
"So, how is it going Dr. Hans?"
"Oh, Mr. Rainer. It's all proceeding smoothly. Just like what we have predicted, she takes on the bait."
"Ooh... Splendid... now, we just have to wait for her to come."
"She seemed to make a significant progress every time. That's pleasing for me."
"With this, I'm getting closer to my goal. Hahaha..."
Mr. Rainer then left the room. When he left, he didn't see the expression that is shown by Dr. Hans.
"Hehehe... there are three of them, yet not single one realized my true motives. Hahaha. They're all brilliant yet stupid."
But, he didn't realize someone hears all of that.
From the small gap between the doors, a pair of eyes is taking a peek. That eye is somehow familiar.
"Just like what Mr. Aaron said. He seemed to have something hidden. I don't know what that is, so I can only keep an eye on him for the time being."
The pair of eyes then disappears in the dark hallway leaving a faint echo. 
Now that's left is for me to find out about where they keep Yuki.








Extra Login
I don't know if you guys really read the extra login, but I'm spending a lot of time to write it up. I want to make you guys understand about the system and the plot. But, it seemed like nobody is reading it... and it gets me into a pretty bad mood... So, for this book extra login how about we open some Q & A corner..?
Q: is this going to be an action based novel?
A: hmm... I don't know... I'm bad at writing the battle scene. I also want to put a lot of romance in here. What do I know is it's going to be somewhat psychological?
Q: where do you get the idea to write about the novel?
A: I'm getting a lot of source for this. Sword art online, log horizon, yureka, the moonlight sculptor, and a bunch of MMORPG game.
Q: when are you going to write more about the other character beside from Kuro and Sakuya?
A: I'm planning to write and tell you about some of the character, but for now I'm focusing at Kuro and Sakuya's arc.
Q: how do you know about the brain stuff and so on? Do you do some research?
A: yes, I'm taking a lot of time to search some information online about the fact. Like the impulse speed, the brain limit, and much more. I want to make it realistic. I want to get you guys thinking... whoa... it's really are possible... Hehehe...
Q: did this game is mainly about farming? Player reaches high level from just killing regular monster. Any quest or something like that?
A: this is what most people asked me... worry not. In this book, they've encountered some quest and some back story.
Q: what about the game customizations? A game where I have to use my real face is so lame. Isn't the selling point to play a game is that you could be someone different?
A: this is an old question from when I wrote the first book. I've taken in the comments and made revision.
Q: how can Kuro be so powerful?
A: it's because he's able to push brain to his limit. As for his high level, he struggle for that. He always determined to be a strong person.
Q: what exactly is Sakuya?
A: Sakuya is an AI that is someday going to be an ultimate AI. That's what Rainer thinks though.

Q: who's snow that's talking to Sakuya?
A: probably most of you can guess it already... snow is an English word for yuki...
Q: why is your grammar and spelling mistakes is a lot? Aren't you proof reading it?
A: this is one of the most common questions... I'm sorry about this but English is not my mother tongue language. I also did the editing myself, so... please give me some consideration... I'll do some revision if it's really that bad. In fact the first book 1st revision is finished...
Q: how long is the story going to be?
A: probably it's going to be around 5 to 8 books. I don't want to spend more time on it because it's only a hobby of mine. I have to move on in my life and face the reality.
Q: what is going attract the reader? The story?
A: yes, it's definitely the story. Because some people are really giving me a harsh comments about the game aspect. They call it boring, and so on... I couldn't argue though...
Q: who is Dr. Hans?
A: he's just some weird person. A lunatic if I should tell you. Sometimes he's calm, sometimes he's crazy... I still have some surprise about his story.
Q: how fast can you write?
A: I write about 10.000 words a day maximum... taking it into consideration one book should be finished in four to five days, but it's impossible... Hahaha...
Q: what RPG game do you play?
A: I played RO, Dota, RF, FLYFF, Dragonica, and a lot more.
Q: who's your favorite's character?
A: Kuro... I'm just a weakling like him... he resembles me a lot... he's someone that I would like to be... I want to be strong like him...
Q: who's Sakuya if you have to compare it to an actress?
A: I haven't even thought about it... I'm always think of her as a yamato nadeshiko... a princess... so, if you could find an Asian girl with a long hair, white skin, and pretty... that's her... Hahaha...
Q: you said that English is not your mother tongue language. So, where do you come from? What language do you use? What's your nationality?
A: I came from Indonesia... I use Indonesian language... my nationality is Indonesian.
Q: why is the story so short for a novel?
A: I was trying to write a light novel, but I don't think I'm doing it right... because of that, I'm just ending each book whenever I fell I have write enough.. Hahaha...
Q: what's your favorite anime?
A: I really like to watched a lot...but if I have to say, the one with a romance in it and less ecchi... for instance, sakurasou no pet no kanojo... hyouka... the highschool boys life something... angel beats... guilty crown.. lelouch the rebellion.. And much more...
Q: what kind of manga do you read?
A: I read all kinds of manga... I usually spent more than 8 hours a day to read manga.
Q: why are you using Japan as the setting?
A: hmm... because I like it... I love their culture... I hope that someday I'll be able to visit the country...
Q: based on the personality, who's the easiest to write about?
A: Hikaru... he's the second main character in this story... he has a bright personality, straight forward... and have a lot of place to grow...
Q: what kind of girl is your dream girl? You write a lot about pretty girl in the book, so which one do you prefer? Sakuya or someone else?
A: as for description only, I like Sakuya the best. Long hair, red eyes, white skin, further more she's wearing a shrine maiden clothes...but for the personality, I like Leona the best... a little bit tsundere... Hahaha...
Q: do you have target that you want to achieve by writing this novel?
A: I don't have anything in particular... it would be great if it could get an anime, manga, and figurines, but most of the time I'm just writing it as a hobby. You could say that it's one of my aspirations.
Q: when you think about the game system, what do you have in your mind?
A: I want it to be a game with medieval setting, like ragnarok... that's one of my favorites game. I'm thinking a lot about the PK system too... sometimes you just want to chop another player head don't you? To make the law, I created the prison... I don't want to have some weird scene in the novel about "H" stuff... although that one scene from Lime is pretty bad... other than that, I want it to be a game with a fun hunting system. But people who read it don't think so...


Q: if you get to play the game in the real life, what class are you going to choose?
A: there's a lot of class that I want to try... I can't decided it... but if I really have to choose one, I'll be a wizard... one of favourite character, se7en is making its debut in the story..
Q: if someone creates the Syder and the game, would you like to play?
A: no... I don't want to... I'll wait until a new version is out... I don't know if it's going to be safe.
Q: how many hours you spend every day to write?
A: it's about three to four hours in total.
Q: what's your hope for the future?
A: I hope I can finish the whole story as fast as I can... Hahaha
Q: do you have any words for your reader?
A: dear reader... I'm sorry for my poor English proficiency... I'm just hoping that you will enjoy my story... please tell your friends about it okay? Hahaha... and thank you for all of your comments... it really helped me a lot... as for the question I've answered some of it in here... see you guys on the next volume...

The story is 5-6 years old and it was written when I first start writing, there will be some mistakes here and there but it might show you an idea on how much I've improved XD~
The story is completed since it was a short 100k words novel~ and it was done in a week~ yeay!

Don’t you think that life in this world is a little bit boring? People talks to someone they know every day, pretending that they are friends. In reality they are doing such things just for their own convenience. Tell to each other that they are friends.  Just for a sole reason, so they can take advantage from the other party.
 
I realized these things since I entered high school. It is true that I was an introvert. I was not an outgoing person, but I can survive in the community. I prefer reading book and playing games, rather than exercising or doing outdoor sports. I didn’t talk much, only when I needed to. But maybe that’s why they decided to pick on me.

One day I was bullied by my upperclassmen. My best friend was at the scene. I called out to him, asking for help. But he just passes by like I was some stranger that he met at the road. The next day at school he said that he was sorry, because there is nothing that he can do. 

We have been spending times together since middle school. Hanging out together, doing homework, cheat our way out trough exams, and playing games together. We are close. Or so I thought. So this is how the community works. 

People in this world, they are reeks of evil. They only care about their self. Money and power is what they seek. They are a hypocrite if they said they are doing charity because of love. They are doing it so people will have better opinion about them. This world has rotten too much. I don’t have the power to change this world. I never even dream about changing this world.

So what should I do? I don’t have any other place to go. I wander around aimlessly until I stop by a large screen TV in front of a shopping mall.

 “Behold the new era of gaming. With Syder (synapse reader) implemented on the system, Rebirth Online will be the first VRMMORPG (Virtual Reality Massively Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game) in the world. The pre-order sales have gone through 500,000 units and will be shipped all around the world tomorrow, along with the first launch of the server. People who don’t apply for the pre-order can buy them tomorrow at FFAID Corporation building in Akihabara at 7:00am. Luckily, we have Dr. Hans Schneider here with us; please let us welcome the person that invented the Syder, as our guest for the interview tonight.” Said the beautiful newswoman on the TV enthusiastically.

“Dr. Hans, tell me about the Syder. Isn’t it just recently invented and haven’t been properly accepted by various medical organization around the world? Even the rumor says that it possess a threat to the brain.” the newswoman asking with full of curiosity.

“The WHO (World Health Organization) already acknowledges it as a safe and usable product. Otherwise we may not be able to sell it. The Syder itself doesn’t do anything to the brain so it couldn’t damage it. As the name implies, Syder is a synapse reader. Our five senses, touch, sight, hearing, taste, smell even our sense to temperature, pain, balance, time, and kinesthetic is controlled by the brain. This starts when a neuron receives an impulse and they transmitted it to the brain. They transmitted it in a form of electricity trough a connective tissue named synapse which connects one neuron to the other neuron. When this electricity processed in the brain, we often read it as a brain wave. So Syder makes it possible for us to read and send images to the brain of the virtual world. ” explain Dr. Hans who seemed can’t stop talking.

This is it. This is the answer to my entire question. I just have to run away to another world. I just have to run away to that world.

IMPORTANT: NOTE FOR NEW READERS

Please skip the first 6 chapters (anything marked under Volume 0: Auxiliary Volume). These are reference chapters and will be boring and contain a lot of spoilers - they are only meant for readers who need to check up something later on.

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Hi Readers,

I wasn't always an avid reader. My love for books started when I was 13 years old. I was a tomboy sent to a really posh girls-only boarding school. Needless to say, I ended up with a lot of detention, 3 hours of detention, meant 3 hours of twiddling my thumbs, bored out of mind.

Lucky for me, a roommate gave me a book to pass the time, it was one of those old Mills & Boons cheesy romance novels. Reading made my detention pass in a blink of an eye. A year later I was hooked.

I think most avid readers have an idea about writing a novel, especially when you come across a horrible story, you always think to yourself I could have written something better.

Well, I was one of those, but coming up with a plot is a lot easier than actually sitting down to write a novel. For over 20 years I have had this little dream to write a novel, but life got in the way. Working 12 - 16 hours a day 6 - 7 days a week, made that dream fade away.

Every now and then it would rear its head, I would daydream about it sadly sigh, and get back to being a single mom.

Long story short, 2018 was a horrible year for me, a lot of things happened and at the end of 2018, I came to realize that life is too short, we spend so much of our time just trying to survive that we forget that we are actually meant to live our lives, it was with this realization that I decided to follow my dreams and try to make them come true.

We are really lucky to live in a world today, where platforms like Webnovel exists, so aspiring authors can get their creative work published.

I would also like to warn my readers upfront, while English is my home language, it was one of my worst subjects at schools — I was always weak with languages, and to someone who had to take four compulsory languages (English, Afrikaans, Latin & Xhosa) at school — well you can imagine my horror. I was always more inclined to mathematics and the sciences. I think if my English was still alive and he knew that I was trying to write a novel, he most likely would fall over in a dead faint. So please forgive any mistakes you do find. 

I hope that you will enjoy this reading this story, as much as I am enjoying writing it.

Please don't be shy — I would love to hear back from you in the comment section, and if you have time please do leave a review.

I do welcome feedback and constructive criticism, after all, it is only by someone willing to point out our mistakes that we will learn.

Sincerely,

DJ Rogue

Note: I don't have an editor, so I would like to apologize for any errors that you may come across, I will review my own work and correct any errors that I do find.

PS: I am South African so I was raised with British English, I have made an effort to use Americanized English (xD so you might have both spellings in the book)

JAYDE
Jayde is a genetically engineered super soldier, after decades of being forced by her human creators to fight their dirty wars, Jayde rebelled. During a desperate battle for the ultimate survival of her people, she is betrayed and dies.

Instead of it being the end, this is only the beginning of Jayde's journey, as she awakens on a strange new world, in the tortured body of a young girl.

Forget technology, this new world doesn't have spaceships, replicators or blasters, it has something better — Magic!

With her contract to an ancient artifact, Jayde has to navigate her way through this new world filled with magic, powerful mages, strange creatures, and monsters.

REN
Ren, the fierce demon king, must fight to save his race from the brink of extinction and once again stop the evil Zartonesh from invading the realms. The key to his success lies in the Lower Realm, where the Devil Wars began, and with a young woman whose soul is steeped in darkness, whose presence awakens the primal fury within his soul, and whose vast power can either save or destroy him and his people.

EXCITING NEW ADVENTURE
Follow Jayde’s journey as she replaces her blaster for a sword. Alone with only her guide, she has to navigate her way around this strange new universe, learning magic, traveling to different dimensions as she makes new friends and enemies.

Will the darkness in her soul allow her to find her true-mate? Will she ultimately save this world or will she destroy it?

WARNING: Please note that this story is a slow-moving romance.

TAGS: Female Protagonist, Adventure, Transmigration, Pets, Strong FL, Late Romance, Revenge, Inter-Dimensional Travel, System, Sword and Magic, Weak to Strong

Novel Started: 18 Jan 2019.

NB: Please note that I am busy writing and editing at the same time, so there are still quite a few chapters that have spelling and grammar mistakes, so please bear with me as I get to them to fix those errors.

RELEASE SCHEDULE
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[Is hepatectomy dangerous? How would one's life be affected after the procedure? Should my father undergo hepatectomy?]
[Can hepatolithiasis be cured? How much longer will I be able to live?]
[I was diagnosed with hepatolithiasis when I went for a physical examination. What should I do?]
On Doctor's Here, more and more patients were asking Ling Ran, who was a specialist, questions. The questions were also becoming increasingly difficult and in-depth.
In the beginning, they were asking Ling Ran about all kinds of strange diseases. After a while, the questions slowly became ones that patients asked doctors before making appointments for consultations. Now, most of the patients had already decided on which direction to take when they asked questions. 
China was a massive country, and the population was huge.
There were 14 billion people in China, and 1% of them suffered from hepatolithiasis. This meant that hundreds of millions of people suffered from hepatolithiasis in the country. Even though they were at different stages of the disease, the total number of people diagnosed with hepatolithiasis was astonishingly huge.
Aside from hepatolithiasis, there were also patients who needed hepatectomy because of illnesses like cirrhosis and liver cancer. Most patients who had decided on surgery would proactively search for top doctors to make inquiries. They did not only look for national specialists. Doctors who were considered top specialists in their area also received plenty of inquiries.
Next, the patients who had decided on a doctor would head to various large hospitals.
Yunli Medical Company created "Doctor's Here" to match patients with doctors, and within a very short time frame, the effects became visible.
Very soon, Yun Hua Hospital, where Ling Ran was working, also got caught up in the waves.
More than three patients asked for consultations from Ling Ran every day. Even though it was not more than what Huo Congjun could get for him, considering what a difficult surgery hepatectomy was, this number of patients was already considered shocking.
If this were to happen to an ordinary associate chief physician or chief physician, he would be racking his brains over the filtering of patients. This was because it was impossible for an ordinary doctor to carry out a few major surgeries every single day.
It was not really rare for ordinary associate chief physicians to carry out three or even four major surgeries within a day. But things would be different if they had to do the same every single day without stopping.
Doctors had to do more than just operate on patients. They also had to perform daily tasks like making ward rounds, which was also very time-consuming. Moreover, top-notch doctors had to give consultations and lecture students. They also had things to do outside the hospital such as attending academic conferences...
"Everyone, remember to make ward rounds.
"Lu Wenbin will be in charge of guiding the medical interns.
"Yu Yuan, do arrange the materials that we'll be using for the meeting.
"Zuo Cidian, do go and talk to the patients' family members.
"Guys, don't forget to answer questions on Doctor's Here."
Ling Ran swiftly delegated tasks to his team members. He then asked Zhang Anmin and Ma Yanlin to be his assistants before turning and entering the operating theater.
The doctors of the Ling Treatment Group did not speak much either. For the past year or so, this was how life was like for them.
Yu Yuan and Zhang Anmin both caught a houseman to help them out. The one Zhang Anmin caught could be considered to have caught the jackpot, as he got to operate the retractor for Ling Ran throughout the night, to the point that his hand muscles ached and had to rest at home. To a houseman, this kind of high-intensity training was an opportunity that was hard to come by.
However, it was an unlucky day for the houseman Yu Yuan caught. He would need to write countless medical records and search for plenty of information, and would only get to rest by the time his eyelids were drooping. Moreover, it was not like he could learn much from this.
As Doctor Zhou who was hiding in the waiting room looked at the doctors of the Ling Treatment Group who were swiftly dispersing to carry out their tasks, he said a little enviously to the houseman beside him, "Ling Ran's life is my dream. Sigh, why are none of my subordinates as capable as his?"
The incapable houseman glanced at Doctor Zhou and said, "Aren't you in the waiting room because you don't want to operate on patients?"
"Do you think that I want to be in the waiting room of the Operating Area? Of course, I want to openly stay in the treatment room. It's large and lively…" Doctor Zhou said in a tone that made him sound like he was not allowed to see the light of day. He sighed emotionally as he stared outside the window.
"Then, why don't we just head to the treatment room?"
"Young man." Doctor Zhou pouted. "Work will never end. This is especially true in treatment rooms of hospitals like Yun Hua Emergency Medical Center. There would always be countless patients waiting to be treated. You need to stay alive to be able to treat patients, right? Doctors who don't know how to look for places to rest will never be able to survive in the Emergency Medical Center."
"The emergency room isn't like the operating theater. You will get to rest after treating all the patients there, won't you?" Even though the houseman spoke in a soft voice, he obviously did not look like he was convinced by Doctor Zhou. Hence, he could not help but refute.
Doctor Zhou did not really mind. He laughed out loud and said, "Let's make a bet. You don't have to do much. Just head to the treatment room for four hours and work without taking more than fifteen minutes of rest in total. Are you game?"
The houseman hesitated for a few seconds and asked, "What are the stakes?"
"If you win, I'll buy you better food for lunch and dinner. I'll also buy you a cup of bubble tea. If you lose, you'll have to write all the medical records from last week," Doctor Zhou said quickly.
"Why are the medical records from last week still…? Alright, it isn't unendurable." The houseman agreed.
"Alright. Go ahead, then." Doctor Zhou put his foot up the chair. "I'll wait for you here. See you four hours later. Give me a call if there's anything."
The houseman working under Doctor Zhou nodded solemnly. He then went downstairs with determination and headed to the treatment room.
He entered the treatment room and saw that it was full of patients and their family members. He then wrote down Doctor Zhou's name at the nurses' station. Suddenly, the houseman felt that something was not quite right.
'Why would I work myself to death in the treatment room alone for four hours? Even if I were to win, I would just get a cup of bubble tea. Is working my a*s off for four hours just for a cup of bubble tea even worth it?'
When the houseman thought about the possibility of failure, he could not help but shiver.
'I wonder how long I would need to write one week's worth of medical records. Some might even be difficult cases.'
"You're the houseman working under Doctor Zhou, aren't you?" Zhao Leyi who was in the treatment room was also super busy right now. The moment he saw a houseman, he immediately put on a nice facade and talked to the houseman.
After working in the hospital for a while, all junior doctors would learn that none of the senior doctors were good people. Whenever a senior doctor talked to a junior doctor in a friendly manner, it meant that the senior doctor wanted the junior doctor to do something for him.
The houseman who was fooled by Doctor Zhou was not very familiar with the hospital yet. Hence, he said obediently to Zhao Leyi who was an attending physician, "I am. Doctor Zhou asked me to come to the treatment room to…"
"Come, why don't you take a look at this patient and gain some experience…" Zhao Leyi did not bother to listen to the rest of the sentence. He waved at the houseman, deceiving the houseman to treat the patient on his behalf in the process.
Four hours later, Doctor Zhou took off his large white coat and changed into a pair of leather shoes that he wore on casual occasions. He looked healthy and energetic as he walked out of the operating area. Before he headed home, he made a detour to the treatment room to check on his houseman.
Even though the houseman was working hard, his gaze was dull.
"Don't forget to write the medical records." Doctor Zhou greeted him and immediately made his way out of the treatment room.
This was when Huo Congjun entered the treatment room from the main hall without saying a word.
"Little Zhou." Huo Congjun's voice was like a large, heavy fist that hit Doctor Zhou's heart.
If Doctor Zhou's heart were hooked to an electrocardiograph right now, the electrocardiogram would definitely indicate that his heart was beating haphazardly, with the p of his aVR being upright. [1] However, in the end, Doctor Zhou did not dare to flee. He turned to face Huo Congjun and smiled gloomily. "Department director…"
"Hmm... There's a group of foreign doctors in Yun Hua Hospital right now. They would like to take a look at our hospital. Can you go and attend to them?" Huo Congjun said nonchalantly.
Doctor Zhou furrowed his eyebrows a little. His instincts told him that things were not as simple as it seemed. 'What does Department Director Huo mean by "attending to them"? Shouldn't those visitors receive a warmer welcome?'
Doctor Zhou could not help but ask in a hushed tone, "Which country are those doctors from? Won't we need an interpreter?"
"From the Anderson Cancer Center in the United States. They speak English. If I remember correctly, your English is pretty good." Huo Congjun glanced at Doctor Zhou.
Doctor Zhou quickly nodded. Immediately after that, he asked carefully, "Since they're from the Anderson Cancer Center, aren't the hospital leaders showing up to welcome them?"
"They specifically said that they were looking for Ling Ran. Moreover, they did not bring any official documents with them. This means that they are here in a private capacity. Hence, there's no need to notify the hospital," Huo Congjun said in a tremendously relaxed manner.
Doctor Zhou's expression turned gloomy. He said hesitantly, "Isn't this how foreigners do things? We can't just expect the Anderson Cancer Center to write us an official letter."
"They would need to at least show proof of their identities, don't you think so? I think they're just in Yun Hua City for some seafood." Huo Congjun did not intend to discuss the matter further. He waved in dismissal and said, "Just bring them to Shao family's restaurant, attend to them for a bit and see what's on their minds. We'll report things to the hospital leaders after we are sure of what's going on."
As Doctor Zhou listened to Huo Conjun, he felt that what Huo Congjun was saying made sense. He had no choice but to obediently note down the other party's contact number and what time they would be landing. He then said in a meek voice, "I'm actually about to get off work."
"You'll get to go home eventually." Huo Congjun tapped Doctor Zhou's shoulder a few times.
Translator's notes:
[1] As all the depolarisations are going away from lead aVR, all waves are negative in aVR (P, QRS, T) in normal sinus rhythm. In dextrocardia, (True and technical) the p is upright in aVR


Ling Ran, a med school senior, begins to see the world like a game UI. He uses it to pave his way towards graduation, a residency, becoming the greatest doctor in the world... And finally getting a Transformer from his newbie packs? Maybe. We don't know yet.

This is not a chapter, I'm sorry.

I write this little text because lately I'm reading some comments that bother me a little and I would like to give my point of view

First of all I would like to explain why I decided to write novels, it was for two reasons:

1: I really like this format of novels and I've always had many ideas hanging around my head, which I found interesting, fun and and exciting... And I wanted to share them with more people
And I have many novels in mind: 
A One Piece/Jojo fanfiction
My original novel Beyond Reality - Atomsk
Another original novel RPG world tematic
Another original novel about world domination/salvation (Science fiction)
Another original novel about fanstasy Final Fantasy Style
And 3 novels in the same global universe but diferent planets of Beyond Reality


2: In the workplace where I was recently... I barely had work to do.
There were many hours of the day (even whole days) in which i had nothing to do, so I decided to start writing to fill all those hours with something I liked.

...
...
...

That said, let's start with the complaints I received.

Complaints about the release:

I have changed my job, a job where I'm busy all day and also the office is far from my house.
I wake up at 6:40 every day and because of the schedule and the distance, I get home at 21:40 pm
When I get home I have to prepare everything for the next day, prepare dinner, shower and sometimes do last-minute work at home... Which leaves me very little time to write, think well what I should write and how.
If we add to that that my language is not English (I'm from Spain) we can conclude that it is not easy form me write a lot daily... Especially if I want to sleep at least 4 or 5 hours  and I don't like to write empty content chapters with less than 2000 words (7 or 8 word pages).

So I only have time to publish 2 chapters each week ... and sometimes I have a hard time to finish Wednesday's chapter

I'm taking a lot away from writing ... for example I have a Devil May Cry 5 that I've only played 2 hours and a One Piece World Seeker that I have not even been able to install and a lot of chapter of differents novels and mangas not readed...

So if you are not happy with the rate at which I publish chapters now... I'm sorry but I cannot do much more... Believe me that I would love to publish a daily chapter (you would vote for me more and I love it), but it is impossible for me now

...

Complaints about the fights:

You see, the novels that I fell in love with because of the way they explained the battles are Douluo Dalu saga or Heavenly Jewel Change... 

Battles very well written in each movement and attack, with strategies, conversations, thoughts ... Battles that could last several chapters but that made you really live them in your imagination
And that's what I wanted for my novels... ... I don't like monotonous, traced and meaningless battles where everything is based on naming 2 attacks and standard actions to win

If you don't know how to appreciate this, I'm sorry, but this novel is not for you.

I have seen these complaints especially in 2 fights of my novels. 

Broly Vs Hit and Broly vs Moro... and the duration of both is perfectly justified

In Broly vs Hit I wanted to show Broly's astuteness, thanks to the development of his skills, strategy, knowledge of his rival and preparation of external objects... was able to defeat (or almost defeat) a warrior of the God category like Hit in a battle of attrition (so it couldn't be a short battle)... when Broly only had the power of a normal Super Saiyan + Kaio Ken

In Broly vs Moro I wanted to show how bad the arrogance (be a Super Saiyan God  cana get to your head) and underestimate your opponent is, especially when you do not know ANYTHING about him... Moro is the best example of how dangerous it is to underestimate someone and not be decisive when it comes to beating someone... Vegeta and Goku know that very well now, becouse they would now be dead if it weren't for the medical help of Jaco and his co-workers.

And the battle had to be long so that Moro had time to steal Broly's energy and Shin had time to make his trips

I have also wanted to show and explain how important it is to apply your skills well and show the magic, an element very little used in Dragon Ball and since Moro is a magician and Broly also knows magic ... I found that this was the best and only time to do something similar

To all this say that I don't remember having made a battle chapter similar to the other, they are all different

I encourage you to read the manga,  you can see this saga on this link

https://www.mangasail.co/content/dragon-ball-super-42?page=all

...

Complaints about the story... that the story hasn't been going anywhere.

Really? Then I have to say that you have little capacity for analysis and memory... No offense.

Let's do some memory

First Volume: Broly is born and almost from the moment of his birth he controls the whole planet Vegeta, and thanks to knowing the future he manages to achieve all his plans perfectly...  He even manipulated Beerus and Whis to increase his power.
Everything went perfectly ... He believed himself the king of the world

Second Voume: Broly manages to increase his power before embarking on his adventure as he planned... in this dangerous adventure Broly managed to achieve all his goals thanks to his skills, intelligence and the information he had thanks to having seen Dragon Ball... 
He gets the Super Dragon Balls, his transformations and other things and people to increase his power... He even provoked and annoyed Champa, a God of Destruction to archive this.
Everything went perfectly ... He believed himself the king of the universe.

Third volume: Broly begins to increase his powers once again, either by evolving his Three Realms, acquire new broken skills and above all becoming Super Saiyan God... And now he only needed to wait a year to ask his wish to his own dragon from his own universe.

Everything went perfectly ... He believed himself the most powerful God of all the universes... he believed himself invulnerable, invincible and that he had everything under control.

But behind his back and by his fault (while he was having fun with a girl, to add more irony) ... Gods and Angels begin to question the existence of the being called Broly and they find very disturbing things about him using the time rings... Very disturbing things that can cause many problems for him... And he has no idea about what happens 

At the same time while he believes that he is the definitive living being... is deceived and maybe he loses  due to being too overconfident... and because of this, someone he appreciate dies.

Proving that he is not invulnerable, invincible and that he doesn't have everything under control.

All fo this happens in the first saga in which he hasn't been able to foresee, since is a saga built due to the consequences of his acts in the Dragon Ball universe.

A saga in which I'm making Broly evolve as a person and giving him a slap in his face ... putting a insanely great villain of the manga (who hasn't yet apeared in the anime, and it is not easy to do it) that Broly don't know and making that two angels and 3 gods could realize his most important and inexplicable secret... creating the doubt of how he will come out of this and why there are 3 rings or why Shin cannot travel to the future (introducing time travels and its mysteries too)

...And you are saying that the history is not going anywhere?
I don't know what you expect then, volumes of 8 chapters in which I narrate everything like a robot without giving life and esence to the characters and his stories?

Believe me, I know perfectly where the story is going I have in my mind all the novel, including the end..

To reach a shocking conclusion... it is necessary to have previously traveled a path that makes that conculusion have a meaning... remember your reaction whit the chapter's 39, 40, 41 and 42... 


To finish I'm doing everything for free, if you don't like it and your time is too valuable and you have so little patience, you can wait a few weeks for the story to advance a little... or you can stop reading it...

I died... who cares?

Now I have  the opportunity to reach beyond the gods ... of destruction

Yes… 

Due to the bad luck of dying, to the good luck of dying at the right moment, to be deceived by a god almost on top of the realities and know how to bargain with him…

I was able to reincarnate in the body of the Legendary Super Saiyan Broly

However, unlike him, I will take the reins of my own destiny.

In addition, this time not only has anger and muscles

...

I understand the structure of this universe ... and of the entire multiverse.

I know its entire immensity

I know how insignificant I have been ... and how insignificant I am still.

I don’t plan to feel that way again…

HaHaHa Gods?

Wait for me Beerus

Wait for me Daishinkan.

Wait for me  Zeno.

I WILL BE ABOVE ALL OF YOU!

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This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of Dragon Ball. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content.

PDT: Read the manga of Dragon Ball Super, the history has more sense

If you have ever read Kaza Kingsley's original series , this is going to follow a similar plot line until book 6 where she has dropped it. I'm fluent in English, but punctuation and capitalization are my biggest struggles so there will most likely be lots of errors. Grammar wise I'm good, and as for a release schedule, I'm a college student taking 18 credit hours- so 6 classes. I'm busy with school and then work on the weekends, so I'll write as much as I can and then slowly release it after I have a good buildup of chapters. I hate reading novels and then catching up and waiting forever for new chapters to be released. We will see how things go. I'll try my best to write something decent, but this will be my first time writing a novel length story. I'll figure things out and then start releasing.

I do not own the original story that this is based off of. Kaza Kingsley is the author of the original story of the Erec Rex series as well as other books. *********. Esther wakes up and her twin brother Erec stirs awake with her morning movement. They stare at each other before getting their day started. What they thought would be a normal day that they could enjoy with their large family in their small apartment turns into an unexpected adventure with new friends and new enemies. Magic becomes part of their reality as well as death filled adventures. The life they know is completely changed and new responsibilities are piled on top of the young twins. Join Esther and Erec as they wrap their brain around their ever changing reality.

Dear wonderful readers,
Thank you so so so much for reading my first English novel. I've been writing since I was 12, like decades ago (yeah... I'm old) and never got anything published since I was a perfectionist and my works needed research and I didn't have the means to do it back then.
I mean, how could you write about life in other countries when you never go there? I felt like a fake - that's why the only people I allowed reading my novels were my sister and a few friends whom I know would still love me no matter how weird I am in their eyes... hehehe.
Before you #coughcough Google... Well, Google and the internet weren't a thing back then (when I started writing), I didn't even have a computer. I wrote in any piece of paper I could get my hands into.
Sadly, out of maybe 100 titles I wrote for almost 20 years, 95% are gone now because my mom thought they were trash (literally) and threw them together with my old school books. It was heartbreaking because I really wanted to be a writer.
When I was young, the future seemed bleak for this poor aspiring writer from a third-world country, especially because I wrote fantasy which didn't sell well compared to contemporary. Anyway... my dream to become a writer had to take a backseat as life happened and I had to focus on making ends meet.
I have a decent job now, working as a freelancer, but I still dream to make it as a professional writer someday. I want to be able to wake up every morning and just decide that I want to write and write, and not having to think about how to put food on the table.
I am so happy to find a platform like Webnovel that allows me to publish my works, reach an audience that relates to my stories, and make some money. I am not hoping to get rich from my books, but if it could give me enough to quit my day job and focus on writing, it would mean the world to me.
Thus.. I would like to kindly ask your understanding that this book will go premium today, October 7, 2019, and will be locked retrospectively from chapter 177. I could have it locked earlier, like ... in chapter 100 for example, but I chose to lock it on chapter 177 because I feel like reading until chapter 100 is not enough for you to decide if this novel is worthy of your spirit stones, so I'm giving you more.
I hope by the time you reach chapter 176 you are convinced that you are in for the ride! Yeay!!
GOING PREMIUM & PRICING
Going premium means the book might be locked today or next week and you can unlock the chapters with coins or fast passes. If you are new to the site, this is how the chapters will be priced:
 200 words = 1 coin, and 1 coin is worth $0.02
So, the longer the chapters, the more coins needed to unlock them. For 1200 word-chapters, the price will be 6 coins, 2000 word chapters are worth 10 coins, and so on.
Out of these coins, the author will only get 30%, minus 5% tax. The other 70% was divided between Google/Apple (as app store providers) and Webnovel.
HOW MUCH AN AUTHOR ACTUALLY EARNS?
An author gets around 25% of what their novels earn. From a chapter that costs 6 coins, only 2 coins will go to the author. It's not really much, considering 1 chapter takes 1-4 hours to write (depending on the author's health, inspiration, research, etc). But the more readers unlock the chapters using coins, the more money an author could make. So.. please open the locked chapters with coins if you wish to support me and this novel.
I really hope at least 100 readers could unlock the chapters every day, seeing that I have around 5000 people adding this book to their collection.
If each chapter of this book gets 100 unlocks every day, that means I will get
200 x 2 coins x $0.02 =$4 per day or $120 in one month if I publish 1 chapter per day.
I know it's not enough to live, so I will have to publish more chapters, and that's fine. If I published 2 chapters per day, it means with 100 unlocks, I will earn $240 in one month. At least, if I knew you are invested and are willing to support this book, I would feel encouraged to write more and more and more.
If we can get 500 unlocks per chapter every day.. I would even dance the rain dance because of how happy it would make me :).
Plus, if this book sells well, Webnovel will give it special attention and promote the book to the wider audience.
In exchange for your support, I can promise you my dedication and hard work to see this book written until the end. I never drop a book in my life and I will not leave you hanging. I hope this book brings you joy as you read it and get you through the day, feeling happier.
FAST PASSES & OTHER SUPPORT
If you cannot afford to unlock the chapters with coins, and can only use fast passes, don't feel bad about it. I love you too! I know how it feels to be poor and crave books. I understand. I was there.
I pray that you will be blessed abundantly and someday you can have the luxury to support the content creators that you love. The universe is listening :).
You can also support this book by voting your power stone so it will go up in ranking and noticed by other readers, write your thoughts about the book in the comments or reviews, give me feedback, or anything at all. I'd love to hear from you.
Lastly, I would like to thank the silent readers who are reading this book. Even though you didn't say anything, I notice your support from your power stone votes and gifts. Thank you!
love,
x 
(October 7, 2019)
PS: SPOILERS & TEASERS
Please do note that I love throwing spoilers here and there in SEPARATE CHAPTERS to satisfy curious people who are eager to know what happens in the future.
For some people, knowing a bit of what will happen gives them a peace of mind that they are not investing their time, feeling, and money into a soap opera or cliches or shitty novel or simply something that is not their cup of tea.
I respect that. So please, if you hate spoilers, just SKIP the chapters marked with TEASERS or SPOILERS and you'll be just fine.
If you LOVE SPOILERS, hell yeah! Go read them! Woot woot!!
The original novel is loved by many and I got on average 1000 power stones in votes every day. Of course, I wish to see this English version gets the same exposure and support. If you liked this novel, please vote and help this story reach more people.
My biggest dream for this novel is someday to see it made into Netflix's original series, for example. Wouldn't it be awesome? Does anyone know anyone in Netflix? Bahahaha...
Anyway.. again, thank you for joining me on the ride. I hope this story can bring you happiness.
much love,
UPDATE June 25, 2019
I am writing another book, called FINDING STARDUST. It's a sci-fi/fantasy/adventure novel with an OP female lead, looking for her family. I hope you'll check it out too. Here is the synopsis:
.
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"Do you want to see how I would light up the sky for you?"
On her 17th birthday, Emma Stardust suddenly woke up on top of the Eiffel tower, completely oblivious of how she got there.
And then she realized that she could fly. 
Suddenly all her senses became enhanced and she could also control the earth's elements? 
She finally realized that her powers were the secret to her past and her missing parents, a royal princess, and a formidable general from a planet called Akkadia who escaped their home planet because they loved each other. 
Emma was resolute in finding them even if it means she had to go to the end of the universe. Will she meet her parents again? Will she find Akkadia? Will her powers bring her friends... or foes? 
Follow Emma's journey as she unravels the mystery surrounding her past and her future, and finds true love in the process.
If you like strong FL, space, astronomy, magic, science, and slice-of-life.. You will be spoiled by this book! 
Warning: Chapters with mature contents will be marked with R-18


*How do immortals live in the modern world? One had been walking the earth for 438 years without ever falling in love. The other one couldn't get over the only woman he loved, even after 100 years.

**What happen when an immortal didn't know he was immortal? After living for almost a century, he still looked like he was 25. So, he thought maybe... maybe he was a freak, a victim of human experimentation during Hitler's time. Growing up, he came to hate humans and their fondness for war and destroying nature. He swore to one day rule the world and decide on which humans got to live. In his book, 'only the good, the strong and the intelligent should live'.

***The wealthiest tycoon was an immortal who was raised in the ivory tower by his overprotective parents. One day he decided to go undercover as poor photographer to make friends with regular people. Alas! Scheming people tricked him to sleep with the most notorious golddiger in Berlin whose only goal in life was to marry a wealthy and powerful man. When she was pregnant with his child, the undercover tycoon wanted to take responsibility but still pretending to be poor. Will he finally let her know that he was wealthy? Why was she so adamant to marry a wealthy and powerful man?

THIS BOOK HAS 3 DIFFERENT STORIES. They are connected, but you can read them as standalone.

1. The Alchemist
2. Aleksis & Prince Siegfried
3. Secret Identity


Volume 1 has fluffy romance, Volume 2 has action/adventure, Volume 3 has comedy, and Volume 4 is a revenge/redemption drama.

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I was delighted that the number of collections was growing by my farmer Dara. Here, finally, readers understood the secret of history! We started to read! Even not very folding English did not become an obstacle for them!

But then I look, something is not right! No matter how good the story was in the opinion of the author, he is not so presumptuous!

The answer was near. For reading stories about farming, they give points that can be exchanged for coins. A new mind game.

Then it turned out that reading is not necessary at all, you can just turn the phone and pretend that you are reading, you still get points.

Thanks to the Web Novels, but readers are always trickier than kind attempts to attract readers through a simple advertisement of novels.

As balls cease to give, to see from 161 readers will remain faithful readers, 65 people! I am grateful to them!

While I'm busy writing a short novel about Treasure Hunters, I think it will have 100 chapters. And when I finish, then I can switch to the remaining three novels.

- About a coin there will be only 100 chapters.

- About cunning merchants 150-160 there may be 200 chapters.

- But the Farmer Dara is hoping to write a total of chapters 300 another or 500, as it turns out.


Overall result: I started writing novels on Web Novels:

from February 23, 2019

During this time, 4 novels and two short stories were started.

Of which 2 were sent to Dropp. This is the first edition of the Magic Farmer Gift and the Traveler's Note.

In the first case, there was a mistake and a ban that could be removed by contacting the moderation service, but I decided to rewrite the novel. Having released the second edition.

The second novel, or rather short stories, had few subscribers and few readers, so I decided to drop it. There was not enough time to write a chapter for other novels.

Then the idea came up to write spin-offs about Dara and treasure hunters. Thanks to the reviewers, they suggested a new idea, namely to make the characters more lively and emotional. Enter an additional character - a girl. With the advent of a romantic line, albeit a short one.

I rewrote this novel three times, so updates for other novels and this novel were delayed.

Conla rewrote Roma, found that it was even more interesting than writing a novel from a white sheet. But rewriting needs material. Therefore, until the 11th chapter, treasure hunters, I was engaged in editing and editing the text 1-2 sometimes 3 times. But I began to lose the basic idea of ​​the novel.

So now I decided to write the main story of this novel about search engines and treasure hunters, in the form of raw materials. And when I'll write a full novel. I can rewrite it again, for the fourth time, with an already more thorough revision.

If in this year 2020 I manage to earn more money (if I find a new job and there will be no unexpected expenses), then I have a desire to hire an editor and proofreader either through a forum or find them in my city to help me improve my romance. Well, let's see how it turns out in practice.

Out of 310 days, I really wrote only 180 days, since 130 days were spent on treatment for diseases, unexpected expenses on treating my father and uncle had an ischemic stroke. A lot of effort was spent on this and I was no longer able to write something. Since I slept no more than 2 hours a day. This is clearly not enough to have the strength to write something. But it's good that this time has passed.

And so in 180 days I was able to write unfinished novels:

- Jiang's magic coin
- Magic Farmer Dara - second version
- Stories about merchants or cunning merchant
- Thoughts on writing stories
- The Adventures of Treasure Hunters

Total views - including two deleted short stories:
440,890 views (7 short stories of which 5 currently exist)
287 collections
278 chapters
276,750 words (out of 2 deleted short stories another 150,000 words) +874 слова

There are 102 novels in the library, 4 of which are read, I am reading 4-5 now. Periodically I read 11, those that like 4! Promising for reading - 25.

Well, my 1,000,000 words are far away, for 1 year I couldn't write. It remains to write 723,250 words. But the year has not actually ended (February 23 - formally or in fact (= 185 days lost) until August 1, 2020). In order to have time to write the remaining words lacking up to 1 million words, you need to write 3909, 46 words per day. Which of course is not real. Since one day I can write raw materials without checking and editing 3,000 words, another day 5,000 words and then 5 days not write 1 word. Reality is closely related to the virtual and affects the creative ability to write.

My forecast for 185 days, I probably can write another 250 - 300 thousand words.

So far, such a debriefing.

Thanks to my readers and Happy New Year!

Thoughts of why and why stories are written.

All the same English, he has not improved in 18 days.

I'll figure something out, try to correct the text.

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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Coming out of his room Alexander found himself in what would be best described as a common area for the tent. There were two sofas in the middle of the room surrounding a low table. On one side of the room there was a smaller dining table and on the other there was a desk and chair. At the moment Alice was sitting in one of the sofas. She turned towards Alexander seeing him coming out.
"I am glad the clothes fit you so well. It was quite lucky that one of the majors had insisted on bringing his charge. Otherwise you would have had to wear something that would have been too large. Now please come and have a seat."
Alexander slowly made his way over and sat down in the sofa opposite of Alice. She indicate for him to have some of the tea or snacks laid out on the low table. He was feeling quite nervous at this moment and didn't want to show it. Deciding that it would be easier to appear normal by just sitting back in the sofa instead of going for any of the snacks.
"As I said earlier you will be adopted into my family. Unfortunately I can't send you to Bryn for a few days. We are planning to do another push soon, so I can't arrange for the travel you see. From what I heard from Doctor Linden you are from Tiramdal in the Duchy of Holther. Seeing as you were an orphan I assume you didn't learn how to read or write?"
"Yes Lady Firestorm. I never learned to read or write either in the orphanage or when I worked at an inn later."
"You are to be my grandchild, no need for any of that lady stuff. Alice, grandma, granny or if you feel like you have to be polite madam also works. And when you get angry at me just call me old hag."
Alexander's mouth dropped open at the last sentence from Alice.
"Hahaha, look at your face. I just needed you to relax. So you were at an orphanage. What kind of orphanage and how long did you stay there?"
"Hem, hem… The orphanage was run by a monastery, I think it was called the Saint Miranda Monastery or something. Just around the time I had been there for six years the baron cut their funding and they had to send away the children. I followed a group of older kids to Tiramdal and ended up being caught by an innkeeper trying to steal food. Then I worked for him for a while to pay for the stolen items. After that he was kind enough to let me continue working. I stayed there until around two months ago when I heard the army was recruiting."
"I see, so how old are you now? I know that the Verenden army has a minimum age of sixteen but you are clearly younger. Especially since seeds blossom between the age of 12 and 15."
"I think that I should be around 14 or so. We didn't really celebrate birthdays or anything at the orphanage nor at the inn."
"Lets say 14 and 5 months then hmm. That way you can have a proper birthday next year when you turn 15. But back to the main issue of you not knowing how to read or write. Since it will be a few days before I can send you on your way you will be starting to learn to read at the very least. Hopefully you will even start some writing by the time I can send you. Since you already know Doctor Linden I will ask him to help you with that, at the same time you can help him with small tasks. Can't really have you just sitting around in the tent trying on your own. Of course the reading and writing will be in Lareen so you will also be learning to speak it."
Getting to learn how to read and write, despite it being in another language from what he could speak, was a goal finally in reach. After having been in this new world for those 14 or so years and not being able to write down anything or read any books was not fun. Alexander would do his best to learn to read and write quickly. Since he already knew how to read and write in languages in his previous life, it would hopefully be easier to do so now. 
"I will have Doctor Linden come here as soon as possible, so you can just sit here and wait. I will also have someone bring some food, I imagine you are starting to get quite hungry. Since I have many duties to attend to I will hopefully get to see you in the evening."
Indicating for Alexander to remain seated Alice stood up and walked out of the tent. Once she had left Alexander felt a bit more relaxed. So he dared to take some of the snacks laid out on the table. He grabbed what looked to be a biscuit of some sort. It was quite sweet and a bit dry. Grabbing another biscuit he found this one to be much saltier, and would probably have tasted better with some cheese on it. 
Whilst Alexander was eating the snacks, or more like gorging on them, someone entered the tent. He didn't notice them until a plate of food was put down on the table besides the remaining snacks. Looking up he could see a woman in her early twenties. Seeing him looking at her she smiled and nodded towards the food. She then proceeded to grab the plate of snacks and the tea set before turning too leave.
The food that had been brought looked quite good. It seemed to be a dish made of potatoes, some form of steak, some greens and brown sauce. In addition to the plate of food a glass of water had also been placed on the table. Even though he felt like he had eaten a lot of snacks his stomach growled at the sight of the food. He quickly grabbed the fork and knife and dug in. The food felt heavenly compared to what he had eaten so far in his life. The steak almost melted in his mouth. And the sauce was just perfect. One would assume he was partaking in a speed eating competition by the look of how quickly he finished the food.
Alexander leaned back in the sofa once the food was gone. He felt like he might explode if he was presented with anything more. If this was how his life was going to be, or better, he didn't mind at all going along with everything. Good food, learning new and old skills, and perhaps a new family. He couldn't have wished for something so good a mere day ago.
It wasn't long after he finished his food that Doctor Linden came to the tent. 
"Greetings Alexander. You seem extremely well considering everything. I must say I didn't expect at all that this would be the outcome of your sudden healing. Though I am rather glad that someone your age don't have to be a soldier any longer. Now, today I am not going to have you help me with anything but we will start on your reading and writing. We will also see if we can get you started on speaking Lareen." 
Doctor Linden then indicated for Alexander to follow him over to the desk. He then brought over a chair from the dining table and grabbed a book from a trunk near the desk. He also grabbed a quill, some ink and a stack of paper. Setting all of it on the desk. 
"I think the easiest way we can do this is to go through the alphabet and have you associate the sounds with how a letter is written. It might be a bit difficult, especially since we will be doing the sounds in Lareen, but I believe you are capable of this."
Alexander could do nothing but nod at his words. They then started going through the different letters of the Lareen alphabet. In some ways he felt that the script used in writing when paired with the sound reminded him of the Latin alphabet Each sound had for the most part a letter associated with it. There were of course some exceptions to this, but that wasn't unexpected as the same could be said for English. 
They continued with just the alphabet for what must have been two hours. After that they did some simple reading exercises where Alexander tried to sound out words. Even though he knew how to read and write in English it was quite difficult. At this time each word was just a collection of letters. But it didn't take long for him to say a word correctly from its written form. 
In many ways, the fact that he had never learned how to read or write in Vereen helped. He didn't have any associations between words and letters from before thus could with more ease associate them with Lareen sounds. They continued with this mix of reading, writing and speaking Lareen until it got dark outside.
"I must say Alexander, you have a real talent for this. My son back in Miran took from the age of 4 until age 10 to properly learn how to read, write and speak properly. Though you are still far from the level he was at when he got to age 10, you are making very good progress. Tomorrow I think I have some ideas how we can improve your writing and reading at a greater speed, I will also be almost only speak Lareen to force you to learn."
"Thank you for helping him Nicklas, how about you join us for supper before heading off?"
Both Alexander and Doctor Linden had been so occupied by their task that they didn't notice Alice coming back. 
"No problem at all Grand Magus. I would love to join you for supper."
All three of them made their way to the dining table and sat down. The same woman from earlier in the day and a man arrived just as they had seated themselves. They carried three plates of food, two glasses of what might be wine and a glass of juice. The food this time was a heavy beef soup and some white bread with butter. 
During the meal Linden and Alice chatted in Lareen, making it rather hard for Alexander to follow the conversation. Of course they knew he wouldn't be able to participate but noted that it was also to help him pick up the language quicker. Luckily for Alexander the meal didn't take too long to finish and Linden bid his farewell and departed just before the plates were taken away.
"It sounds from what Niklas had to say that you are progressing already in your studies. I am very glad to hear that, I hadn't really expected you to make any progress before heading off to Bryn. You should head of to sleep now so you can get up as early as possible tomorrow. There won't be anyone to wake you and you don't really have any time by which you must be awake. But I do hope you wake up early anyway When you do wake up, just head outside the tent and talk to one of the soldiers. Just ask them to send for some food and for Niklas. The current guards I have understand Vereen, though I hope you try to speak in Lareen. Have a good sleep Alex."
Alice smiled at Alexander before leaving the table and heading towards the only other door in the tent besides his. Feeling quite tired he listened to what she had said and headed to his room. There he quickly got undressed and got into the bed. Laying down was magical, a proper mattress pillow and duvet. How he had missed that feeling. They were just like he remembered from his previous life, perhaps even better. The bed was so good that he quickly fell asleep looking forward to what tomorrow would bring.

Whats the worst way you can imagine dying? By that I don't mean most painfull, but most embarassing. For Ryan this turned out to be drowning in a bathtub just after having passed his doctoral defence. 

At least something good came out of it. Well, I guess getting laughed at by a god might not be considered that good.. But getting to reincarnate, with all you memories, now that is good... Ryan thinks so at least.

Waking up to see the tall walls of a church, Ryan was reincarnated as an abandoned baby. Even if it is the middle ages the priest is nice, right?

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