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Humanity coexists with monsters, a young warrior walked out of Antarctica, with magic in his left, martial in his right, and spear in the middle; cough, cough; with a spear in his hands, he slaughtered his enemies.
He is the one who inherited the power of Supreme Dao, he is the one who holds the sword that slays gods and demons, he is the one who controls Eight Extremes and Single Chaos. But what is he in reality?
Was he chosen by heaven or his fate is related to someone else, all of these mysteries lead him out of his universe. What does he want to find? What will he find? Why did all of those Supreme Treasures choose him? Whose inheritance has he been inherited till? Was he the only one with such fate, or there is someone other peoples?
Let's find out the truth with adventures, action, magic, martial art, dao, sect development, little here and there, to finally reach the end.
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Tulis ulasanIt was good for a while Then I realised this is yet another worthless system novel Why is the system plot so popular on this app I genuinely hate system novel I feel it just ruins everything fantasy or eastern fantasy stories are all about btw It's just my personal opinion and not review for novel
A marvelous and applause for a great start! Martial Arts action novel is never really my thing but you broke that. Another action that will make the readers go crazy when reading this💓
Despite the fact that I like the story there are many glaring issues. The cultivation system doesn’t make sense. You can either be a martial artist, a mage, or both. In order to increase your rank you must open up meridians which there are nine of. However if you practice both then you need to share so the ratio becomes 5/4 which means you are weaker than a pure mage and martial artist when instead you should be stronger so the concept doesn’t make sense. Instead it should be different concepts such as using dark energy to increase bodily functions, and strength for martial artists and for mages they could convert that energy into mana which is stored somewhere in the body. The author also creates these “spaces” that are very confusing and quite frankly shouldn’t exist.
Membuka SPOILERSo far amazing but lol everytime is just like oh cool oh cool oh cool every single time we find something new about him each time as he gets more and more op seriously but still its a really fun novel to read so yeah keep up the hard work man
Membuka SPOILERI given this novel Many expectations , but unfortunately it did not meet it. The story is ridiculously slow and the information is given all at once, which increases the difficulty of reading, understanding and enjoying it.
Membuka SPOILERtwo main problems. First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes... The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time. When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.
It's a great action-packed novel filled with interesting characters. The storyline is also interesting and not one moment is dull. Its background setting and description are also one of its strong points.
Okay this novel first felt great but... everything goes too fast.. he gains too much too fast.. as if 1 system isn't enough.. he has 3 at this point. and then he has like too many supreme inheritances and other things.. there could easily be 3000 chapters to this novel if all these things were given at a slower pace and becoming stronger would've been at a reasonable pace... also he has too many skills and talents
Membuka SPOILERi like the novel till ch 180 but.. you have made the MC too naive which i did not like... i hope that you change it fast but it didn't suit a MC.. otherwise i will lose interest in the novel..
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The story is very interesting on how the changes Earth will go through in the future. You describe them well. Keep up the good work and updates soon!
It is amazing to think about something like dark energy for cultivation and in the real-world we know nothing about it. The most amazing part of this novel is our earth, it seems we will see lots of fighting between different races in the universe.
This is an awesome modern world cultivation novel. Though its just four chapter, it is enough for us to realize to good this novel is going to be but this still depend on author's thought. I hope to read more and more chapters like this in future.
Amazing! <3 The story plot is superb.I really loved your writing style. Can't wait to read more of it! 😍
Wonderful story plot. The story is very well written and the plot is purely original. The world description is beautifully written. The mystery is retained throughout chapters and though it is just 3 chapters and has already gained my attention. Waiting for more chapters to unfold the story. Good Work.
This is truly a interesting world with interesting stuff like dark energy. Author really imagined something that matches with our real world unknown stuff. I am looking forward to see how story progresses
It's nice, though it's still two chapters but i am super looking forward to what will happen next kyahhhh keep up the good work my co-writer
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My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place. Two volumes have been completed. First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones. Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development. Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.