Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece.

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shaluxifa

first to read first comment first review read all 20 chapters this is a good book keep it up

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Genedrag

Why this trash of a story is being translated, I'll never know but to sum it up this is trash oc in wish fulfillment world as such its trash I don't recommend it.

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ErickHenrique_BR

I shouldn't give different powers to the girls, if I saw a person from One Piece using powers from another world I would find a way to kill that person, because obviously I would think that she is a reincarnator, and I would also think that she stole the body of this character

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Garland

Another harem one piece fanfic where the relationship between him and the girls are just immediate. No form of obstacle, development or actual connection but just them immediately falling in love just because.

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DeejaeSutherland

The idea of the novel is good but the author did a terrible job, which isn't surprising because i have yet to read a novel that's translated that makes sense, besides the one I helped in fixing, but even then I couldn't deal with that because the author did a terrible job.

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Navigator_Ray

the story is good but the translation is really bad 👎

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Creus_Sun

very interesting! I could not stop reading until I reached the end where I experienced a great feeling of emptiness since now I have to wait for more chapters.

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Alex3DxD

Translation of a Chinese fanfic. Flat protagonist without charisma, he only moves for and to please the system, the relationship with the girls, completely non-existent

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Uzumaki_Kushina_21

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SASORI571

The story is good but I don't like the errors in the writing, you say that the character's name is Evan but it always says Ron as his name, you say that he ate a Zoan-type fruit but it says that he uses Enel lodge-type abilities, okay, are you. You translate it doesn't matter, ok you change some things it doesn't matter, but if you are going to change them, keep them changed and don't put the translated chapters and the chapters rewritten by you in disorder or at least be a little more consistent with the name and the abilities of the protagonist .

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NeaCambelt

VA TE FAIRE FOUTRE SRX KAYA ? NE LISER PAS [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Achraf2000

Nice story it doesn't deserve all the hate receiving. It got some flows . But okay. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! 👍👍 I agree with others comment that the translate/english and grammar is bad.. But the plot is great and interesting.. The MC/Evan/Ron ((this is the most fatal error for me, what MC name? Evan or Ron?)) Is make the original plot changed by write in his diary many important information.. I don't mind a harem.. But to make all the beautiful girls/women his harem is too much (just a few is enough I think).. I like the Diary System.. It make interesting change.. I think the reward which granted a different power from One Piece world (like Nojiko got character template and Tashigi got Breath Style from another world) will make MC discover about the Diary power and it will make this story not interesting for me, but the reward to increase (a little) the girls power is ok.. The reward to gift ressurection card or strong item or weapon is ok too.. I don't like MC attitude.. He's so pervert, lazy all day, and just want to make his harem bigger.. But overall, it's a good story.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍😍

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Thomas_Arroyo

Es muy buena la historia espero que siga sacando más capitulos👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌🤣🤣🤣👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Leonardo_Vega_4048

Are you planning on translating beyond the chapters of mtl nation? I don’t know why they stopped since the story is still ongoing. It’s a good one piece story in my opinion.

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STEVIOL_GLY

This is surprising but it is not everyday when i like a harem fanfic. this ones is good, no forced sx, just the fluff, where mc's thoughts are being broadcasted in diaries of female mcs, a unique concept. the translation is easy to read, overall the story is 4.5, but i will rate it a perfect 5 as it already has a bad score idk why

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Siumhasan

Very good 👍 keep going [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DaoistFiZTje

Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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ACHILLES

i'll perfer if the author lets the readers know its an translation but i can understand as people will give unneccsqry hate due to it but still thata my opnion.

The story is good, there are problems with the writing in the first chapters, but later it improves, the development goes, so far, well, it can improve even more, but it is already going well.