Outline of a novel idea I want to test on the community. Please leave any questions, comments and concerns in the comment section. If you all like the outline I will upload 3 times a week or more at my availability. please and thank you for the read.

Author: 314 (Yang Chen)
 
After you confirm what genre and topic you wish to write about, it's now time for you as an author to design your settings and write the overall planned outline for your plot. As for why I'm putting these two elements together, that's because these two elements are deeply interconnected and inseparable.
 
When you're writing the overall outline, this is basically coming up with the story's plot. As you write the outline, what you're actually doing is fleshing out the details for your setting.
 
When you're writing a story, of course, you need to first consider where your story will happen, when it happens, who it happens to, and what type of person it happens to. As the story progresses, you also need to consider who the main character will meet in the story, what time and place he or she meets them at, along with who's stronger and who's weaker than the main character…
 
This is why by the time that you're finished with your overall outline, the world's background, various factions, levels, special abilities, treasures, all the important characters… and such settings will be naturally completed during the course of outlining.
 
The reverse is true as well. If you first work on designing the detailed settings instead, then you'll basically end up with an outline for the story's plot and how the main character grows over the story as well.
 
Of course, there's still some differences depending on which angle you start from. However, newcomer authors like you don't need to worry about this. You can simply create based on your personality and whatever you prefer. It doesn't matter whether you start from the settings or the outline. You can even do both at the same time.
 
For newcomer authors like you, there's only five points that are critically important for you to understand.
 
1.      Having an overall outline isn't absolutely necessary, but having one is always better than not having one
 
Theoretically speaking, even if you didn't prepare an overall outline, it might not affect the progress of you writing your novel at all. There are some authors out there that simply write whatever comes into their mind and go with the flow.
 
Of course, this is all just a best-case scenario in theory. For the great majority of authors out there, once your story's plot exceeds your planned outline... 

Your outline will help your story stay on track in the early stages, but once you reach the mid and late stages, all sorts of problems often appear, such as too many plotlines all at once, self-contradictory plotlines, or writer's block…
 
At such a time, authors will typically regret not creating a more detailed outline, but it's already too late now. Actually, overall outlines have more uses than you think.
 
Since webnovels are typically longer than normal novels, they take much longer to write as well. Typically, it takes an average author several months or even longer to finish writing everything in their overall outline. By the time that they're finish writing everything in their overall outline, most authors will have new ideas and insights into what they want to write. Once they combine their new ideas with their original outline, in a way, this gives them two sources of inspiration. It's basically the equivalent of two people working together, and on top of that, these two people know exactly what each other are thinking.
 
It's easy to see how this can be helpful in improving the quality of your novel.
 
Apart from this, while creating an overall outline, the author can also discover many topics or problems with the settings and correct them in time.
 
To give an extreme example, if you're having a great difficulty with writing your overall outline and don't know what to do with your own plot, this proves that there's a large problem with your plot. You should either make major changes, or delete this part of your plot entirely.
 
So, newcomer authors definitely shouldn't overlook the uses of having an overall outline. No matter if you have a good or bad outline, a simple or a detailed one, as long as you have one, that's good.
 
What needs to be noted is that only outlines that have been written out truly count as outlines.
 
Even if you as an author have a very detailed outline, and even if you've solidly memorized every single plot point in your outline, any outline that hasn't been written into your novel doesn't count as a true outline. That's because when you actually start writing, you'll discover that what you finally end up writing will always have differences from what you envisioned.
 
2.      You need to finish your outline, but it doesn't need to be complete
 
Thinking about your outline is equivalent to thinking about your novel's plot. You need to consider both the beginning and the end. You also need to think about everything that the main character experiences from the beginning to the end of the story.
 
If your outline isn't finished, but only half-finished, you won't even be able to predict the storylines that come later, which will cause you to have difficulties writing your plot once you finish the beginning stages. This is basically the same as not having an outline at all.
 
Still, there's no need for us to make the outline as detailed as possible from the very beginning, with so many specific scenarios for all your plots. The reason for this is quite simple—none of us know just how long our novels will turn out to be in the end.
 
A story that's written with the intent of becoming a commercial product needs to be sufficiently long enough right from the planning stage. The longer your potential story, the better. But actually, how many words it finally ends up with depends on how well your story performs.
 
If your story is incredibly popular and performs well in the market, then we can consider writing it for as long as possible. However, if your story obviously isn't popular with readers, then you can consider ending your story in a timely fashion at an appropriate point in the plot so that you can think of a new story instead. That would be a wiser decision if you wish to become a professional author.
 
Of course, when you're only in the outlining stage, it's impossible for you as a newcomer author to know how readers will react to your novel. Precisely because of this, you need to have a flexible writing plan. What this means is that you should have an outline that's detailed in the beginning and general near the end. For the beginning of your story, you should have as detailed an outline as possible, while for the middle and especially the later parts of your story, you only need some general ideas. All you need is to consider the overall development of the plot so that you know what direction to take your storyline in.
 
For example, maybe you planned that the beginning of your novel will be approximately 80,000 words, and you've prepared a 4,000-word outline for just the beginning. In that case, your outline for the next 80,000 words, the middle of your story, might only need 3000 words, and the meat of your story, another 240,000 words, might have an outline that's less than 1000 words.
 
Of course, as you continue writing your story, you should constantly update your outline as well. You should complete your outline for the next 80,000 words before you finish writing the first 80,000 words.
 
3.      Your settings need to be constantly updated

Just like writing an outline, you should first come up with the basic settings before you even begin writing, which includes your world background, main character's personality, power levels, and so on.
 
More specific settings, such as a powerful artifact that appears in the story, can be added as you write your story.
 
Unlike an outline, you don't need to fully plan out all of your settings at the very beginning. It's perfectly acceptable to think of new settings while you're writing.
 
However, newcomer authors need to note that while it's okay to come up with new settings as you write, you should write these settings down and add them to your outline or settings document as you write.
 
This is to help yourself check your own settings later in the future. Otherwise, a novel that reached over one million words and has lasted for one year or longer might cause you as an author to completely forget about something you wrote before in the past. It's even quite common to make a mistake when writing about the items that the main character possesses. Yet, there will always be a sharp-eyed reader or two that catches the author out in a misstep.
 
If you have a very detailed document on your settings, not only will you be able to greatly reduce your own plot continuity errors, you'll also be able to look through your settings whenever you have writer's block and find some inspiration in a side character that you have already forgotten about or some item that was mentioned before but never used again.
 
4.      It's better for your settings to be cliché
 
Here, this means the systems and names that you use for your settings. For example, the names and levels you use for a martial arts society.
 
Many newcomer authors will mistakenly think that using already existing well-known settings will make their novel seem too cliché, causing them to want to be as "unique" as possible. These authors will use their imaginations to come up with all sorts of fictional vocabulary words, which in their minds will make their novels "stand out." These newcomer authors don't realize that this is the worst possible way to write a novel. In the great majority of situations, this will have the opposite effect from intended.
 
A new original novel that you write should be a new interpretation or story about some specific genre or story type. How to make your novel stand out depends on the conflicts you create in your story and how the main character resolves them. As for coming up with new vocabulary words and names for your novel, even if you make them sound really cool, or make some modified slang words, it's almost never a good thing for you.
 
The reason for this can also be understood in my article about how to write the beginning of your story. By doing so, the author is placing more burden upon the readers to understand a larger amount of information.
 
There will always be other already existing words that you could have used, which are easily understood by all your readers. Instead, your readers now need to spend their time and effort on reading your explanations. Obviously, readers aren't here to read your technical manuals or info dumps. The more explanations that you have in your novel, the lower your novel's appeal and flow will become. But, if you don't add any explanations for your self-created words at all, the readers won't even understand what's going on.
 
This is why newcomer authors should avoid this useless type of "creativity" as much as possible. You should simply rely on settings that all readers are familiar with instead.
 
5.      The storyline should be pushed forward by using conflicts
 
Many newcomer authors will often develop writer's block when planning their outline or working on their novel.
 
Sometimes, this is because the author has made their storyline too messy. But most of the time, it's because the author feels like there's nothing to write about, or doesn't know what they should make the main character do. The author has no idea how to continue their own story.
 
In order to deal with writer's block, or in other words, how to push your storyline alone, the answer is actually incredibly simple.
 
You can answer this question using only one word – Conflicts!
 
Actually, the critical element of all webnovels can be summed up into one word – conflicts. For example, leveling is the desire or need of the main character to become stronger, which is a conflict between the main character and his or her own current weakness.
 
And since there is a conflict, you must resolve the conflict. And so, your main character wants to cultivate to become stronger, which means he needs to travel around the world in order to find cultivation methods…
 
All sorts of conflicts will both push forward your storyline as well as create numerous climaxes for your readers. It can be said that how you design your conflicts is the very foundation of writing any novel, not just a webnovel.
 
As for a more detailed analysis on how to design your story's conflicts, please read my intermediate-level article on the topic. For newcomer authors like you, you simply need to understand this concept, and know that you should keep coming up with new conflicts whenever you're having trouble keeping up with your own storyline. Try finding potential conflicts from plots, characters, and items you've already used, or forcefully introduce a new element into your story that creates a new conflict.
 
This can be said to be one of the most basic techniques of planning your storyline.

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314 (Yang Chen): He is China Literature’s general manager, Xiaoxiang Academy’s general manager, Qidian’s head editor, China Webnovel Literature Committee member, Jiangsu Province Webnovel Author Committee vice-chairman, and a qualified expert on all internet literature. He has discovered many popular topics and greatly helped the industry to expand, along with having personally advised many top-tier authors. He is from the first generation of webnovel researchers. Yang Chen started working in the webnovel editing industry in 2005, and is highly skilled at summarizing and analyzing the business theories behind webnovel literature and is famed for his outstanding creativity in the industry.

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Small Team Leader is a top-ranked editor for original novels as well as a veteran web novel expert. He has helped to discover countless popular topics as well as frameworks and has advised numerous platinum-ranked authors. He’s also one of the first generation of web novel reviewers as well as authors.

 
**For a TLDR, scroll to the very bottom.** 
 
Hey guys! It's been a while. I normally post daily, buuuut, I've been doing some thinking lately about this story. I'm so happy that I've been getting so many views. Almost 10,000! And almost 100 of you all followed. I'm so thankful for every single one of you all. That being said, I want to give you all a quality product, one that you all like and that I'm proud to produce. 
 
For that reason, I unfortunately have to announce that I'm putting Order & Fate: Rebellious Children into a temporary hiatus. 
 
I know, the synopsis said that I have the series outlined, and that I have a backlog. I do! However, just because I have a series outlined doesn't mean that the series is good. While I'm happy to have been given good ratings and reviews, I've been looking over the work that I've produced while receiving much needed criticism from external sources, and I strongly believe that this work that I've produced is not the best that I can make. 
 
I suppose I could've kept going, left this version as it was, then just deeply edit it and upload the good version to Amazon. I'm not that kind of person, though. That'd be super scummy. Besides, I still want to give you all a quality product, which I feel this web novel is not... in it's current state.  
 
Soooo, what's so bad about it? I thought it was pretty neat. 
 
Thanks! But you can't see behind the scenes on this one. I'm sure a few of you were able to notice over the first act, and it's caught my attention HARD over the past few days, but the series was somewhat directionless. 
 
But how could that be? You said you had an outline! 
 
I did, and I still do. That outline formula, for all it's worth, does not lend itself to action stories like the one I wanted to create. It's mainly for character focused works, and because of the nature of this series, characters seemed to fight each other for attention. 
 
The best example of this are the later chapters with Hikari and Kou. It went from action, to calm, to action, to tense, and one character essentially had to be pushed aside for the other to receive characterization. 
 
Beyond that, I found that as I wrote, I began deviating from the established outline, which was beginning to form massive plotholes. 
 
That soooort of leads into my second gripe with the series, which is that it was beginning to suffer from an identity crisis. Some moments it was a strategic action series, others it was an intense drama, and others it was a horror mystery. Changing tone is fine, I feel, but where my biggest issue lies in its inability to decide whether it wanted to be character focused or plot focused. If I'm being brutally honest with myself here, I wanted to write a character-focused story, but found myself leaning toward a plot-focused one as I wrote. The outline seemed to be fighting with my wants, which began to affect the story negatively. At best, it was fast paced. At worst, it was unhinged and unfocused.  
 
Over the past week, I've been working to create an outline structure that works well for me as a writer. I haven't hidden that I love Shounen manga and anime in the slightest, and the greatest among them seem to be able to cross the thin line between plot-focused & character-oriented so perfectly. Because of that, I began to deconstruct what I'm dubbing the "Shounen Formula" into a story outline structure that works for me. 
 
Talking about it and studying it is somewhat meaningless, though. If I want to know how good it is, I need to put it to the test, right? 
 
I think so. That's why I'm happy to announce a new series that I've been working on...  
 
Demon Task Force! 
 
It's a Shounen-esque Progression Fantasy (exclusive to Royal Road) that I've been making with the sole purpose of stress-testing my new outline formula. My goal is to finish the first two arcs and upload them here. If you all enjoy the series, then I'll expand on it! I hope you all enjoy it when it comes out in a few weeks! I'll be uploading all of arc 1 on the first day, then I'll be dropping arc 2 over the span of a few weeks. 
 
But if you're using outlines again, won't you just run into the same problems? 
 
This go round, I'm not going to make the mistake of plotting every single thing out. That'd suck the fun out of writing. Instead, I'm using the "Shounen Formula" to create connected plot threads and plot points, which allows me to stay focused while also being freed from the restrictive and faulty outline I currently followed. 
 
Of course, the necessary worldbuilding will be fully plotted out, but that's different! 
 
It isn't just some one-off series, though. I'm serious about that entire series outline. Demon Task Force, or DTF for short, is a prequel to OAFRC, set many years before the story kicks off! As I mentioned those first two arcs WILL be released. If they don't do well, or you all dislike the new format, then I'll just regroup as I am and try again. I want to have a good quality product on here before I start going onto ******* and hiring editors to have it published. I got lost in the sauce before, I'll be honest! Sorry. I was just a little hype to get buzz so fast. 
 
Sooo... where does OAFRC fit in here? 
 
As I mentioned, DTF will be a prequel. As for the series in question, I'm going to be putting it on hold until I see the response DTF gets. If it does well, then I'll be reworking the outline for OAFRC to follow that mold, that way I can put it back into the wild with a reinforced structure. If it doesn't do well, then I'll just go back to the drawing board on both and do my best to seek counsel as I attempt to make a good series. 
 
In closing, I'm thankful for the support, but I want to make a series that isn't just "good for a webnovel" or "alright". I want to make something great, and to do that I need to go back and do some work on how I outline things. Demon Task Force should be uploaded either by the end of the month or the first week of February. I'll post about it when it's up!

Order & Fate: Rebellious Children is a series about a girl named Sumire Kato who is abruptly thrust into a world seething with murder, conspiracy, and drama. She must find strength within herself, rely on the friends she made, and uncover the mysteries of her home before doom reaches her and her loved ones!

 




Sumire Kato is an 18-year-old girl who has spent the last two years of her life alone in her apartment. She’s had little contact with other people and has no friends or family to communicate with. All of this changes when Sumire is invited to the Soteria School for Seekers, the prestigious school where Tenebris’s strongest study to become Seekers.  

  

As she makes the most of her new school experience, Sumire is continuously haunted by her demons, which threaten to damage the connections she’s made with the people at her new school. Eventually, she is forced to face her demons in a big way when one of her new friends is murdered by an unknown assailant.  

  

Sumire must overcome her past ghosts and find the killer with a clear mind and empty heart, lest her brother suffer the fatal consequences!  

 

Thank you for reading Order & Fate: Rebellious Children! Here are a few things you should know before getting into the story.

 

First, the chapter-length varies between 1000-3000 words depending on the events. Admittedly, the first batch of introductory chapters is a bit of a slow burn. I want to introduce you to the characters before getting to the craziness, so if you're interested in wall-to-wall action and fights each chapter, then this may not be the story for you.



Secondly, this story is heavily inspired by darker shounen manga and anime such as Hunter x Hunter and Jujutsu Kaisen, with the fights and magic system in particular taking inspiration from Jojo's Bizzare Adventure. If you like anime, then you'll probably like this story. If you prefer Tolkien-esque fantasy, though, then this story also may not be for you.

 

Thirdly, I have a decent stockpile of chapters stored, which I plan on expanding upon each day. Because of that, this series won't be dropped or put into indefinite hiatus, and chapters will be released daily unless otherwise stated. Finally, I've done multiple grammar and spell checks, so there shouldn't be any immersion-breaking grammatical issues. If you do find one, though, please leave a comment, and I'll revise! 

 

Finally, while this is my very first fiction, it's also a first draft of sorts. I plan to have this story professionally edited and published, so any feedback is very much appreciated!




The story is also available on Royal Road, Scribblehub, and Wattpad.

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I'm still sick and my mind can't function properly to write so no chapters until I get better, it does not help that school is being an ass too.

But I could atleast fix the outline.

Let's get to the point.

This novel is starting to stress me out, I don't like doing things half baked and I certainly don't like the book to follow original plots etc etc.

But so far, by looking at my outline its kinda...

Character heavy? Like a slow burn fanfic?

Don't get me wrong, I love worldbuilding and character growths, where they will change and shed inner or outer weaknesses. Life is a journey and whenever I read other fanfics and their mc's stay the same all throughout the story, I can't help but feel unfulfilled.

The book's future seems to be so focused on characters and character development. Not much action happens except for when Yao trains and that's already pushing it.

I feel like this novel is getting super boring for the readers.

A little teaser for what Yao will do in the next volume.

He's gonna bolster his own force. That's it, run around and make connections, his goal will somewhat be more defined because damn, becoming god or the strongest titled douluo is too far from now and reaching success is too broad of a dream. 

Some peeps become more wholesome and fleshed out along the way, including the mc who will be more badass but kind. Atleast that's what I want to happen.

I like taking things slow, but sometimes I think I'm taking it too slow...

I'm even starting of thinking to rewrite the book.

And hell no I won't do that!

Everytime I try to rewrite a goddamn book of mine it gets worse.

I asked my friends about my issue and they said I care too much about the book.

And yeah, I care too much about this book even if this is just a fanfic.

I don't know dudes, I just feel lost, I feel like what I'm writing is shit. All the books I write I tend to look at them and think they're bad.

I could use you guy's help. So once again, What are your thoughts about the book?

Its strengths and flaws. My strengths and flaws as a writer.

Don't you dare hold back, go criticize me. Just don't trashtalk me for no reason as stuff like that kinda sours my mood.

I want to improve badly and I want to get better at writing. And I want to make this book a better worthwhile read.

Man... I suck at execution. Feels like I'm not doing this fanfiction enough justice.

I'll delete this chapter in four or five days then resume writing, so til then, I'll be listening to you guys.

Thank you in advance.







With one last drink his body finally gives in as the cold embrace of death greets him. Waking up within a deadly forest, the man who would turn the Douluo Continent upside down begins his journey with nothing more than a special card as a martial soul.

"NAMING SYSTEM BASED OFF OF PERSONAL EXPERIENCE..."

[SYSTEM RESETING...]

Ding!

[SYSTEM RESET!]

[LOADING NEW FEATURES.. 3%]

[LOADING NEW FEATURES. 12%]

[LOADING NEW FEATURES... 17%]

To Erick's right he saw the same black, blue, and gold panel his eyes grew so familiar with that he could tell you the exact number of pixels it had but to his left, to his surprise he saw a white, red, and gold panel. The new panel on his left displayed the words [NAMING SYSTEM... 46%].

Erick looked around at the other six and soon realized that he was the only one with a black, blue, and gold panel while all the others had the same panel that was displayed on his left. He then looked at the others expressions and saw that they too were confused.

"What was that voice?", "Wasn't the panel supposed to be blue?" and "Update?" Were the most common questions popping up in the other six's heads. Erick however didn't care as much since he was only paying attention to the fact that there were other people here finally after so long. He then examined the people.

One of the woman looked to be in her mid 30s, had scarlet hair, and had strange yet attractive green eyes. It was as if the green in her pupils were moving. Other than her face he couldn't see much about her. The other features of the people, including himself, seemed to be blacked out and instead, where their clothes would be, there would be a colored outline. In the woman's case, she had a blue outline. 

The man next to the him had a cold feel to him and looked to be in his 40s. He had blond hair and a stubble beard. His eyes on, the other hand, were colorless apart from a black circle to separate the sclera and his pupils. His outline was violet.

Next was the demon whom of which is the tallest and most intimidating. He had dark brown, almost completely black, hair in a spiky manner. He had a normal skin color but he also had dark red wings on his back. The demon's eyes were black with red pupils that looked like a cat's pupils. He had a red outline.

Then he saw a shy black haired child who he pitied for dying so young. Her pupils looked blank and they were almost normal except for a looming sense of jealousy you would get from her when she would look at you. She had a green outline.

Next to the shy girl he saw a young man looking to be in the 18-20 age group. He too had black hair yet his was more of a mess. His eyes were lazy and his pupils looked like a dark blue ocean that you would see in a calm before the storm. His outline was light blue.

And then his observant eyes fell upon a skinny yet, in her own way, beautiful lady looking to be in her late 20s. She had curly, short, lime colored hair. She had yellow eyes but Erick soon looked away as he got an uncomfortable feeling like she was going to eat him. Her outline was orange.

That leaves Erick. He was a messy character. His hair was light brown and his eyes were a somewhat empty dark brown. Erick's figure was not fat, skinny, nor buff. He was just normal. This might've been why he felt looked down on compared to the others. His outline was yellow.

Ding!

"SYSTEM HAS BEEN NAMED 'VOID SYSTEM'"

Erick looked at the new panel and saw that on the top middle it showed in a bold gold text "VOID SYSTEM". But he didn't have time to think about this as a familiar yet annoying sound pierced his ears.

{RIGHT PANEL}
Ding!

[NEW FEATURES LOADED!]

[GENERATING SYSTEM NAME.. 2%]

{LEFT PANEL}
Ding!

"SEARCHING PLAYER'S BLOODLINE..."

[LOADING..]

[LOADING.]

[LOADING...]

...

[ERROR]

[PLAYER NOT DETECTED]

[REFRESHING.]

...

[ERROR]

[REFRESHING...]

...

[ERROR]

...

[ERROR]

...

[PLAYER “ERROR” SUCCESSFULLY CONNECTED]

[GENERATING NEW BODY.]

...

[ERROR]

[PLAYER NOT DETECTED]

[ERROR]

[BODY GENERATED]

[GENERATING ABILITIES...]

[ERROR]

...

[ABILITIES GENERATED]

[ERROR]

[SEARCHING FOR NEW WORLD..]

[PLAYER NOT DETECTED]

[ERROR]

[BODY GENERATED]

[REFRESHING..]

[REFRESHING..]

...

[ERROR]

[ERROR]

[PLAYER NOT DETECTED]

[WORLD NOT FOUND]

[ERROR]

[BODY GENERATED]

[ERROR]

[ABILITIES GENERATED]

[REFRESHING.]

[REFRESHING.]

[ERROR]

[REFRESHING.]

[REFRESHING...]

...


...

An endless noise is piercing his ears. 
Over and over...
Never ending errors.
All he could do was stare blank at it with his lifeless eyes waiting and watching for a sign of hope he could cling onto.

There was none.
Not a thing.
Only himself and the ‘system’ in an endless black plane which he grew so familiar with.

Years.. Decades.. Centuries.. He lost count long ago, it didn’t matter to him anymore. He never felt like he needed to sleep, eat, or do anything. The only thing that plagued his mind was the never ending boredom this place brought him.

Its been so long for him that he forgot how he died. All he knew was that he did die and he was in the process of reincarnation but the system decided that he wasn’t good enough for it.

His thoughts were blank and he only grew more and more bored. He wanted an adventure. Something that could excite him out of his infinitely flat existence.

And he got it.

Hello, fuckers! Volume 1 has finished and I'm going to tell something y'all didn't know about my novel.
1. Margret wasn't supposed to exist:
Yes hon, she wasn't supposed to exist at all. She is a character that I put at the last minute. And this 'Angie' was supposed to be human and Scarlett's roommate. 
2. Diana wasn't supposed to be a witch:
Yeeeeeeeeeees I know. She was supposed to be the nice, human grandma but my brain. My brain's a bitch and won't listen to me.
3. I have an outline and this novel was not supposed to be like this:
Yes, bitch. It was supposed to end right now and Scarlett was supposed to be hit by a bus and go into a coma in the end. Don't worry, there was a happy ending.
4. Scarlett was supposed to be a Korean character:
Even I was in shock when my bitch of a brain told me to make her not Korean. If she was supposed to be Korean, her name would be Kwon Joo-hee.
5. Anastasia was supposed to be a greek minor goddess:
Anastasia was supposed to be Goddess Melinoe, the ghost queen. I mean no offense to Greeks out there, I was going to make Melinoe bi. But changed it last minute because I thought it'll be offensive. 
6. Anastasia and Scarlett were supposed to meet as classmates:
They really weren't supposed to have an ugly meet with Anastasia bleeding and Scarlett taking her to the hospital. 
7. Michael was supposed to have internal homophobia:
He wasn't supposed to be a happy person. The outline said even though he is gay he felt disgusted by himself. He was about to do suicide, that's when Manchu stopped him. So yeah, it was going to be kinda angsty. But I didn't want to make it so angsty because I hate angst myself.
8. Scarlett was supposed to have panphobia:
Panphobia is a fear of everything. But I forgot I don't know how to write panphobia is, so I left that thought.
That's it! Eight confessions! I have a feeling, my confessions would have made the novel better than this shitty version of it.
I would love it if you support my other novel Force of Fate! I used my version of Greek mythology in the introduction! Also, my side project would be on Tumblr and I haven't thought of the title for it! My account is bitchypersonachaos, I would love it if you support that too! I'll update it once a week.
Goodbye for now! Meet y'all after probably a week later!

This is a story of how an immortal and a mortal fell in love. But there wasn't a meet-cute. The mortal thought the other was dead. But hey, she's okay, it was just a prank! They were getting along well and being third wheels. 
But then the mortal had to go somewhere else for studies. They said bye-bye to each other. And bam! Did someone try to kill her friend? The immortal said: we are going there even if you don't like it! 
K bruh. 
But wait, who's the person trying to kill her?


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The picture ain't mine, I edited it, that's all.
It will have some triggering contents, please skip those, I have given a warning before starting it. But they ain't that frequent.
Also, this is my first WIP so it'll be cringe at the start. I'll edit this after I finish this.
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I won't mind criticism but it should have some weight to it.

1. First Hagoromo level op. That's absolutely false. He isn't even close to Madara and hashirama level until the age of 18 much less Hagoromo. Let me make it clear having an affinity for every element doesn't mean mastery. Having tail beast level chakra doesn't mean chakra control, having healing factor doesn't mean he is invulnerable.

2. Second for the Uchiha Massacre part. People asked me to conduct a poll. So I did it. It is reader's choice.

3. Third part about following canon, sure I tried to deviate from the canon with the idea of Sin seal. I got a huge community backlash. People accusing me of ruining Naruto despite knowing it is a fan-fic and a free book. I was a new writer back then and thus easily gave up to peer pressure since reader's satisfaction was my priority. I have learnt my lesson and now I am writing what I want to write not what people want to read.

Part of the reason there are no polls or anything of that sort.

4. OC doesn't make any sense and he won't for a while as I will slowly put back all of the pieces together. You can't make a painting without outline and outline isn't always the best.
I admit I made lots of mistake but I am in a phase of learning and as I improve I will incorporate my mistakes into the plot to make it more interesting. Yes, it would be challenge for me to make my drunk writing into something interesting but I like to take challenges.

5. Train Naruto and Sasuke. Well of course, he will. Sasuke is his family and Minato and Kushina are his teachers. He won't be a human if he can't repay his favours.

6. I know people want to focus on main character and main character only but his presence influence other characters and their development. Some light must be shed on that too otherwise the story will be an empty vessel where the MC moves around messing with everyone with no repercussions.

I hope this shed some light on what kind of fan-fic this. As we move further in the story, there will be so many elements which will be incorporated in the story.
As for the shallow knowledge of Naruto world, I won't brag anything but till now everything is a part of Naruto world and I will write it such a way that even Sin seal will become a part of it and when it does I am sure people won't be able to deny the possibility.

A medical student died because of negligence of the authorities. Later, he is granted a second chance in life with some boons. But being an Otaku and Naruto fan, he chooses to live in the chaotic world of Naruto.
The story will follow canon for the initial part with a new plot. Major changes will reflect in the later part as our MC grows up. The story has strong AU elements and the power scaling is ramped up to explore various foreign elements in Naruto. Everything in its entirety will be a part of the Naruto series with details and speculations of my own.
This story is my original creation, and I post it on Scribble hub and Webnovel. You might find a few initial chapters on Royal Road. 
Note:- The starting 40 chapters or so have poor grammar and various mistakes since I was a new writer back then and lacked experience. But I am working on editing them.

Warning:-I don't own Naruto or any related stuff except my MC and Original characters and jutsus. (Yep, there are lots and lots of original jutsus in the story.)
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So Ziv has been fun to write small starter ideas that have popped up. I want to do something similar with another main character, so I plan on writing a new one. Similar to how Divergent Stories - Ziv has done it, but someone new. 

So I thought up a basic outline for this new character. A woman, roughly 20 years or so, originally lives in a fantasy world. I'm not sure what it will all be yet, but that is my idea. Ziv starts out in a futuristic society after an apocalypses. Then I started thinking about what I could do differently. Age being a big one that stood out. After writing the Divergent - Mother story, that was necessary. I wanted to explore things as a child with Ziv and how he might take it and how others might see him, but if I need to explore an idea with a child character, Ziv will be the one I use.

Then I thought about a few other things, like Ziv was a boy. So lets go the other way and make this character a woman. I had some fun with Language of Happiness, so this is just an extension of that essentially. Sure I plan a gender bender at least once, but with a female main character there are new options available. 

Of course the last part that I needed. The future route was cool for Ziv, but what about a fantasy? The new main character will take place in some fantasy world. Idk if mc will even have magic yet. Most likely, but I want to keep it somewhat vague (In the intro story) like I did with Ziv so I have many options available. However I make that original world, will be something I'm going to work on.

Hope you all find it interesting and enjoy it!

This story is about Ziv. A boy who has lived with technology, his parents, and lots of reading material.

After his introduction, I write different ideas and throw Ziv in those situations. I wanted to give myself a place to write random ideas that come to mind. I do have cross overs with my other stories, but most are just self contained.

Some ideas that I have made so far:

The two cross over stories, LoH and EMW.
Ziv has control over two bodies
A time travel story. 
A grid like world.
A one shot based around fighting/combat.
Ziv takes over a body on an injured person - though there is a warning for that chapter. Nothing bad, but there are implications that most people (myself included) find disgusting. I wrote it in good faith though.
Ziv becomes an AI.
A combat Story.

mc is a traveling jester who gets swept up in some calamity. he then undergoes intense life and death training and becomes a cold blodded assasin. the idea is to start off with a funny comedic character and slowly change it to a cruel character. you can also make them change back again after finding love or sumtin. please make it like his school he learns how to jest ats motto was to laugh is to live or maybe even his parents told him that. eventually after someone close to him dies make him say something similat to this title it will nake readers feel intelligent when they figure it out. note you have my aproval to make this book r18 if so inclined. 
this is a incomplete outline but i am posting it for others inspiration i will hopefully come back and edit it or add more. if i dont i apolagize.   






please tell me if you write a book off one of my ideas. i wanna read these!!!

just a collection of ideas for books feel free to write more on these in your own book all i aak is that you 1 credit me for the idea and 2 tell me about your book. all of my ideas posted here i want to read please. this is western fantasy only i plan on making eastern fantasy and scifi "books" to. have a nice day yall stay safe and be polite my fffrei i mean acquaintances.

As the grandmaster who founded the Demonic Sect, Wei WuXian roamed the world in his wanton ways, hated by millions for the chaos he created. In the end, he was backstabbed by his dearest shidi and killed by powerful clans that combined to overpower him. He incarnates into the body of a lunatic who was abandoned by his clan and is later, unwillingly, taken away by a famous cultivator among the clans—Lan WangJi, his archenemy. This marks the start of a thrilling yet hilarious journey of attacking monsters, solving mysteries, and raising children. From the mutual flirtation along the way, Wei WuXian slowly realizes that Lan WangJi, a seemingly haughty and indifferent poker-face, holds more feelings for Wei WuXian than he is letting on.

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western fantasy ideas free to use.

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